Another OU team

[Tomas Fer]

My native lenguage is not english, you can help me to make a enjoyable thread correcting me.

Travieso (Machamp) (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: No Guard
EVs: 128 HP / 252 Atk / 128 Def
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- DynamicPunch
- Stone Edge
- Ice Punch
- Bullet Punch

My actual lead, Can deal with most leads (I think). Destructive with DynamicPunch and delicious confusion.

Firme (Garchomp) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Aqua Tail
- Stone Edge

Excelent revenge killing others dragons in Outrage, dealing with Fire type Pokemon. Aqua Tail when I predict the switch-in of a Gliscor or Heatran Balloon.

Colosal (Clefable) (F) @ Flame Orb
Trait: Magic Guard
EVs: 252 HP / 128 Def / 128 SDef
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Trick
- Heal Bell
- Wish
- Protect

Status sponge and for recive annoying Trick, also Support with Wish and Hell Bell.

Bastardo (Scizor) (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Def
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- U-turn
- Bullet Punch
- Superpower
- Pursuit

It's Scizor, making damage with U-turn and Pursuing fragile Ghosts, Lati@s and Blissey/Chansey like a boss. Also, another revenge killer.

Porfiado (Dusclops) (M) @ Eviolite
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 208 HP / 48 Def / 252 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Will-O-Wisp
- Disable
- Seismic Toss
- Pain Split

Special wall, Disable to lock Machamp/Roopushin's payback or any other attack that can give me a 2-3HKO

Modesto (Rotom-W) @ Leftovers
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 128 HP / 252 SAtk / 128 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Hydro Pump
- Will-O-Wisp
- Pain Split

New standard Rotom-W to stop most Sandstorm members and Bulky Waters

Problems:
Celebi: I have problems with Celebi, various sweep'd me with Nasty Plot and Giga Drain
Azumarril: this on Rain, horrifying
Toxicroak: Most cases
Entry hazards: Especially Toxic Spikes

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. Also, please post only one team at a time. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.