Any Native/Fluent Francophones able to help moi?

Apologies if this is the wrong forum, I didn't want to risk it being ignored in firebot

Long story short, I have an exam soon where I basically have to produce 300/400 words of french coursework about a last stay in France. I've done a pretty decent first draft (15 out of 20) but apparently I've made basic mistakes which I cannot really seem to spot.

I'm not asking anyone to do my work for me, I am perfectly able (I'm meant to get 12 A*s this summer apparently). But I would love for someone with an advanced knowledge of French to:
  1. Point out basic mistakes
  2. Possibly correct mistakes
  3. Maybe recommend areas to use more complex structures (e.g. agreement of past participle with noun)
  4. Indicate areas of possible narrative development

I'm asking for 10-15 minutes probably less of help, so if anyone is willing to help me then can they just notify me and I can send my work via pm

Thanks
 
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