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Mamoswine @ Leftovers
Name: Mamoswine Lefties
Ability: Thick Fat
EVs: 208 HP / 220 Atk / 64 Def / 16 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard
- Smack Down / Icicle Crash
- Stealth Rock

Mamoswine is fantastic pick on Ice team which provides colorful utility with access to Stealth Rock and being immune to Electric-type attacks along with great coverage against Steel-types. Earthquake enables Mamoswine to clear troublesome Steel-types such as non-Air Balloon Heatran, Hisuian Goodra and Bisharp which are a great threat to Ice teams. Ice Shard enables Mamoswine to get around it's mediocre speed stat and allows it to finish off faster weakened and chipped threats such as Dragapult, Meowscarada, Landorus formes and Tornadus-T. Smack Down cripples Flying-types weak to Ground-type moves without the immunity such as Zapdos and Corviknight. In addition to this, Smack Down also threatens foes such as Articuno, Moltres and Volcarona. Alternatively, Icicle Crash can also be used to fulfill the demand of an strong Ice-type move which gives Mamoswine leverage to eliminate foes such as Roaring Moon, Mandibuzz, Ting Lu and Hippowdon. The given EVs allow Mamoswine to outlast defensive Corviknight by getting 3HKOed by Body Press after leftovers recovery from it, furthermore let's it survive +1 Flamethrower from offensive Volcarona and OHKOing it in return with Smack Down and also allows it to outspeed max speed Adament Iron Hands

Alolan Ninetales is a great partner to Mamoswine as it sets snow and screens via Aurora Veil allowing Mamoswine to stand longer on the battlefield allowing it to take on foes such as Ceruledge and easily set up hazards. It also threatens Fighting-type foes such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R. Cloyster is another great ally which can become very threatening after a Shell Smash taking care of Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H and Ceruledge. Similarly, Cetitan also is another partner who can set up Belly Drum to become very fierce and wipe out foes such as Metagross and Iron Treads. Avalugg provides Mamoswine a clean path to enter by removing hazards with the help of Rapid Spin. Combination of IronPress allows Avalugg to outlast physical attacking Water-types foes such as Ogerpon-W and Barraskewda. Kyurem and Weavile are offensive partners of Mamoswine. Kyurem being a special attacking powerhouse removes alot of annoying pokemon such as Archaludon and Toxapex. Weavile is a great physical attacker which dismantles threatening foes such as Gholdengo and Gallade. Froslass is another ally who serves an suicide leading providing great utility by setting up hazards with Spikes, spreading status via Will-O-Wisp and Thunder Wave on foes like Dragapult, Sneasler and Excadrill and eliminating foes with Destiny Bond allowing Mamoswine to wreck havoc on foes more easily.

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Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/july.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
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July i totally forgot this, if this isnt out of WIP by August 10th, i will be locking / reassinging

Edit: we discussed via discord itll get done by the 15th
 
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Mamoswine @ Leftovers
name: what is the set name
Ability: Thick Fat
EVs: 208 HP / 220 Atk / 64 Def / 16 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard
- Smack Down / Icicle Crash
- Stealth Rock

Mamoswine is fantastic pick on Ice team which provides colorful utility with access to Stealth Rock and being immune to Electric-type attacks along with great coverage against Steel-types. The given EVs allow Mamoswine to outlast defensive Corviknight by getting 3HKOed by Body Press after leftovers recovery from it, furthermore let's it survive +1 Flamethrower from offensive Volcarona and OHKOing it in return with Smack Down and also allows it to outspeed Iron Hands. [Move this towards the end of the paragraph. Make sure you also mention max speed Adamant Iron Hands as well.] Earthquake enables Mamoswine to clear troublesome Steel-types such as non-Air Balloon Heatran, Hisuian Goodra and Bisharp which are a great threat to Ice teams. Ice Shard enables Mamoswine to get around it's mediocre speed stat and allows it to finish off faster weakened and chipped threats such as Dragapult, Meowscarada, Landorus formes and Tornadus-T. Smack Down cripples Flying-types weak to Ground-type moves without the immunity such as Zapdos and Corviknight. In addition to this, Smack Down also threatens foes such as Articuno, Moltres and Volcarona. Alternatively, Icicle Crash can also be used to fulfill the demand of an strong Ice-type move which gives Mamoswine leverage to eliminate foes such as Roaring Moon, Mandibuzz, Ting Lu and Hippowdon.

Alolan Ninetales is a great partner to Mamoswine as it sets screens via Aurora Veil allowing Mamoswine to stand longer on the battlefield and easily set up hazards. [also provides snow. not only it allows mamo to survive longer, but now mamo is really able to comfortably deal with ceruledge which is highly appreciated.] It also threatens Fighting-type foes such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R. Cloyster is another great ally which can become very threatening after a Shell Smash taking care of Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H and Ceruledge. Similarly, Cetitan also is another partner who can set up Belly Drum to become very fierce and wipe out foes such as Metagross and Iron Treads. Avalugg provides Mamoswine a clean path to enter by removing hazards with the help of Rapid Spin. [Mention how it also deals with Barraskewda and Waterpon for Mamoswine thanks to IronPress.] Kyurem and Weavile are offensive partners of Mamoswine. Kyurem being a special attacking powerhouse removes alot of annoying pokemon such as Archaludon and Toxapex. Weavile is a great physical attacker which dismantles threatening foes such as Gholdengo and Gallade. Froslass is another ally who serves an suicide leading providing great utility by setting up hazards with Spikes, spreading status via Will-O-Wisp and Thunder Wave and eliminating foes with Destiny Bond allowing Mamoswine to wreck havoc on foes more easily. [Mention foes that we are statusing to help Mamoswine wreck havoc on.]

[SET CREDITS] You forgot the credit section, i added it for you.
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/therealbigc.532450/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/giyu.574288/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ken.594478/

QC 1/1 after implement. :Arcanine:
 
Mamoswine @ Leftovers
name: what is the set name
Ability: Thick Fat
EVs: 208 HP / 220 Atk / 64 Def / 16 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard
- Smack Down / Icicle Crash
- Stealth Rock

Mamoswine is fantastic pick on Ice team which provides colorful utility with access to Stealth Rock and being immune to Electric-type attacks along with great coverage against Steel-types. The given EVs allow Mamoswine to outlast defensive Corviknight by getting 3HKOed by Body Press after leftovers recovery from it, furthermore let's it survive +1 Flamethrower from offensive Volcarona and OHKOing it in return with Smack Down and also allows it to outspeed Iron Hands. [Move this towards the end of the paragraph. Make sure you also mention max speed Adamant Iron Hands as well.] Earthquake enables Mamoswine to clear troublesome Steel-types such as non-Air Balloon Heatran, Hisuian Goodra and Bisharp which are a great threat to Ice teams. Ice Shard enables Mamoswine to get around it's mediocre speed stat and allows it to finish off faster weakened and chipped threats such as Dragapult, Meowscarada, Landorus formes and Tornadus-T. Smack Down cripples Flying-types weak to Ground-type moves without the immunity such as Zapdos and Corviknight. In addition to this, Smack Down also threatens foes such as Articuno, Moltres and Volcarona. Alternatively, Icicle Crash can also be used to fulfill the demand of an strong Ice-type move which gives Mamoswine leverage to eliminate foes such as Roaring Moon, Mandibuzz, Ting Lu and Hippowdon.

Alolan Ninetales is a great partner to Mamoswine as it sets screens via Aurora Veil allowing Mamoswine to stand longer on the battlefield and easily set up hazards. [also provides snow. not only it allows mamo to survive longer, but now mamo is really able to comfortably deal with ceruledge which is highly appreciated.] It also threatens Fighting-type foes such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R. Cloyster is another great ally which can become very threatening after a Shell Smash taking care of Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H and Ceruledge. Similarly, Cetitan also is another partner who can set up Belly Drum to become very fierce and wipe out foes such as Metagross and Iron Treads. Avalugg provides Mamoswine a clean path to enter by removing hazards with the help of Rapid Spin. [Mention how it also deals with Barraskewda and Waterpon for Mamoswine thanks to IronPress.] Kyurem and Weavile are offensive partners of Mamoswine. Kyurem being a special attacking powerhouse removes alot of annoying pokemon such as Archaludon and Toxapex. Weavile is a great physical attacker which dismantles threatening foes such as Gholdengo and Gallade. Froslass is another ally who serves an suicide leading providing great utility by setting up hazards with Spikes, spreading status via Will-O-Wisp and Thunder Wave and eliminating foes with Destiny Bond allowing Mamoswine to wreck havoc on foes more easily. [Mention foes that we are statusing to help Mamoswine wreck havoc on.]

[SET CREDITS] You forgot the credit section, i added it for you.
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/therealbigc.532450/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/giyu.574288/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ken.594478/

QC 1/1 after implement. :Arcanine:
Implemented.
 
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