Best team i have ever made :)

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youngknight92

So as the title says this is my best team i have ever made. I was getting mad that i was never winning so i decided to do something different. This team i beleive is a support team im not sure exactly but it works well with each other but there are some flaws but i will get into that later now here is my team they will be in big bold letters. some how i cant copy and paste the picture here so sorry its not gonna be fancy.
Venomoth,Flareon,Shedinja,
Sandslash,Blissey,Shaymin


Venomoth (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Tinted Lens
EVs: 252 Spd/252 SAtk/4 SDef
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Bug Buzz
- Sleep Powder
- Toxic Spikes
- Hidden Power [Ground]
Alright so lets start off with my lead. I wanted my team to be a big toxic theme/burn theme. So i was wondering what would fit good and bam this pokemon works really good with this team. I have sleep powder to sleep the foes then toxic spikes right off the bat and bug buzz and hp ground for some coverage. I usualy dont take this pokemon out unless i know the other pokemon is faster.



Flareon (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 HP/4 SAtk/252 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Wish
- Toxic
- Protect
- Lava Plume
Flaeron is a back up if there is a pokemon that is flying,dragon, or has the ability levitate. Its also a supporter for wish plus protect to weaken the foe with toxic and wish to help its teammates out. Lava plume just a move to help flaeron out alittle more.




Shedinja @ Choice Band
Ability: Wonder Guard
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Lonely nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Trick
- Will-o-wisp
- X-Scissor
- Sucker Punch
People said that this pokemon is better in Ubers but it works out great in here. I have a choice band to trick the foe if its a blissey or something i know i cant beat. I put WoW in it for steels since they cant get hit by toxic spikes. Its also here for those bad spinners to take my toxic spikes away. And is very good in helping its teammates out since it cant get hit unless its super effective



Sandslash (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 HP/252 Atk/6 Def
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Earthquake
- Night Slash
- Rapid Spin
Now sandslash is my rapid spinner/attacker. Since ninjask is weak to sr my sandslash can get rid of them so my ninjask can go in and help the team out. For those pesky ghost that will stand in the way of my spinning i have night slash to kill them so i can go in for a rapid spin. Earth quake helps me out alot and of course swords dance to power him up.




Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP/252 Def
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Protect
- Wish
- Seismic Toss
- Sunny Day
Alright first off you might be thinking sunny day? Well here is the reason why since my ninjask is weak to sandstorm or hail i bring in my blissey for sunny day so it gets rid of it then my flareon usualy comes in since its move its powered up alittle bit. Before i had gravity so flying/leviatate pokemon would get hit but my toxic spikes but it didnt work so i changed it. Blissey is another supporter with wish plus its amazing sp def.



Shaymin @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/6 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Aromatherapy
- Rest
- Grass Knot
- Hidden Power [Fire]
Last is shaymin, Here he helps the whole team out with aromatherapy so if ninjask gets hit by WoW or toxic i can switch him out real quick and use it. I have rest and it helps alot plus with its ability natural cure its perfect. I have grass knot instead of seed flare just because of its PP and hp fire to hit those other grass pokemon and steel types.




Alright there is my team some flaws is a lucario and DD pokemon and for right now thatts it i cant think of anything else so please and move changes or any other pokemon that will be better please say something this team is very good and i know it has potential if it gets better. But remember if you say a pokemon make sure it has a move like for example if you dont think sanslash fits good if you say another poekmon please have it have rapid spin but if you think something else is good please help me i have only lost 4 games out of 15 and thats good but i think this team can get better, you can even say bad things i dont care as long as it helps my team so please comment :)
 
Ok, I'm not very good at rating, but I'll see if I can help, get the ball rolling.


How is Flareon with Lava Plume going to beat a flyer or a dragon? If you want to Toxicstall, there are better pokes than Flareon. A Vaporeon could fill this role better:
Vaporeon@Leftovers
Bold/Water Absorb
Wish
Protect
Surf
HP [Elec]/Toxic
With HP [Elec], Vappy becomes a near-perfect Water-counter. With Toxic, you can Toxicstall like Flareon intended.

youngknight92 said:

Shedinja @ Choice Band
Ability: Wonder Guard
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Lonely nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Trick
- Will-o-wisp
- X-Scissor
- Sucker Punch
People said that this pokemon is better in Ubers but it works out great in here. I have a choice band to trick the foe if its a blissey or something i know i cant beat. I put WoW in it for steels since they cant get hit by toxic spikes. Its also here for those bad spinners to take my toxic spikes away. And is very good in helping its teammates out since it cant get hit unless its super effective
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This part confuses me. You're investing into both Defense and Special Defense into a Shedinja? You know it only has 1HP ever, right? Also, in every section after, you refer to the others helping Ninjask. So, who is in this spot?
I can think of other problems, but I can't come up with good replacements, so I'll let some more experienced raters help you with that. Sorry I can't be of much help, but I hope this gets the ball rolling!
 
There really is no point in purposely crippling yourself by using outclassed UUs and NUs.

If you wanted to do that, replace Blissey with Chancey and play UU.

I agree with Rickheg, another option to replace Flareon is Sub/Toxic Heatran if you wanted to keep Flash Fire, this also reduces SR damage, gives you a Toxic Spikes immunity, and is generally more bulky, as well as giving you the option to hit the Dragons/Flyers with HP: Ice. The only drawback is the lack of Recovery.

For reference, this is the suggested set:

Heatran @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Nature: Timid
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power: Ice (Replaced Earth Power from the Analysis specifically to solve Flareon's intended purpose)
- Substitute
- Toxic

rickheg said:
This part confuses me. You're investing into both Defense and Special Defense into a Shedinja? You know it only has 1HP ever, right? Also, in every section after, you refer to the others helping Ninjask. So, who is in this spot?
I can think of other problems, but I can't come up with good replacements, so I'll let some more experienced raters help you with that. Sorry I can't be of much help, but I hope this gets the ball rolling!
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I believe the Spd part is meant to be Speed, as for the last 4 EVs, there really isn't any other place that it can be dumped and be useful.
 
GFGuru said:
im probably gonna come off rude, but are you aware that you are telling us that your team is weak to pretty much every offensive threat in OU? Mixape SD luke all dd pokes!?!?
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I don't see anything wrong with you saying that.
It's totally true.
Well, if he switches to a heatran with the set above there is less of a weakness to DD pokes.
 
Yeah, as others have said, this team is really bad and I think that it doesn't even fulfill the definition of "competitive" Pokemon. There's no reason to keep this thread open. Feel free to make a new RMT when you build a team that is worth the time required to rate it.
 
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