XY OU BEST TEAM IN THE WORLD

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  1. Charizard @ Charizardite Y
  2. Ability: Blaze
  3. EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
  4. Timid Nature
  5. - Fire Blast
  6. - Solar Beam
  7. - Focus Blast
  8. - Roost

  9. Donphan @ Assault Vest
  10. Ability: Sturdy
  11. EVs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spe
  12. Adamant Nature
  13. - Rapid Spin
  14. - Earthquake
  15. - Knock Off
  16. - Ice Shard

  17. Heliolisk @ Sitrus Berry
  18. Ability: Solar Power
  19. EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
  20. Timid Nature
  21. IVs: 0 Atk
  22. - Volt Switch
  23. - Hyper Voice
  24. - Grass Knot
  25. - Thunderbolt

  26. Dragonite @ Leftovers
  27. Ability: Multiscale
  28. EVs: 216 HP / 64 Atk / 228 SpD
  29. Adamant Nature
  30. - Roost
  31. - Dragon Claw
  32. - Extreme Speed
  33. - Fire Punch

  34. Heatran @ Leftovers
  35. Ability: Flash Fire
  36. EVs: 248 HP / 192 SpD / 68 Spe
  37. Calm Nature
  38. - Lava Plume
  39. - Toxic
  40. - Taunt
  41. - Stealth Rock

  42. Shiftry @ Life Orb
  43. Ability: Chlorophyll
  44. EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
  45. Jolly Nature
  46. - Swords Dance
  47. - Knock Off
  48. - Sucker Punch
  49. - Seed Bomb
 
Yeah, first of all, while your format is...interesting, it's not the format typically used on this site. I don't know why the random numbers are there, but they've got to go. Also, you need descriptions of what your Pokemon do on your team, why you picked them, how they help the team function as a whole, etc. And those descriptions must be at least three lines long. If you don't make those changes, a mod's gonna lock this thread.

Until you've made the necessary format changes, I'm not gonna give a detailed rate, but one thing I'd like to note is that, while Smogon generally encourages coming up with original strategies and uses for Pokemon, saying that you have the best OU team in the world while packing a certain elephant who shall go lamed...gah, I mean unnamed...on that team is generally going to result in a lot of derisive comments, interspersed with a few genuinely witty comments, being thrown your way. The Pachyderm Who Must Not Be Named seems like a good idea on paper, but...well, he was the subject of an April Fool's analysis satirizing how bad he is, so...yeah, don't use him in OU. Anything he can do, something else can do way better.
 
Hello kakuna02 !

Unfortunately, this RMT is currently not following the rules which can be found in the RMT Resource Thread; specifically, this thread violates rule #4, because you lack sufficient descriptions for each Pokemon on your team. As such, I am afraid that I will have to lock this thread for the time being. If you would like this thread to be reopened, feel free to PM me with your updated RMT, and I would be happy to reopen this thread for you. If you need help making an RMT up to the required standards, I recommend that you carefully read the RMT Resource Thread and check out other RMTs from the Team Showcase and RMT Archive for some examples.

Good luck with your team, and have a nice day!
 
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