Blowing everything up

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So this is a team I designed for Wifi and battling with friends, which causes a problem since it makes Hidden Power really, really impracticle. Basically the idea is to KO pokemon really, really fast.

Machamp @ Lum Berry
Adament, 252 Atk 252 Hp 4 Spec Def
No Guard
Dynamic Punch
Ice Punch
Bullet Punch
Payback

Basic lead Machamp, designed to dripple opposing leads, with evs in HP cause he's not outspeeding anything anyways

Scizor @ Life orb
Adamant, 252 Atk, 252 spe, 4 hp
Technician
Swords Dance
Bullet Punch
Brick Break
X-scissor

First off, yes I know X-scissor is worse than bug bite, but I dont have HGSS, so I can't get one with that. Again, come in on a blissy or something, SD, blow shit up

Darmanitan @ Choice Band
Adamant 252 Atk 252 Spe, 4 hp
Flare Blitz
Rock Slide
U-Turn
Earthquake
Come in, Blow shit up, switch. Can 2HKO anyone


Ferrothorn @ Rocky Helmet
Impish 252 DEF 252 Spec DEF
Stealth Rock
Power Whip
Leech seed
Toxic

Now this guys up here to put in lots of residual damage to make OHKOing easier. With the rocky helmet, physical attacks give back quite a bit of recoil, then of course the other attacks make the damage add up


Omastar @ lum berry
Swift Swim
Modest 4 hp 252 spec ATK 252 Spe
Shell smash
Hydro Pump
Ice beam
rest
switch in, shell smash, rest, sweep

Chandleur @ Choice Specs
Flash Fire
Modest 4 hp 252 Spec Atk 252 Spe
Fire Blast
Energy Ball
Shadow Ball
Psychic

Switch in to a Fire attack aimed at ferrothorn or scizor, absorb it, fire blast averything. Psychic is to deal with those darned Fighting types


So thats it, please tell me if there's anything to improve on

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.