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[overlord]

here is my team:

Weavile@focus sash
jolly
evs- 40 hp, 252 attack, 216 speed
poison jab
brick break
night slash
ice punch
my great starter. ice punch for salamence leads, poison jab for coverage, night slash for gengar and co. and brick break for tyranitar

gliscor@leftovers
impish- 252 hp, defence, 6 atack
earthquake
roost
ice fang
knock off

absolutely obliterates heracross. other than that he compliments vaporeon extremely well as they cover each others weaknesses.

vaporeon@leftovers
bold- 188 hp/ 252 def/ 68 sp.attack
surf
icebeam
wish
protect
my vaporeon is fantastic against garchomp and all other dragons. wish for support, protect for instant recovery, surf for fire types

mamoswine@life orb
adamant-64 ho/ 252 attack/ 192 spd
return
ice shard
earthquake
stione edge

my back up garchomp counter and physicalk tank. owns every draggon and many other pokemon too.
toxicroak@wide lens
jolly- 252 attack/speed 6 def
cross chop
sucker punch
stone edge
swords dance

toxicroak is extremely underrated. it is a force to be reckoned with. it is fantastic

dragonite@lum berry
jolly-252 attack/ speed 4 hp
dragon dance
outrage
fire punch
earthquake

ddnite is powerful and hits hard. not much else to say, its a physical sweeper.

sorry this was a bit brief my cpu has been experiencing difficulties. thnx in advance. once again im sorry for the briefness.
:happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain:

 

[Heez]

here is my team:

Weavile@focus sash
jolly
evs- 40 hp, 252 attack, 216 speed
poison jab
brick break
night slash
ice punch
my great starter. ice punch for salamence leads, poison jab for coverage, night slash for gengar and co. and brick break for tyranitar

gliscor@leftovers
impish- 252 hp, defence, 6 atack
earthquake
roost
ice fang
knock off

absolutely obliterates heracross. other than that he compliments vaporeon extremely well as they cover each others weaknesses.

vaporeon@leftovers
bold- 188 hp/ 252 def/ 68 sp.attack
surf
icebeam
wish
protect
my vaporeon is fantastic against garchomp and all other dragons. wish for support, protect for instant recovery, surf for fire types

mamoswine@life orb
adamant-64 ho/ 252 attack/ 192 spd
return
ice shard
earthquake
stione edge

my back up garchomp counter and physicalk tank. owns every draggon and many other pokemon too.
toxicroak@wide lens
jolly- 252 attack/speed 6 def
cross chop
sucker punch
stone edge
swords dance

toxicroak is extremely underrated. it is a force to be reckoned with. it is fantastic

dragonite@lum berry
jolly-252 attack/ speed 4 hp
dragon dance
outrage
fire punch
earthquake

ddnite is powerful and hits hard. not much else to say, its a physical sweeper.

sorry this was a bit brief my cpu has been experiencing difficulties. thnx in advance. once again im sorry for the briefness.
:happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain::happybrain:

What coverage does poison jab give you? It covers grass and most grasses are part poison. Besides, you have ice punch for grasses. You should have aerial ace in on your weavile to cover to "oh-so-common" machamp and other fighters.

Your gliscor is pretty standard.

vaporeon provides wish support which is good.

your mamoswine should have choice band on it over life orb. A choice banded ice shard does numbers to things that don't resist it. You can get rid of return and put in peck which helps you when your gliscor is dead and a heracross steps in.

Take wide lens off toxicroak. You have 1 move that is a little bit inaccurate. I am sure you can find a better item.

dragonite is standard

Decent team. Just fix the little stuff and you should be fine. Gengar can do good against you so watch out.

 

[Bounty]

As far as I can see, you have a huge Gyarados-weakness. I suggest you put HP Electric on Vaporeon to counter it. Gliscor counters most Dragons well already.

 

[Taylor]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Please note that we are intending on becomming more and more strict with this rule as times goes on. We (Smogon staff) are looking for threads that are well presented and full with description. I myself do not see why your Dragonite and Toxicroak specifically have effortless descriptions. Please, follow the rules.