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BRIONNE​


[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Flip Turn / Surf
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack enables it to be a strong special wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered attacks. Hydro Pump's high Base Power allows Brionne to break through a large number of walls such as Piloswine, Golbat, Hattrem, and physically defensive Galarian Corsola. Ice Beam cripples Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Thwackey, and Togetic that otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Gurdurr, Hakamo-o, and Fraxure, and it also enables Brionne to hit bulky Water-types like Wartortle. Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot and generate momentum and grants it the option of switching out of bad matchups against anticipated switch-ins from specially defensive walls like Klang and Mareanie, but Surf can also be an option thanks to it having more reliability compared to Hydro Pump.

As a wallbreaker, Brionne can be used throughout the game, but it functions best early- to mid-game in order to break walls or pivot out on various entry hazard setters such as Marshtomp, Piloswine, and Metang, as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. Flip Turn should be used as a way to offer momentum and lure in specially defensive walls like Mareanie and Galarian Corsola that may switch in. Knock Off users like Galarian Linoone, Thwackey, and Vullaby can remove the foes' Eviolites and safely switch Brionne in with Parting Shot and U-turn. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners, as they can easily replenish Brionne's health and allow it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy and other slow pivots such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respectively. Charjabug can also provide Sticky Web support, allowing Brionne to outspeed a greater number of threats including Pikachu, Gabite, and Fraxure. Fighting-types like Machoke and Gurdurr are also good partners, as they can easily break through specially defensive Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Late-game sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang, and Fraxure also appreciate Brionne due to its ability to weaken walls like Galarian Corsola and Ferroseed.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Scald / Flip Turn
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Rest
move 4: Sleep Talk
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, Brionne functions through its Water typing and solid bulk to take on special attackers such as Wartortle, Gastly, and Magmar. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health and negate status, while Sleep Talk utilizes Moonblast and Scald when Brionne is asleep to wear down opposing threats. Moonblast is used to hit opposing Water-types and break Substitute Shell Smash Wartortle. Moonblast also enables Brionne to wear down Guts users like Gurdurr, Machoke, and Galarian Linoone that benefit from Scald burns. Flip Turn can also be an option instead of Scald for Brionne to switch out when expecting a check like Roselia or Mareanie to switch in. However, using the combination of Sleep Talk and Flip Turn can be quite unreliable and risky.

Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Magmar, Nasty Plot Morgrem, and Shell Smash Wartortle. Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent, Gastly, and Raboot that are otherwise threatened by them. When using Flip Turn, Brionne should be paired with fast revenge killers such as Pikachu, Thwackey, and Choice Scarf Gastly to offensively pressure Pokemon like Substitute Lampent and Galarian Mr. Mime. Steel-types like Ferroseed and Metang enjoy Brionne as a partner due to its resistance to Fire-type attacks; they can also provide entry hazard support to let Brionne check its targets better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates, as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers such as Thwackey and Gurdurr that can break past Brionne. Since Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Galarian Linoone are good partners, as they can easily weaken threats that may switch into Brionne's attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Toxic can be used on specially defensive Brionne instead of Moonblast in order to cripple opposing Pokemon such as bulky Wartortle and Togetic. Toxic alongside Flip Turn allows Brionne to inflict status on the opposing Pokemon and safely switch into a better check. Ice Beam can also be an option instead of Moonblast to cripple Grass-types like Ivysaur and Roselia. However, these changes do warrant Brionne's capability to wall Substitute users like Wartortle.

Checks and Counters
===================
**Grass-types**: Grass-types like Tangela, Thwackey, and Roselia can easily OHKO Brionne through their super effective STAB attacks, though none of them can switch into Ice Beam.

**Electric-types**: Electric-types such as Electabuzz and Pikachu heavily pressure Choice Specs Brionne through attacks like Thunderbolt and Volt Switch, and Choice Specs Electabuzz and Volt Tackle Pikachu can also KO Brionne fairly easily. However, neither of them like to switch into an attack from Brionne.

**Physical Wallbreakers**: Pokemon like Choice Band Raboot, Rufflet, and Fraxure have no trouble KOing or revenge killing Brionne. However, once again, none of them can afford to switch into Brionne.

**Specially Defensive Walls**: Specially defensive walls like Mareanie, Clefairy, and Ferroseed can easily switch into Brionne's attacks and remove its item or wear it down through status or coverage attacks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Jett, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]], [uhuhuhu7, 407249]]
- Grammar checked by: [[estronic.240732]]
 
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Good work as always. qc 1/2 once implemented.

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Surf
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Ice Beam
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high special attack stat enables it to be a fearsome wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its defensive Water-type and high power moves. Hydro Pump and Surf are Brionne's stab attacks, they allow Brionne to hit a large portion of the metagame notably Fire- and Ground-types like Torracat and Piloswine. Hydro Pump's higher power allows Brionne to break walls such as Clefairy and Corsola-Galar as well as lower the health of specially defensive walls like Klang. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Machoke, Hakamo-o and Fraxure who may resist Brionne's water stab. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass-types like Roselia, Dartrix and Gloom who otherwise can easily wall Brionne and strike back with super effective stab attacks. (maybe mention that Ice Beam also hits fat birds like Togetic and Vullaby slightly harder than hydro and without the miss chance)

As a wallbreaker Brionne can be used throughout the game however it does function best early to mid game in order to break walls and make it easier for another Pokemon to come in and sweep. Brionne is very good at threatening hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine and Corsola-Galar out as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. If the opponent has specially defensive walls such as Klang or Roselia, Brionne should be wary and switch out to another Pokemon that could put them in range of Hydro Pump or Ice Beam respectively. (add some sort of mention of Knock Off users like Machoke, Linoone-Galar and Vullaby are able to help it break past walls either here or when you mention other good partners) Make sure to always use a move that can hit a majority of the opponent's team as Brionne can easily get locked and walled by the right switch-in. As Brionne is not carrying an Eviolite it is susceptible to faster threats and should make sure to never be in range of priority users like Choice Band Piloswine, Flame Orb Machoke or Sucker Punch Dartrix. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy, and other slow pivots, such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in, as you want avoid directly switching Brionne into an attack, if possible. Fighting-types such as Machoke are also good partners as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang. Grass- and Electric-types like Roselia and Charjabug are also good partners for Brionne as they can threaten bulky Water-types that otherwise can easily wall it. In addition Roselia can also set hazards up through Spikes allowing for threats to be in range of Brionne's attacks whilst Charjabug can help Brionne's average speed by setting up Sticky Web. Wincons and late game sweepers such as Haunter, Klang and Fraxure are also good partners as they greatly appreciate Brionne's ability to wallbreak and put checks in range.


[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Scald
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to wall common threats such as Haunter and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health whist also allowing any status to be negated while Sleep Talk is use for Brionne to remain able to hit back with Moonblast or Scald. Moonblast is used for threats such as Machoke who benefit from Scald Burns as well as a mean to hit other Water-types such as Wartortle and Choice Specs Brionne. Scald is Brionne's main stab which allows it to burn opposing Pokemon and prevent them from dealing too much damage to Brionne.

When running specially defensive Brionne you are usually trying to wall special attackers such as Haunter and Shell Smash Wartortle, therefore Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or ko'd. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent who are otherwise checked by these threats. Grass- and Electric-types threaten Brionne as they can easily hit it with super effective stab, therefore Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners, Ferroseed also allows for hazard support helping Brionne wall its targets easily. Galarian Corsola and Gloom make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Linoone-Galar are good partners as they can easily weaken threats who may be able to switch into Brionne's attacks. Brionne's best recovery is Rest however sometimes being asleep is a big inconvenient therefore clerics such as Clefairy and Hattrem are good pairings.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

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Crystalites said:
Good work as always. qc 1/2 once implemented.

add remove comments
[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Surf
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Ice Beam
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high special attack stat enables it to be a fearsome wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its defensive Water-type and high power moves. Hydro Pump and Surf are Brionne's stab attacks, they allow Brionne to hit a large portion of the metagame notably Fire- and Ground-types like Torracat and Piloswine. Hydro Pump's higher power allows Brionne to break walls such as Clefairy and Corsola-Galar as well as lower the health of specially defensive walls like Klang. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Machoke, Hakamo-o and Fraxure who may resist Brionne's water stab. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass-types like Roselia, Dartrix and Gloom who otherwise can easily wall Brionne and strike back with super effective stab attacks. (maybe mention that Ice Beam also hits fat birds like Togetic and Vullaby slightly harder than hydro and without the miss chance)

As a wallbreaker Brionne can be used throughout the game however it does function best early to mid game in order to break walls and make it easier for another Pokemon to come in and sweep. Brionne is very good at threatening hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine and Corsola-Galar out as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. If the opponent has specially defensive walls such as Klang or Roselia, Brionne should be wary and switch out to another Pokemon that could put them in range of Hydro Pump or Ice Beam respectively. (add some sort of mention of Knock Off users like Machoke, Linoone-Galar and Vullaby are able to help it break past walls either here or when you mention other good partners) Make sure to always use a move that can hit a majority of the opponent's team as Brionne can easily get locked and walled by the right switch-in. As Brionne is not carrying an Eviolite it is susceptible to faster threats and should make sure to never be in range of priority users like Choice Band Piloswine, Flame Orb Machoke or Sucker Punch Dartrix. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy, and other slow pivots, such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in, as you want avoid directly switching Brionne into an attack, if possible. Fighting-types such as Machoke are also good partners as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang. Grass- and Electric-types like Roselia and Charjabug are also good partners for Brionne as they can threaten bulky Water-types that otherwise can easily wall it. In addition Roselia can also set hazards up through Spikes allowing for threats to be in range of Brionne's attacks whilst Charjabug can help Brionne's average speed by setting up Sticky Web. Wincons and late game sweepers such as Haunter, Klang and Fraxure are also good partners as they greatly appreciate Brionne's ability to wallbreak and put checks in range.


[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Scald
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to wall common threats such as Haunter and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health whist also allowing any status to be negated while Sleep Talk is use for Brionne to remain able to hit back with Moonblast or Scald. Moonblast is used for threats such as Machoke who benefit from Scald Burns as well as a mean to hit other Water-types such as Wartortle and Choice Specs Brionne. Scald is Brionne's main stab which allows it to burn opposing Pokemon and prevent them from dealing too much damage to Brionne.

When running specially defensive Brionne you are usually trying to wall special attackers such as Haunter and Shell Smash Wartortle, therefore Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or ko'd. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent who are otherwise checked by these threats. Grass- and Electric-types threaten Brionne as they can easily hit it with super effective stab, therefore Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners, Ferroseed also allows for hazard support helping Brionne wall its targets easily. Galarian Corsola and Gloom make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Linoone-Galar are good partners as they can easily weaken threats who may be able to switch into Brionne's attacks. Brionne's best recovery is Rest however sometimes being asleep is a big inconvenient therefore clerics such as Clefairy and Hattrem are good pairings.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

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SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Surf
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Ice Beam
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack stat enables it to be a fearsome wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its defensive Water-type and high power moves (while there might be defensive utility to its typing, the first sentence is all about it being a wallbreaker, and calling its water typing defensive here would be confusing). Hydro Pump and Surf are Brionne's STAB attacks, they allow Brionne to hit a large portion of the metagame notably Fire- and Ground-types like Torracat and Piloswine. Hydro Pump's higher power allows Brionne to break walls such as Clefairy and Corsola-Galar as well as lower the health of specially defensive walls like Klang. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Machoke, Hakamo-o and Fraxure who may resist Brionne's water stab Water attacks. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix and Togetic who otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage.

As a wallbreaker Brionne can be used throughout the game, however it does function best early- to mid-game in order to break walls and make it easier for another Pokemon to come in and sweep. Brionne is very good at threatening hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine and Corsola-Galar out as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. If the opponent has specially defensive walls such as Klang or Roselia, Brionne should be wary and switch out to another Pokemon that could put them in range of Hydro Pump or Ice Beam, respectively. Knock Off abusers like Linoone-Galar, Pikachu and Thwackey are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help Brionne wallbreak better. As Brionne is not carrying an Eviolite it is susceptible to faster threats and should make sure to never be in range of priority users like Choice Band Make sure to always use a move that can hit a majority of the opponent's team as Brionne can easily get locked and walled by the right switch-in. Piloswine, Flame Orb Machoke or Sucker Punch Dartrix (These sentences were incomplete / unorganized but also wasn't that relevant in an already big analyses so far; its good to just cut it). Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy, and other slow pivots, such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in, as you want avoid directly switching Brionne into an attack, if possible. (Fluff) Fighting-types such as Machoke are also good partners as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Grass- and Electric-types like Roselia and Charjabug are also good partners for Brionne as they can threaten bulky Water-types that otherwise can easily wall it and set up entry hazards to support it. In addition Roselia can also set hazards up through Spikes allowing for threats to be in range of Brionne's attacks whilst Charjabug can help Brionne's average speed by setting up Sticky Web. (verbose, again just trying to trim this down to be on par with the size / relevant content of other minis) Wincons and late game sweepers such as Haunter, Klang, and Fraxure are also good partners as they greatly appreciate Brionne's ability to wallbreak and put checks in range.


[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Scald
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to wall common threats such as Haunter and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health whist also allowing any status to be negated while Sleep Talk is use for Brionne to remain able to hit back with Moonblast or Scald. Moonblast is used for threats such as Machoke who benefit from Scald Burns as well as a mean to hit other Water-types such as Wartortle and Choice Specs Brionne. Scald is Brionne's main stab which allows it to burn opposing Pokemon and prevent them from dealing too much damage to Brionne.

When running specially defensive Brionne, you are usually trying use it to wall special attackers such as Haunter and Shell Smash Wartortle, and therefore Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or ko'd removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent who are otherwise checked by them these threats. Grass- and Electric-types threaten Brionne as they can easily hit it with their super effective stab STAB attacks, therefore Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners; Ferroseed also allows for hazard support helping Brionne wall check its targets easily (hazards don't make brione a better wall, but a better check, as they allow it to offensively check them better). Galarian Corsola and Gloom make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Linoone-Galar are good partners as they can easily weaken threats who may be able to switch into Brionne's attacks. Brionne's best recovery is Rest however sometimes being asleep is a big inconvenience; therefore, clerics such as Clefairy and Hattrem are good pairings.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Crystalites, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Mostly did some GP stuff. Some pointers are that Smogon uses the Oxford comma, STAB is capitalized and used as an adjective, and mid-game and the like have hyphens. Great work though all around! QC 2/2
 
Ho3nConfirm3d said:
SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Surf
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Ice Beam
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack stat enables it to be a fearsome wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its defensive Water-type and high power moves (while there might be defensive utility to its typing, the first sentence is all about it being a wallbreaker, and calling its water typing defensive here would be confusing). Hydro Pump and Surf are Brionne's STAB attacks, they allow Brionne to hit a large portion of the metagame notably Fire- and Ground-types like Torracat and Piloswine. Hydro Pump's higher power allows Brionne to break walls such as Clefairy and Corsola-Galar as well as lower the health of specially defensive walls like Klang. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Machoke, Hakamo-o and Fraxure who may resist Brionne's water stab Water attacks. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix and Togetic who otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage.

As a wallbreaker Brionne can be used throughout the game, however it does function best early- to mid-game in order to break walls and make it easier for another Pokemon to come in and sweep. Brionne is very good at threatening hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine and Corsola-Galar out as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. If the opponent has specially defensive walls such as Klang or Roselia, Brionne should be wary and switch out to another Pokemon that could put them in range of Hydro Pump or Ice Beam, respectively. Knock Off abusers like Linoone-Galar, Pikachu and Thwackey are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help Brionne wallbreak better. As Brionne is not carrying an Eviolite it is susceptible to faster threats and should make sure to never be in range of priority users like Choice Band Make sure to always use a move that can hit a majority of the opponent's team as Brionne can easily get locked and walled by the right switch-in. Piloswine, Flame Orb Machoke or Sucker Punch Dartrix (These sentences were incomplete / unorganized but also wasn't that relevant in an already big analyses so far; its good to just cut it). Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy, and other slow pivots, such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in, as you want avoid directly switching Brionne into an attack, if possible. (Fluff) Fighting-types such as Machoke are also good partners as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Grass- and Electric-types like Roselia and Charjabug are also good partners for Brionne as they can threaten bulky Water-types that otherwise can easily wall it and set up entry hazards to support it. In addition Roselia can also set hazards up through Spikes allowing for threats to be in range of Brionne's attacks whilst Charjabug can help Brionne's average speed by setting up Sticky Web. (verbose, again just trying to trim this down to be on par with the size / relevant content of other minis) Wincons and late game sweepers such as Haunter, Klang, and Fraxure are also good partners as they greatly appreciate Brionne's ability to wallbreak and put checks in range.


[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Scald
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to wall common threats such as Haunter and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health whist also allowing any status to be negated while Sleep Talk is use for Brionne to remain able to hit back with Moonblast or Scald. Moonblast is used for threats such as Machoke who benefit from Scald Burns as well as a mean to hit other Water-types such as Wartortle and Choice Specs Brionne. Scald is Brionne's main stab which allows it to burn opposing Pokemon and prevent them from dealing too much damage to Brionne.

When running specially defensive Brionne, you are usually trying use it to wall special attackers such as Haunter and Shell Smash Wartortle, and therefore Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or ko'd removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent who are otherwise checked by them these threats. Grass- and Electric-types threaten Brionne as they can easily hit it with their super effective stab STAB attacks, therefore Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners; Ferroseed also allows for hazard support helping Brionne wall check its targets easily (hazards don't make brione a better wall, but a better check, as they allow it to offensively check them better). Galarian Corsola and Gloom make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Linoone-Galar are good partners as they can easily weaken threats who may be able to switch into Brionne's attacks. Brionne's best recovery is Rest however sometimes being asleep is a big inconvenience; therefore, clerics such as Clefairy and Hattrem are good pairings.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Crystalites, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Mostly did some GP stuff. Some pointers are that Smogon uses the Oxford comma, STAB is capitalized and used as an adjective, and mid-game and the like have hyphens. Great work though all around! QC 2/2
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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Surf / Flip Turn
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack stat enables it to be a fearsome wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered, Water-type attacks and high power moves. Hydro Pump is Brionne's primary attack, (RC) as it hits a large portion of the metagame; (ASC) notably, (AC) it targets Fire- and Ground-types like Raboot, Torracat, and Piloswine. More over, Hydro Pump's higher power high Base Power allows Brionne to break walls such as Clefairy and Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola, (AC) as well as lower the health of and threaten (all attacks lower HP, should clarify that hydro specifically scares Klang with "threaten" instead) specially defensive walls like Klang. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Machoke, Hakamo-o, (AC) and Fraxure who may resist Brionne's Water attacks. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix, and Togetic who otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. Surf can also be an option as it cannot miss unlike compared to Hydro Pump, (AC) while Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot out of bad matchups against Pokemon like Roselia and Klang.

As a wallbreaker, (AC) Brionne can be used throughout the game, (AC) however but it does functions best early-(AH) to mid-game(AH)(these were leftover from my QC but are bold at the moment) in order to break walls or lure pivot out on threats in through Flip turn Turn making it easier for so another Pokemon to can come in and sweep. Brionne is very good at threatening out entry hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine, (AC) and Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola out as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. If the opponent has specially defensive walls such as Klang or Roselia, Brionne should switch out or use Flip Turn to pivot onto another Pokemon that could OHKO them or put them in range of Hydro Pump or Ice Beam, (AC) respectively. Knock Off abusers like Galarian Linoone Linoone-Galar, Pikachu, (AC) and Thwackey are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help Brionne wallbreak better. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health, (AC) allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy, (RC) and other slow pivots, (RC) such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respecitvely respectively. Fighting-types such as like Machoke are also good partners as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Grass- and Electric-types like Roselia and Charjabug are also good partners for Brionne as they can threaten bulky Water-types and set up entry hazards to support it. Wincons and late Late-game (AH)(late game sweepers are wincons already) sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang,(AC) and Fraxure are also good partners as they greatly appreciate Brionne's ability to wallbreak and put checks like Corsola-Galar and Ferroseed in range.


[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Scald
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, (AC) Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to wall take on common threats such as Charmeleon (C rank mon, probably needs a replacement) and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health whist and also allowing any status to be negated, (AC) while Sleep Talk is use utilizes or Brionne to remain able to hit back with Moonblast or and Scald when Brionne is asleep. Moonblast is used for threats such as Machoke who benefit from Scald Burns burns as well as a mean to hit other Water-types such as Wartortle and Choice Specs Brionne. Scald is Brionne's main stab which allows it to burn opposing Pokemon and prevent them from dealing too much damage to Brionne. (Stab moves are fluff and Scald is nothing special here)

When running specially defensive Brionne, use it Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Charmeleon, Nasty Plot Morgrem, (AC) and Shell Smash Wartortle, and therefore Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, (AC) it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent who are otherwise checked by them. Grass- and Electric-types threaten Brionne as they can easily hit it with their super effective STAB attacks, making therefore Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners; (ASC) Ferroseed also allows for provides hazard support helping so Brionne checks its targets easily better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Linoone-Galar Galarian Linoone are good partners as they can easily weaken threats who that may be able to switch into Brionne's attacks. Brionne's best recovery is Rest, (AC) however sometimes being asleep is an big untimely inconvenience; therefore, (AC) clerics such as Clefairy and Hattrem are good pairings.

[CREDITS]
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Also a lot of commas and semicolons are in Bold from my previous QC. In this AMGP, I have add comma (AC) and add semicolon (ASC) after these additions, and you can also just highlight and Bold the entire analysis twice to get rid of these leftover formatting additions,
 
hey im just here to critique the updated analysis

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Flip Turn / Surf
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack enables it to be a strong special wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered, Water-type attacks just the one tbh, flip turn isn't exactly high-powered. Hydro Pump is Brionne's primary STAB attack as it hits a large portion of the metagame; notably Fire- and Ground-types like Raboot, Torracat, and Piloswine this sentence doesn't really make sense; all of your STAB moves hit fire- and ground-types. remove this point entirely and focus on the actual reason you'd run hydro pump; the damage you talk about here: . Moreover, Hydro Pump's high Base Power allows Brionne to break walls such as Golbat, Hattrem, and Physically Defensive Galarian Corsola. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Gurdurr, Hakamo-o, and Fraxure talk about ice beam first; it's the second move and the next most important behind hydro pump. also mention that moonblast can be a strong neutral attack that can also hurt bulky water-types like wartortle (more important than hitting hakamo-o imo).. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix, and Togetic who otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. unless it's an especially relevant example, try to avoid using pokemon ranked below B- (in this case dartrix). hydro hits most of our flying-types so id change this to just grass-types and change this to roselia/thwackey/ivysaur or something.
Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot and generate momentum as well as the option of switching out of bad matchups against anticipated switch ins from specially defensive walls like?, Surf can also be an option as it cannot miss compared to Hydro Pump.

As a wallbreaker, Brionne can be used throughout the game, but it functions best early- to mid-game in order to break walls or pivot out on various entry hazard setters such as Carkol C+, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola now that they're running spdef cors can scout a hit pretty comfortably. honestly just change these examples to piloswine/metang/physdef clef/koffing/whatever you want ig. also i don't think you need to talk about pivoting this early. vs some teams you just wanna spam hydro and pick up kills. as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. mention flip turn separately here as a way to pick up momentum/take advantage of spdef mons like spdef clef and mareanie. Knock Off abusers like Galarian Linoone, Tangela, and Gurdurr are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help Brionne wallbreak better maybe change the latter two examples to thwackey/vullaby as they can also give brionne free switchins. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health, allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy and other slow pivots such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respectively. Brionne is a great threat when paired on Sticky Web teams as it allows it to outspeed a greater amount of threats examples please, which Charjabug can provide in return. Fighting-types like Machoke and gurdurr are also good partners as they can easily break through specially defensive (important as the primary klang set is offensive now) Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Late-game sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang, and Fraxure can also take advantage of Brionne "take advantage" implies they're on the opposing team as they greatly appreciate its ability to weaken walls like Corsola-Galar and Ferroseed.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Scald / Flip Turn
move 4: Moonblast
move 1: Scald / Flip Turn
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Rest
move 4: Sleep Talk
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to take on special attackers such as Gastly, Seadra and Wartortle wartortle as the first example, remove seadra (normally id say gastly too but i think everyone on council would agree it'll be rising above C+ in the next shift lol but remove it if you're unsure). some other examples could be kadabra, magmar, lampent, take your pick. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health and also allowing any status to be negated, while Sleep Talk utilizes Moonblast and Scald when Brionne is asleep to wear down opposing threats you don't need to explain what sleep talk does.. Moonblast is used to hit opposing Water-types, notably and break Substitute Shell Smash Wartotle. Moonblast also enables to wear down Knock users like knock off isn't really relevant here, instead just focus on guts Gurdurr, Machoke and Galarian-Linoone who benefit from Scald burns galarian linoone doesn't benefit from scald burns. Flip Turn can also be an option instead of Scald for Brionne to switch out onto a proper check. elaborate on this line please. point out how flip turn is better for pivoting on switchins like tangela/roselia. also mention that it can be risky to click sleep talk if paired with flip turn

Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Charmeleon magmar, Nasty Plot Morgrem, and Shell Smash Wartortle. Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent, Gastly and Raboot who are otherwise threatened by them. Steel-types like Ferroseed great partners; Ferroseed also also? in addition to what? provides hazard support so Brionne checks its targets better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers like? which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Galarian Linoone are good partners as they can easily weaken threats that may switch into Brionne's attacks. mention somewhere that faster breakers like pikachu/scarf gastly should be used if using flip turn, to offensively pressure pokemon like sub lampent and mime-galar.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Toxic can be paired on Specially Defensive Brionne instead of Moonblast in order to cripple opposing Pokemon examples please, Toxic works best with Flip Turn as it allows for Brionne to status the opposing Pokemon and safely switch onto a better check. Ice Beam can also be an option instead of Moonblast to cripple Grass-types like Ivysaur and Roselia. However these changes do warrant warrant? Brionne's capability to wall Substitute users like Wartortle and Lampent. pretty much just wartortle actually; flip turn beats lampent (on any decently made team), as does a set using scald/ice beam.

Checks and Counters
===================
**Grass-Types**: Grass-types like Tangela, Thwackey and Roselia can easily wear or OHKO Brionne through their super effective STAB attacks, though none of them like to switch onto Ice Beam. "like" is an understatement imo, make it clear that they can't reliably switch in because specs ice beam bops them. also remove "wear", just KO is fine.

**Electric-Types** Electric-types such as Electabuzz and Pikachu can easily tear down Brionne's health through attacks like Thunderbolt and Volt Switch, however neither like to switch into an attack from Brionne. brionne actually tanks volt switch from uninvested pikachu really easily.. rewrite this point to say that electabuzz can switch into the spdef set and both it and pikachu heavily pressure the specs set with tbolt/volt switch but neither can comfortably switch in.

**Physical Wallbreakers** Pokemon like Rufflet have no trouble koing Brionne, variants of those who are common Knock Off users in Gurdurr, Machoke and Galarian Linoone can also remove Brionne's item, making it an unreliable attacker and wall. However once again none of them are comfortable switching into Brionne. brionne is pretty fast so take out any mention of gurdurr/machoke pressuring them. go with faster examples (like rufflet) e.g. band raboot, band fraxure and just say they aren't able to switch directly into specs brionne and risk being burned by scald vs the defensive set on the switch.

**Specially Defensive Walls** Specially Defensive Walls like Mareanie, Clefairy and Ferroseed can easily switch into Brionne's attacks and remove its item or wear it down through status or coverage attacks.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Jett, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]] me :)
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Flip Turn / Surf
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack enables it to be a strong special wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered, (RC) Water-type attacks (more inclusive imo, plus flip turn wouldn't be what you would call "high-powered" in this case). Hydro Pump is Brionne's primary STAB attack, (AC) as it hits a large portion of the metagame, (semicolon -> comma) notably Fire- and Ground-types like Raboot, Torracat, and Piloswine. Moreover, Hydro Pump's high Base Power allows Brionne to break walls such as Golbat, Hattrem, and physically defensive Galarian Corsola. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Gurdurr, Hakamo-o, and Fraxure. Ice Beam is to cripples Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix, and Togetic who that otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot and generate momentum as well as the option of switching out of bad matchups against anticipated switch-ins (AH) from specially defensive walls, but Surf can also be an option as it cannot miss compared to Hydro Pump thanks to it having more reliability compared to Hydro Pump.

As a wallbreaker, Brionne can be used throughout the game, but it functions best early- to mid-game in order to break walls or pivot out on various entry hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola, (AC) as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. Knock Off abusers users like Galarian Linoone, Tangela, and Gurdurr are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help, (AC) removing Eviolite and helping Brionne wallbreak better. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners, (AC) as they can easily replenish Brionne's health, allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy and other slow pivots such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respectively. Brionne is a great threat when paired on Sticky Web teams as it allows with Sticky Web, allowing it to outspeed a greater amount number of threats, which Charjabug can provide in return. Fighting-types like Machoke are also good partners, (AC) as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Late-game sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang, and Fraxure can also take advantage of Brionne as they greatly appreciate, (AC) appreciating its ability to weaken walls like Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola and Ferroseed.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Scald / Flip Turn
move 4: Moonblast
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to take on special attackers such as Gastly, Seadra, (AC) and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health and also allowing any status to be negated negate status, while Sleep Talk utilizes Moonblast and Scald when Brionne is asleep to wear down opposing threats. Moonblast is used to hit opposing Water-types and break Substitute Shell Smash Wartortle. Moonblast also enables (enables what? not sure what you mean here) to wear down Knock Off users like Gurdurr, Machoke, (AC) and Galarian-Linoone who Galarian Linoone that benefit from Scald burns. Flip Turn can also be an option instead of Scald for Brionne to switch out onto into a proper check.

Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Charmeleon, Nasty Plot Morgrem, and Shell Smash Wartortle. Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent, Gastly, (AC) and Raboot who that are otherwise threatened by them. Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners; Ferroseed also provides entry hazard support so Brionne checks its targets better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates, (AC) as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which that can break past Brionne. As Since Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Galarian Linoone are good partners, (AC) as they can easily weaken threats that may switch into Brionne's attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Toxic can be paired on specially defensive Brionne instead of Moonblast in order to cripple opposing Pokemon, Toxic works working best with Flip Turn as it allows for to allow Brionne to inflict status on the opposing Pokemon and safely switch onto into a better check. Ice Beam can also be an option instead of Moonblast to cripple Grass-types like Ivysaur and Roselia. Howeve, (AC)r these changes do warrant Brionne's capability to wall Substitute users like Wartortle and Lampent.

Checks and Counters (you missed some colons in this section, so be sure to add them)
===================
**Grass-types**: Grass-types like Tangela, Thwackey, (AC) and Roselia can easily wear down or OHKO Brionne through their super effective STAB attacks, though none of them like to switch onto into Ice Beam.

**Electric-types**: Electric-types such as Electabuzz and Pikachu can easily tear down Brionne's health through attacks like Thunderbolt and Volt Switch, however though neither like to switch into an attack from Brionne.

**Physical Wallbreakers**: Pokemon like Rufflet have no trouble koing KOing Brionne, (RP) variants of those who. (AP) Physical wallbreakers that are also common Knock Off users in like Gurdurr, Machoke, (AC) and Galarian Linoone can also remove Brionne's item, making it an unreliable attacker and wall. However, (AC) once again, (AC) none of them are comfortable switching into Brionne.

**Specially Defensive Walls**: Specially defensive walls like Mareanie, Clefairy, (AC) and Ferroseed can easily switch into Brionne's attacks and remove its item or wear it down through status or coverage attacks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Jett, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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uhuhuhu7 said:
hey im just here to critique the updated analysis

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Flip Turn / Surf
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack enables it to be a strong special wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered, Water-type attacks just the one tbh, flip turn isn't exactly high-powered. Hydro Pump is Brionne's primary STAB attack as it hits a large portion of the metagame; notably Fire- and Ground-types like Raboot, Torracat, and Piloswine this sentence doesn't really make sense; all of your STAB moves hit fire- and ground-types. remove this point entirely and focus on the actual reason you'd run hydro pump; the damage you talk about here: . Moreover, Hydro Pump's high Base Power allows Brionne to break walls such as Golbat, Hattrem, and Physically Defensive Galarian Corsola. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Gurdurr, Hakamo-o, and Fraxure talk about ice beam first; it's the second move and the next most important behind hydro pump. also mention that moonblast can be a strong neutral attack that can also hurt bulky water-types like wartortle (more important than hitting hakamo-o imo).. Ice Beam is to cripple Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix, and Togetic who otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. unless it's an especially relevant example, try to avoid using pokemon ranked below B- (in this case dartrix). hydro hits most of our flying-types so id change this to just grass-types and change this to roselia/thwackey/ivysaur or something.
Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot and generate momentum as well as the option of switching out of bad matchups against anticipated switch ins from specially defensive walls like?, Surf can also be an option as it cannot miss compared to Hydro Pump.

As a wallbreaker, Brionne can be used throughout the game, but it functions best early- to mid-game in order to break walls or pivot out on various entry hazard setters such as Carkol C+, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola now that they're running spdef cors can scout a hit pretty comfortably. honestly just change these examples to piloswine/metang/physdef clef/koffing/whatever you want ig. also i don't think you need to talk about pivoting this early. vs some teams you just wanna spam hydro and pick up kills. as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. mention flip turn separately here as a way to pick up momentum/take advantage of spdef mons like spdef clef and mareanie. Knock Off abusers like Galarian Linoone, Tangela, and Gurdurr are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help Brionne wallbreak better maybe change the latter two examples to thwackey/vullaby as they can also give brionne free switchins. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners as they can easily replenish Brionne's health, allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy and other slow pivots such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respectively. Brionne is a great threat when paired on Sticky Web teams as it allows it to outspeed a greater amount of threats examples please, which Charjabug can provide in return. Fighting-types like Machoke and gurdurr are also good partners as they can easily break through specially defensive (important as the primary klang set is offensive now) Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Late-game sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang, and Fraxure can also take advantage of Brionne "take advantage" implies they're on the opposing team as they greatly appreciate its ability to weaken walls like Corsola-Galar and Ferroseed.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Scald / Flip Turn
move 4: Moonblast
move 1: Scald / Flip Turn
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Rest
move 4: Sleep Talk
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to take on special attackers such as Gastly, Seadra and Wartortle wartortle as the first example, remove seadra (normally id say gastly too but i think everyone on council would agree it'll be rising above C+ in the next shift lol but remove it if you're unsure). some other examples could be kadabra, magmar, lampent, take your pick. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health and also allowing any status to be negated, while Sleep Talk utilizes Moonblast and Scald when Brionne is asleep to wear down opposing threats you don't need to explain what sleep talk does.. Moonblast is used to hit opposing Water-types, notably and break Substitute Shell Smash Wartotle. Moonblast also enables to wear down Knock users like knock off isn't really relevant here, instead just focus on guts Gurdurr, Machoke and Galarian-Linoone who benefit from Scald burns galarian linoone doesn't benefit from scald burns. Flip Turn can also be an option instead of Scald for Brionne to switch out onto a proper check. elaborate on this line please. point out how flip turn is better for pivoting on switchins like tangela/roselia. also mention that it can be risky to click sleep talk if paired with flip turn

Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Charmeleon magmar, Nasty Plot Morgrem, and Shell Smash Wartortle. Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent, Gastly and Raboot who are otherwise threatened by them. Steel-types like Ferroseed great partners; Ferroseed also also? in addition to what? provides hazard support so Brionne checks its targets better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers like? which can break past Brionne. As Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Galarian Linoone are good partners as they can easily weaken threats that may switch into Brionne's attacks. mention somewhere that faster breakers like pikachu/scarf gastly should be used if using flip turn, to offensively pressure pokemon like sub lampent and mime-galar.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Toxic can be paired on Specially Defensive Brionne instead of Moonblast in order to cripple opposing Pokemon examples please, Toxic works best with Flip Turn as it allows for Brionne to status the opposing Pokemon and safely switch onto a better check. Ice Beam can also be an option instead of Moonblast to cripple Grass-types like Ivysaur and Roselia. However these changes do warrant warrant? Brionne's capability to wall Substitute users like Wartortle and Lampent. pretty much just wartortle actually; flip turn beats lampent (on any decently made team), as does a set using scald/ice beam.

Checks and Counters
===================
**Grass-Types**: Grass-types like Tangela, Thwackey and Roselia can easily wear or OHKO Brionne through their super effective STAB attacks, though none of them like to switch onto Ice Beam. "like" is an understatement imo, make it clear that they can't reliably switch in because specs ice beam bops them. also remove "wear", just KO is fine.

**Electric-Types** Electric-types such as Electabuzz and Pikachu can easily tear down Brionne's health through attacks like Thunderbolt and Volt Switch, however neither like to switch into an attack from Brionne. brionne actually tanks volt switch from uninvested pikachu really easily.. rewrite this point to say that electabuzz can switch into the spdef set and both it and pikachu heavily pressure the specs set with tbolt/volt switch but neither can comfortably switch in.

**Physical Wallbreakers** Pokemon like Rufflet have no trouble koing Brionne, variants of those who are common Knock Off users in Gurdurr, Machoke and Galarian Linoone can also remove Brionne's item, making it an unreliable attacker and wall. However once again none of them are comfortable switching into Brionne. brionne is pretty fast so take out any mention of gurdurr/machoke pressuring them. go with faster examples (like rufflet) e.g. band raboot, band fraxure and just say they aren't able to switch directly into specs brionne and risk being burned by scald vs the defensive set on the switch.

**Specially Defensive Walls** Specially Defensive Walls like Mareanie, Clefairy and Ferroseed can easily switch into Brionne's attacks and remove its item or wear it down through status or coverage attacks.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Jett, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]] me :)
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Flip Turn / Surf
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack enables it to be a strong special wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered, (RC) Water-type attacks (more inclusive imo, plus flip turn wouldn't be what you would call "high-powered" in this case). Hydro Pump is Brionne's primary STAB attack, (AC) as it hits a large portion of the metagame, (semicolon -> comma) notably Fire- and Ground-types like Raboot, Torracat, and Piloswine. Moreover, Hydro Pump's high Base Power allows Brionne to break walls such as Golbat, Hattrem, and physically defensive Galarian Corsola. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Gurdurr, Hakamo-o, and Fraxure. Ice Beam is to cripples Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Dartrix, and Togetic who that otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot and generate momentum as well as the option of switching out of bad matchups against anticipated switch-ins (AH) from specially defensive walls, but Surf can also be an option as it cannot miss compared to Hydro Pump thanks to it having more reliability compared to Hydro Pump.

As a wallbreaker, Brionne can be used throughout the game, but it functions best early- to mid-game in order to break walls or pivot out on various entry hazard setters such as Carkol, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola, (AC) as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. Knock Off abusers users like Galarian Linoone, Tangela, and Gurdurr are good partners as they can remove Eviolite and help, (AC) removing Eviolite and helping Brionne wallbreak better. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners, (AC) as they can easily replenish Brionne's health, allowing it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy and other slow pivots such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respectively. Brionne is a great threat when paired on Sticky Web teams as it allows with Sticky Web, allowing it to outspeed a greater amount number of threats, which Charjabug can provide in return. Fighting-types like Machoke are also good partners, (AC) as they can easily break through Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Late-game sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang, and Fraxure can also take advantage of Brionne as they greatly appreciate, (AC) appreciating its ability to weaken walls like Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola and Ferroseed.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Scald / Flip Turn
move 4: Moonblast
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, Brionne functions through its Water-type and solid bulk to take on special attackers such as Gastly, Seadra, (AC) and Wartortle. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health and also allowing any status to be negated negate status, while Sleep Talk utilizes Moonblast and Scald when Brionne is asleep to wear down opposing threats. Moonblast is used to hit opposing Water-types and break Substitute Shell Smash Wartortle. Moonblast also enables (enables what? not sure what you mean here) to wear down Knock Off users like Gurdurr, Machoke, (AC) and Galarian-Linoone who Galarian Linoone that benefit from Scald burns. Flip Turn can also be an option instead of Scald for Brionne to switch out onto into a proper check.

Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Charmeleon, Nasty Plot Morgrem, and Shell Smash Wartortle. Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent, Gastly, (AC) and Raboot who that are otherwise threatened by them. Steel-types like Ferroseed are great partners; Ferroseed also provides entry hazard support so Brionne checks its targets better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates, (AC) as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers which that can break past Brionne. As Since Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Galarian Linoone are good partners, (AC) as they can easily weaken threats that may switch into Brionne's attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Toxic can be paired on specially defensive Brionne instead of Moonblast in order to cripple opposing Pokemon, Toxic works working best with Flip Turn as it allows for to allow Brionne to inflict status on the opposing Pokemon and safely switch onto into a better check. Ice Beam can also be an option instead of Moonblast to cripple Grass-types like Ivysaur and Roselia. Howeve, (AC)r these changes do warrant Brionne's capability to wall Substitute users like Wartortle and Lampent.

Checks and Counters (you missed some colons in this section, so be sure to add them)
===================
**Grass-types**: Grass-types like Tangela, Thwackey, (AC) and Roselia can easily wear down or OHKO Brionne through their super effective STAB attacks, though none of them like to switch onto into Ice Beam.

**Electric-types**: Electric-types such as Electabuzz and Pikachu can easily tear down Brionne's health through attacks like Thunderbolt and Volt Switch, however though neither like to switch into an attack from Brionne.

**Physical Wallbreakers**: Pokemon like Rufflet have no trouble koing KOing Brionne, (RP) variants of those who. (AP) Physical wallbreakers that are also common Knock Off users in like Gurdurr, Machoke, (AC) and Galarian Linoone can also remove Brionne's item, making it an unreliable attacker and wall. However, (AC) once again, (AC) none of them are comfortable switching into Brionne.

**Specially Defensive Walls**: Specially defensive walls like Mareanie, Clefairy, (AC) and Ferroseed can easily switch into Brionne's attacks and remove its item or wear it down through status or coverage attacks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Jett, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Flip Turn / Surf
item: Choice Specs
ability: Torrent
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Brionne's natural bulk and high Special Attack enables it to be a strong special wallbreaker in the NFE metagame through its high-powered attacks. Hydro Pump's high Base Power allows Brionne to break through a large amount number of walls such as Piloswine, Golbat, Hattrem, and physically defensive Galarian Corsola. Ice Beam cripples Grass- and Flying-types like Roselia, Thwackey, and Togetic that otherwise can easily stall Brionne out or strike back with stronger coverage. Moonblast is used to attack Fighting- and Dragon-types like Gurdurr, Hakamo-o, and Fraxure, Moonblast and it also enables Brionne to hit bulky Water-types like Wartortle. Flip Turn allows Brionne to pivot and generate momentum as well as and grants it the option of switching out of bad matchups against anticipated switch-ins from specially defensive walls like Klang and Mareanie, but Surf can also be an option thanks to it having more reliability compared to Hydro Pump.

As a wallbreaker, Brionne can be used throughout the game, but it functions best early- to mid-game in order to break walls or pivot out on various entry hazard setters such as Marshtomp, Piloswine, and Metang, as they all fear a hit from Hydro Pump. Flip Turn should be used as a way to offer momentum and lure in specially defensive walls like Mareanie and Galarian Corsola who that may switch in. Knock Off users like Galarian Linoone, Thwackey, and Vullaby can remove the foes' Eviolites and safely switch Brionne in through with Parting Shots and U-turn. Wish passers such as Clefairy are great partners, as they can easily replenish Brionne's health, (RC) allowing and allow it to be used throughout a longer period of the game. In addition to this, Clefairy and other slow pivots such as Klang and Charjabug can be used to reliably bring Brionne in through Teleport or Volt Switch, respectively. Charjabug can also provide Sticky Webs support, allowing Brionne to outspeed a greater number of threats including Pikachu, Gabite, and Fraxure. Fighting-types like Machoke and Gurdurr are also good partners, as they can easily break through specially defensive Steel-types like Klang and Ferroseed. Late-game sweepers such as Kadabra, Klang, and Fraxure also appreciate Brionne due to its ability to weaken walls like Galarian Corsola and Ferroseed.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Scald / Flip Turn
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Rest
move 4: Sleep Talk
item: Eviolite
ability: Torrent
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
As a specially defensive wall, Brionne functions through its Water-type typing and solid bulk to take on special attackers such as Wartortle, Gastly, and Magmar. Rest allows Brionne to regain its health and negate status, while Sleep Talk utilizes Moonblast and Scald when Brionne is asleep to wear down opposing threats. Moonblast is used to hit opposing Water-types and break Substitute Shell Smash Wartortle. Moonblast also enables Brionne to wear down Guts users like Gurdurr, Machoke, and Galarian Linoone that benefit from Scald burns. Flip Turn can also be an option instead of Scald for Brionne to switch out when expecting a check like Roselia or Mareanie to switch in. Furthermore However, (AC) using the combination of Sleep Talk and Flip Turn can be quite unreliable and risky.

Use Brionne to wall special attackers such as Magmar, Nasty Plot Morgrem, and Shell Smash Wartortle. Brionne should be kept healthy until these threats are in range of priority or removed. Since Brionne is able to wall these threats, it can be paired with Pokemon such as Lampent, Gastly, and Raboot that are otherwise threatened by them. When using Flip Turn, (AC) Brionne should be paired with fast revenge killers such as Pikachu, Thwackey, (AC) and Choice Scarf Gastly to offensively pressure Pokemon like Subsitute Substitute Lampent and Galarian Mr. Mime (spacing). Steel-types like Ferroseed and Metang enjoy Brionne as a partner due to its resistance to Fire-type attacks; they can also provide entry hazard support so to let Brionne checks its targets better. Galarian Corsola and Tangela make for solid teammates, as they are able to comfortably switch into physical attackers including such as Thwackey and Gurdurr that can break past Brionne. Since Brionne is quite passive, wallbreakers and pivots such as Machoke and Galarian Linoone are good partners, as they can easily weaken threats that may switch into Brionne's attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Toxic can be paired used on specially defensive Brionne instead of Moonblast in order to cripple opposing Pokemon such as bulky Wartortle and Togetic. Toxic works best with Flip Turn to allow alongside Flip Turn allows Brionne to inflict status on the opposing Pokemon and safely switch into a better check. Ice Beam can also be an option instead of Moonblast to cripple Grass-types like Ivysaur and Roselia. However, these changes do warrant Brionne's capability to wall Substitute users like Wartortle.

Checks and Counters
===================
**Grass-types**: Grass-types like Tangela, Thwackey, and Roselia can easily OHKO Brionne through their super effective STAB attacks, though none of them can switch into Ice Beam.

**Electric-types**: Electric-types such as Electabuzz and Pikachu heavily pressure Choice Specs Brionne health through attacks like Thunderbolt and Volt Switch, furthermore and Choice Specs Electabuzz and Volt Tackle Pikachu can also KO Brionne fairly easily. However, (AC) neither of them like to switch into an attack from Brionne.

**Physical Wallbreakers**: Pokemon like Choice Band Raboot, Rufflet, (AC) and Fraxure have no trouble KOing or revenge killing Brionne. However, once again, none of them can afford to switch into Brionne.

**Specially Defensive Walls**: Specially defensive walls like Mareanie, Clefairy, and Ferroseed can easily switch into Brionne's attacks and remove its item or wear it down through status or coverage attacks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Jett, 226429], [Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]], [uhuhuhu7, 407249]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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