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Bulk Up (Okidogi) @ Leftovers
Ability: Guard Dog
EVs: 252 HP / 160 SpD / 96 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Careful Nature
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

[SET COMMENTS]

Okidogi takes on top-tier threats such as Zamazenta, Darkrai, and Kingambit while becoming a scary offensive threat with Bulk Up and Drain Punch to keep itself healthy. It can also take on other Iron Defense users such as Corviknight and Garganacl. Knock Off removes items from switch-ins such as Zapdos and Moltres, which threaten it immensely, while also hitting Gholdengo for big damage. Ice Punch hits Gliscor and Landorus-T, which could otherwise trade with it. Guard Dog allows Okidogi to ignore Roar from Zamazenta, Whirlwind from Ting-Lu, and Red Card from Glimmora while also giving it an Attack boost from Landorus-T's Intimidate, meaning that it cannot be weakened by Intimidate from frequent switch-ins. 96 Speed EVs let Okidogi outspeed Modest Primarina and Jolly Kingambit, with the rest being put into HP and Special Defense to help Okidogi take on Pokemon such as Darkrai and Iron Valiant a lot more easily. Tera Water allows Okidogi to take hits from Ogerpon-W and Walking Wake effectively, and it removes Okidogi's Ground weakness to allow it to take on Great Tusk and Gliscor while being a generally good Tera type.

Okidogi fits best on bulky offense and balance teams where it can help wall a large proportion of the metagame while outputting offensive pressure. Kingambit is a great partner to Okidogi, as Okidogi can take on the Fighting-types that it struggles against, such as Zamazenta and Iron Valiant, while Kingambit takes on the Psychic-types that scare out Okidogi, such as Galarian Slowking and Latios. Together, they can also overwhelm Pokemon that check them, such as Landorus-T and Great Tusk. Specially defensive pivots such as Galarian Slowking and Iron Crown can switch into the special attackers that threaten Okidogi, such as Zapdos and Raging Bolt. In return, Okidogi can utilize their pivoting options in order to take on Pokemon that they may struggle with, such as Kingambit and Dragonite. Physical attackers such as Roaring Moon, Dragonite, and Ogerpon-W pair well with Okidogi, as they appreciate it wearing down physical walls with Knock Off while taking on Pokemon like Zamazenta or Corviknight that they may struggle with. Spikes setters such as Ting-Lu and Hisuian Samurott pair well with Okidogi, as they can help Okidogi wear down its checks, such as Gholdengo and Great Tusk, with chip damage. They can also check Pokemon such as Gholdengo that Okidogi may struggle more against. In return, Okidogi takes on Fighting-types such as Iron Valiant and Zamazenta, which they may struggle with, while also taking on Corviknight, which can clear away their Spikes with Defog.

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[SET]
Okidogi @ Leftovers
Ability: Guard Dog
EVs: 252 HP / 160 SpD / 96 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Careful Nature
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Okidoki ferociously swings its chain into OU, taking on top tiers such as Zamazenta, Darkrai and Kingambit, while becoming a scary offensive threat with Bulk Up and Drain Punch to keep itself healthy mention how okidogi can also 1v1 some other ironpress mons like corviknight. Guard Dog allows Okidoki to ignore Roar from Zamazneta, it ignores all phazing including from red card, not every phazer is created equal but you can fit a couple more relevant examples for okidogi to stretch the length. while also giving it an attack boost from Landorus-T's Intimidate even if lando doesn't come in, being a physical attacker that can't be slowed down by intim cycling is really nice.. Knock Off removes items from switch-ins such as Zapdos and Moltres, while also hitting Gholdengo for big damage. Ice Punch hits Gliscor, Landorus-T and Great Tusk for super effective damage, which could otherwise trade with it. 96 speed lets Okidoki outspeed Modest Primarina and Jolly Kingambit, with the rest being put into HP and then special defense. Tera Water allows Okidoki to take hits from Ogerpon-W and Walking Wake effectively, while being an good all round tera type.

Okidoki fits best on Bulky Offense and Balance teams, where it can help wall a large variety of the metagame while outputting offensive pressure. Kingambit is a great partner to Okidogi, as Okidogi can take on the Fighting- types that Kingambit struggles into, while Kingambit takes on the Psychic- types that scare out Okidogi. Together, they can also overwhelm Pokemon such as Landorus-T and Great Tusk that check them. Specially defensive pivots such as Galarian Slowking and Iron Crown can switch into the special attacks that threaten Okidogi and get it in against opponents such as Kingambit that they may struggle against. Physical attackers such as Roaring Moon, Dragonite and Ogerpon-W pair well with Okidogi, as they appreciate it wearing down physical walls with Knock Off. Spike setters such as Ting Lu and Hisuian Samurott pair well with Okidogi, as they can help Okidogi wear down its checks with Spikes chip damage. They can also check Pokemon such as Gholdengo that Okidogi may struggle more into.

most of these lack what okidogi actually does in return for those mons, just say what okidogi does for them in a sentence or two or more for each mon / group

there are quite a few spelling mistakes in this analysis, okidogi is misspelled as okidoki quite a bit for example. go through and fix them for gp and they'll probably appreciate that.

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Lmk when this is implemented and I'll look again. Main thing to note is that more examples are good; analyses don't need to say basic facts, and instead they need to relate those basic facts back to the OU metagame specifically
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You need to add a set name here
Okidogi @ Leftovers
Ability: Guard Dog
EVs: 252 HP / 160 SpD / 96 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Careful Nature
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Okidogi ferociously swings its chain into OU, taking takes Something like this is more appropriate for spotlights on top tiers such as Zamazenta, Darkrai and Kingambit, while becoming a scary offensive threat with Bulk Up and Drain Punch to keep itself healthy and being able to take on other Iron Defense Pokemon such as Corviknight and Garganacl. This sentence is really long, so I'd split it into two. Firstly that it takes on top-tier Pokemon and can keep itself healthy, and then that it can take on Iron Defense Pokemon Guard Dog allows Okidogi to ignore Roar from Zamazneta, Whirlwind from Ting Lu and Red Card from Glimmora, while also giving it an attack boost from Landorus-T's Intimidate, meaning that it cannot be slowed down by Intimidate cycling. Move this sentence down after the moves. Moves are explained first then other parts of the set to follow the order. Ting-Lu also has a hyphen so make sure to fix that throughout Knock Off removes items from switch-ins such as Zapdos and Moltres You can mention why that's useful here - tehse Pokemon can threaten it, so if they're chipped, it makes Okidogi's life easier, while also hitting Gholdengo for big damage. Ice Punch hits Gliscor, Landorus-T and Great Tusk for super effective damage, which could otherwise trade with it. Would focus more on Lando/Gliscor here rather than Tusk because Ice Punch doesn't do enough so it still trades 0 Atk Okidogi Ice Punch vs. 0 HP / 4 Def Great Tusk: 106-126 (28.5 - 33.9%) -- 0.7% chance to 3HKO 96 speed lets Okidogi outspeed Modest Primarina and Jolly Kingambit, with the rest being put into HP and then special defense. Expand on why Special Defense investment is good - what does it help Okidogi check? Tera Water allows Okidogi to take hits from Ogerpon-W and Walking Wake effectively, while being an good all round tera type. Again you can expand on this point - Tera Water makes you lose key weaknesses as well which makes it easier to set up on key meta threats

Okidogi fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, where it can help wall a large variety of the metagame while outputting offensive pressure. Kingambit is a great partner to Okidogi, as Okidogi can take on the Fighting- types that Kingambit struggles into, while Kingambit takes on the Psychic- types that scare out Okidogi. Make sure you're giving examples here. Right now this senetnce just repeats the type chart (Dark mon is weak to Fighting and Posion mon resists it). How does this apply to SV OU? What specific Pokemon does Okidogi check for Kingambit? What specific Pokemon does Kingambit check for Okidogi? Together, they can also overwhelm Pokemon such as Landorus-T and Great Tusk that check them. Specially defensive pivots such as Galarian Slowking and Iron Crown can switch into the special attacks that threaten Okidogi. Any specific examples of Pokemon they can switch into? Okidogi is spdef invested so just 'they switch into special attacks' doesn't help too much without examples when Dogi in theory should be able to help a bit with that In return, Okidoki can utilise their pivoting options in order to take on Pokemon such as Kingambit and Dragonite they may struggle with. Physical attackers such as Roaring Moon, Dragonite and Ogerpon-W pair well with Okidogi, as they appreciate it wearing down physical walls with Knock Off, while it can take on Zamazenta or Landorus-T that they may struggle with. Not sure if Lnado is the best example when Ogerpon-W doesn't struggle too much + Okidogi is weak to Ground Spike setters such as Ting Lu and Hisuian Samurott pair well with Okidogi, as they can help Okidogi wear down its checks with Spikes chip damage. This would also benefit from examples so you're not just saying 'it appreciates Spikes setters to chip checks with Spikes' They can also check Pokemon such as Gholdengo that Okidogi may struggle more into. In return, Okidogi takes on Fighting- types such as Iron Valiant and Zamazenta that they may struggle with while also helping take on Corviknight which can Defog away their Spikes.


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[SET]
Bulk Up (Okidogi) @ Leftovers
Ability: Guard Dog
EVs: 252 HP / 160 SpD / 96 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Careful Nature
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

[SET COMMENTS]

Okidogi takes on top tiers top-tier threats such as Zamazenta, Darkrai, (AC) and Kingambit (RC) while becoming a scary offensive threat with Bulk Up and Drain Punch to keep itself healthy. It can also take on other Iron Defense Pokemon such as Corviknight and Garganacl. Knock Off removes items from switch-ins such as Zapdos and Moltres that threaten it immensly (RC) immensely while also hitting Gholdengo for big damage. Ice Punch hits Gliscor and Landorus-T for 4x super effective damage (dex info), which could otherwise trade with it. Guard Dog allows Okidogi to ignore Roar from Zamazneta Zamazenta, Whirlwind from Ting-Lu, (AC) and Red Card from Glimmora (RC) while also giving it an Attack boost from Landorus-T's Intimidate, meaning that it cannot be slowed down by Intimidate cycling (i think it would be good if you could change the phrase "Intimidate cycling" to one that can be more commonly understood by readers, or otherwise explain what exactly it means). 96 Speed lets EVs let Okidogi outspeed Modest Primarina and Jolly Kingambit, with the rest being put into HP and then special defense, which helps Special Defense to help Okidogi take on Pokemon such as Darkrai and Iron Valiant a lot easier more easily. Tera Water allows Okidogi to take hits from Ogerpon-W and Walking Wake effectively (RC) and removes its Ground weakness to allow Okidogi to take on Great Tusk and Gliscor (RC) while being an a good all round tera all-around Tera type.

Okidogi fits best on bulky offense and balance teams (RC) where it can help wall a large variety proportion of the metagame while outputting offensive pressure. Kingambit is a great partner to Okidogi, as Okidogi can take on the Fighting-types such as Zamazenta and Iron Valiant that Kingambit it struggles into against, while Kingambit it takes on the Psychic-types such as Galarain Galarian Slowking and Latios that scare out Okidogi. Together, they can also overwhelm Pokemon such as Landorus-T and Great Tusk that check them. Specially defensive pivots such as Galarian Slowking and Iron Crown can switch into the special attackers that threaten Okidogi (RC) such as Zapdos and Raging Bolt. In return, Okidoki Okidogi can utilise utilize their pivoting options in order to take on Pokemon they may struggle with such as Kingambit and Dragonite they may struggle with (slight rephrase to improve flow). Physical attackers such as Roaring Moon, Dragonite, (AC) and Ogerpon-W pair well with Okidogi, as they appreciate it wearing down physical walls with Knock Off (RC) while it can take on taking on Pokemon like Zamazenta or Corviknight that they may struggle with. Spike setters such as Ting-Lu and Hisuian Samurott pair well with Okidogi, as they can help Okidogi wear down its checks such as Gholdengo and Great Tusk with Spikes chip damage. They can also check Pokemon such as Gholdengo that Okidogi may struggle more into against. In return, Okidogi takes on Fighting-types such as Iron Valiant and Zamazenta that they may struggle with while also helping to take on Corviknight, (AC) which can Defog clear away their Spikes with Defog.

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[SET]
Bulk Up (Okidogi) @ Leftovers
Ability: Guard Dog
EVs: 252 HP / 160 SpD / 96 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Careful Nature
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

[SET COMMENTS]

Okidogi takes on top-tier threats such as Zamazenta, Darkrai, and Kingambit while becoming a scary offensive threat with Bulk Up and Drain Punch to keep itself healthy. It can also take on other Iron Defense Pokemon users such as Corviknight and Garganacl. Knock Off removes items from switch-ins such as Zapdos and Moltres, (AC) which that (which is more appropriate here than "that" due to it being an unrestrictive clause) threaten it immensely, (AC) while also hitting Gholdengo for big damage. Ice Punch hits Gliscor and Landorus-T, which could otherwise trade with it. Guard Dog allows Okidogi to ignore Roar from Zamazenta, Whirlwind from Ting-Lu, and Red Card from Glimmora while also giving it an Attack boost from Landorus-T's Intimidate, meaning that it cannot be slowed down weakened by Intimidate cycling, which is constantly switching in and out Intimidate users from frequent switch-ins (avoid making up new terms, as "Intimidate cycling" is not defined). 96 Speed EV's lets EVs let (apostrophe not required + plural subject) Okidogi outspeed Modest Primarina and Jolly Kingambit, with the rest being put into HP and Special Defense to help Okidogi take on Pokemon such as Darkrai and Iron Valiant a lot more easily. Tera Water allows Okidogi to take hits from Ogerpon-W and Walking Wake effectively, (AC) and it removes its Okidogi's Ground weakness to allow Okidogi it to take on Great Tusk and Gliscor while being a generally good all-round Tera type.

Okidogi fits best on bulky offense and balance teams where it can help wall a large proportion of the metagame while outputting offensive pressure. Kingambit is a great partner to Okidogi, as Okidogi can take on the Fighting-types that it struggles against, (AC) such as Zamazenta and Iron Valiant that it struggles into, while it Kingambit takes on the Psychic-types that scare out Okidogi, (AC) such as Galarian Slowking and Latios that scare out Okidogi. Together, they can also overwhelm Pokemon that check them, (AC) such as Landorus-T and Great Tusk that check them (fixed sentence structuring). Specially defensive pivots such as Galarian Slowking and Iron Crown can switch into the special attackers that threaten Okidogi, such as Zapdos and Raging Bolt. In return, Okidogi can utilize their pivoting options in order to take on Pokemon that they may struggle with, (AC) such as Kingambit and Dragonite. Physical attackers such as Roaring Moon, Dragonite, and Ogerpon-W pair well with Okidogi, as they appreciate it wearing down physical walls with Knock Of (RC) Off while taking on Pokemon like Zamazenta or Corviknight that they may struggle with. Spike Spikes setters (the move is "Spikes", not "Spike") such as Ting-Lu and Hisuian Samurott pair well with Okidogi, as they can help Okidogi wear down its checks, (AC) such as Gholdengo and Great Tusk, (AC) with chip damage. They can also check Pokemon such as Gholdengo that Okidogi may struggle more against. In return, Okidogi takes on Fighting-types such as Iron Valiant and Zamazenta, (AC) which that they may struggle with, (AC) while also helping to take taking on Corviknight, which can clear away their Spikes with Defog.

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