can anyone give my team some critique? im pretty new and this is the best team i could come up with

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Ferrothorn @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Iron Barbs
EVs: 248 HP / 8 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Power Whip
- Stealth Rock
- Toxic
- Leech Seed


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Clefable @ Leftovers
Ability: Magic Guard
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
- Wish
- Protect
- Moonblast
- Knock Off


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Rillaboom @ Life Orb
Ability: Grassy Surge
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Grassy Glide
- Earthquake
- U-turn
- Knock Off


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Excadrill @ Lum Berry
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Iron Head
- Rapid Spin
- Brick Break


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Slowbro @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SpA / 4 SpD
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Psychic
- Slack Off


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Moltres @ Choice Specs
Ability: Flame Body
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Will-O-Wisp
- Air Slash
- Flamethrower
- Extrasensory
 
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Why did you choose this Pokemon?
What do the EV spreads do and why do you have it?
What are all 4 moves for?
 
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