can you rate my abverage team?

[shadow and jolteon]

Hi I've got my team sorted and i want to see if their OK. Thanks.

TEAM AT A GLANCE (IN ORDER OF FAVOURITES)

THE TEAM

THE LEAD

INFERNAPE(M)@ FOCUS SASH
ABILITY:BLAZE
EVS:252SPA/252SPE/4HP
NATURE:RASH
FLAMETHROWER
OVERHEAT
CLOSE COMBAT
STEALTH ROCK

STEALTH ROCK+FOCUS SASH+BLAZE+RASH NATURE=BINGO! HE HAS GOOD SPEED SO OBVIOUSLY HE CAN SET UP STEALTH ROCK FIRST AND WITH FOCUS SASH HE CAN HANG ON AND WITH BLAZE HIS FIRE MOVES ARE EVEN STRONGER AND HE HAS GOOD A GOOD NATURE FOR SPECIAL ATTACK SO HE IS A REALLY GOOD LEAD. HE'LL PROBABLY BE ABLE TO KNOCK OUT THE FIRST POKEMON IF HE HAS THE ADVANTAGE.

THE SPECIAL SWEEPER

JOLTEON(M)@ CHOICE SPECS
ABILITY:VOLT ABSORB
EVS:252SPE/252SPA/4HP
NATURE:HASTY
THUNDERBOLT
THUNDER
SHADOW BALL
HIDDEN POWER[GRASS]

GOOD SPEED, GOOD SPECIAL ATTACK DEFINETELY A BRILLANT SWEEPER. HE CAN EVEN HANDLE HIS WORST ENEMY-GROUND. AND HIDDEN POWER IS EVEN MORE POWERFUL WITH CHOICE SPECS AND SAME WITH ALL HIS OTHER MOVES. AND HE IS BOUND TO HANG ON IN A BATTLE DUE TO HIS SPEED, BUT IF MY OPONENTS LUCKY THEY WILL GET A HIT IN.

SPECIAL WALL

BLASTOISE(M)@ LEFTOVERS
ABILITY:TORRENT
EVS:252SPD/252HP/4DEF
NATURE:SASSY
HYDRO PUMP
SURF
ICE BEAM
RAPID SPIN

DEFINETLY A GOOD SPECIAL WALL. HE IS MORE OF AN ANNOYER RATHER THAN A ATTACKER DUE TO HIS LEFTOVERS BUT HE STILL PACKS QUITE A PUNCH. HIS RAPID SPIN GETS RID OF ALL THOSE STEALTH ROCKS FLYING AROUND LATELY. HE ALSO HAS A GOOD NATURE BUT IT COSTS HIS SPEED BUT HE DOESN'T NEED IT. HE CAN HANDLE GRASS POKEMON WITH EASE BUT ELETRIC POKEMON ARE A BIT OF A WORRY.

MIXED SWEEPER

SCEPTILE(M)@ LIFE ORB
ABILTY:OVERGROW
EVS:252SPE/252SPA/4ATK
NATURE:NAIVE
LEAF STORM
LEAF BLADE
X-SCISSOR
DRAGON PULSE

A REALLY GOOD MIXED SWEEPER. HE HAS LIFE ORB SO HIS ATTACKS ARE EVEN MORE POWERFUL. MY OPONENT WOULD BE LUCKY IF HE EVEN GETS A HIT IN DUE TO HIS HIGH SPEED. HE IS A TRUE POWERHOUSE TO MY TEAM.

PHYSICAL WALL

GLISCOR(M)@ CHOICE BAND
ABILITY:HYPER CUTTER
EVS:252DEF/252HP/4ATK
NATURE:LAX
EARTHQUAKE
AERIAL ACE
STONE EDGE
THUDER FANG

PEOPLE WHO SAY THAT CHOICE BAND IS A BAD FOR GLISCOR ARE SADLY MISTAKEN. IT GIVES HIM EVEN BETTER ATTACK WHICH IS REALLY GOOD FOR AERIAL ACE AND THUNDER FANG. HE CAN DEAL WITH HIS TWO MAGER WEAKNESSES-WATER AN ICE. THUNDER FANG FOR WATER TYPES AND AERIAL ACE FOR ICE TYPES. HIS NATURE IS A BIT WORRYING THOUGH BECAUSE MOST ICE AND WATER TYPE MOVES ARE SPECIAL ATTACKS BUT HIS MAGER WORRY IS ICE SHARD BUT HOPEFULLY HE CAN WITH STAND IT.

PHYSICAL SWEEPER

STARAPTOR(M)@ CHOICE SCARF
ABILITY:INTIMADATE
EVS:252ATK/252SPE/4HP
NATURE:LONELY
FLY
BRAVE BIRD
TAKE DOWN
CLOSE COMBAT

NOT THE BEST OF MY POKEMON BUT HE CAN PACK A FEW HITS. HE IS A REALLY GOOD PHYSICAL SWEEPER WITH HIS HIGH ATTACK AND SPEED BUT HIS LOW DEFENCES ARE WHAT WORRYS ME. HE CAN PROABLEY (IF LUCKY) K/O TWO OR THREE POKEMON IF HE HAS THE ADVANTAGE.

 

[Arkeis]

Why are you typing everything in all caps? It's very annoying and no one will want to read it. All your Pokemon have pretty bad natures. Also, some of your descriptions are a bit too short.

You better fix these before your thread gets locked...again.

 

[haunter]

Ok, as Aragonbird said, reading a thread all written in caps is very annoying, and your descriptions explain almost nothing of your Pokemon. Please take a look at our RMT archive to have an idea of what kind of descriptions we require in this forum. Locking this under rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Also, since you seem pretty new to competitive battling, consider signing up to the next Battling 101 round.