Monotype Chansey [QC] 2/2 [GP] 1/1

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[SET]
name: Eviolite Wall
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Seismic Toss
move 3: Soft-Boiled
move 4: Teleport / Toxic
item: Eviolite
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Chansey is a defensive staple on Normal-type teams thanks to its massive HP and Special Defense stats along with Eviolite and its various amounts of utility. One of these forms of utility is its access to Stealth Rock, which can allow it to assist its teammates by chipping down opposing threats, making it easier to revenge kill them. Seismic Toss allows Chansey to not be completely passive, which lets it wear down opposing special attackers very quickly and break most Substitutes. These two moves paired with the amazing recovery of Soft-Boiled allow Chansey to wear down types that rely on their special attackers, namely Electric, Poison, and Psychic. Teleport can be used on its last slot to help Chansey act as a great pivot and get its offensive teammates in safely, or it can use Toxic to put opposing offensive Pokemon on a timer and make it harder for your opponent to keep them in. Its ability in Natural Cure also allows it to absorb status ailments for its offensive teammates and works well with Teleport when scouting for status moves. Chansey invests its EVs in bulk and Defense so that it can take physical hits better, especially from weaker revenge killers like Choice Scarf Excadrill.

Every other Pokemon on Normal appreciates Chansey's ability to wall special attackers like Hydreigon, Indeedee-M, and Hatterene. Offensive Pokemon like Indeedee-M, Diggersby, Bewear, Obstagoon, and Heliolisk especially appreciate its Teleport support, as they can immediately threaten the opposing team with their dangerous power once switched in. Indeedee-M can force out dangerous Fighting-types like Conkeldurr and Keldeo with a Choice Scarf while also breaking down opposing walls like Toxapex and Amoonguss thanks to Expanding Force's power. Diggersby, Obstagoon, and Bewear coming in for free can also be a huge boon against opposing bulky teams, as they give most defensive cores in the game a very hard time. Heliolisk also appreciates Teleport pivoting greatly, as it can threaten to KO Keldeo, which is a massive threat to Chansey thanks to its Secret Sword and also has a great matchup against opposing Water-type teams. Outside of Teleport, Porygon2 is Chansey's preferred partner thanks to its ability to wear down physical attackers and complete the Eviolite defensive core. This physical wall appreciates Chansey's ability to wear down special attackers that threaten Porygon2, and in return it walls the physical attackers like Mimikyu that threaten Chansey. Ditto is also a great Pokemon on Normal that can beat out certain setup sweepers or wallbreakers that try to take advantage of Chansey's passive nature, such as Dragon Dance Tyranitar and Shell Smash Cloyster.

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Namranan said:
[SET]
name: Eviolite Wall
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Seismic Toss
move 3: Soft Boiled
move 4: Toxic / Teleport
item: Eviolite
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Chansey is a key member of the iconic Normal-type Eviolite core. Its massive HP and Special Defense stats along with Eviolite and consistent recovery with Soft Boiled allow Chansey to serve as a highly effective specially defensive wall. This trait paired with moves like Toxic and Seismic Toss allow allows Chansey to break down offensive teams that rely on their special attackers; namely types like Electric, Poison, and Psychic. Its support role is only further bolstered with its access to Stealth Rock and Teleport which can allow it to assist its teammates by chipping down opposing threats or acting as a slow pivot to switch them in safely. Chansey, despite being a great specially defensive wall, invests its EV's in bulk and physical defense. The reason for this being that it allows it to take physical hits better, especially from weaker revenge killers like Choice Scarf Excadrill.
* Should mention here the importance of Natural Cure on how it allows Chansey to absorb status since every other team member is susceptible to any status condition.

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Every other Pokemon on Normal also appreciates Chansey's ability to wall Special attackers like Hydreigon, Indeedee(M/F?), and Hatterene, and also appreciate the fact that Chansey can pivot them in for free with Teleport at any time. Offensive Pokemon like Indeedee(M/F?), Diggesby, and Heliolisk especially appreciate this, as they can immediately threaten the opposing team with their dangerous power. Despite its ability to wall almost every special attacker, Chansey cannot win alone and needs team support in order to make Normal a force to be reckoned with. It is for this reason that fellow Eviolite-bearing Porygon 2 is Chansey's best friend and the second piece of the Eviolite defensive core. This physical wall appreciates Chansey's ability to wear down special attackers that threaten it(RC) and in return walls the physical attackers that threaten Chansey. Ditto is also a great Pokemon on Normal that can beat out certain set up sweepers or wallbreakers that try to take advantage of Chansey's passive nature, such as Dragon Dance Dragapult and Swords Dance Aegislash.
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[SET COMMENTS]
Chansey is a key member of the iconic Normal-type Eviolite core. connect these two sentences to say that it's a defensive staple over a key member of the iconic Normal-type coreIts massive HP and Special Defense stats along with Eviolite and consistent recovery with Soft Boiled allow Chansey to serve as a highly effective specially defensive wall. This trait paired with moves like Toxic and Seismic Toss allows Chansey to break down offensive teams that rely on their special attackers; namely types like Electric, Poison, and Psychic. Describe Toxic and Seismic Toss in depth after this, what type of Pokemon that is nice crippling with Toxic etc

Its support role is only further bolstered with its access to Stealth Rock and Teleport which can allow it to assist its teammates by chipping down opposing threats or acting as a slow pivot to switch them in safely. Its ability in Natural Cure also allows it to absorb status ailments for its offensive teammates say that it goes well with Teleport.

Chansey, despite being a great specially defensive wall, invests its EV's in bulk and physical defense. The reason for this being that it allows it to take physical hits better, especially from weaker revenge killers like Choice Scarf Excadrill. condense the EVs

Despite its ability to wall almost every special attacker, Chansey cannot win alone and needs team support in order to make Normal a force to be reckoned with. It is for this reason that fellow Eviolite-bearing Porygon 2 is Chansey's best friend and the second piece of the Eviolite defensive core.
Paraphrase this, just say something like it goes well with Chansey as a defensive core. A lot of this is fluff

This physical wall appreciates Chansey's ability to wear down special attackers that threaten it, and in return walls the physical attackers that threaten Chansey.
Examples?

Ditto is also a great Pokemon on Normal that can beat out certain set up sweepers or wallbreakers that try to take advantage of Chansey's passive nature, such as Dragon Dance Dragapult and Swords Dance Aegislash.
Find better examples for this, Dragon Dance Dragapult has Substitute to prevent Ditto from copying it and Aegislash is hardly threatening to Normal when Shadow Sneak is useless and is prone to being taken out by offensive Pokemon. Use like Cloyster and Tyranitar as examples

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- first things first, make teleport the first slash before toxic. reorder the paragraph to reflect this
- please reorder the paragraph to follow set order - you know better lad...
- for the first line in the team section paragraph i would save teleport just for the 2nd section. specifically mention the offensive threats that appreciate this, dont generalize it cuz they profit way more than shit like porygon. also add obstagoon and bewear to those examples
- its Porygon2 no space, also chanseys best friend isnt analysis language just say a good partner or forms a strong defensive core
- porygon2 can wall galarian darm and rillaboom but not reliably, use diff examples
- would mention lisk does wonders in the water matchup, spef being able to take on keldeo a big threat to chansey

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[SET]
name: Eviolite Wall
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Seismic Toss
move 3: Soft Boiled Soft-Boiled
move 4: Teleport / Toxic
item: Eviolite
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Chansey is a defensive staple on Normal-type teams thanks to its massive HP and Special Defense stats along with Eviolite and its various amounts of utility. One of these forms of utility is its access to Stealth Rock,(AC) which can allow it to assist its teammates by chipping down opposing threats, making it easier to revenge kill them. Seismic Toss allows Chansey to not be completely passive, which allows it to lets it (changed it to avoid repetition) wear down opposing special attackers very quickly and break most substitutes. These two moves paired with the amazing recovery of Soft Boiled Soft-Boiled allow Chansey to wear down types that rely on their special attackers, namely Electric, Poison, and Psychic. Teleport can be used on its last slot to help Chansey act as a great pivot and get its offensive teammates in safely, or it can use Toxic to put opposing offensive Pokemon on a timer and make it harder for your opponent to keep them in. Its ability in Natural Cure also allows it to absorb status ailments for its offensive teammates and works well with Teleport when scouting for status moves. Chansey invests its EV's EVs in bulk and physical defense Defense so that it can take physical hits better, especially from weaker revenge killers like Choice Scarf Excadrill.

Every other Pokemon on Normal also appreciates Chansey's ability to wall Special special attackers like Hydreigon, Indeedee-M, and Hatterene. Offensive Pokemon like Indeedee-M, Diggesby Diggersby, Bewear, Obstagoon and Heliolisk especially appreciate its Teleport support, as they can immediately threaten the opposing team with their dangerous power once switched in. Indeedee can force out dangerous Fighting-types like Conkeldurr and Keldeo with a Choice Scarf,(RC) while also breaking down opposing walls like Toxapex and Amoonguss thanks to Expanding Force's power. Diggersby, Obstagoon, or and Bewear coming in for free can also be a huge boon against opposing bulky teams, as they give most defensive cores in the game a very hard time. Heliolisk also appreciates Teleport pivoting greatly,(AC) as it can threaten to KO Keldeo, who which is a massive threat to Chansey thanks to its Secret Sword and also has a great matchup against opposing Water-type teams. Outside of Teleport, Porygon2 is Chansey's preferred partner thanks to its ability to wear down physical attackers and complete the Eviolite defensive core. This physical wall appreciates Chansey's ability to wear down special attackers that threaten it Porygon2, and in return it walls the physical attackers like Mimikyu that threaten Chansey. Ditto is also a great Pokemon on Normal that can beat out certain setup sweepers or wallbreakers that try to take advantage of Chansey's passive nature, such as Dragon Dance Tyranitar and Shell Smash Cloyster.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[<Namranan>, <353292>]]
- <Type> Normal analysis by: [[<Namranan>, <353292>]]
- Quality checked by: [[<Decem>, <362454>], [<Maroon>, <305839>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]
 
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Not much to add or change here, Milak did a great job.

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[SET]
name: Eviolite Wall
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Seismic Toss
move 3: Soft-Boiled
move 4: Teleport / Toxic
item: Eviolite
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Chansey is a defensive staple on Normal-type teams thanks to its massive HP and Special Defense stats along with Eviolite and its various amounts of utility. One of these forms of utility is its access to Stealth Rock, which can allow it to assist its teammates by chipping down opposing threats, making it easier to revenge kill them. Seismic Toss allows Chansey to not be completely passive, which lets it wear down opposing special attackers very quickly and break most Substitutes (Capitalize). These two moves paired with the amazing recovery of Soft-Boiled allow Chansey to wear down types that rely on their special attackers, namely Electric, Poison, and Psychic. Teleport can be used on its last slot to help Chansey act as a great pivot and get its offensive teammates in safely, or it can use Toxic to put opposing offensive Pokemon on a timer and make it harder for your opponent to keep them in. Its ability in Natural Cure also allows it to absorb status ailments for its offensive teammates and works well with Teleport when scouting for status moves. Chansey invests its EVs in bulk and Defense so that it can take physical hits better, especially from weaker revenge killers like Choice Scarf Excadrill.

Every other Pokemon on Normal appreciates Chansey's ability to wall special attackers like Hydreigon, Indeedee-M, and Hatterene. Offensive Pokemon like Indeedee-M, Diggersby, Bewear, Obstagoon, (AC) and Heliolisk especially appreciate its Teleport support, as they can immediately threaten the opposing team with their dangerous power once switched in. Both Indeedee formes (Unless you are referring to one forme in particular, then use Indeedee-M or Indeedee-F) can force out dangerous Fighting-types like Conkeldurr and Keldeo with a Choice Scarf while also breaking down opposing walls like Toxapex and Amoonguss thanks to Expanding Force's power. Diggersby, Obstagoon, and Bewear coming in for free can also be a huge boon against opposing bulky teams, as they give most defensive cores in the game a very hard time. Heliolisk also appreciates Teleport pivoting greatly, as it can threaten to KO Keldeo, which is a massive threat to Chansey thanks to its Secret Sword and also has a great matchup against opposing Water-type teams. Outside of Teleport, Porygon2 is Chansey's preferred partner thanks to its ability to wear down physical attackers and complete the Eviolite defensive core. This physical wall appreciates Chansey's ability to wear down special attackers that threaten Porygon2, and in return it walls the physical attackers like Mimikyu that threaten Chansey. Ditto is also a great Pokemon on Normal that can beat out certain setup sweepers or wallbreakers that try to take advantage of Chansey's passive nature, such as Dragon Dance Tyranitar and Shell Smash Cloyster.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[<Namranan>, <353292>]]
- Normal analysis by: [[<Namranan>, <353292>]]
- Quality checked by: [[<Decem>, <362454>], [<Maroon>, <305839>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]
 
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