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[SET]

name: Cheems Pao
move 1: Ice Spinner / Icicle Crash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Sacred Sword / Crunch
move 4: Protect
item: Life Orb / Focus Sash
ability: Sword of Ruin
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Dark / Ghost

[SET COMMENTS]

- Chien-Pao is a fantastic physical attacker that can improve its and its teammates' physical damage through Sword of Ruin. It is very effective with priority attackers such as Dragonite and Palafin, as well as other fast physical attackers such as Choice Band Dragapult and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

- Ice Spinner is a STAB move that easily grabs OHKOs on Dragonite and Landorus-T while clearing Psychic Terrain for its own Sucker Punch and teammates' priority moves. Icicle Crash can be used for a slight increase in power, a sizeable flinch chance, and avoiding Rocky Helmet damage; however, it comes with a chance to miss and cannot clear Psychic Terrain. If used with Rillaboom, Icicle Crash is recommended to avoid clearing your own Grassy Terrain.

- Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pick off faster threats such as Booster Energy Flutter Mane and Iron Bundle. Sucker Punch is also crucial for keeping Chien-Pao relevant against Tailwind or Trick Room and pressuring opposing priority users such as Palafin.

- Sacred Sword OHKOes many relevant Pokemon that resist Chien-Pao's STAB combination such as Kingambit, Chi-Yu, and opposing Chien-Pao. Crunch is a more consistent option for a Dark-type STAB move, knocking out Indeedee-F through Psychic Terrain and threatening Pokemon such as Cresselia that are using status moves.

- Life Orb is used to push Chien-Pao's offenses to dizzying heights, OHKOing bulky Rillaboom and Flutter Mane with Ice Spinner and Sucker Punch, respectively. Focus Sash gets around Chien-Pao's poor defenses and allows it to survive a hit against strong, fast attackers such as Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Chi-Yu. However, the item is rendered useless by Stealth Rock, a relatively common sight.

- Jolly Chien-Pao Speed ties Flutter Mane and opposing Chien-Pao. An Adamant nature can be used for more power, giving Life Orb Chien-Pao a chance to OHKO Cresselia with Crunch.

- Tera Dark boosts the damage of Sucker Punch, allowing it to more effectively pick off weakened foes and score an OHKO on all variants of Flutter Mane. Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Normal-type priority moves such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed, as well as an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving Chien-Pao's matchup into Iron Hands.

- In addition to other physical attackers, Chien-Pao appreciates partners that can cover its defensive shortcomings, notably teammates with resistances to Fire, Fairy, and Fighting. Volcanion and Heatran perform well against Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane and can hold off opposing Fire-types. Amoonguss and Landorus-T can be used to switch into Fighting-type attacks from Iron Hands aimed at Chien-Pao.
 
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[SET]

name: Cheems Pao
move 1: Ice Spinner / Icicle Crash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Sacred Sword / Crunch
move 4: Protect
item: Focus Sash / Life Orb
ability: Sword of Ruin
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Dark / Ghost

[SET COMMENTS]

- Chien-Pao is a fantastic physical attacker that can improve it and its teammates' physical damage through Sword of Ruin. It is very effective with priority attackers such as Dragonite and Palafin, as well as other fast physical attackers such as Choice Band Dragapult and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

- Ice Spinner is a STAB option that easily grabs OHKOs on Dragonite and Landorus-T while clearing Psychic Terrain for its own Sucker Punch and teammates' priority moves. Icicle Crash can be used for a slight increase in power, a sizeable flinch chance, and avoiding Rocky Helmet damage, however it comes with a chance to miss and cannot clear Psychic Terrain. If used with Rillaboom, Icicle Crash is recommended to avoid clearing your own Grassy Terrain.

- Sucker Punch is Chien-Pao's primary Dark-type STAB that allows it Chien-Pao to pick off faster threats such as Booster Energy Flutter Mane and Booster Energy Iron Bundle. Sucker Punch is also crucial to keeping Chien-Pao relevant against opposing speed control such as Tailwind or Trick Room. would also add that it notably out prioritizes palafin jet punch, only it and extremespeed users really do this so i think its a decent enough deal

- Sacred Sword OHKOs many relevant Pokemon that resist Chien-Pao's STAB combination such as Kingambit, Chi-Yu, and opposing Chien-Pao. Crunch is a more consistent option for Dark-type STAB, knocking out Indeedee-F through Psychic Terrain and threatening Pokemon such as Cresselia that are using status moves.

- Focus Sash gets around Chien-Pao's poor defenses and allows it to survive a hit against strong, fast attackers such as Flutter Mane and Scarf Chi-Yu. Life Orb can be used to push Chien-Pao's offenses to dizzying heights, OHKOing bulky Rillaboom and Flutter Mane with Ice Spinner and Sucker Punch, respectively. i would swap these honestly, high level osdt games have been using life orb way more and rocks breaking sash is really unfortunate (should be mentioned as well)

- A Jolly nature allows Chien-Pao to speed tie Flutter Mane and opposing Chien-Pao. An Adamant nature can be used for more power, giving Chien-Pao with a Life Orb a chance to OHKO Cresselia with Crunch.

- Tera Dark boosts the damage of Sucker Punch, allowing it to more effectively pick off weakened foes and score an OHKO on all variants of Flutter Mane. Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving its matchup into Iron Hands, as well as priority such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed that would otherwise threaten Chien-Pao.

there's a lack of teammates mentioned outside of sword of ruin partners. i think mentioning fairy resists like volcanion/heatran, landot and amoonguss for checking iron hands, and set up users like gholdengo and bulk up palafin to capitalize on the switches it can force would be good ones but up to you

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qsns said:
[SET]

name: Cheems Pao
move 1: Ice Spinner / Icicle Crash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Sacred Sword / Crunch
move 4: Protect
item: Focus Sash / Life Orb slash LO first
ability: Sword of Ruin
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Dark / Ghost

[SET COMMENTS]

- Chien-Pao is a fantastic physical attacker that can improve its and its teammates' physical damage through Sword of Ruin. It is very effective with priority attackers such as Dragonite and Palafin, as well as other fast physical attackers such as Choice Band Dragapult and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F. you can sell cheems more as a powerful pokemon that matches up well against premier meta threats in its own right

- Ice Spinner is a STAB option that easily grabs OHKOs on Dragonite and Landorus-T while clearing Psychic Terrain for its own Sucker Punch and teammates' priority moves. Icicle Crash can be used for a slight increase in power, a sizeable flinch chance, and avoiding Rocky Helmet damage, however it comes with a chance to miss and cannot clear Psychic Terrain. If used with Rillaboom, Icicle Crash is recommended to avoid clearing your own Grassy Terrain.

- Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pick off faster threats such as Booster Energy Flutter Mane and Booster Energy Iron Bundle. Sucker Punch is also crucial to keeping Chien-Pao relevant against opposing speed control such as Tailwind or Trick Room, and pressures opposing priority users such as Palafin.

- Sacred Sword OHKOs many relevant Pokemon that resist Chien-Pao's STAB combination such as Kingambit, Chi-Yu, and opposing Chien-Pao. Crunch is a more consistent option for Dark-type STAB, knocking out Indeedee-F through Psychic Terrain and threatening Pokemon such as Cresselia that are using status moves.

- Life Orb is used to push Chien-Pao's offenses to dizzying heights, OHKOing bulky Rillaboom and Flutter Mane with Ice Spinner and Sucker Punch, respectively. Focus Sash gets around Chien-Pao's poor defenses and allows it to survive a hit against strong, fast attackers such as Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Chi-Yu. you can add you trade big damage back onto them through this However, it this point is unfinished

- A Jolly nature allows Chien-Pao to speed ties Flutter Mane and opposing Chien-Pao. An Adamant nature can be used for more power, giving Life Orb Chien-Pao with a Life Orb a chance to OHKO Cresselia with Crunch.

- Tera Dark boosts the damage of Sucker Punch, allowing it to more effectively pick off weakened foes and score an OHKO on all variants of Flutter Mane. Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving its matchup into Iron Hands, as well as priority such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed that would otherwise threaten Chien-Pao.

- In addition to other physical attackers, Chien-Pao appreciates partners that can cover its defensive shortcomings, notably to Fire-, Fairy-, and Fighting-types. Volcanion and Heatran perform well against Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane and can hold off opposing Fire-types. Amoonguss and Landorus-T can be used to switch into Fighting-type attacks from Iron Hands aimed at Chien-Pao.
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good, 2/2, send it over to gp :)
 
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[SET]

name: Cheems Pao
move 1: Ice Spinner / Icicle Crash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Sacred Sword / Crunch
move 4: Protect
item: Life Orb / Focus Sash
ability: Sword of Ruin
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Dark / Ghost

[SET COMMENTS]

- Chien-Pao is a fantastic physical attacker that can improve its and its teammates' physical damage through Sword of Ruin. It is very effective with priority attackers such as Dragonite and Palafin, as well as other fast physical attackers such as Choice Band Dragapult and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

- Ice Spinner is a STAB option that easily grabs OHKOs on Dragonite and Landorus-T while clearing Psychic Terrain for its own Sucker Punch and teammates' priority moves. Icicle Crash can be used for a slight increase in power, a sizeable sizable flinch chance, and avoiding Rocky Helmet damage, (Remove comma, Add Semicolon); however, (Add Comma) it comes with a chance to miss and cannot clear Psychic Terrain. If used with Rillaboom, Icicle Crash is recommended to avoid clearing your own Grassy Terrain.

- Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pick off faster threats such as Booster Energy Flutter Mane and Booster Energy Iron Bundle. Sucker Punch is It's also crucial to keeping Chien-Pao relevant against Tailwind or (under?) Trick Room, and pressures opposing priority users such as Palafin.

- Sacred Sword OHKOs many relevant Pokemon that resist Chien-Pao's STAB combination such as Kingambit, Chi-Yu, and opposing Chien-Pao. (Remove period, add comma), while Crunch is a more consistent option for Dark-type STAB, knocking out Indeedee-F through Psychic Terrain and threatening Pokemon such as Cresselia that are using status moves. (It being two separate sentences felt a bit more like a list rather than a comparison between the two if that makes sense)

- Life Orb is used to push Chien-Pao's offenses to dizzying heights, OHKOing bulky Rillaboom and Flutter Mane with Ice Spinner and Sucker Punch, respectively. (Mentioning Chien-Pao's defensive weaknesses and how Life Orb makes them worse is probably a good idea here) Focus Sash gets around Chien-Pao's poor defenses and allows it to survive a hit against strong, fast attackers such as Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Chi-Yu. However, the item is rendered useless by Stealth Rock, a relatively common sight, (Add comma) and misses on some of the KOs it would get with Life Orb.

- Jolly nature Chien-Pao speed ties Flutter Mane and opposing Chien-Pao. An Adamant nature can be used for more power, giving Life Orb Chien-Pao a chance to OHKO Cresselia with Crunch.

- Tera Dark boosts the damage of Sucker Punch and Crunch, allowing it to more effectively pick off weakened foes and score an OHKO on all variants of Flutter Mane with the former. Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving its matchup into Iron Hands, as well as priority such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed that would otherwise threaten Chien-Pao.

- In addition to other physical attackers, Chien-Pao appreciates partners that can cover its defensive shortcomings, notably to Fire-, Fairy-, and Fighting-types. Volcanion and Heatran perform well against Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane and can hold off opposing Fire-types. (Remove period Add comma), while Amoonguss and Landorus-T can be used to switch into Fighting-type attacks from Iron Hands (unsure if Iron Hands needs to be specified) aimed at Chien-Pao.

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[SET]

name: Cheems Pao
move 1: Ice Spinner / Icicle Crash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Sacred Sword / Crunch
move 4: Protect
item: Life Orb / Focus Sash
ability: Sword of Ruin
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Dark / Ghost

[SET COMMENTS]

- Chien-Pao is a fantastic physical attacker that can improve its and its teammates' physical damage through Sword of Ruin. It is very effective with priority attackers such as Dragonite and Palafin, as well as other fast physical attackers such as Choice Band Dragapult and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

- Ice Spinner is a STAB option move that easily grabs OHKOs on Dragonite and Landorus-T while clearing Psychic Terrain for its own Sucker Punch and teammates' priority moves. Icicle Crash can be used for a slight increase in power, a sizeable flinch chance, and avoiding Rocky Helmet damage, however it comes with a chance to miss and cannot clear Psychic Terrain. If used with Rillaboom, Icicle Crash is recommended to avoid clearing your own Grassy Terrain.

- Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pick off faster threats such as Booster Energy Flutter Mane and Booster Energy Iron Bundle. implied as booster energy (flutter mane and iron bundle), unsure though Sucker Punch is also crucial to for keeping Chien-Pao relevant against Tailwind or Trick Room, and pressures pressuring opposing priority users such as Palafin.

- Sacred Sword OHKOs many relevant Pokemon that resist Chien-Pao's STAB combination such as Kingambit, Chi-Yu, and opposing Chien-Pao. Crunch is a more consistent option for Dark-type STAB, knocking out Indeedee-F through Psychic Terrain and threatening Pokemon such as Cresselia that are using status moves.

- Life Orb is used to push Chien-Pao's offenses to dizzying heights, OHKOing bulky Rillaboom and Flutter Mane with Ice Spinner and Sucker Punch, remove comma respectively. Focus Sash gets around Chien-Pao's poor defenses and allows it to survive a hit against strong, fast attackers such as Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Chi-Yu. However, the item is rendered useless by Stealth Rock, a relatively common sight.

- Jolly nature Chien-Pao speed Speed ties Flutter Mane and opposing Chien-Pao. An Adamant nature can be used for more power, giving Life Orb Chien-Pao a chance to OHKO Cresselia with Crunch.

- Tera Dark boosts the damage of Sucker Punch, allowing it to more effectively pick off weakened foes and score an OHKO on all variants of Flutter Mane. Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving its matchup into Iron Hands, as well as priority such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed that would otherwise threaten Chien-Pao. this is grammatically correct, but a little clunky because of the parenthetical. Consider changing it to: "Tera Ghost provides an immunity to priority moves such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed, as well as an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving Chien-Pao's matchup into Iron Hands."

- In addition to other physical attackers, Chien-Pao appreciates partners that can cover its defensive shortcomings, notably teammates that resist to Fire-, Fairy-, and Fighting-types type attacks. Volcanion and Heatran perform well against Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane and can hold off opposing Fire-types. Amoonguss and Landorus-T can be used to switch into Fighting-type attacks from Iron Hands aimed at Chien-Pao.
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[SET]

name: Cheems Pao
move 1: Ice Spinner / Icicle Crash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Sacred Sword / Crunch
move 4: Protect
item: Life Orb / Focus Sash
ability: Sword of Ruin
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Dark / Ghost

[SET COMMENTS]

- Chien-Pao is a fantastic physical attacker that can improve its and its teammates' physical damage through Sword of Ruin. It is very effective with priority attackers such as Dragonite and Palafin, as well as other fast physical attackers such as Choice Band Dragapult and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

- Ice Spinner is a STAB option move that easily grabs OHKOs on Dragonite and Landorus-T while clearing Psychic Terrain for its own Sucker Punch and teammates' priority moves. Icicle Crash can be used for a slight increase in power, a sizeable flinch chance, and avoiding Rocky Helmet damage; (rc, add semicolon) however, (ac) it comes with a chance to miss and cannot clear Psychic Terrain. If used with Rillaboom, Icicle Crash is recommended to avoid clearing your own Grassy Terrain.

- Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pick off faster threats such as Booster Energy Flutter Mane and Booster Energy Iron Bundle. implied as booster energy (flutter mane and iron bundle), unsure though this edit is fine Sucker Punch is also crucial to for keeping Chien-Pao relevant against Tailwind or Trick Room (rc) and pressures pressuring opposing priority users such as Palafin.

- Sacred Sword OHKOs OHKOes many relevant Pokemon that resist Chien-Pao's STAB combination such as Kingambit, Chi-Yu, and opposing Chien-Pao. Crunch is a more consistent option for a Dark-type STAB move, knocking out Indeedee-F through Psychic Terrain and threatening Pokemon such as Cresselia that are using status moves.

- Life Orb is used to push Chien-Pao's offenses to dizzying heights, OHKOing bulky Rillaboom and Flutter Mane with Ice Spinner and Sucker Punch, remove comma leave comma respectively. Focus Sash gets around Chien-Pao's poor defenses and allows it to survive a hit against strong, fast attackers such as Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Chi-Yu. However, the item is rendered useless by Stealth Rock, a relatively common sight.

- Jolly nature Chien-Pao speed Speed ties Flutter Mane and opposing Chien-Pao. An Adamant nature can be used for more power, giving Life Orb Chien-Pao a chance to OHKO Cresselia with Crunch.

- Tera Dark boosts the damage of Sucker Punch, allowing it to more effectively pick off weakened foes and score an OHKO on all variants of Flutter Mane. Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving its matchup into Iron Hands, as well as Normal-type priority such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed that would otherwise threaten Chien-Pao. this is grammatically correct, but a little clunky because of the parenthetical. Consider changing it to: "Tera Ghost provides an immunity to Normal-type priority moves such as Fake Out and Extreme Speed, as well as an immunity to Fighting-type moves, improving Chien-Pao's matchup into Iron Hands." Changing the text is up to you qsns; it's mostly subjective and both work

- In addition to other physical attackers, Chien-Pao appreciates partners that can cover its defensive shortcomings, notably teammates with resistances to Fire, Fairy, and Fighting that resist to Fire-, Fairy-, and Fighting-types type attacks. Volcanion and Heatran perform well against Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane and can hold off opposing Fire-types. Amoonguss and Landorus-T can be used to switch into Fighting-type attacks from Iron Hands aimed at Chien-Pao.

edit: fixing misgender i apologize
 
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