Choice Band Silvally [QC 0/2]

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[SET]
name:Choice band
move 1: Multi Attack
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Flamethrower / Surf
item: Choice Band
ability: RKS System
nature: Naive
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Band Silvally is a very threatening wallbreaker with its powerful STAB Multi-Attack and crucial Speed tier allowing it to outspeeds the like of Kangaskhan, Rotom, and Sawk. .U-Turn is a great tool which allows it to keep up momentum as well as chip checks such as Uxie, Persian-Alola, and Rhydon. Crunch is used as coverage against Ghost types such as Cofagrigus, Rotom and Runerigus. Flamethower is used to attack Tangela and Steel types like Ferroseed or Klingklang. While Surf can be used as Coverage against Rock types like Rhydon.

Silvally fits on Offense teams that want a strong immediate physical attacker with a good speed tier that can keep up momentum. Choice Band Silvally fits well in voltturn cores with partners such as Uxie, Manectric, Cincinno and Rotom to allow it to keep up momentum. Qwilfish and Garbodor can setup spikes which can weaken defensive threats which is improved when paired with a volturn core to force switches. Silvally also appreciates Qwilfish's Thunder wave to slow down faster threats like Choice Scarf sawk so that Silvally can take it out. Physical attackers like Kangaskhan,Shiftry,Rotom,Sawk, Basculin and Cincinno enjoy Silvally's ability to weaken physical walls so that they can break through them.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Full special sets gives Silvally more coverage in exchange for power allowing Silvally to hit a wider range of threats. Parting shot can also be used as a way of maintaining momentum.However it's much better to run U turn for the damage.

Checks and Counters
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**Physical walls** Pokemon like Physdef Miltank and Alolan Persian can use Toxic to greatly cripple Silvally or in the case of Alolan Persian use foul play to do a lot of damage against Silvally.Tangela can also wall Silvally if it isit running Flamethrower.

**Faster attackers**: Choice band Cincinno and Choice Scarf sawk are able to check Silvally with their ability to Ohko it. They also are able to get a Knock off on the switch or in the case of Cincinno get a U-Turn for momentum. Its also worth noting that choice scarf Cincinno can also Ohko Silvally if Steath rocks are up.

**Rock and Steel types**: Depending on the coverage move Silvally runs it will either get walled by Rock or Steel types. If it runs Surf Steel types like Perrserker, Ferroseed and Klingklang wall it. Against Flamethrower Variants Rock types like Rhydon and Coalossal wall it and can both set up Steath Rock and Rhydon can Swords dance and Coalossal can rapid spin away hazards respectively.

**Ghost types** If Silvally chooses to go for Multi attack a Ghost type can come in like Cofagrigus, Rotom or Runerigus to force it out and Setup, Burn something on the switch or gain momentum or Setup Steath rocks respectively.

**Fighting types**: Poliwrath,Throh and Gurdurr can all live a Multi attack and punish back.Poliwrath and Throh can circle throw Silvally out to potentially get hazard damage on a teammate alongside getting good damage on Silvally.Gurdurr is arguably worse as it is able to deal massive damage with Drain Punch which heals alot of damage which allows it to take another multi attack.it can also easily finish Silvally off with Mach punch.

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In english there is a spacing after each punctuation mark. Please add these spacing because atm it's just painful to read through what you read. I'll givre another look before giving you the first QC as this needed a lot of changes (which is normal since it is your first analysis).
[SET]
name:Choice band
move 1: Multi Attack
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Flamethrower / Surf
item: Choice Band
ability: RKS System
nature: Naive
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Spa / 252 Spe 252 Atk / 4 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Band Silvally is a very threatening Wallbreaker due to it having a respectable 95 attack and Multi attack having a Great 120 base power powered up by Choice band.it also crucially has a speed tier of 95,this crucially allows it to tie with Uxie,other Silvally's and Jynx as well as outspeed Kangaskhan and non Choice Scarf Rotom and Sawk. There are way too many fluff there, there is no need to mention the stats of Silvally or the base power of Multi-Attack. You could say something far shorter like: 'Choice Band Silvally is a very threatening wallbreaker with its powerful STAB Multi-Attack and crucial Speed tier allowing it to outspeeds the like of Kangaskhan, Rotom, and Sawk.' Crunch is used as coverage against Ghost-types such as Cofagrigus, Rotom, and Runerigus. U-Turn is a great tool which allows it to keep up momentum as well as do good damage to Uxie,liepard and Alolan Persian chip checks such as Uxie, Persian-Alola, and Rhydon. Flamethower and Surf are used as Coverage against Tangela and Ferroseed or Rhydon and Coalossal respectively. Make the latter point two different sentences. Flamethrower is for Steel-types + Tangela, while Surf is for Rock-types.
Reorder the sentences to have moved listed in the same order than the set.

Silvally fits on Offense and Balance offense teams that want a strong immediate physical attacker with a good speed tier that can keep up momentum. Good partners for Choice band Silvally include Uxie and Clefairy who allow Silvally to come in safely via U turn and teleport. Teleport Clefairy is really bad. Rewrite this in something like 'cb silvally fits well in voltturn cores with partners such as ...'. Qwilfish and Garbodor can setup spikes which can weaken common answers to multi attack like Tangela. Rewrite this as Spikes users are helpful to weaken defensive checks and work well with Silvally, especially when paired with voltturn core. Silvally also appreciates Qwilfish's Thunder wave to slow down faster threats like Choice Scarf sawk so that Silvally can take it out. Choice Scarf and priority users like Kangaskhan,Shiftry,Rotom,Sawk, Basculin and Cincinno enjoy Silvally's ability to break holes in defensive teams so that they can sweep through the rest of team. -> rewrite this as physical attackers like silvally weakening physical walls for them. Rotom and Manectric also form a good VoltTurn core with Silvally to keep up momentum. This fits with the 2nd point.
Overall this section is a bit chaotic, so expect more comments once this gets implemented.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Explosion can be used as a last resort tool when Multi attack won't knock something out or if you need a free switch into something.However running Explosion means you don't run either Flamethrower or Surf which makes you prone to being walled by Tangela, Ferroseed,Rhydon and Coalossal.Parting shot can also be used as a way of maintaining momentum.However due to the choice band boost it's much better to run U turn for the damage. This section isn't specific to the CB set but also to the Scarf and Mixed sets. So just mention full special sets and Parting Shot in this section.

Checks and Counters
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**Choice Scarf Sawk** Choice Scarf Sawk is able to force Silvally out in fear of close combat and can get a Knock Off on the switch.

**Cincinno**: Choice band Cincinno Is able to force Silvally out in fear of being knocked out by tail slap.Choice scarf is also able to do the same with rocks up.Cincinno can then Knock off or U-Turn on the switch to remove a teammates items or gain momentum.

**Bulky Fighting types**: Poliwrath,Throh and Gurdurr can all live a Multi attack and punish back.Poliwrath and Throh can circle throw Silvally out to potentially get hazard damage on a teammate alongside getting good damage on Silvally.Gurdurr is arguably worse as it is able to deal massive damage with Drain Punch which heals alot of damage which allows it to take another multi attack.it can also easily finish Silvally off with Mach punch.

**Either Tangela and Ferroseed or Rhydon and Coalossal**: Depending on the coverage move Silvally runs it will either get countered by Tangela and Ferroseed or Rhydon and Coalossal.Against Surf variants Tangela can use Leech seed,Sleep powder or Knock off allowing it to punish whatever comes in.Ferroseed can Leech seed,Knock off a oponents item or lay Spikes down.Against Flamethrower Variants Rhydon and Coalossal can both set up Steath Rock and Rhydon can Swords dance and Coalossal can rapid spin away hazards respectively.

**Alolan Persian**: Alolan Persian can use foul play to do massive damage against Silvally or use Knock off on either a switch or to remove Silvally's choice band.It can also use toxic to cripple Silvally as it has no way of recovery or a teammate.

This is going to need some rework. Most of the information are good but they are poorly ordered. Try following the following points:

**Physical Walls**

**Faster Attackers**

**Rock- and Steel-types**

**Ghost-types**

**Fighting-types**

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I'd like to give it another look after you implement this. Also let me know when you implement this!
[SET]
name: Choice band (spacing)
move 1: Multi Attack
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Flamethrower / Surf
item: Choice Band
ability: RKS System
nature: Naive
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Band Silvally is a very threatening wallbreaker with its powerful STAB Multi-Attack mention some relavant threats it OHKOes/2HKOes and crucial Speed tier allowing it to outspeeds the likes of Kangaskhan, Rotom, and Sawk. (i didn't expect you to copy my sentence) .(Remove Period)U-Turn is a great tool which allows it to keep up momentum as well as chip checks such as Uxie, Persian-Alola I don't really like Alolan Persian as an example as it's not switching into Silvally since it takes arround 60% from MA, also Silvally isn't going to stay in on a potential Foul Play or Knock Off if Persian is alredy out, and Rhydon. Crunch is used as coverage against Ghost types such as Cofagrigus, Rotom, (AC) and Runerigus. Flamethower is used to attack attack doesn't imply that it lets Vally beat them, rephrase Tangela and Steel-types (AH) like Ferroseed or Klingklang Klinklang. While Surf can be used as Ccoverage against Rock types like Rhydon and Coalossal.

Silvally fits on Ooffense teams that want a strong immediate physical attacker with a good sSpeed tier that can keep up momentum. Choice Band Silvally fits well in voltturn VoltTurn cores with partners such as Uxie, Manectric, Cincinno no you don't want to stack Normal-types and Rotom to allow it to keep up momentum. Qwilfish and Garbodor can setup sSpikes which can weaken defensive threats which is improved when paired with a volturn VoltTurn core to force switches, they also handle Fighting-types for Silvally. Silvally also appreciates Qwilfish's Thunder wave to slow down faster threats like Choice Scarf sawk so that Silvally can take it out. true but it's not a main info Physical attackers like Kangaskhan, Shiftry, Rotom, Sawk, (spacing) also that's way to many examples, you want to have between 2 and 4 examples Basculin and Cincinno enjoy Silvally's ability to weaken physical walls so that they can break through them. There are no mention of Pokémon that can handle checks to Silvally. You have to write some sentences about them.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Full special sets gives Silvally more coverage in exchange for power allowing Silvally to hit a wider range of threats. Parting shot can also be used as a way of maintaining momentum.However it's much better to run U turn for the damage. Since you don't write on Scarf and Mixed sets, mention them at least there.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Physical walls** Pokemon like Physdef Miltank and Alolan Persian can use Toxic to greatly cripple Silvally or in the case of Alolan Persian use foul play to do a lot of damage against Silvally.Tangela can also wall Silvally if it isit running Flamethrower. You fail to explain how physical walls check Silvally; they can come on its powerful hits and avoid the 2HKO. PhysDef Miltank isn't a common set (spd is far better) so remove it, Alolan Persian isn't a physical wall and gets 2HKOed by MA.

**Faster attackers**: Choice band Cincinno and Choice Scarf sawk are able to check Silvally with their ability to Ohko it. They also are able to get a Knock off on the switch or in the case of Cincinno get a U-Turn for momentum. Its also worth noting that choice scarf Cincinno can also Ohko Silvally if Steath rocks are up. You have to say those attackers outspeed and ohko Silvally, no need to elaborate more on them predicting a switch out. Also the current phrasing made it seem like only Ciccino and CS Sawk can rk Vally.

**Rock- (AH) and Steel-types (AH)**: Depending on the coverage move Silvally runs it will either get walled by Rock- or Steel-types. If it runs Surf Steel-types (AH) like Perrserker, Ferroseed and Klingklang wall it. Against Flamethrower Vvariants Rock-types (AH) like Rhydon and Coalossal wall it and can both set up Steath Rock and Rhydon can Swords dance and Coalossal can rapid spin away hazards respectively it's implicit that they'll take advantage of it in some ways.

**Ghost types** If Silvally chooses to go for Multi attack a Ghost type Ghost-types like Silvally-Ghost, Rotom or Gourgeist-S (Cofagrigus would be better to have in the physical section, but up to you to keep it here, Runerigus is a rather niche Ghost-type, I'd prefer to have higher ranked mon) are immuned to Silvally's STAB moves and can come in like Cofagrigus, Rotom or Runerigus to force it out and Setup, Burn something on the switch or gain momentum or Setup Steath rocks respectively see comment for Rock- and Steel-types.

**Fighting-types**: Poliwrath,Throh and Gurdurr can all live a Multi attack Multi Attack and punish back.Poliwrath and Throh can circle throw Silvally out to potentially get hazard damage on a teammate alongside getting good damage on Silvally.Gurdurr is arguably worse as it is able to deal massive damage with Drain Punch which heals alot of damage which allows it to take another multi attack.it can also easily finish Silvally off with Mach punch. Spacings? Like for Rock-, Ghost-, and Steel-types, you don't have to explain how every example performs versus Vally but rather to explain what they globally to it.

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- Written by: [[Hitmonstars,484375]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
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