Copyediting Choice Specs Florges QC 2/2

[Heatranator]

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Moonblast
move 2: Trick
move 3: Psychic Noise / Tera Blast
move 4: Synthesis / Psychic Noise
item: Choice Specs
ability: Flower Veil
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS]

Choice Specs Florges is a terrifying wallbreaker, able to utilise its solid bulk, strong Special Attack, and limited resists to Moonblast to carve out a solid niche in PU. Trick can cripple special walls such as Milotic and Alolan Sandslash, allowing Florges and its teammates to break through them easier. Psychic Noise can be used to beat Poison-types such as Amoonguss and Salazzle while also making sure special walls such as Milotic and opposing Florges cannot heal off its damage. Tera Blast can be used on sets that utilise Tera Ground to break through common Florges switch ins such as Galarian Slowbro, Alolan Sandslash, and Fire-types such as Hisuian Typhlosion and Delphox that Florges might otherwise struggle with. Synthesis can alternatively be used to make sure Florges can keep itself healthy over a match for bulkier teams while letting it help check Pokemon such as Passimian and Tatsugiri, allowing Florges to continue being a nuisance post-Trick. Tera Fairy can be used to boost Florges's Moonblast to astonishing power, allowing it to 2HKO both Rotom-H and specially defensive Milotic. Tera Ground is primarily used on sets that pack Tera Blast, hitting the majority of Florges's usual checks such as Alolan Sandslash and Galarian Slowbro, but can also make Florges immune to Double Shock from Pawmot and gives it a Poison resist to take hits from Skuntank and Salazzle. Florges by large prefers Modest, as the extra damage output can allow it to 3HKO Snorlax and 2HKO Lanturn after Stealth Rock, but Timid can be utilised to outspeed Hoopa and Hisuian Braviary.

Florges fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, who appreciate its wall breaking power and ability to soft check Pokemon such as Tatsugiri and Jolteon. Pokemon such as Lanturn and Bruxish that can take on Pokemon such as Delphox and Alolan Sandslash that can otherwise take hits from Florges are great for Florges so it can use options like Synthesis. Conversly, Pokemon such as Alolan Sandslash, and Hisuian Qwilfish that heavily struggle with Fire- and Steel-types love Florges's ability to lure them in with Tera Blast and remove them from the battle, which can make them a lot more threatening. Pivot Pokemon such as Rotom-H, Zoroark, and Bruxish are great for Florges, as they can help it get in and out of battle easily while also luring in Pokemon such as Scrafty and Hisuian Qwilfish that Florges can start spamming Moonblast against. A majority of Florges's checks are Stealth Rock weak, so Knock Off users such as Ambipom and Alolan Sandslash can help remove their items for Florges. Paralysis users such as Grimmsnarl, Dudunsparce, and Porygon2 are great partners for Florges, as they can slow down faster foes such as Salazzle and Paldean Tauros-F that would usually be able to outspeed it, while in return Florges can threaten out common paralysis absorbers such as Milotic, Pawmot, and Mudsdale they might struggle with.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/heatranator.647728/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/

 

[Heatranator]

Ready for QC

 

[Bella]

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Moonblast
move 2: Trick
move 3: Tera Blast / Psychic Noise
move 4: Psychic Noise / Synthesis
item: Choice Specs
ability: Flower Veil
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
tera type: Ground / Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

(I would add a quick opening sentence here on why Specs Florges is good and why its used, ie sky high SpA, Moonblast resists are limited, solid bulk for an attacker) Trick can cripple special walls such as Frosmoth (nuked, id add Milo here.) and Alolan Sandslash, allowing Florges and it's teammates to break through them easier. Tera blast Blast can be used on sets that utilise Tera Ground to break through common Florges switch ins such as Alolan Sandslash, Galarian Slowbro (nuked, mention something else here like Rhydon), and Fire-types such as Arcanine and Delphox that Florges might otherwise struggle with. Psychic Noise can be used to beat Poison-types such as Amoonguss and Salazzle while also making sure special walls such as Milotic and opposing Florges cannot heal off it's damage. Synthesis can alternatively be used to make sure Florges can keep itself healthy over a match while letting it help check Pokemon such as Goodra and Tatsugiri. (Probably mention that Synthesis is really good on bulkier teams running like Milo-Muds cores that don't like their wall getting crippled and lets florges be more of a nusiance post trick) Tera Ground is primarily used on sets that pack Tera Blast, hitting the majority of Florges's usual checks such as Alolan Sandslash and Arcanine. (could mention some nice defensive benefits here too, since the Double Shock Immunity or the Poison resist can come in clutch alot.) Tera Fairy can be used to boost Florges's Moonblast to astonishing power, allowing it to 2HKO both Rotom-H and specially defensive Milotic.

Florges fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, who appreciate its wall breaking power and ability to soft check Pokemon such as Goodra and Hitmonlee (you really aren't liking to take on Hitmonlee with Specs florges, something like Jolteon or Trode is likely a better mention here.). While it does have options to hit Fire- and Steel-types, Florges typically has to utilise Tera to do so. Therefore, Pokemon such as Arcanine and Bruxish that can take on these Pokemon (such as?) are great for Florges so it can use options like Synthesis. Conversly, Pokemon such as Alolan Sandslash, Tatsugiri, and Hisuian Qwilfish that heavily struggle with Fire- and Steel-types love Florges's ability to lure them in with Tera Blast and remove them from the battle, which can make them a lot more threatening. Pivot Pokemon such as Rotom-H, Zoroark, and Bruxish are great for Florges, as they can help it get in and out of battle easily. (mention how alot of these lure in things that florges just clicks buttons on, like Rhydon for Rotom-H and Zoro and H qwil for brux) A majority of Florges's checks are Stealth Rock weak, so Knock Off users such as Ambipom and Alolan Sandslash can help remove their items for Florges so it can wallbreak much more effectively. (could mention how both also provide good pivot support and hazards of their own for florges) Paralysis users such as Rotom-H (can't really fit twae much sadly, something like grimm is probably better here to talk about), Dudunsparce, and Uxie are great partners for Florges, as they can slow down faster foes such as Salazzle and Paldean Tauros-F that would usually be able to outspeed it, while in return Florges can threaten out common paralysis absorbers such as Milotic, Pawmot, and Mudsdale they might struggle with.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user1.100/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/

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[Yunie]

Heatranator implement the above and credit bella for the qc, then i will get to you

 

[Yunie]

Copyedit

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Moonblast
move 2: Trick
move 3: Tera Blast / Psychic Noise
move 4: Psychic Noise / Synthesis
item: Choice Specs
ability: Flower Veil
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
tera type: Ground / Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

Choice Specs Florges is a terrifying wallbreaker, able to utilise its solid bulk, strong Special Attack, and limited resists to Moonblast to carve out a solid niche in PU. Trick can cripple special walls such as Milotic and Alolan Sandslash, allowing Florges and it's its teammates to break through them easier. Tera Blast can be used on sets that utilise Tera Ground to break through common Florges switch ins such as Alolan Sandslash, Rhydon, and Fire-types such as Arcanine and Delphox that Florges might otherwise struggle with (this would imply that it's not a commonly chosen option, so you should switch around moveslots if that is the case). Psychic Noise can be used to beat Poison-types such as Amoonguss and Salazzle while also making sure special walls such as Milotic and opposing Florges cannot heal off it's its damage. Synthesis can alternatively be used to make sure Florges can keep itself healthy over a match for bulkier teams while letting it help check Pokemon such as Goodra and Tatsugiri, allowing Florges to continue being a nuisance post-Trick. Tera Ground is primarily used on sets that pack Tera Blast, hitting the majority of Florges's usual checks such as Alolan Sandslash and Arcanine, but can also make Florges immune to Double Shock from Pawmot and gives it a Poison resist to take hits from Skuntank and Salazzle. Tera Fairy can be used to boost Florges's Moonblast to astonishing power, allowing it to 2HKO both Rotom-H and specially defensive Milotic. (does it ever want timid? you should mention that if it does)

Florges fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, who appreciate its wall breaking power and ability to soft check Pokemon such as Goodra and Jolteon. While it does have options to hit Fire- and Steel-types, Florges typically has to utilise Tera to do so. Therefore, Pokemon such as Arcanine and Bruxish that can take on these Pokemon such as Delphox and Alolan Sandslash that can otherwise take hits from Florges (also delph is a very shaky switchin due to no recovery) are great for Florges so it can use options like Synthesis. Conversly, Pokemon such as Alolan Sandslash, Tatsugiri, and Hisuian Qwilfish that heavily struggle with Fire- and Steel-types (tatsugiri does not struggle with fire types) love Florges's ability to lure them in with Tera Blast and remove them from the battle, which can make them a lot more threatening. Pivot Pokemon such as Rotom-H, Zoroark, and Bruxish are great for Florges, as they can help it get in and out of battle easily while also luring in Pokemon such as Rhydon (rotom-heat cannot pivot against this mon, choose something else) and Hisuian Qwilfish that Florges can start spamming Moonblast against. A majority of Florges's checks are Stealth Rock weak, so Knock Off users such as Ambipom and Alolan Sandslash can help remove their items for Florges so it can wallbreak much more effectively while also providing other traits such as pivoting and hazard removal for Florges. Paralysis users such as Grimmsnarl, Dudunsparce, and Uxie are great partners for Florges, as they can slow down faster foes such as Salazzle and Paldean Tauros-F that would usually be able to outspeed it, while in return Florges can threaten out common paralysis absorbers such as Milotic, Pawmot, and Mudsdale they might struggle with.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/heatranator.647728/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yunie.414072/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/

qc 2/2!

 

[Yunie]

GP Team

 

[igiveuponaname]

add remove comment highlight

would like to take another look after this is implemented

GP Team done <- removes from gp queue, dont bother retagging it

Copyedit

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Moonblast
move 2: Trick
move 3: Psychic Noise / Tera Blast what
move 4: Psychic Noise / Synthesis whatever it's supposed to be make sure to fix it
item: Choice Specs
ability: Flower Veil
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS]

Choice Specs Florges is a terrifying wallbreaker, being able to utilise utilize its solid bulk, strong high Special Attack, and limited resists switch-ins (if this isn't accurate let me know, but to be clear, you can't use "resists" as a noun) to Moonblast to carve out a solid niche in PU. Trick can cripple special walls such as Milotic and Alolan Sandslash, allowing Florges and its teammates to break through them easier more easily. Psychic Noise can be used to beat Poison-types such as Amoonguss and Salazzle while also making sure special walls such as Milotic and opposing Florges cannot heal off its damage. Tera Blast can be used on sets that utilise utilize Tera Ground to break through common Florges switch-ins (added hyphen) such as Galarian Slowbro, Alolan Sandslash, and Fire-types such as Hisuian Typhlosion and Delphox that Florges might otherwise struggle with. Alternatively, (AC) Synthesis can alternatively be used to make sure Florges can keep itself healthy over a match for bulkier teams while letting it help check Pokemon such as Passimian and Tatsugiri, allowing Florges to continue being a nuisance post-Trick. Tera Fairy can be used to boost Florges's Moonblast to astonishing power, allowing it to 2HKO both Rotom-H Rotom-Heat and specially defensive Milotic. Tera Ground is primarily used on sets that pack Tera Blast, hitting the majority of Florges's usual checks such as Alolan Sandslash and Galarian Slowbro, but it can also make Florges immune to Double Shock from Pawmot and gives give it a Poison resist resistance to take hits from Skuntank and Salazzle. Florges by large prefers a Modest nature, as the extra damage output can allow it to 3HKO Snorlax and 2HKO Lanturn after Stealth Rock, but a Timid nature can be utilised utilized to outspeed Hoopa and Hisuian Braviary.

Florges fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, who which appreciate its wallbreaking (removed spacing) power and ability to soft check Pokemon such as Tatsugiri and Jolteon. Pokemon such as Lanturn and Bruxish that can take on Pokemon foes (repetition) such as Delphox and Alolan Sandslash, (AC) that which can otherwise take hits from Florges, (AC) are great partners for Florges, (AC) so letting it can use options like Synthesis. Conversly Conversely, Pokemon such as Alolan Sandslash, (RC) and Hisuian Qwilfish that heavily struggle with Fire- and Steel-types love Florges's ability to lure them in with Tera Blast and remove them from the battle with Tera Blast, which can make them a lot more threatening. Pivot Pokemon such as Rotom-H Rotom-Heat, Zoroark, and Bruxish are great for Florges, as they can help it get in and out of battle easily while also luring in Pokemon such as Scrafty and Hisuian Qwilfish that Florges can start spamming Moonblast against. A majority of Florges's checks are Stealth Rock-weak, (added hyphen) so Knock Off users such as Ambipom and Alolan Sandslash can help remove their items for Florges it. Paralysis users such as Grimmsnarl, Dudunsparce, and Porygon2 are great partners for Florges, as they can slow down faster foes such as Salazzle and Paldean Tauros-F that would usually be able to outspeed it, while in return, (AC) Florges can threaten out common paralysis absorbers such as Milotic, Pawmot, and Mudsdale that they might struggle with.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/heatranator.647728/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/