National Dex UU Cinderace [QC: 1/1] [GP: 1/1]

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Pyro Ball
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Gunk Shot / High Jump Kick
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
tera type: Fire
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high Attack and Speed stats, good coverage moves, and inability to be worn down by entry hazards thanks to Heavy-Duty Boots, Cinderace is a versatile pivot that is able to outspeed and offensively respond to various threats such as Latios and Clefable. Pyro Ball is Cinderace's main STAB move, allowing it to hit Steel-types such as Celesteela and Excadrill while also dealing significant damage to other defensive Pokemon such as Buzzwole and Amoonguss; it notably preserves Libero's type-changing ability in the process. U-turn, besides allowing Cinderace to maintain momentum by bringing in a teammate like Hydreigon, can also wear down defensive Pokemon such as Slowbro. Gunk Shot gives Cinderace useful coverage for Pokemon such as Tapu Fini and Mega Altaria, and it also lets Cinderace force out Calm Mind Clefable more reliably. Alternatively, High Jump Kick is an option to OHKO Mega Tyranitar and Hydreigon, as well as 2HKO physically defensive Ting-Lu, which U-turn cannot do. Sucker Punch lets Cinderace revenge kill chipped sweepers such as Agility Iron Moth and Z-Celebrate variants of Victini after their respective boosts while also threatening Choice Scarf users such as Blacephalon. Tera Fire is preferred to strengthen Pyro Ball's damage output against neutral targets, letting it OHKO offensive Pokemon such as Galarian Moltres after Stealth Rock and giving it favorable odds to 2HKO the likes of physically defensive Galarian Slowking and Iron Hands. Cinderace fits best on offensive teams that can supply it with the tools needed to break through defensive Pokemon; entry hazard setters such as Mega Tyranitar, Ting-Lu, and Iron Treads can support Cinderace in this manner, with Mega Tyranitar also being able to trap or force Slowbro and Skeledirge to Terastallize with Pursuit after Cinderace pivots against them. Similarly, defensive Pokemon such as Celesteela, Slowbro, and Tapu Fini appreciate Cinderace's ability to threaten out the likes of Aegislash, Meowscarada, and Scizor; in return, they can help sponge the Water- and Ground-type moves aimed at Cinderace or provide Future Sight or Taunt support in the case of the latter two. Powerful wallbreakers such as Latios and Gengar also appreciate the safe entry Cinderace can facilitate against most physically defensive Pokemon it commonly invites in on top of Cinderace being able to force out the Steel-types that would otherwise threaten them, like Aegislash and Scizor.

[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Pyro Ball
move 3: High Jump Kick
move 4: Double Edge
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance turns Cinderace into a threatening wallbreaker, using its immense power to break through most defensive Pokemon that would otherwise switch into it comfortably. At +2, Breakneck Blitz manages to OHKO the likes of Slowbro and physically defensive Moltres after Libero, and it is also effective at nullifying the possibility of other walls like Buzzwole and Amoonguss Terastallizing against it. High Jump Kick is a necessary coverage option to let Cinderace reliably KO Mega Tyranitar and Ting-Lu. Cinderace fits best on hyper offense teams that benefit from its ability to break open defensive cores; as Cinderace is often revenge killed by faster Pokemon such as Sand Rush Excadrill and Choice Scarf Latias, other Pokemon that can take advantage of these revenge killers like Dragon Dance Gyarados, Swords Dance Scizor, and Air Balloon Aegislash become valuable teammates, as they also appreciate Cinderace's innate ability to threaten common walls such as Buzzwole and Skarmory. Mega Gyarados in particular helps overwhelm Unaware Clefable and Skeledirge for Cinderace, which would otherwise stop it from being able to safely set up against them. Cinderace also appreciates having dual screens support from Grimmsnarl to improve its setup opportunities, while anti-entry hazard options such as Excadrill and Iron Treads can help alleviate Cinderace's crippling Stealth Rock weakness.

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1/1 :blobthumbsup: good job
[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Pyro Ball
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Gunk Shot / High Jump Kick
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
tera type: Fire
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high Speed and Attack stats, good coverage moves, and inability to be worn down by entry hazards thanks to Heavy-Duty Boots., (RP, AC) Cinderace is a versatile pivot that is able to outspeed and offensively respond to various threats such as Latios and Clefable. Pyro Ball is Cinderace's main STAB Move, allowing it to threaten out Steel-types such as Aegislash and Excadrill, while also dealing significant damage to other defensive Pokemon such as Celesteela, Buzzwole and Amoonguss, notably preserving Libero's type-changing abilities in the process. U-turn, besides enabling Cinderace to scout common switchins, can also systematically wear down defensive Pokemon such as Ting-Lu and Slowbro for its team, while maintaining offensive momentum by bringing x y and z (one or two examples are fine) to pressure these Pokemon. especially in conjunction with support from Knock Off and entry hazards (this part sounds more like fluff/ you can expand this during the teammates section by mentioning those Knock Off users). Gunk Shot gives Cinderace useful coverage for Pokemon such as Tapu Fini and Mega Altaria which resist its Fire STAB or U-turn, and also lets Cinderace force out Calm Mind Clefable more reliably. While High Jump Kick is an option to OHKO Mega Tyranitar and Hydreigon, on top of 2HKOing Physically Defensive Ting-Lu on the switch. Sucker Punch lets Cinderace revenge kill chipped faster Pokemon setup sweepers such as Agility Iron Moth and Z-Celebrate variants of Victini after their respective boosts, while threatening Choice Scarf users such as Blacephalon. Tera Fire is preferred to strengthen Pyro Ball's damage output against neutral targets, namely OHKOing offensive Pokemon such as Galarian Moltres after Stealth Rock, and giving it favorable odds to do so against Skarmory (would probably remove the skarmory part and find a defensive neutral target to keep pressure on). Cinderace fits best on offensive teams that can supply it with the tools needed to break through defensive Pokemon; entry hazard setters such as Mega Tyranitar, Ting-Lu, and Iron Treads can support Cinderace in this manner, with Mega Tyranitar also being able to trap or force Slowbro and Skeledirge to Terastallize with Pursuit after Cinderace pivots against them. Similarly, defensive Pokemon such as Celesteela, Slowbro, and Tapu Fini appreciate Cinderace's ability to threaten out the likes of Aegislash, Meowscarada, and Scizor, they in turn, can help sponge the Water- and Ground-type moves aimed at Cinderace, or through Future Sight or Taunt support for the latter two. Powerful wallbreakers such as Latios and Kyurem also appreciate the safe entry Cinderace can facilitate against most physically defensive Pokemon it commonly invites in, on top of Cinderace being able to force out the Steel-types that would otherwise (mention which ones here) threaten them.


[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Pyro Ball
move 3: High Jump Kick
move 4: Double Edge
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
tera type: Fire
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance turns Cinderace into a threatening wallbreaker, using its immense power to break through most defensive Pokemon that would otherwise switch into it comfortably. At +2, Z-Double Edge Breakneck Blitz manages to OHKO the likes of Slowbro and physically defensive Moltres after Libero, while also being effective at nullifying the possibility of other walls like Buzzwole and Amoonguss Terastalizing against it, which can potentially open up the way for other physical attacking teammates (examples) to sweep the opposition. High Jump Kick meanwhile, is a necessary coverage option to let Cinderace reliably KO Mega Tyranitar and Ting-Lu. (mention which teams you want to use this set) Cinderace is often revenge killed by faster Pokemon such as Sand Rush Excadrill and Choice Scarf Latias, which makes other Pokemon that can take advantage of these revenge killers like Dragon Dance Gyarados, Swords Dance Scizor, and Air Balloon Aegislash valuable teammates, as they also appreciate Cinderace's innate ability to threaten common walls such as Buzzwole and Skarmory. Taunt variants of Mega Gyarados in particular can overwhelm Unaware Clefable and Dondozo for Cinderace, which would otherwise stop it from being able to safely setup against them, while Scizor can also threaten do the same with Life Orb sets by opting for Tera Blast + Electric. Cinderace also appreciates having screens support from Grimmsnarl to improve its setup opportunities, while anti-hazard options such Excadrill, Tapu Fini (you want to use this set mostly on HO so i think fini doesn't fit here) and Iron Treads can help alleviate Cinderace's crippling Stealth Rock weakness.


[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/arishem.546157/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pubo.535121/
Grammar checked by:
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[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Pyro Ball
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Gunk Shot / High Jump Kick
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
tera type: Fire
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high Attack and Speed stats, good coverage moves, and inability to be worn down by entry Hazards hazards thanks to Heavy-Duty Boots., (period to comma) Cinderace is a versatile pivot that is able to outspeed and offensively respond to various threats such as Latios and Clefable. Pyro Ball is Cinderace's main STAB move, allowing it to hit Steel-types such as Celesteela and Excadrill, (remove comma) (while meaning "at the same time as" isn't preceded by a comma) while also dealing significant damage to other defensive Pokemon such as Buzzwole and Amoonguss,; (comma to semicolon) it notably preserving preserves Libero's type-changing abilities in the process. U-turn, besides allowing Cinderace to maintain momentum by bringing in a teammate like Hydreigon, can also wear down defensive Pokemon such as Slowbro. Gunk Shot gives Cinderace useful coverage for Pokemon such as Tapu Fini and Mega Altaria, and it also lets Cinderace force out Calm Mind Clefable more reliably. While Alternatively, High Jump Kick is an option to OHKO Mega Tyranitar and Hydreigon, on top of 2HKOing as well as 2HKO physically defensive Ting-Lu on the switch, which U-turn cannot do. Sucker Punch lets Cinderace revenge kill chipped sweepers such as Agility Iron Moth and Z-Celebrate variants of Victini after their respective boosts, (remove comma) while threatening Choice Scarf users such as Blacephalon. Tera Fire is preferred to strengthen Pyro Ball's damage output against neutral targets, OHKOing letting it OHKO offensive Pokemon such as Galarian Moltres after Stealth Rock, (remove comma) and giving it favorable odds to 2HKO the likes of physically defensive Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking and Iron Hands. Cinderace fits best on offensive teams that can supply it with the tools needed to break through defensive Pokemon; entry hazard setters such as Mega Tyranitar, Ting-Lu, and Iron Treads can support Cinderace in this manner, with Mega Tyranitar also being able to trap or force Slowbro and Skeledirge to Terastallize with Pursuit after Cinderace pivots against them. Similarly, defensive Pokemon such as Celesteela, Slowbro, and Tapu Fini appreciate Cinderace's ability to threaten out the likes of Aegislash, Meowscarada, and Scizor,; (comma to semicolon) they in turn, in return, they can help sponge the Water Water- and Ground-type moves aimed at Cinderace, (remove comma) or through provide Future Sight or Taunt support for in the case of the latter two. Powerful wallbreakers such as Latios and Gengar also appreciate the safe entry Cinderace can facilitate against most physically defensive Pokemon it commonly invites in, (remove comma) on top of Cinderace being able to force out the Steel-types that would otherwise threaten them, like Aegislash and Scizor.


[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Pyro Ball
move 3: High Jump Kick
move 4: Double Edge
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance turns Cinderace into a threatening wallbreaker, using its immense power to break through most defensive Pokemon that would otherwise switch into it comfortably. At +2, Breakneck Blitz manages to OHKO the likes of Slowbro and physically defensive Moltres after Libero, while also being and it is also effective at nullifying the possibility of other walls like Buzzwole and Amoonguss Terastalizing against it. High Jump Kick is a necessary coverage option to let Cinderace reliably KO Mega Tyranitar and Ting-Lu. Cinderace fits best on hyper offense teams that benefit from its ability to break open defensive cores; as Cinderace is often revenge killed by faster Pokemon such as Sand Rush Excadrill and Choice Scarf Latias, other Pokemon that can take advantage of these revenge killers like Dragon Dance Gyarados, Swords Dance Scizor, and Air Balloon Aegislash become valuable teammates, as they also appreciate Cinderace's innate ability to threaten common walls such as Buzzwole and Skarmory. Mega Gyarados in particular helps overwhelm Unaware Clefable and Skeledirge for Cinderace, which would otherwise stop it from being able to safely setup set up against them. Cinderace also appreciates having dual screens support from Grimmsnarl to improve its setup opportunities, while anti-hazard anti-entry hazard options such as Excadrill and Iron Treads can help alleviate Cinderace's crippling Stealth Rock weakness.


[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/arishem.546157/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pubo.535121/
Grammar checked by:
user link here

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[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Pyro Ball
move 2: U-turn
move 3: Gunk Shot / High Jump Kick
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
tera type: Fire
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high Attack and Speed stats, good coverage moves, and inability to be worn down by entry Hazards hazards thanks to Heavy-Duty Boots., (period to comma) Cinderace is a versatile pivot that is able to outspeed and offensively respond to various threats such as Latios and Clefable. Pyro Ball is Cinderace's main STAB move, allowing it to hit Steel-types such as Celesteela and Excadrill, (remove comma) (while meaning "at the same time as" isn't preceded by a comma) while also dealing significant damage to other defensive Pokemon such as Buzzwole and Amoonguss,; (comma to semicolon) it notably preserving preserves Libero's type-changing abilities ability in the process. U-turn, besides allowing Cinderace to maintain momentum by bringing in a teammate like Hydreigon, can also wear down defensive Pokemon such as Slowbro. Gunk Shot gives Cinderace useful coverage for Pokemon such as Tapu Fini and Mega Altaria, and it also lets Cinderace force out Calm Mind Clefable more reliably. While Alternatively, High Jump Kick is an option to OHKO Mega Tyranitar and Hydreigon, on top of 2HKOing as well as 2HKO physically defensive Ting-Lu on the switch, which U-turn cannot do. Sucker Punch lets Cinderace revenge kill chipped sweepers such as Agility Iron Moth and Z-Celebrate variants of Victini after their respective boosts, (remove comma) while also threatening Choice Scarf users such as Blacephalon. Tera Fire is preferred to strengthen Pyro Ball's damage output against neutral targets, OHKOing letting it OHKO offensive Pokemon such as Galarian Moltres after Stealth Rock, (remove comma) and giving it favorable odds to 2HKO the likes of physically defensive Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking and Iron Hands. Cinderace fits best on offensive teams that can supply it with the tools needed to break through defensive Pokemon; entry hazard setters such as Mega Tyranitar, Ting-Lu, and Iron Treads can support Cinderace in this manner, with Mega Tyranitar also being able to trap or force Slowbro and Skeledirge to Terastallize with Pursuit after Cinderace pivots against them. Similarly, defensive Pokemon such as Celesteela, Slowbro, and Tapu Fini appreciate Cinderace's ability to threaten out the likes of Aegislash, Meowscarada, and Scizor,; (comma to semicolon) they in turn, in return, they can help sponge the Water Water- and Ground-type moves aimed at Cinderace, (remove comma) or through provide Future Sight or Taunt support for in the case of the latter two. Powerful wallbreakers such as Latios and Gengar also appreciate the safe entry Cinderace can facilitate against most physically defensive Pokemon it commonly invites in, (remove comma) on top of Cinderace being able to force out the Steel-types that would otherwise threaten them, like Aegislash and Scizor.


[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Pyro Ball
move 3: High Jump Kick
move 4: Double Edge
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance turns Cinderace into a threatening wallbreaker, using its immense power to break through most defensive Pokemon that would otherwise switch into it comfortably. At +2, Breakneck Blitz manages to OHKO the likes of Slowbro and physically defensive Moltres after Libero, while also being and it is also effective at nullifying the possibility of other walls like Buzzwole and Amoonguss Terastallizing add an l against it. High Jump Kick is a necessary coverage option to let Cinderace reliably KO Mega Tyranitar and Ting-Lu. Cinderace fits best on hyper offense teams that benefit from its ability to break open defensive cores; as Cinderace is often revenge killed by faster Pokemon such as Sand Rush Excadrill and Choice Scarf Latias, other Pokemon that can take advantage of these revenge killers like Dragon Dance Gyarados, Swords Dance Scizor, and Air Balloon Aegislash become valuable teammates, as they also appreciate Cinderace's innate ability to threaten common walls such as Buzzwole and Skarmory. Mega Gyarados in particular helps overwhelm Unaware Clefable and Skeledirge for Cinderace, which would otherwise stop it from being able to safely setup set up against them. Cinderace also appreciates having dual screens support from Grimmsnarl to improve its setup opportunities, while anti-hazard anti-entry hazard options such as Excadrill and Iron Treads can help alleviate Cinderace's crippling Stealth Rock weakness.


[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/arishem.546157/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pubo.535121/
Grammar checked by:
user link here
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wrathoftheleopard.511181/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ut.523866/
GP 1/1! Please credit wotl as well.

you missed one instance of Terastalizing (it has two L's), and one instance of a single noun to plural verb. But great check overall!!!

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