Close End against Bug Catcher

Ok, this was the 4th battle against the same guy with his mono bug team in a row, so i decided to make a warstory, as his team is pretty uncommon and the battle was well balanced.

Don´t Run with Scizors Team: (in no special Order)
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My Team:(see above)
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I removed all Lefties Recovery, Nicknames and Commentarys. The last one because an anonym Spectator wanted it this way :P


Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause

Don't Run With Scizors sent out Shuckle
Gandalf_testing sent out Celebi
Celebi used Stealth Rock
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Shuckle used Stealth Rock

Shuckle cant touch Celebi, so I just set up Rocks. I have a Spinner, so no problemes here.

Don't Run With Scizors switched in Heracross
Pointed stones dug into Heracross
Heracross lost 12% of its health
Gandalf_testing switched in Gengar
Pointed stones dug into Gengar
Gengar lost 12% of its health

I dont know anymore why I didnt just U-turn away. Anyway, Gengar is capable of surviving all attacks Heracross could have, so i just fire off a Hypnosis.

Gengar used Hypnosis
Heracross fell asleep!
Heracross is fast asleep!


Don't Run With Scizors switched in Venomoth
Pointed stones dug into Venomoth.
Venomoth lost 25% of its health.
Gandalf_testing switched in Heatran
Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
Heatran lost 12% of its health.

Normally i wouldnt have known that Venomoth is faster with 90 Base, but as I played him before, I let Metagross fell asleep. Heatran is too important in this situation, it can OHKO all of his pokemon besides Shuckle, who gets 2HKOd and cant do much back.

Gandalf_testing switched in Metagross
Pointed stones dug into Metagross.
Metagross lost 6% of its health.
Venomoth used Sleep Powder.
Metagross fell asleep!


In the case of a Miss, I would have used Bullet Punch.
Now back to a Sweeper to destroy the upcoming Sub...


Gandalf_testing switched in Gengar
Pointed stones dug into Gengar
Gengar lost 12% of its health
Venomoth used Substitute
Venomoth lost 25% of its health
Venomoth made a substitute!

So far i predicted correct. If i look back, it was a stupid move to switch in Gengar, with Scizor having Roost and Pursuit...

jrrrrrrr has entered the room
Gengar used Thunderbolt
The substitute took damage for Venomoth!
Venomoth's substitute faded!
Venomoth used Baton Pass
Don't Run With Scizors switched in Scizor
Pointed stones dug into Scizor
Scizor lost 12% of its health

I should have known it...

Gengar used Thunderbolt.
Scizor lost 33% of its health.
Scizor used Pursuit.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 75% of its health.
Gandalf_testing's Gengar fainted.

Time to bring in Heatran for a free kill. I dont know why I havent done this before :(

5:6 for my opponent

Gandalf_testing switched in Heatran
Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Erik-Testing has entered the room.
Heatran used Fire Blast.
It's super effective!
Scizor lost 67% of its health.
Don't Run With Scizors's Scizor fainted.
Heatran lost 10% of its health.

5:5

Don't Run With Scizors switched in Shuckle
Pointed stones dug into Shuckle
Shuckle lost 25% of its health
Heatran used Fire Blast
Shuckle lost 53% of its health
Heatran lost 10% of its health
Shuckle used Rest
Shuckle fell asleep!
Shuckle restored 78% of its health.

I guess he wants to bring my Heatran down with the LO recoil. I lose 20% to Recoil instead of getting hit by Seismic Toss and losing 10%, so it was effectively a win xD

Heatran used Fire Blast
Shuckle lost 55% of its health
Heatran lost 10% of its health
Shuckle is fast asleep!

Heatran used Fire Blast
Shuckle lost 51% of its health.
Don't Run With Scizors's Shuckle fainted.
Heatran lost 10% of its health

5:4 for me


Don't Run With Scizors switched in Yanmega
Pointed stones dug into Yanmega
Yanmega lost 50% of its health.
Gandalf_testing switched in Celebi
Pointed stones dug into Celebi.
Celebi lost 12% of its health.
Yanmega used Hidden Power.
It's not very effective...
Celebi lost 10% of its health.


I dont know why he didnt switched Yanmega in earlier. I know it has HP [Ground], which would kill Heatran regardlessly. By this time, i just offered Celebi, it cant do much against a Monobug team anyway...

Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
It's super effective!
Celebi lost 84% of its health.
Gandalf_testing's Celebi fainted.

4:4

Gandalf_testing switched in Garchomp
Pointed stones dug into Garchomp.
Garchomp lost 6% of its health.

Garchomp is my only Pokemon left standing a Chance against Yanmega, as Gengar got trapped to death and Metagross is asleep. So I expect an offer on his side. Luckily i have got Rocks down, which will easily cripple/kill Yanmega by the next switch, depending on its HP Stat.

Gandalf_testing switched in Garchomp
Pointed stones dug into Garchomp
Garchomp lost 6% of its health
Don't Run With Scizors switched in Heracross
Pointed stones dug into Heracross
Kagizlu lost 12% of its health
Garchomp used Fire Fang.
It's super effective!
Heracross lost 67% of its health.

As i predictet. I know it is scarfed, so i have to hope it keeps sleeping. If not, my Garchomp will easily die to any on Yanmegas Attacks. I would have switched another Pokemon in, but I had nothing left that would survive 2 CCs. So i just stayed in and prayed to god....

Heracross woke up!
Heracross used Close Combat
Garchomp lost 65% of its health
Heracross's defence was lowered
Heracross's special defence was lowered
Garchomp used Fire Fang
It's super effective!
Heracross lost 9% of its health
Heracross fainted

...and got disappointed :(
Now i need to play very carefully, to not get swept by Yanmega.

4:3 for me

Don't Run With Scizors switched in Venomoth
Pointed stones dug into Venomoth.
Venomoth lost 25% of its health.
Garchomp used Fire Fang.
It's super effective!
Venomoth lost 43% of its health.
Don't Run With Scizors's Venomoth fainted.

Another offer, maybe he hoped I would use Outrage or Miss with FF.

4:2 in my favor

Don't Run With Scizors switched in Forretress
Pointed stones dug into Forretress.
Forretress lost 12% of its health.


At this point i thought Yanmega would die on the next switch thanks to SR. I expected him to use Rapid Spin, and Sweep my team with Yanmega. So the only chance would be a crit or flinch with FF

Garchomp used Fire Fang.
It's super effective!
Forretress lost 55% of its health.
Forretress used Explosion.
Garchomp lost 29% of its health.
Gandalf_testing's Garchomp fainted.
Don't Run With Scizors's Forretress fainted.

3:1

I forgot that Yanmega needs to survive one round to get the speed boost and outspeed Garchomp, so this was his only way to win, as it lacks Protect. Crap, I could have won. But I still hope to get support from Lady Luck^^


Don't Run With Scizors switched in Yanmega
Gandalf_testing switched in Heatran
Pointed stones dug into Yanmega
Yanmega lost 50% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Yanmega used Hidden Power.
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 23% of its health.
Gandalf_testing's Heatran fainted.

He could have done that 17924 turns earlier xD

2:1

Gandalf_testing switched in Metagross
Pointed stones dug into Metagross.
Metagross lost 6% of its health.

Ok, i can still win. Metagross can survive 1 or 2 Hits, and i have Bullet Punch while his only Pokemon left has 1 HP.

Metagross is fast asleep!
Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
Metagross lost 46% of its health.

One turn left. Wake up Bitch!!!


Metagross is fast asleep!
Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
Metagross lost 42% of its health.
Gandalf_testing's Metagross fainted.

Too Bad, Lady Luck disappoints me another time....I have lost at this point


1:1

Gandalf_testing switched in Starmie
Pointed stones dug into Starmie.
Starmie lost 12% of its health.
Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
It's super effective!
Starmie lost 87% of its health.
Gandalf_testing's Starmie fainted.
Don't Run With Scizors wins!


Props:
~Yanmega for slaughtering 4/6 of my team. Guys, never forget to pack a Blissey into your team^^
~My opponent fpr having a cool Team
~Me for writing this Story xD

Slops:
~Lady Luc for letting me lose another time. My ranking was on its lowest point back then, only 1505 :(
~All of my pokemon besides Garchomp and Heatran for doing nothing


ok, if you have any constructive criticism please post it, even if it is my crappy english :P
 
Originally Posted by Fat Gandalf the blue
Heatran used Fire Blast.
Shuckle lost 55% of its health.
Heatran lost 10% of its health.
Suhckle is fast asleep!

Heatran used Fire Blast.
Fuckle: lost 51% of its health.

Uh yes you might want to just read over the document again to avoid problems like these.

It's decent, but please bold the commentary or log rather than italicize it- it is easier to read that way. Why did you just leave Celebi in on Yanmega when you knew it had Bug Buzz?

Aber es ist nicht schwer zu verstanden. Ich wusste, dieser Schreiben konnen schwer (zu schreiben) sein. Deshalb dachte ich du hast vielen Stunden uber diesem Post arbeititen.
 
I changed the copied text. I read over the document after finishing my commentary, but I dont see everything :P
I changed the commentary´s colour to viloet directly after posting it, I forgot to do it before, sorry.

I left Celebi in to die as his entire team is full of bug attacks, which do 4 times the normal damage on Celebi. And i needed to get Garchomp in safely, as Air Slash/Bug Buzz would have 2HKOd.

Btw: Your german is pretty crappy, is my english comparaible bad? xD
 
Oh, yeah, I realized that just after i submitted my post. Had no idea you faced OmegaDonut.

No, your english is pretty good for a second language, it's just me, who learned German in America. I figured i had to practice it sometime, and I'm not bored enough to do my homework. Also those stupid school teachers don't teach me about pokemans in German =/

Edit: German is similar to English so it isn't the hardest but it is an interesting challenge.
The hardest part is all the prepositions and article changes that go along with the verb and subject of the sentence. I don't have 7 versions of "the" in English, you know?.

I can imagine it's hard to remember not to capitalize all the nouns in English.
 
@timw06: No, I was just confused why someone plays with such a strange Nick xD

@Kingdrom: Lol yes, i wonder too why I dont learn words like "Draco Meteor" or "Sweeper" in´my english lessons, far more useful then other stuff. Pokemon on the other Hand teaches me a lot of Vocabularys I need In the reality xD
Btw: Is German hard to learn? Our english teacher always says its ways harder to learn then French/English.

@Topic: I read through the Log again and edited some spelling mistakes

Edit/: I sometimes capitalize the Nouns, sometimes not. I dont know why xD It just looks strange when there are no capitalized words except the first word^^
 
Wow, shows how deadly Yanmega can be against a team without Blissey on it.
I liked the mono-bug team, especially the use of Venomoth.
 
Uh yes you might want to just read over the document again to avoid problems like these.

Shuckle had leftovers

It's decent, but please bold the commentary or log rather than italicize it- it is easier to read that way. Why did you just leave Celebi in on Yanmega when you knew it had Bug Buzz?

He wanted a free switch in with his next poke.

I liked the warstory, but it was "kill, switch, kill, switch" near the end.
 
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