Criticise my team please

soundecho

Yanmega @ Wise Glasses
Speed Boost
4 Def 252 SpA 252 Spd
Protect
Air Slash
Bug Buzz
Hypnosis

Protect if scouting choice attacks, Hypnosis if I have a speed boost or I think someone is try and gonna set up. Air Slash and Bug buzz are for attacks.

Gardevoir @ Leftovers
Trace
252 HP 48 SpA 176 SpD 32 Spd
WIsh
WoW
Psychic
Focus Blast

Basically, this get a free switch against most of my main counters, Heatran for Yanmega, Bronzong for Mamoswine and Focus Blast on the switch as things that try and take advantage of WoW etc. Houndoom, Heatran and for Tyranitar and Weaville should they try and switch in or WoW if I'm facing an opposing heatran.


Mamoswine @ Life Orb
Snow Cloak
64 Hp 252 Att 192 Spd
Ice Shard
Ice Fang
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Basically physical sweeper. Absorbs T-wave that annoy my team.

Metagross @ Leftovers/Life Orb (I alternate)
Clear body
252 Hp 172 Att 40 Def 40 SpD
Rest
Sleep Talk
Meteor Mash
Earthquake

It absorbs sleep and isn't useless while it's sleeping so it's all good.

Duskinoir @ Expert Belt
Pressure
252 Hp 252 Att
WoW
Focus Punch
Ice Punch
Shadow Sneak

WoW to fool people into thinking it's not a CB noir, Focus Punch for those annoying Blisseys. Ice Punch for dragons and shadow sneak for those ghost/psychic sweepers.

Magnezone @ Leftovers
Magnet Pull
172 HP 252 SpA 84 Spd
Thunderbolt
Magnet Rise
Substitute
HP fire

This is also counters bronzong, if I predict a Gyro Ball and metagross has absorbed sleep already so Magnet Rise and HP fire away. Sub to block status/leech seed.
Criticise Away
 
Yanmega @ Wise Glasses
Speed Boost
4 Def 252 SpA 252 Spd
Protect
Air Slash
Bug Buzz
Hypnosis

Protect if scouting choice attacks, Hypnosis if I have a speed boost or I think someone is try and gonna set up. Air Slash and Bug buzz are for attacks.

That set looks good, but I want you to change that item *nods* change it to Yache Berry. Why? because it will protect you from some Ice Shards that come your way. I've ran the Yache Berry set, and it worked great. Hopefully your Yanmega is in a Modest nature.

Gardevoir @ Leftovers
Trace
252 HP 48 SpA 176 SpD 32 Spd
WIsh
WoW
Psychic
Focus Blast

Basically, this get a free switch against most of my main counters, Heatran for Yanmega, Bronzong for Mamoswine and Focus Blast on the switch as things that try and take advantage of WoW etc. Houndoom, Heatran and for Tyranitar and Weaville should they try and switch in or WoW if I'm facing an opposing heatran.

Hmm... I've never seen Gardevoir used often anymore but I guess this set is alright. I will let someone else criticize this set. Never really used Gardevoir.

Mamoswine @ Life Orb
Snow Cloak
64 Hp 252 Att 192 Spd
Ice Shard
Ice Fang
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Basically physical sweeper. Absorbs T-wave that annoy my team.

Ice Shard and Ice Fang? why have both? find another move that gives you more coverage. I've never used a Mamoswine before, so I can't help you here.

Metagross @ Leftovers/Life Orb (I alternate)
Clear body
252 Hp 172 Att 40 Def 40 SpD
Rest
Sleep Talk
Meteor Mash
Earthquake

It absorbs sleep and isn't useless while it's sleeping so it's all good.

This Metagross looks good. Can't complain about it.

Duskinoir @ Expert Belt
Pressure
252 Hp 252 Att
WoW
Focus Punch
Ice Punch
Shadow Sneak

WoW to fool people into thinking it's not a CB noir, Focus Punch for those annoying Blisseys. Ice Punch for dragons and shadow sneak for those ghost/psychic sweepers.

Remove some HP EVs and spread them into its special defense. Perhaps 158 HP and 100 Sp Def?

Magnezone @ Leftovers
Magnet Pull
172 HP 252 SpA 84 Spd
Thunderbolt
Magnet Rise
Substitute
HP fire

This is also counters bronzong, if I predict a Gyro Ball and metagross has absorbed sleep already so Magnet Rise and HP fire away. Sub to block status/leech seed.

HP Fire? I've seen many carry HP Water. You could always stop the Bronzong by just T-Bolting.

Criticise Away

Your team is lacking speed, you will get road kill by some teams, on the other hand I can see your team winning some battles.
 
That set looks good, but I want you to change that item *nods* change it to Yache Berry. Why? because it will protect you from some Ice Shards that come your way. I've ran the Yache Berry set, and it worked great. Hopefully your Yanmega is in a Modest nature.

Will do. It is Modest and I forgot to list my other natures as well.

Gardevoir- Modest
Magnezone - Timid
Mamoswine - Adamant
Metagross - Adamant
Duskinoir - Adamant

Ice Shard and Ice Fang? why have both? find another move that gives you more coverage. I've never used a Mamoswine before, so I can't help you here.

I'll try Blizzard and run a neutral and some SpA EV's for Skarm. Other than that, no other moves to run.

This Metagross looks good. Can't complain about it.

Wouldn't change this for the world. Sweeped last 3 pokemon, twp of them being Skarmory and Hippowdon :O.

Remove some HP EVs and spread them into its special defense. Perhaps 158 HP and 100 Sp Def?\

I'll try this out

HP Fire? I've seen many carry HP Water. You could always stop the Bronzong by just T-Bolting.

O..o, never thought of that.


 
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