1v1 Custap Galarian Moltres [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

[LongRat]

[SET]
Custap Berry (Moltres-Galar) @ Custap Berry
Ability: Berserk
Modest Nature
EVs: 176 HP / 216 Def / 116 SpA
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Endure
- Nasty Plot

[SET COMMENTS]
* Galarian Moltres uses its Custap Berry to win matchups against faster Pokemon.
* Nasty Plot should be used to counter foes that set up against Galarian Moltres like Corviknight, Pecharunt, and Cresselia, as well as foes that may hold Weakness Policy, such as Metagross.
* Endure enables Galarian Moltres to survive a lethal hit and activate its Custap Berry, allowing it to beat Pokemon like Meowscarada, Chien-Pao, and Custap Berry Skeledirge.
* The defensive EVs allow Galarian Moltres to survive an Outrage from Choice Band Adamant Haxorus while also taking a Hyper Beam from Modest Porygon-Z.
* Galarian Moltres struggles to beat specially bulky Pokemon such as Ursaluna and Assault Vest Hoopa-U, as well as Pokemon that resist its moves like Primarina, Raging Bolt, and Hisuian Goodra. Therefore, pairing it with Pokemon that can beat these threats such as Meowscarada, Corviknight, and Ogerpon-W will be beneficial.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[SET]
Moltres-Galar @ Custap Berry
Ability: Berserk
Modest Nature
EVs: 176 HP / 216 Def / 116 SpA
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Endure
- Nasty Plot

[SET COMMENTS]
* Galarian Moltres (yeah) uses its Custap Berry to gain matchups against faster Pokemon, allowing it to use Nasty Plot to help against bulky Pokemon it intends to 2HKO and to avoid activating Weakness Policies (when mentioning an item you always use name of it, not any plural or singular variation, here i would change "Weakness Policies" to "any Weakness Policy", but it's up to

).
* Fiery Wrath is reliable STAB to use against Pokemon such as Corviknight (mentioning corv here but not in the nasty plot point seems to me like you recommend that you should spam fiery wrath against corv, which is obviously not the case, if you could reword this a tiny bit would be greatly appreciated, you can also just remove the fiery wrath point entirely if you feel it's kind of pointless given that you would mention the same 4 mons that you mention in the nasty plot point, but again, up to

), Pecharunt, Metagross, and Cresselia.
* Hurricane can be utilized against non-Substitute Ogerpon-W, Volcarona, Annihilape, and both Urshifu formes. (you can also remove the hurricane point, as it's kind of self-explanitory for the most part)
* Nasty Plot should be used against foes like Metagross, Pecharunt, and Cresselia.
* Endure enables Galarian Moltres to live a hit and activate its Custap Berry, allowing it to beat Choice Scarf Regidrago, Meowscarada, Chien-Pao, and Custap Berry Skeledirge.
* The defensive EVs allow Galarian Moltres to live an Outrage from Choice Band Adamant Haxorus while also taking a Hyper Beam from Modest Porygon-Z.
* Galarian Moltres struggles to beat specially bulky Pokemon such as Ursaluna and Assault Vest Hoopa-U, as well as Pokemon that resist its moves like Primarina, Raging Bolt and Hisuian Goodra. Therefore, pPairing it with Pokemon that can beat there threats such as Meowscarada, Corviknight, and Ogerpon-W therefore will be beneficial.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/longrat.583189/

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qc 1/2, gj, ping in qc if problem

 

[LongRat]

QC 1 implemented exactly on time

 

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[SET]
Custap Berry (Moltres-Galar) @ Custap Berry
Ability: Berserk
Modest Nature
EVs: 176 HP / 216 Def / 116 SpA
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Endure
- Nasty Plot

[SET COMMENTS]
* Galarian Moltres uses its Custap Berry to gain matchups against faster Pokemon, allowing it to use Nasty Plot to help against bulky Pokemon it intends to 2HKO and to avoid activating a Weakness Policy.
* Nasty Plot should be used against foes that setup alongside Galarian Moltres like Corviknight, Metagross, Pecharunt, and Cresselia, as well as foes who may hold Weakness Policy, such as Metagross.
* Endure enables Galarian Moltres to live a lethal hit and activate its Custap Berry, allowing it to beat Pokemon like Meowscarada, Chien-Pao, and Custap Berry Skeledirge.
* The defensive EVs allow Galarian Moltres to live an Outrage from Choice Band Adamant Haxorus while also taking a Hyper Beam from Modest Porygon-Z.
* Galarian Moltres struggles to beat specially bulky Pokemon such as Ursaluna and Assault Vest Hoopa-U, as well as Pokemon that resist its moves like Primarina, Raging Bolt and Hisuian Goodra. Therefore, pairing it with Pokemon that can beat these threats such as Meowscarada, Corviknight, and Ogerpon-W will be beneficial.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/longrat.583189/

Quality Checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/nuxl.149971/
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[LongRat]

qc 2/2 implemented, ready for GP Team

 

[autumn]

1/1 GP Team done

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[SET]
Custap Berry (Moltres-Galar) @ Custap Berry
Ability: Berserk
Modest Nature
EVs: 176 HP / 216 Def / 116 SpA
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Endure
- Nasty Plot

[SET COMMENTS]
* Galarian Moltres uses its Custap Berry to gain win matchups against faster Pokemon, allowing it to use and Nasty Plot to can help against bulky Pokemon it intends to 2HKO and to avoid activating a their Weakness Policy. separated the structure a bit because these two ideas don't seem to be connected. if they are connected, this needs a bit more explanation
* Nasty Plot should be used to counter foes that setup set up against Galarian Moltres like Corviknight, Pecharunt, and Cresselia, as well as foes who that may hold Weakness Policy, such as Metagross. you mention np/wp again after it ebing in that first point, so do you actually need it in the first point at all?
* Endure enables Galarian Moltres to live survive a lethal hit and activate its Custap Berry, allowing it to beat Pokemon like Meowscarada, Chien-Pao, and Custap Berry Skeledirge.
* The defensive EVs allow Galarian Moltres to live survive an Outrage from Choice Band Adamant Haxorus while also taking a Hyper Beam from Modest Porygon-Z.
* Galarian Moltres struggles to beat specially bulky Pokemon such as Ursaluna and Assault Vest Hoopa-U, as well as Pokemon that resist its moves like Primarina, Raging Bolt, (AC) and Hisuian Goodra. Therefore, pairing it with Pokemon that can beat these threats such as Meowscarada, Corviknight, and Ogerpon-W will be beneficial.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/longrat.583189/

Quality Checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/nuxl.149971/

Grammar Checked by:

 

[LongRat]

done