VGC Dondozo [GP 1/1]

Commander Sweeper (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Steel / Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 228 Atk / 4 Def / 36 SpD / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Wave Crash
- Earthquake / Heavy Slam
- Order Up / Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
- Combining with Tatsugiri-C allows Dondozo to become a threatening sweeper, being able to pose a significant threat to the majority of teams. Its significant bulk and attacking prowess allow it to rip through unprepared teams and make it hard to remove without consistent answers.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move, providing a great source of damage to neutral targets such as Gholdengo and Annihilape. Earthquake provides a spread attack that can get around redirection users such as Electabuzz, Magmar, Clefable, and Amoonguss.
- Order Up provides a way for Dondozo to boost its Attack without Coaching, allowing it to become even more threatening if the opponent attempts to play around it passively. Order Up also provides a way to hit Dragon-types like Dragonite and Baxcalibur.
- Heavy Slam allows Dondozo to hit Fairy-types that can otherwise check it like Primarina, Alolan Ninetales and Clefable, and it can be boosted even further by Tera Steel.
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to become immune to Clear Smog from opposing Amoonguss as well as boosting the power of Dondozo's Heavy Slam, allowing it to OHKO physically defensive Amoonguss at +3. Tera Grass allows Dondozo to become immune to Spore from Amoonguss as well as allowing Dondozo to resist Ground-type attacks from Garchomp, Ursaluna, and Ursaluna-B.
- Unaware is used to ignore setup threats such as Volcarona, Gholdengo and Archaludon who could otherwise give Dondozo some issues, it also allows Dondozo to defeat other Commander Dondozo.
- Leftovers provides Dondozo with a little bit more longevity, as its naturally high bulk paired with the +2 Defense and Special Defense boosts lets it shrug off attacks and heal them off, and this recovery tends to rack up very quickly if it's alternating between attacking and using Protect.
- The Speed investment on this set allows it to outspeed maximum Speed Garchomp after combining with Tatsugiri-C and threaten it greatly with Wave Crash or Order Up. The Attack investment allows +3 Tera Steel Heavy Slam to get a OHKO on physically defensive Amoonguss and allows +1 Earthquake to 2HKO most Sitrus Berry Incineroar.






Bulky Yawn (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison / Bug / Grass
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Wave Crash / Liquidation
- Yawn
- Protect
- Fissure

[SET COMMENTS]
- This Dondozo set aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece that is used without Tatsugiri while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options.
- Yawn is Dondozo's main supporting tool, allowing it to force switches or put the enemy to sleep depending on what it goes for. This can put the opponent into an awkward position, which generates free turns for your partner Pokemon.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move. Alternatively, Liquidation can be used to circumvent the recoil of Wave Crash and give Dondozo more longevity.
- Fissure is used in situations where Dondozo isn't providing any pressure on the field, as Dondozo tends to be extremely passive against Pokemon naturally immune to its sleep move like Electabuzz and Gholdengo or Pokemon that like to pivot a lot naturally and don't mind taking its Water-type attack like Amoonguss, Porygon2, and other supportive Dondozo. Fissure gives Dondozo a way to provide pressure against these Pokemon that can normally wall it, and since Dondozo is so bulky, a miss often won't lose you the game.
- Unaware allows Dondozo to check setup sweepers that could otherwise beat it such as Volcarona, Gholdengo, Kingambit and Archaludon, allowing it to take their boosted attacks and force them out with Yawn.
- Tera Poison allows Dondozo to resist Grass-type attacks as well as gaining important resistances to Fighting and Poison, allowing it to wall Sneasler. Tera Bug and Grass allow Dondozo to resist Ground-type attacks rather than being weak to it, unlike Tera Poison; while Tera Grass allows it to gain an immunity to Rage Powder and Spore from Amoonguss, Tera Bug allows Dondozo to not be weak to Ice-type moves from Alolan Ninetales and Baxcalbur as well as Poison-type moves from Sneasler.
- The EVs on this set allow Dondozo to survive two Electro Shots from Archaludon after Dondozo uses Protect for a turn if Grassy Terrain is up.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
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- The sweeper set tends to be strong on hyper offensive teams that can force trades, weakening Dondozo's checks into range of its attacks. Dondozo can also be used to weaken foes early-game, putting the opposing team into range of an alternative late-game sweeper like Gholdengo or Indeedee-M. Spread moves are extremely strong with Dondozo, as they allow it to put an opposing team into range of Dondozo's attacks. Speed control such as Tailwind is also strong with Dondozo, as it allows it to outspeed threats like Sneasler and Dragapult. Meanwhile, bulky Dondozo provides a defensive Water-type that can disrupt foes by putting them to sleep, and it's helpful to enable its setup partners.
- Tatsugiri-C is a mandatory partner for sweeper Dondozo, as with Commander, it combines with Dondozo to give it a +2 boost to every stat. Talonflame is a strong partner for Dondozo, damaging the Grass-types like Rillaboom and Amoonguss that might give Dondozo issues as well as providing Tailwind speed control that allows it and its team to pick up KOs on Pokemon they would otherwise be slower against, which is beneficial for Dondozo's hyper offense-focused gameplan. Another strong partner is Choice Scarf Annihilape. With Coaching, Annilhilape allows Dondozo to becomes even more threatening than it already is. Indeedee-M and Sneasler are very strong partners for this Dondozo variant as well; the combination of them can apply pressure to some of Dondozo's checks like Primarina, Rillaboom, and Amoonguss as well as applying significant pressure to Incineroar, which could otherwise give Dondozo some trouble, and the Speed boost gained from activating Psychic Seed lets Unburden Sneasler become the fastest Pokemon in the metagame, allowing it to provide significant pressure and make room for a Dondozo win later in the game.
- Common partners for support Dondozo include bulky setup Pokemon like Kingambit, Gholdengo, and Volcarona, which tend to struggle against Fire-types, which Dondozo can beat, and in turn, they resist Grass-type attacks for Dondozo and appreciate the free turns Dondozo can generate with Yawn in order to setup. Rillaboom is another strong partner for this Dondozo set, allowing it to get free turns to use Yawn with Fake Out, providing Dondozo with Grassy Terrain to boost its longevity even further, and switching into Grass-types that are used to check Dondozo, such as opposing Rillaboom and Amoonguss. Dondozo also helps Rillaboom in matchups against Fire-types, which often give it trouble. Dondozo also appreciates being paired with Follow Me users like Magmar and Electabuzz, as they can redirect Spore from Amoonguss, hamper it with Taunt, or, in Magmar's case, threaten it with a super effective Overheat. They also help to redirect attacks that Dondozo doesn't want to take, like Electro Shot from Archaludon and Wood Hammer from Rillaboom.
- Sweeper Dondozo has a lot of trouble with Haze Primarina and Clear Smog Amoonguss, which threaten to remove its stat boosts and make it a sitting duck. Because of this, many of Dondozo's partners, like Talonflame and Sneasler, are tasked with pressuring them early-game so that they do not have an opportunity to get rid of Dondozo's stat boosts. The pivoting core of Incineroar and Amoonguss also causes Dondozo some issues, as Amoonguss can put Dondozo to sleep with Spore, and Incineroar can use Intimidate and Parting Shot to drop Dondozo's Attack greatly. Pokemon like Choice Scarf Annihilape and Indeedee-M can help solve this issue, as Annihilape can use Final Gambit to remove a defensive piece on teams using Incineroar + Amoonguss such as Porygon2 while being able to OHKO Incineroar with Close Combat and boost off Intimidate via Defiant, while Indeedee-M immediately pressures Amoonguss with Expanding Force and blocks Fake Out from Incineroar with Psychic Terrain, making it easier for Dondozo to knock out Incineroar with a super effective Wave Crash.
- Bulky Dondozo is checked by Pokemon that can hit it for super effective damage, like Rillaboom and Archaludon, or give it trouble by switching around it and hindering it with status or stat drops, such as Amoonguss, Incineroar, and other supportive Dondozo. Electabuzz and Magmar are other checks to Dondozo, as they are immune to Yawn with Vital Spirit and can allow room for a partner to pressure Dondozo with Follow Me; additionally, Magmar can burn Dondozo with Will-O-Wisp, and Electabuzz can hit it super effectively with Thunderbolt. Your own forms of redirection, such as Electabuzz and Magmar, as well as some Pokemon that naturally threaten Grass-types, like Sneasler, Volcarona, and Baxcalibur, all make for great partners to Dondozo. Kingambit also helps deter Intimidate from Incineroar and can use Rillaboom to set up Swords Dance and sweep. Gholdengo can also set up on Rillaboom while naturally being immune to Spore thanks to Good As Gold.

Strategy Comments
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- Commander-boosted Dondozo's main job is to act as either a wallbreaker or a sweeper, depending on the situation. Dondozo can often win the game on the spot if placed in the right position, so choosing when to combine Dondozo with Tatsugiri-C is critical. Dondozo can often be used to weaken an opposing team to the point where its partners, like Indeedee-M, can clean up the game; conversely, Dondozo's teammates can weaken the opposition to the point where it can clean up the game with its powerful boosted attacks. Meanwhile, bulky Dondozo's main role is to act as a bulky support Pokemon that can force switches with Yawn, putting its foes in awkward positions by forcing them to either switch out or fall asleep, which allows room for Dondozo's partners, such as Kingambit, Gholdengo, and Volcarona, to set up and threaten the opponent. This is often accomplished by bringing in Dondozo against foes that it walls and using Yawn on them.
- Sweeper Dondozo teams often involve making smart early-game trades and identifying whether a threat is important to keep alive after Dondozo comes in and goes down or whether it is more important for it to do damage or KO a threat to Dondozo, allowing it to get a late-game sweep. It is also important to identify when Tatsugiri-C should come in to combine with Dondozo, as once this is done, they are fully committed and can no longer switch, making Dondozo vulnerable to being played around and answered. Dondozo should come in once enough damage has been done to the enemy team or in order to deal damage to the opposing team to allow a late-game cleanup from one of Dondozo's partners. Meanwhile, bulky Dondozo is strong both early-game and late-game, depending on the situation. Dondozo tends to use Yawn for a lot of the game, and its high bulk allows it to stick around for many turns at a time. Dondozo can also be used to provide important chip damage against foes that may threaten its partners, such as Incineroar and Volcarona, which gives Dondozo's setup partners more room to break through them. Dondozo can also force opposing setup threats, such as Kingambit, Volcarona, and Archaludon, to switch out, which makes room for its own setup ally to get in the game and threaten a sweep.
- Sweeper Dondozo is checked by every form of Amoonguss, especially Clear Smog Amoonguss, as well as Haze Primarina. Forcing early-game trades to force these pieces on the board followed by dealing significant damage to them to clean up with Dondozo is important. It is also important to understand that Dondozo should not come in every matchup, as it is just too hard to get value with Dondozo in many of them. It is vital to identify whether or not Dondozo is a good Pokemon to bring into the match with the team you are facing up against. If the opponent has enough ways to threaten Dondozo and severly hinder its progress or if Dondozo struggled to get value in a previous game, leaving Dondozo behind should be considered. Dondozo is also often checked by Rillaboom, using Fake Out to pivot around it and threatening super effective damage with Wood Hammer. It is important to force damage onto Rillaboom to allow Dondozo to pick up the KO on it or soften it up with Dondozo to allow a teammate to pick it up. The core of Incineroar and Amoonguss is also really strong against Dondozo, so it is important to limit switching and pressure Incineroar as much as possible. Softening up Incineroar and Amoonguss with early-game pressure from the likes of Indeedee-M, Annihilape, and any other offensive partners you might have is important, and putting yourself in a favorable position against a weakened Amoonguss to KO it or its partner Incineroar is very important as well. On the other hand, bulky Dondozo is often checked by Rillaboom; however, many of Dondozo's Grass-resistant partners appreciate the ability to take advantage of Rillaboom to either set up in Volcarona and Kingambit's case or hit it super effectively in Sneasler's case. Another one of Dondozo's checks is Amoonguss, which can take advantage of Dondozo's passivity and incapacitate it with Spore, and it often doesn't mind Yawn because with Regenerator, it often likes switching out anyway. Dondozo can take advantage of it by using its partner Electabuzz or Magmar to exploit Amoonguss, using their Spore immunity to play around it and allow their sweeper to set up with smart positioning. Electabuzz can also disable Amoonguss with Taunt, which Dondozo appreciates, while Magmar can threaten Amoonguss with super effective damage, which weakens it enough to be taken advantage of late-game.


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Sweeper (Dondozo)@ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 20 HP / 228 Atk / 4 Def / 20 SpD / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Wave Crash
- Earthquake / Heavy Slam
- Order Up / Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
- Combining with Tatsugiri allows Dondozo to become a threatening sweeper, being able to pose a significant threat to the majority of teams. Its significant bulk and attacking prowess allow it to rip through unprepared teams, and make it hard to remove without consistent answers.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move, providing a great source of damage to neutral targets such as Gholdengo and Annihilape. Earthquake provides a spread attack that can get around redirection users such as Electabuzz and Magmar
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to become immune to Clear Smog from opposing Amoonguss, as well as boosting the power of Dondozos Heavy Slam. Tera Grass allows Dondozo to become immune to spore from other Amoonguss, as well as allowing Dondozo to resist ground type attacks from Garchomp, Ursaluna and Ursaluna-Bloodmoon after using its Tera.
- The speed investment on this set allows it to outspeed 252+ Garchomp and threaten it greatly with Wave Crash or Order Up. The attack investment allows +3 Tera Steel Heavy Slam to get a OHKO on Physically defensive Amoonguss, and allows it to 2HKO most Sitrus Berry Incineroar at +1. defensive investment does what? 20hp + 20spdef serves what purpose? you also haven't explained the use of lefties.




[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
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- Synergy: This set tends to be strong on Hyper Offensive teams that can force trades, weakening Dondozos checks into range of its attacks. Dondozo can also be used to weaken opponents in the early game, putting the opposing team into range of an alternative late game sweeper like Gholdengo or Indeedee-M. Spread moves are extremely strong with Dondozo as they as they allow you to put an opposing team into range of Dondozos attacks. Speed control such as Tailwind is also strong with Dondozo, as it allows it to outspeed threats like Sneasler or Dragapult, as well as allowing its partner teammates partner makes it sound like you have a mon next to dozo helping it which isn't true due to commander to deal damage or take kos on faster opponents it normally couldn't.
- Specific Partners: Tatsugiri is a mandatory partner for this set, as with Commander, it combines with Dondozo to give it a +2 in every stat. Talonflame is a strong partner for Dondozo, damaging the Grass types like Rillaboom and Amoonguss that might give Dondozo issues, as well as providing Tailwind speed control that allows it and its team to pick up KOs they would otherwise be slower than, which is beneficial for Dondozos hyper offense focused gameplan. Another strong partner is Choice Scarf Annihilape. With Coaching, it allows Dondozo to becomes even more threatening than it already is, notably OHKOing physically defensive Amoonguss after 1 Coaching with Tera Steel Heavy Slam after the boost from Tatsugiri. Indeedee-M and Sneasler are very strong partners for this Dondozo as well, the combination of them beating Amoonguss and RIllaboom ehhhh, I can see the logic but rilla changes the terrain and amoon can just tera, perhaps focus on their other traits. the incin point is fine as you word it as pressure, as well as applying significant pressure to Incineroar which could otherwise just a bit of clarity give Dondozo some trouble, and the speed boost from Sneaslers Unburden by activating Psychic Seed let it become the fastest Pokemon in the metagame, allowing it to provide significant pressure and make room for a Dondozo win later in the game.
- Weakness Coverage: This set has a lot of trouble with Haze Primarina and Clear Smog Amoonguss, which threaten to remove its stat boosts and make it a sitting duck. Because of this, many of Dondozos partners, like Talonflame and Sneasler, are tasked with pressuring them in the early game, making it so that they do not have an opportunity to get rid of Dondozos stat boosts. The pivoting core of Incineroar and Amoonguss also cause Dondozo some issues, as Amoonguss can Spore Dondozo and Incineroar can use Intimidate and Parting Shot to drop Dondozos attack greatly. Pokemon like Choice Scarf Annihilape and Indeedee-M can help solve this issue, as Annihilape can use Final Gambit to trade with one of Amoonguss amoonguss survives final gambit and Incineroar, or one of their partners like Porygon2, making it so that they have less room to pivot, while Indeedee-M immediately pressures Amoonguss with Expanding Force and blocks Fake Out from Incineroar with Psychic Terrain, making it easier for Dondozo to knock out Incineroar with a super effective Wave Crash.



Strategy Comments
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- Main Role: Dondozos main job is to act as either a breaker or a sweeper, depending on the situation. Dondozo can often win the game on the spot if placed in the right position, so choosing when to combine Dondozo with Tatsugiri is critical. Dondozo can often be used to weaken an opposing team to the point where Dondozos partners, like Indeedee-M, can clean up the game, or it could go the other way, with Dondozos teammates weakening the opponents to the point where it can clean up the game with its powerful boosted attacks.
- Playstyle: Dondozo teams often involve making smart early game trades, and identifying weather a threat is important to keep alive for after Dondozo comes in and goes down, or weather it is more important for it to do damage or KO a threat to Dondozo, allowing it to get a late game sweep. It is also important to identify when Tatsugiri should come in to combine with Dondozo, as once this is done, you have fully committed and can no longer switch, making you vulnerable to getting your Dondozo played around and answered. Dondozo should come in once enough damage has been done to the enemy team, or in order to deal damage to the opposing team to allow from an endgame cleanup from one of Dondozos partners.
- Counters & Checks: Dondozo is checked by every form of Amoonguss, especially Clear Smog Amoonguss, as well as Haze Primarina. Forcing early game trades to force these pieces on the board, followed by dealing significant damage to them to clean up with Dondozo is important. It is also important to understand that Dondozo should not come in every matchup, as many of them it is just too hard to get value with Dondozo. It is important to identify whether or not Dondozo is a good bring into the team you are facing up against. Dondozo is also often checked by Rillaboom using Fake Out to pivot around it, and threatening super effective damage with Wood Hammer. It is important to force damage onto Rillaboom to either allow for Dondozo to pick up the KO on it, or soften it up with Dondozo to allow a teammate to pick it up. The core of Incineroar and Amoonguss are also really strong into Dondozo, so it is important to limit switching and pressure the Incineroar as much as possible. Softening up the Incineroar and Amoonguss with early game pressure from the likes of Indeedee-M, Annihilape or any other offensive partners you might have is important, as well as putting yourself in a favorable position against a weakened Amoonguss to KO it or its partner Incineroar is very important as well.



Bulky Yawn (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Steel/Bug/Grass
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Wave Crash/Liquidation
- Yawn
- Protect
- Fissure

[SET COMMENTS]
- This Dondozo set aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece to be used without Tatsugiri, while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options.
- Yawn is Dondozos main supporting tool, allowing it to force switches or put the enemy to sleep depending on what they go for. This can put the opponent into an awkward position, which generates free turns for your partner pokemon.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move, providing extra damage over Liquidation, at the cost of some of Dondozos longevity. Be a bit more clear that liquidation is a viable alternative. Eg. Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move. Alternatively, Liquidation can be used to circumvent the recoil of Wave Crash and give Dondozo more longevity.
- Fissure is used in situations where Dondozo isn't providing any pressure on the field, as Dondozo tends to be extremely passive and Pokemon naturally immune to its sleep like Electabuzz and Gholdengo, or Pokemon who like to pivot a lot naturally and don't mind taking its Liquidation like Amoonguss, Incineroar and other supportive Dondozo. Fissure gives Dondozo a way to provide pressure against these Pokemon that can normally wall it, and since Dondozo is so bulky, a miss often won't lose you the game.
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to resist Grass attacks, while keeping its resistance to Ice and Steel as well as gaining a resistance to Freeze Dry from Ninetales-Alola. Tera Grass and Bug allow Dondozo to resist Ground after committing its Tera, while Tera Grass provides a Spore immunity and Tera Bug allowing Dondozo not to be weak to Ice and Bug type attacks, such as Blizzard and U-Turn after committing Tera.
- Unaware allows Dondozo to beat many setup sweepers that could otherwise take advantage of its passivity, such as Gholdengo and Volcarona.
- The EVs on this set aim to make Dondozo as specially defensive as possible, as it is naturally extremely physcially bulky, and having Special Defense investment allows it to take hits from attackers such as Gholdengo, Primarina and Ninetales-Alola. The EVs also allow it to comfortably survive Electro Shot from Archaludon and Yawn it to either put it to sleep or force it to switch, removing its boosts.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
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- Synergy: This set tends to fit on bulkier setup focused teams that benefit from Dondozo forcing switches with Yawn. Dondozo thrives in positions where its partner is able to setup thanks to Yawn supporting it, and also enjoys beating setup sweepers with Unaware.
- Common partners for this set include bulky setup Pokemon like Kingambit, Gholdengo and Volcarona, which tend to struggle into fire types which Dondozo can beat, and in turn they resist Grass type attacks for Dondozo, and appreciate the free turns Dondozo can generate with Yawn in order to setup. Rillaboom is another strong partner for this Dondozo, allowing it to get free turns to use Yawn with Fake Out, providing Dondozo with Grassy Terrain to boost its Longevity even further, and switching into Grass types which are used to check Dondozo, such as opposing Rillaboom and Amoonguss. Dondozo also helps Rillaboom in matchups against Fire types which often give it trouble. Dondozo also appreciates being paired with Follow Me users like Magmar and Electabuzz, as combining with Dondozo makes it extremely easy and to setup with your sweeper.
- Dondozo is checked by Pokemon that can hit it for super effective damage, like Rillaboom or Archaludon, or can give it trouble by switching around it and hindering it with status or stat drops, such as Amoonguss, Incineroar and other supportive Dondozo, are strong checks. Electabuzz and Magmar are other checks to Dondozo, which are immune to its Yawn with Vital Spirit and can allow room for a partner to pressure Dondozo with Follow Me, while Magmar can Will-O-Wisp Dondozo, and Electabuzz can hit it for super effective with Thunderbolt. Your own redirection, such as Electabuzz and Magmar, as well as some pokemon that naturally threaten Grass types, like Sneasler, Volcarona and Baxcalibur, all make for great partners to this Dondozo. Kingambit also helps deter Intimidate from Incineroar and can use Rillaboom to setup Swords Dance and sweep. Gholdengo can also setup on Rillaboom while naturally being immune to Spore thanks to Good As Gold.



Strategy Comments
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- Dondozos main role is to act as a bulky support Pokemon that can force switches with Yawn, putting the opponent in awkward positions by either forcing them out or forcing them to fall asleep, which allows room for Dondozos partners, such as Kingambit, Gholdengo and Volcarona to setup and threaten the opponent. This is often accomplished by bringing in Dondozo against opponents that it walls and Yawning them, forcing them to switch out and allowing your own partners opportunities to boost.
- Dondozo is strong in both the early game and endgame, depending on the situation. Dondozo tends to be clicking Yawn for a lot of the game and its high bulk allows it to stick around for many turns at a time. Dondozo can also be used to provide important chip damage against opponents who may threaten its partners, such as Incineroar and Volcarona, which gives Dondozos setup partners more room to break through them. Dondozo can also force opposing setup threats, such as Kingambit, Volcarona and Archaludon to switch out, which makes room for its own setup threat to get in the game and threaten a sweep.
- Counters & Checks: Dondozo is often checked by Rillaboom, however many of Dondozos partners which resist Grass appreciate the ability to take advantage of Rillaboom to either setup, like Volcarona and Kingambit, or hit it super effectively, like Sneasler. Another one of Dondozos checks is Amoonguss, which can take advantage of Dondozos passivity and incapacitate it with Spore, and often doesn't mind Yawn as with Regenerator, it often likes switching out anyway. Dondozo can take advantage of it by using its partner Electabuzz or Magmar to take advantage of Amoonguss by using their Spore immunity to play around Amoonguss, and allow their sweeper to setup with smart positioning. Electabuzz can also Taunt Amoonguss, which Dondozo appreciates, while Magmar can threaten Amoonguss for super effective damage, which weakens Amoonguss to be taken advantage of in the endgame.

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Commander Sweeper (Dondozo)@ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass / Steel Steel / Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 228 Atk / 4 Def / 36 SpD / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Wave Crash
- Earthquake / Heavy Slam
- Order Up / Heavy Slam (remember to add spaces between all of the moves and slashes)

[SET COMMENTS]
- Combining with Tatsugiri allows Dondozo to become a threatening sweeper, being able to pose a significant threat to the majority of teams. Its significant bulk and attacking prowess allow it to rip through unprepared teams, and make it hard to remove without consistent answers.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move, providing a great source of damage to neutral targets such as Gholdengo and Annihilape. Earthquake provides a spread attack that can get around redirection users such as Electabuzz and Magmar (mention the difference between heavy slam and eq and order up and eq, why you would use one over the other)
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to become immune to Clear Smog from opposing Amoonguss, as well as boosting the power of Dondozos Heavy Slam. (do you have any slam calcs? dm me if you need them and I can try to find some)Tera Grass allows Dondozo to become immune to spore from other Amoonguss, as well as allowing Dondozo to resist ground type attacks from Garchomp, Ursaluna and Ursaluna-Bloodmoon after using its Tera.
- Leftovers provides Dondozo with a little bit more longevity, as its naturally high bulk paired with the +2 defense and special defense lets it shrug off attacks and heal it off, and this recovery tends to rack up very quickly if you are alternating Protects.
- The speed investment on this set allows it to outspeed 252+ max Speed Garchomp after merging with Tatsugiri (you can change the wording if you'd like but mention something about being +2)and threaten it greatly with Wave Crash or Order Up. The attack investment allows +3 Tera Steel Heavy Slam to get a OHKO on Physically defensive Amoonguss, and allows it to 2HKO most Sitrus Berry Incineroar at +1 with Earthquake. The special defense investments allows Dondozo to take more hits on its naturally very frail special side. (you don't have to mention this unless there are calcs)


Bulky Yawn (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Steel/Bug/Grass Poison / Grass / Bug
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Wave Crash / Liquidation
- Yawn
- Protect
- Fissure

[SET COMMENTS]
- This Dondozo set aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece to be used without Tatsugiri, while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options.
- Yawn is Dondozos main supporting tool, allowing it to force switches or put the enemy to sleep depending on what they go for. This can put the opponent into an awkward position, which generates free turns for your partner pokemon.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move. Alternatively, Liquidation can be used to circumvent the recoil of Wave Crash and give Dondozo more longevity.
- Fissure is used in situations where Dondozo isn't providing any pressure on the field, as Dondozo tends to be extremely passive and Pokemon naturally immune to its sleep like Electabuzz and Gholdengo, or Pokemon who like to pivot a lot naturally and don't mind taking its Liquidation like Amoonguss, Incineroar (mention something else you're still doing a fair bit to incin and it takes significant damage from wave crash) and other supportive Dondozo. Fissure gives Dondozo a way to provide pressure against these Pokemon that can normally wall it, and since Dondozo is so bulky, a miss often won't lose you the game.
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to resist Grass attacks, while keeping its resistance to Ice and Steel as well as gaining a resistance to Freeze Dry from Ninetales-Alola. Tera Grass and Bug allow Dondozo to resist Ground after committing its Tera, while Tera Grass provides a Spore immunity and Tera Bug allowing Dondozo not to be weak to Ice and Bug type attacks, such as Blizzard and U-Turn after committing Tera. (change this paragraph according to the set changes I made above)
- Unaware allows Dondozo to beat many setup sweepers that could otherwise take advantage of its passivity, such as Gholdengo and Volcarona. (fluff)
- The EVs on this set aim to make Dondozo as specially defensive as possible, as it is naturally extremely physcially bulky, and having Special Defense investment allows it to take hits from attackers such as Gholdengo, Primarina and Ninetales-Alola. The EVs also allow it to comfortably survive Electro Shot from Archaludon and Yawn it to either put it to sleep or force it to switch, removing its boosts. (252/252 isn't necescary to explain)



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
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- The sweeper set tends to be strong on Hyper Offensive teams that can force trades, weakening Dondozos checks into range of its attacks. Dondozo can also be used to weaken opponents in the early game, putting the opposing team into range of an alternative late game sweeper like Gholdengo or Indeedee-M. Spread moves are extremely strong with Dondozo as they as they allow you to put an opposing team into range of Dondozos attacks. Speed control such as Tailwind is also strong with Dondozo, as it allows it to outspeed threats like Sneasler or Dragapult. Meanwhile, Bulky Dondozo aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece to be used without Tatsugiri, while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options.
-Tatsugiri is a mandatory partner for sweeper Dondozo, as with Commander, it combines with Dondozo to give it a +2 in every stat. Talonflame is a strong partner for Dondozo, damaging the Grass types like Rillaboom and Amoonguss that might give Dondozo issues, as well as providing Tailwind speed control that allows it and its team to pick up KOs they would otherwise be slower than, which is beneficial for Dondozos hyper offense focused gameplan. Another strong partner is Choice Scarf Annihilape. With Coaching, it allows Dondozo to becomes even more threatening than it already is, notably OHKOing physically defensive Amoonguss after 1 Coaching with Tera Steel Heavy Slam after the boost from Tatsugiri. Indeedee-M and Sneasler are very strong partners for this Dondozo as well, the combination of them applying pressure to some of Dondozos checks like Primarina, Rillaboom and Amoonguss, as well as applying significant pressure to Incineroar which could otherwise give Dondozo some trouble, and the speed boost from Sneaslers Unburden by activating Psychic Seed let it become the fastest Pokemon in the metagame, allowing it to provide significant pressure and make room for a Dondozo win later in the game.
-Common partners for support Dondozo include bulky setup Pokemon like Kingambit, Gholdengo and Volcarona, which tend to struggle into fire types which Dondozo can beat, and in turn they resist Grass type attacks for Dondozo, and appreciate the free turns Dondozo can generate with Yawn in order to setup. Rillaboom is another strong partner for this Dondozo, allowing it to get free turns to use Yawn with Fake Out, providing Dondozo with Grassy Terrain to boost its Longevity even further, and switching into Grass types which are used to check Dondozo, such as opposing Rillaboom and Amoonguss. Dondozo also helps Rillaboom in matchups against Fire types which often give it trouble. Dondozo also appreciates being paired with Follow Me users like Magmar and Electabuzz, as combining with Dondozo makes it extremely easy to setup with your sweeper. (if your main reason to have follow me is for the follow me mon to support a different teammate, is it really a main teammate for dozo)
-Sweeper Dondozo has a lot of trouble with Haze Primarina and Clear Smog Amoonguss, which threaten to remove its stat boosts and make it a sitting duck. Because of this, many of Dondozos partners, like Talonflame and Sneasler, are tasked with pressuring them in the early game, making it so that they do not have an opportunity to get rid of Dondozos stat boosts. The pivoting core of Incineroar and Amoonguss also cause Dondozo some issues, as Amoonguss can Spore Dondozo and Incineroar can use Intimidate and Parting Shot to drop Dondozos attack greatly. Pokemon like Choice Scarf Annihilape and Indeedee-M can help solve this issue, as Annihilape can use Final Gambit to remove a defensive piece for Incineroar+Amoonguss centric teams such as Porygon2, while being able to OHKO Incineroar with Close Combat, and being boosted by Incineroars Intimidate because of Defiant, while Indeedee-M immediately pressures Amoonguss with Expanding Force and blocks Fake Out from Incineroar with Psychic Terrain, making it easier for Dondozo to knock out Incineroar with a super effective Wave Crash.
-Bulky Dondozo is checked by Pokemon that can hit it for super effective damage, like Rillaboom or Archaludon, or can give it trouble by switching around it and hindering it with status or stat drops, such as Amoonguss, Incineroar and other supportive Dondozo, are strong checks. Electabuzz and Magmar are other checks to Dondozo, which are immune to its Yawn with Vital Spirit and can allow room for a partner to pressure Dondozo with Follow Me, while Magmar can Will-O-Wisp Dondozo, and Electabuzz can hit it for super effective with Thunderbolt. Your own redirection, such as Electabuzz and Magmar, as well as some pokemon that naturally threaten Grass types, like Sneasler, Volcarona and Baxcalibur, all make for great partners to this Dondozo. Kingambit also helps deter Intimidate from Incineroar and can use Rillaboom to setup Swords Dance and sweep. Gholdengo can also setup on Rillaboom while naturally being immune to Spore thanks to Good As Gold.

Strategy Comments
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- Main Role: Dondozos main job is to act as either a breaker or a sweeper, depending on the situation. Dondozo can often win the game on the spot if placed in the right position, so choosing when to combine Dondozo with Tatsugiri is critical. Dondozo can often be used to weaken an opposing team to the point where Dondozos partners, like Indeedee-M, can clean up the game, or it could go the other way, with Dondozos teammates weakening the opponents to the point where it can clean up the game with its powerful boosted attacks.Meanwhile, Bulky Dondozos main role is to act as a bulky support Pokemon that can force switches with Yawn, putting the opponent in awkward positions by either forcing them out or forcing them to fall asleep, which allows room for Dondozos partners, such as Kingambit, Gholdengo and Volcarona to setup and threaten the opponent. This is often accomplished by bringing in Dondozo against opponents that it walls and Yawning them, forcing them to switch out and allowing your own partners opportunities to boost.
- Playstyle: Sweeper Dondozo teams often involve making smart early game trades, and identifying whether a threat is important to keep alive for after Dondozo comes in and goes down, or whether it is more important for it to do damage or KO a threat to Dondozo, allowing it to get a late game sweep. It is also important to identify when Tatsugiri should come in to combine with Dondozo, as once this is done, you have fully committed and can no longer switch, making you vulnerable to getting your Dondozo played around and answered. (you already mention that you need to combine dozo and giri at the right area, no need to mention it twice)Dondozo should come in once enough damage has been done to the enemy team, or in order to deal damage to the opposing team to allow from an endgame cleanup from one of Dondozos partners. Meanwhile, Bulky Dondozo is strong in both the early game and endgame, depending on the situation. Dondozo tends to be clicking Yawn for a lot of the game and its high bulk allows it to stick around for many turns at a time. Dondozo can also be used to provide important chip damage against opponents who may threaten its partners, such as Incineroar and Volcarona, which gives Dondozos setup partners more room to break through them. Dondozo can also force opposing setup threats, such as Kingambit, Volcarona and Archaludon to switch out, which makes room for its own setup threat to get in the game and threaten a sweep.
- Counters & Checks: Sweeper Dondozo is checked by every form of Amoonguss, especially Clear Smog Amoonguss, as well as Haze Primarina. Forcing early game trades to force these pieces on the board, followed by dealing significant damage to them to clean up with Dondozo is important. It is also important to understand that Dondozo should not come in every matchup, as many of them it is just too hard to get value with Dondozo. It is important to identify whether or not Dondozo is a good bring into the team you are facing up against. (talk about some tips on when you should and shouldn't bring dozo to games) Dondozo is also often checked by Rillaboom using Fake Out to pivot around it, and threatening super effective damage with Wood Hammer. It is important to force damage onto Rillaboom to either allow for Dondozo to pick up the KO on it, or soften it up with Dondozo to allow a teammate to pick it up. The core of Incineroar and Amoonguss are also really strong into Dondozo, so it is important to limit switching and pressure the Incineroar as much as possible. Softening up the Incineroar and Amoonguss with early game pressure from the likes of Indeedee-M, Annihilape or any other offensive partners you might have is important, as well as putting yourself in a favorable position against a weakened Amoonguss to KO it or its partner Incineroar is very important as well. Meanwhile, Bulky Dondozo is often checked by Rillaboom, however many of Dondozos partners which resist Grass appreciate the ability to take advantage of Rillaboom to either setup, like Volcarona and Kingambit, or hit it super effectively, like Sneasler. Another one of Dondozos checks is Amoonguss, which can take advantage of Dondozos passivity and incapacitate it with Spore, and often doesn't mind Yawn as with Regenerator, it often likes switching out anyway. Dondozo can take advantage of it by using its partner Electabuzz or Magmar to take advantage of Amoonguss by using their Spore immunity to play around Amoonguss, and allow their sweeper to setup with smart positioning. Electabuzz can also Taunt Amoonguss, which Dondozo appreciates, while Magmar can threaten Amoonguss for super effective damage, which weakens Amoonguss to be taken advantage of in the endgame.


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Commander Sweeper (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Steel / Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 228 Atk / 4 Def / 36 SpD / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Wave Crash
- Earthquake / Heavy Slam (Flarefox asked you in his QC check to mention the merits to using Heavy Slam, but there isn't a note about the move aside from the Tera Steel mention.)
- Order Up / Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
- Combining with Tatsugiri-C (elaborating on forme because the bullet point on Order Up mentions Curly’s Attack boost) allows Dondozo to become a threatening sweeper, being able to pose a significant threat to the majority of teams. Its significant bulk and attacking prowess allow it to rip through unprepared teams (RC) and make it hard to remove without consistent answers.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move, providing a great source of damage to neutral targets such as Gholdengo and Annihilape. Earthquake provides a spread attack that can get around redirection users such as Electabuzz, (AP) and Magmar, Clefable, and Amoonguss. (AP)
- Order Up provides a way for Dondozo to boost its attack Attack (Pokemon stats are always capitalized) without Coaching, allowing it to become even more threatening if the opponent attempted attempts to play around it passively. Order Up also provides as a way to hit Dragon-types (AH) like Dragonite and Baxcalibur.
- Earthquake provides Dondozo with consistent spread damage, allowing it to hit around redirection Pokemon like Magmar, Electabuzz, Clefable and Amoonguss. (already stated, condensed other examples into previous mention)
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to become immune to Clear Smog from opposing Amoonguss (RC) as well as boosting the power of Dondozo's (AA; mind your apostrophes, this is a recurring error) Heavy Slam, allowing it to OHKO physically defensive Amoonguss at +3 after Tera. (redundant) Tera Grass allows Dondozo to become immune to spore Spore from other Amoonguss (RC) as well as allowing Dondozo to resist ground Ground-type (AH) attacks from Garchomp, Ursaluna, (AC, analyses require the serial comma) and Ursaluna-Bloodmoon after using its Tera. (redundant)
- Leftovers provides Dondozo with a little bit more longevity, as its naturally high bulk paired with the +2 defense Defense and special defense Special Defense boosts lets it shrug off attacks and heal it them off, and this recovery tends to rack up very quickly if you are it's alternating between attacking and using Protects.
- The speed Speed investment on this set allows it to outspeed maximum speed Speed Garchomp after combining with Tatsugiri-C and threaten it greatly with Wave Crash or Order Up. The attack Attack investment allows +3 Tera Steel Heavy Slam to get a OHKO on Physically physically defensive Amoonguss (RC) and allows it +1 Earthquake to 2HKO most Sitrus Berry Incineroar at +1 with Earthquake. (consistency with how first KO calc is written)






Bulky Yawn (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison / Bug / Grass
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Wave Crash / Liquidation
- Yawn
- Protect
- Fissure

[SET COMMENTS]
- This Dondozo set aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece to be that is used without Tatsugiri (RC) while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options.
- Yawn is Dondozo's (AA; mind your apostrophes, this is a recurring error) main supporting tool, allowing it to force switches or put the enemy to sleep depending on what they it goes for. This can put the opponent into an awkward position, which generates free turns for your partner pokemon Pokemon.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move. Alternatively, Liquidation can be used to circumvent the recoil of Wave Crash and give Dondozo more longevity.
- Fissure is used in situations where Dondozo isn't providing any pressure on the field, as Dondozo tends to be extremely passive and against (rewording here because the sentence would otherwise be a sentence fragment, lmk if this isn't what you meant) Pokemon naturally immune to its sleep move like Electabuzz and Gholdengo (RC) or Pokemon who that like to pivot a lot naturally and don't mind taking its Liquidation (Given that Wave Crash is an option, do you mean "Water-type attack"?) like Amoonguss, Porygon2, (AC) and other supportive Dondozo. Fissure gives Dondozo a way to provide pressure against these Pokemon that can normally wall it, and since Dondozo is so bulky, a miss often won't lose you the game.
- Tera Poison allows Dondozo to resist Grass-type attacks (RC) as well as gaining important resists resistances to Fighting and Poison, allowing it to wall Sneasler. Tera Bug and Grass allow Dondozo to resist Ground-type attacks rather than being weak to it, unlike Tera Poison; (RC, ASC) while Tera Grass allows it to gain an immunity to Rage Powder and Spore from Amoonguss, (AC) and Tera Bug allows Dondozo to not be weak to Ice-type moves from Alolan Ninetales-Alola and Baxcalbur (RC) as well as Poison-type moves from Sneasler.
- The EVs on this set allow Dondozo to survive 2 two Electro Shots from Archaludon after a turn of protect Dondozo uses Protect for a turn if Grassy Terrain is up.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
============
- The sweeper set tends to be strong on Hyper Offensive hyper offensive teams that can force trades, weakening Dondozo's (AA) checks into range of its attacks. Dondozo can also be used to weaken opponents foes in the early-game, (AH) putting the opposing team into range of an alternative late-game (AH) sweeper like Gholdengo or Indeedee-M. Spread moves are extremely strong with Dondozo, (AC) as they as they allow you it to put an opposing team into range of Dondozo's (AA) attacks. Speed control such as Tailwind is also strong with Dondozo, as it allows it to outspeed threats like Sneasler or and Dragapult. Meanwhile, Bulky bulky Dondozo aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece to be used without Tatsugiri, while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options. (You're just repeating the first bullet point from the support set. Replace the highlighted text by elaborating more on the set's strengths and what team structures that particularly benefit from its support, if any.)
- (AS) Tatsugiri-C is a mandatory partner for sweeper Dondozo, as with Commander, it combines with Dondozo to give it a +2 boost in to every stat. Talonflame is a strong partner for Dondozo, damaging the Grass-types (AH) like Rillaboom and Amoonguss that might give Dondozo issues (RC) as well as providing Tailwind speed control that allows it and its team to pick up KOs on Pokemon they would otherwise be slower than against, which is beneficial for Dondozo's (AA) hyper offense-focused (AH) gameplan. Another strong partner is Choice Scarf Annihilape. With Coaching, it Annilhilape allows Dondozo to becomes even more threatening than it already is. Indeedee-M and Sneasler are very strong partners for this Dondozo variant as well; (RC, ASC) the combination of them applying can apply pressure to some of Dondozo's (AA) checks like Primarina, Rillaboom, (AC) and Amoonguss (RC) as well as applying significant pressure to Incineroar, (AC) which could otherwise give Dondozo some trouble, and the speed Speed boost gained from Sneaslers Unburden by activating Psychic Seed lets it Unburden Sneasler (original phrase was grammatically awkward) become the fastest Pokemon in the metagame, allowing it to provide significant pressure and make room for a Dondozo win later in the game.
- (AS) Common partners for support Dondozo include bulky setup Pokemon like Kingambit, Gholdengo, (AC; analyses require the serial comma) and Volcarona, which tend to struggle into against fire Fire-types, (AH, AC) which Dondozo can beat, and in turn, (AC) they resist Grass-type (AH) attacks for Dondozo (RC) and appreciate the free turns Dondozo can generate with Yawn in order to setup. Rillaboom is another strong partner for this Dondozo set, allowing it to get free turns to use Yawn with Fake Out, providing Dondozo with Grassy Terrain to boost its Longevity longevity even further, and switching into Grass-types (AH) which that are used to check Dondozo, such as opposing Rillaboom and Amoonguss. Dondozo also helps Rillaboom in matchups against Fire-types, (AH, AC) which often give it trouble. Dondozo also appreciates being paired with Follow Me users like Magmar and Electabuzz, as they can redirect Spore from Amoonguss, (AC) or Taunt hamper Amoonguss it with Taunt, or, (AC) in Magmar's (AA) case, threaten Amoonguss it with a Super Effective super effective Overheat. They also help to redirect attacks that Dondozo doesn't want to take, like Electro Shot from Archaludon or and Wood Hammer from Rillaboom.
- (AS) Sweeper Dondozo has a lot of trouble with Haze Primarina and Clear Smog Amoonguss, which threaten to remove its stat boosts and make it a sitting duck. Because of this, many of Dondozo's (AA) partners, like Talonflame and Sneasler, are tasked with pressuring them in the early-game (AH, RC) making it so that they do not have an opportunity to get rid of Dondozo's (AA) stat boosts. The pivoting core of Incineroar and Amoonguss also causes Dondozo some issues, as Amoonguss can Spore put Dondozo to sleep with Spore, (AC) and Incineroar can use Intimidate and Parting Shot to drop Dondozo's (AA) attack Attack greatly. Pokemon like Choice Scarf Annihilape and Indeedee-M can help solve this issue, as Annihilape can use Final Gambit to remove a defensive piece for on teams using Incineroar+Amoonguss Incineroar + Amoonguss centric teams (reworded for brevity and clarity) such as Porygon2 (RC) while being able to OHKO Incineroar with Close Combat (RC) and being boosted by off Incineroars Intimidate because of via Defiant, while Indeedee-M immediately pressures Amoonguss with Expanding Force and blocks Fake Out from Incineroar with Psychic Terrain, making it easier for Dondozo to knock out Incineroar with a super effective Wave Crash.
- (AS) Bulky Dondozo is checked by Pokemon that can hit it for super effective damage, like Rillaboom or and Archaludon, or can give it trouble by switching around it and hindering it with status or stat drops, such as Amoonguss, Incineroar, (AC) and other supportive Dondozo, are strong checks. Electabuzz and Magmar are other checks to Dondozo, which as they are immune to its Yawn with Vital Spirit and can allow room for a partner to pressure Dondozo with Follow Me; additionally, (AC) while Magmar can Will-O-Wisp burn Dondozo with Will-O-Wisp, and Electabuzz can hit it for super effectively with Thunderbolt. Your own forms of redirection, such as Electabuzz and Magmar, as well as some pokemon Pokemon that naturally threaten Grass-types, (AH) like Sneasler, Volcarona, (AC) and Baxcalibur, all make for great partners to this Dondozo. Kingambit also helps deter Intimidate from Incineroar and can use Rillaboom to setup set up Swords Dance and sweep. Gholdengo can also setup set up on Rillaboom while naturally being immune to Spore thanks to Good As Gold.

Strategy Comments
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- Commander-boosted (I added this here to elaborate on the specific set, but I had to use a different adjective given you write "sweeper" later in this sentence) Dondozo's (AA) main job is to act as either a wallbreaker or a sweeper, depending on the situation. Dondozo can often win the game on the spot if placed in the right position, so choosing when to combine Dondozo with Tatsugiri-C is critical. Dondozo can often be used to weaken an opposing team to the point where Dondozos its partners, like Indeedee-M, can clean up the game; (RC, ASC) or it could go the other way conversely, with Dondozo's (AA) teammates can weakening the opponents opposition to the point where it can clean up the game with its powerful boosted attacks. (AS) Meanwhile, Bulky bulky Dondozo's (AA) main role is to act as a bulky support Pokemon that can force switches with Yawn, putting the opponent its foes in awkward positions by either forcing them to either switch out or forcing them to fall asleep, which allows room for Dondozo's (AA) partners, such as Kingambit, Gholdengo, (AC) and Volcarona, (AC) to setup set up and threaten the opponent. This is often accomplished by bringing in Dondozo against opponents foes that it walls and Yawning using Yawn on them, forcing them to switch out and allowing your own its partners opportunities to boost. (repeating info)
- Sweeper Dondozo teams often involve making smart early-game (AH) trades (RC) and identifying whether a threat is important to keep alive for after Dondozo comes in and goes down (RC) or whether it is more important for it to do damage or KO a threat to Dondozo, allowing it to get a late-game (AH) sweep. It is also important to identify when Tatsugiri-C should come in to combine with Dondozo, as once this is done, you have they are fully committed and can no longer switch, making you Dondozo vulnerable to getting your Dondozo being played around and answered. Dondozo should come in once enough damage has been done to the enemy team (RC) or in order to deal damage to the opposing team to allow from an endgame a late-game cleanup from one of Dondozo's (AA) partners. Meanwhile, Bulky bulky Dondozo is strong in both the early-game (AH) and endgame late-game, depending on the situation. Dondozo tends to be clicking use Yawn for a lot of the game, (AC) and its high bulk allows it to stick around for many turns at a time. Dondozo can also be used to provide important chip damage against opponents foes who that may threaten its partners, such as Incineroar and Volcarona, which gives Dondozo's (AA) setup partners more room to break through them. Dondozo can also force opposing setup threats, such as Kingambit, Volcarona, (AC) and Archaludon, (AC) to switch out, which makes room for its own setup threat ally to get in the game and threaten a sweep.
- Sweeper Dondozo is checked by every form of Amoonguss, especially Clear Smog Amoonguss, as well as Haze Primarina. Forcing early-game (AH) trades to force these pieces on the board (RC) followed by dealing significant damage to them to clean up with Dondozo is important. It is also important to understand that Dondozo should not come in every matchup, as many of them it is just too hard to get value with Dondozo in many of them. It is important vital (avoids repeating "important") to identify whether or not Dondozo is a good Pokemon to bring into the match with the team you are facing up against. If the opponent has enough ways to threaten Dondozo that it feels too hard for Dondozo to make and severly hinder its progress (RC) or if Dondozo struggled to get value in a previous game, leaving Dondozo behind should be considered. Dondozo is also often checked by Rillaboom, using Fake Out to pivot around it (RC) and threatening super effective damage with Wood Hammer. It is important to either force damage onto Rillaboom to either allow for Dondozo to pick up the KO on it (RC) or soften it up with Dondozo to allow a teammate to pick it up. The core of Incineroar and Amoonguss are also really strong into against Dondozo, so it is important to limit switching and pressure the Incineroar as much as possible. Softening up the Incineroar and Amoonguss with early-game (AH) pressure from the likes of Indeedee-M, Annihilape, (AC) or and any other offensive partners you might have is important, as well as and putting yourself in a favorable position against a weakened Amoonguss to KO it or its partner Incineroar is very important as well. Meanwhile (you used "meanwhile" often when transitioning from the sweeper set to the support set) On the other hand, Bulky bulky Dondozo is often checked by Rillaboom; (RC, ASC) however, (AC) many of Dondozo's (AA) Grass-resistant partners which resist Grass appreciate the ability to take advantage of Rillaboom to either setup set up (RC) like in Volcarona and Kingambit's case (RC) or hit it super effectively (RC) like in Sneasler's case. Another one of Dondozo's (AA) checks is Amoonguss, which can take advantage of Dondozo's (AA) passivity and incapacitate it with Spore, and it often doesn't mind Yawn as because with Regenerator, it often likes switching out anyway. Dondozo can take advantage of it by using its partner Electabuzz or Magmar to take advantage of exploit Amoonguss, (AC) by using their Spore immunity to play around Amoonguss it (avoids repeating "Amoonguss" too often) (RC) and allow their sweeper to setup set up with smart positioning. Electabuzz can also Taunt disable Amoonguss with Taunt, which Dondozo appreciates, while Magmar can threaten Amoonguss for with super effective damage, which weakens Amoonguss it enough to be taken advantage of in the endgame late-game.


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Commander Sweeper (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware (You don't explain why Unaware is used for this set.)
Level: 50
Tera Type: Steel / Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 228 Atk / 4 Def / 36 SpD / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Wave Crash
- Earthquake / Heavy Slam
- Order Up / Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
- Combining with Tatsugiri-C allows Dondozo to become a threatening sweeper, being able to pose a significant threat to the majority of teams. Its significant bulk and attacking prowess allow it to rip through unprepared teams and make it hard to remove without consistent answers.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move, providing a great source of damage to neutral targets such as Gholdengo and Annihilape. Earthquake provides a spread attack that can get around redirection users such as Electabuzz, Magmar, Clefable, and Amoonguss.
- Order Up provides a way for Dondozo to boost its Attack without Coaching, allowing it to become even more threatening if the opponent attempts to play around it passively. Order Up also provides a way to hit Dragon-types like Dragonite and Baxcalibur.
- Heavy Slam allows Dondozo to hit Fairy-types which that can otherwise check it like Primarina, Alolan Ninetales and Clefable, being and it can be boosted even further by Tera Steel.
- Tera Steel allows Dondozo to become immune to Clear Smog from opposing Amoonguss as well as boosting the power of Dondozo's Heavy Slam, allowing it to OHKO physically defensive Amoonguss at +3. Tera Grass allows Dondozo to become immune to Spore from (RS) Amoonguss as well as allowing Dondozo to resist Ground-type attacks from Garchomp, Ursaluna, and Ursaluna-B.
- Leftovers provides Dondozo with a little bit more longevity, as its naturally high bulk paired with the +2 Defense and Special Defense boosts lets it shrug off attacks and heal them off, and this recovery tends to rack up very quickly if it's alternating between attacking and using Protect.
- The Speed investment on this set allows it to outspeed maximum Speed Garchomp after combining with Tatsugiri-C and threaten it greatly with Wave Crash or Order Up. The Attack investment allows +3 Tera Steel Heavy Slam to get a OHKO on physically defensive Amoonguss and allows +1 Earthquake to 2HKO most Sitrus Berry Incineroar.






Bulky Yawn (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware (same thing like with the offensive set)
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison / Bug / Grass
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Wave Crash / Liquidation
- Yawn
- Protect
- Fissure

[SET COMMENTS]
- This Dondozo set aims to be a much bulkier supporting piece that is used without Tatsugiri while still managing to provide a bit of offensive pressure thanks to its attacking options.
- Yawn is Dondozo's main supporting tool, allowing it to force switches or put the enemy to sleep depending on what it goes for. This can put the opponent into an awkward position, which generates free turns for your partner Pokemon.
- Wave Crash is Dondozo's strongest attacking move. Alternatively, Liquidation can be used to circumvent the recoil of Wave Crash and give Dondozo more longevity.
- Fissure is used in situations where Dondozo isn't providing any pressure on the field, as Dondozo tends to be extremely passive against Pokemon naturally immune to its sleep move like Electabuzz and Gholdengo or Pokemon that like to pivot a lot naturally and don't mind taking its Water-type attack like Amoonguss, Porygon2, and other supportive Dondozo. Fissure gives Dondozo a way to provide pressure against these Pokemon that can normally wall it, and since Dondozo is so bulky, a miss often won't lose you the game.
- Tera Poison allows Dondozo to resist Grass-type attacks as well as gaining important resistances to Fighting and Poison, allowing it to wall Sneasler. Tera Bug and Grass allow Dondozo to resist Ground-type attacks rather than being weak to it, unlike Tera Poison; while Tera Grass allows it to gain an immunity to Rage Powder and Spore from Amoonguss, Tera Bug allows Dondozo to not be weak to Ice-type moves from Alolan Ninetales and Baxcalbur as well as Poison-type moves from Sneasler.
- The EVs on this set allow Dondozo to survive two Electro Shots from Archaludon after Dondozo uses Protect for a turn if Grassy Terrain is up.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
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- The sweeper set tends to be strong on hyper offensive teams that can force trades, weakening Dondozo's checks into range of its attacks. Dondozo can also be used to weaken foes early-game, putting the opposing team into range of an alternative late-game sweeper like Gholdengo or Indeedee-M. Spread moves are extremely strong with Dondozo, (RS) as they allow it to put an opposing team into range of Dondozo's attacks. Speed control such as Tailwind is also strong with Dondozo, as it allows it to outspeed threats like Sneasler and Dragapult. Meanwhile, bulky Dondozo provides a defensive Water-type that can disrupt opponents foes by putting them to sleep, and is it's helpful to enable its partner setup threats partners.
- Tatsugiri-C is a mandatory partner for sweeper Dondozo, as with Commander, it combines with Dondozo to give it a +2 boost to every stat. Talonflame is a strong partner for Dondozo, damaging the Grass-types like Rillaboom and Amoonguss that might give Dondozo issues (RS) as well as providing Tailwind speed control that allows it and its team to pick up KOs on Pokemon they would otherwise be slower against, which is beneficial for Dondozo's hyper offense-focused gameplan. Another strong partner is Choice Scarf Annihilape. With Coaching, (RS) Annilhilape allows Dondozo to becomes even more threatening than it already is. Indeedee-M and Sneasler are very strong partners for this Dondozo variant as well; the combination of them can apply pressure to some of Dondozo's checks like Primarina, Rillaboom, and Amoonguss as well as applying significant pressure to Incineroar, which could otherwise give Dondozo some trouble, and the Speed boost gained from activating Psychic Seed lets Unburden Sneasler become the fastest Pokemon in the metagame, allowing it to provide significant pressure and make room for a Dondozo win later in the game.
- Common partners for support Dondozo include bulky setup Pokemon like Kingambit, Gholdengo, and Volcarona, which tend to struggle against Fire-types, which Dondozo can beat, and in turn, they resist Grass-type attacks for Dondozo and appreciate the free turns Dondozo can generate with Yawn in order to setup. Rillaboom is another strong partner for this Dondozo set, allowing it to get free turns to use Yawn with Fake Out, providing Dondozo with Grassy Terrain to boost its (RS) longevity even further, and switching into Grass-types that are used to check Dondozo, such as opposing Rillaboom and Amoonguss. Dondozo also helps Rillaboom in matchups against Fire-types, which often give it trouble. Dondozo also appreciates being paired with Follow Me users like Magmar and Electabuzz, as they can redirect Spore from Amoonguss, hamper it with Taunt, or, in Magmar's case, threaten it with a super effective Overheat. They also help to redirect attacks that Dondozo doesn't want to take, like Electro Shot from Archaludon and Wood Hammer from Rillaboom.
- Sweeper Dondozo has a lot of trouble with Haze Primarina and Clear Smog Amoonguss, which threaten to remove its stat boosts and make it a sitting duck. Because of this, many of Dondozo's partners, like Talonflame and Sneasler, are tasked with pressuring them (RS) early-game so that they do not have an opportunity to get rid of Dondozo's stat boosts. The pivoting core of Incineroar and Amoonguss also causes Dondozo some issues, as Amoonguss can put Dondozo to sleep with Spore, and Incineroar can use Intimidate and Parting Shot to drop Dondozo's Attack greatly. Pokemon like Choice Scarf Annihilape and Indeedee-M can help solve this issue, as Annihilape can use Final Gambit to remove a defensive piece on teams using Incineroar + Amoonguss such as Porygon2 while being able to OHKO Incineroar with Close Combat and boost off Intimidate via Defiant, while Indeedee-M immediately pressures Amoonguss with Expanding Force and blocks Fake Out from Incineroar with Psychic Terrain, making it easier for Dondozo to knock out Incineroar with a super effective Wave Crash.
- Bulky Dondozo is checked by Pokemon that can hit it for super effective damage, like Rillaboom and Archaludon, or give it trouble by switching around it and hindering it with status or stat drops, such as Amoonguss, Incineroar, and other supportive Dondozo. Electabuzz and Magmar are other checks to Dondozo, as they are immune to Yawn with Vital Spirit and can allow room for a partner to pressure Dondozo with Follow Me; additionally, (RS) Magmar can burn Dondozo with Will-O-Wisp, and Electabuzz can hit it super effectively with Thunderbolt. Your own forms of redirection, such as Electabuzz and Magmar, as well as some Pokemon that naturally threaten Grass-types, like Sneasler, Volcarona, and Baxcalibur, all make for great partners to Dondozo. Kingambit also helps deter Intimidate from Incineroar and can use Rillaboom to set up Swords Dance and sweep. Gholdengo can also set up on Rillaboom while naturally being immune to Spore thanks to Good As Gold.

Strategy Comments
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- Commander-boosted Dondozo's main job is to act as either a wallbreaker or a sweeper, depending on the situation. Dondozo can often win the game on the spot if placed in the right position, so choosing when to combine Dondozo with Tatsugiri-C is critical. Dondozo can often be used to weaken an opposing team to the point where its partners, like Indeedee-M, can clean up the game; conversely, Dondozo's teammates can weaken the opposition to the point where it can clean up the game with its powerful boosted attacks. Meanwhile, bulky Dondozo's main role is to act as a bulky support Pokemon that can force switches with Yawn, putting its foes in awkward positions by forcing them to either switch out or fall asleep, which allows room for Dondozo's partners, such as Kingambit, Gholdengo, and Volcarona, to set up and threaten the opponent. This is often accomplished by bringing in Dondozo against foes that it walls and using Yawn on them.
- Sweeper Dondozo teams often involve making smart early-game trades and identifying whether a threat is important to keep alive after Dondozo comes in and goes down or whether it is more important for it to do damage or KO a threat to Dondozo, allowing it to get a late-game sweep. It is also important to identify when Tatsugiri-C should come in to combine with Dondozo, as once this is done, (RS) they are fully committed and can no longer switch, making Dondozo vulnerable to being played around and answered. Dondozo should come in once enough damage has been done to the enemy team or in order to deal damage to the opposing team to allow a late-game cleanup from one of Dondozo's partners. Meanwhile, bulky Dondozo is strong both early-game and late-game, depending on the situation. Dondozo tends to use Yawn for a lot of the game, and its high bulk allows it to stick around for many turns at a time. Dondozo can also be used to provide important chip damage against foes that may threaten its partners, such as Incineroar and Volcarona, which gives Dondozo's setup partners more room to break through them. Dondozo can also force opposing setup threats, such as Kingambit, Volcarona, and Archaludon, to switch out, which makes room for its own setup ally to get in the game and threaten a sweep.
- Sweeper Dondozo is checked by every form of Amoonguss, especially Clear Smog Amoonguss, as well as Haze Primarina. Forcing early-game trades to force these pieces on the board followed by dealing significant damage to them to clean up with Dondozo is important. It is also important to understand that Dondozo should not come in every matchup, as it is just too hard to get value with Dondozo in many of them. It is vital to identify whether or not Dondozo is a good Pokemon to bring into the match with the team you are facing up against. If the opponent has enough ways to threaten Dondozo and severly hinder its progress or if Dondozo struggled to get value in a previous game, leaving Dondozo behind should be considered. Dondozo is also often checked by Rillaboom, using Fake Out to pivot around it and threatening super effective damage with Wood Hammer. It is important to force damage onto Rillaboom to allow Dondozo to pick up the KO on it or soften it up with Dondozo to allow a teammate to pick it up. The core of Incineroar and Amoonguss are is also really strong against Dondozo, so it is important to limit switching and pressure Incineroar as much as possible. Softening up Incineroar and Amoonguss with early-game pressure from the likes of Indeedee-M, Annihilape, and any other offensive partners you might have is important, and putting yourself in a favorable position against a weakened Amoonguss to KO it or its partner Incineroar is very important as well. On the other hand, bulky Dondozo is often checked by Rillaboom; however, many of Dondozo's Grass-resistant partners appreciate the ability to take advantage of Rillaboom to either set up in Volcarona and Kingambit's case or hit it super effectively in Sneasler's case. Another one of Dondozo's checks is Amoonguss, which can take advantage of Dondozo's passivity and incapacitate it with Spore, and it often doesn't mind Yawn because with Regenerator, it often likes switching out anyway. Dondozo can take advantage of it by using its partner Electabuzz or Magmar to exploit Amoonguss, using their Spore immunity to play around it and allow their sweeper to set up with smart positioning. Electabuzz can also disable Amoonguss with Taunt, which Dondozo appreciates, while Magmar can threaten Amoonguss for (leftover GP mark) with super effective damage, which weakenss (leftover GP mark) it enough to be taken advantage of late-game.


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