VGC 21 Dragapult [Series 11]

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[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Phantom Force
move 2: Fly
move 3: Dragon Darts
move 4: Dragon Dance / Protect
item: Lum Berry / Life Orb
ability: Clear Body
nature: Adamant / Jolly
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
Dragapult is a powerful attacker on a wide variety of teams thanks to its great typing, incredible Speed, and access to Max Airstream. Phantom Force can be used both defensively, by dodging incoming Max Moves, and offensively, by breaking the foe's Protect. Under Dynamax, Phantom Force becomes Max Phantasm, which allows Dragapult to easily snowball by lowering opponents' Defense. Fly is mainly used because it turns into Max Airstream, allowing Dragapult to hit Urshifu-S and raising its and its allies' Speed. Dragon Darts, thanks to its smart targeting mechanic, is able to punish defensive play without requiring any prediction from the player. Max Wyrmwind makes it difficult for the opponent to answer Dragapult offensively by weakening physical attackers such as Calyrex-I, Landorus-T, and Zacian-C. Dragon Dance is a high-risk, high-reward option that punishes passive play. Lum Berry stops Dragapult from getting crippled by Venusaur's Sleep Powder, Grimmsnarl's Thunder Wave, and Mimikyu's Will-O-Wisp, keeping its offensive presence on the field; it is especially valuable alongside Clear Body, which also prevents stat drops from the likes of Intimidate and Fake Tears. Life Orb boosts Dragapult's already good Attack significantly. Adamant Dragapult, when Dynamaxed, can pick up an OHKO on Assault Vest Rillaboom, and a 2HKO on Venusaur and Charizard under Gigantamax, with Max Phantasm. When paired with Coalossal, Dragapult runs Surf in the second moveslot to activate its Steam Engine and Weakness Policy.

Dragapult pairs well with Zacian-C, Urshifu-S, and Urshifu-R, as its Max Airstream and Max Phantasm provide them great support. Dragapult appreciates Fake Out support from the likes of Incineroar and Follow Me support from Indeedee-F to freely set up with Dragon Dance. Coalossal is also a great partner for Dragapult, since Surf Dragapult can activate Steam Engine and Weakness Policy for Coalossal thanks to its great Speed.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Pix, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[Giokio, 517038]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Finland, 517429]]
 
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Rapid thoughts before QCing
-add a sentence to introduce the pokemon
-talk about base moves first, you mention the max version after you mentioned the base move
- mention surf at the end but don't put it in the set, as it's a Dynamax set
- elaborate your sentences more, there are some missing informations
 
:ss/dragapult:
[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Phantom Force
move 2: Fly
move 3: Dragon Darts
move 4: Dragon Dance / Protect
item: Focus Sash / Lum berry / Life Orb
ability: Clear Body
nature: Adamant / Jolly
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
Dragapult is useful a powerful attacker on a wide variety of teams thanks to its great typing, incredible Speed,(AC) and Move Pool access to Max Airstream. Dragapult has a good matchup into teams that lack a answer to its fast and hard hitting moves and its partners. Phantom Force is Dragapult's strongest Ghost-Type STAB move which allows it to dodge attacks thanks to its good speed and breaking the opposing Pokemon's protect in the following turn can be used both defensively, by dodging incoming Max Moves, and offensively, by breaking the opponent's Protect. Max Phantasm helps lower defense and allows its partners to pick up KOs When Dynamaxed, Phantom Force becomes Max Phantasm, that allows Dragapult to easily snowball opponents by lowering their Defense. Fly is mainly used as it turns into Max Airstream, allowing Dragapult to hit Urshifu-S and raising itself and its allies speed. Dragon Darts is Dragapult's Dragon-type move of choice that, thanks to its smart targeting mechanic, is able to punish defensive play without requiring any prediction from the player allowing it to single target thanks to its targeting mechanic when their is a Fairy -Type on the field. Max Wyrmwind lowers to the Attack of Physical attackers such as Calyrex-I, Landorus-T, and Zacian-C. Dragon Dance is an high risk high reward option that punishes passive plays from your opponent. Alternatively When paired alongside Coalossal, Dragapult runs Surf allows Dragapult to activate its Steam Engine and Weakness Policy for Coalossal (put this sentence after the items). Focus Sash allows Dragapult to live Calyrex-S. Lum Berry allows Dragapult to avoid getting crippled by Venusaur's Sleep Powder, Grimmsnarl's Thunder Wave, and Mimikyu's Will-O-Wisp, keeping its offensive presence on the field from the likes of Will-O-Wisp and Sleep powder. Life Orb boosts Dragapult's already good Attack stat significantly (include notable OHKOS).

Dragapult pairs well with Zacian-C and Urshifu(Which one?) since, as it provides great support for them by with its DynaMax Moves, allowing them to raise their speed and lower opponents Defense defenses of the allies. Dragapult appreciates Fake Out support from the likes of Incineroar and Follow me support from Indeedee-F to allow it to freely set up with Dragon Dance (i might remove this sentence in a second QC). Coalossal is also a great partner for Dragapult since Dragapult can activate Steam Engine and Weakness Policy for Coalossal thanks to its great typing and Speed.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Pix, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[Giokio, 517038]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
mostly rewording, work on your formal English more, content wise you are good enough, but if you don't improve your wording QCs will take long. I'll give a second look once this is implemented.
 
Edited last things myself, QC 1/1
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(AC): Add Comma
[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Phantom Force
move 2: Fly
move 3: Dragon Darts
move 4: Dragon Dance / Protect
item: Lum Berry / Life Orb
ability: Clear Body
nature: Adamant / Jolly
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
Dragapult is a powerful attacker on a wide variety of teams thanks to its great typing, incredible Speed, and access to Max Airstream. Phantom Force is Dragapult's strongest Ghost-Type STAB move which can be used both defensively, by dodging incoming Max Moves, and offensively, by breaking the opponent's foe's Protect. When Dynamaxed, Under Dynamax, Phantom Force becomes Max Phantasm, that which allows Dragapult to easily snowball opponents by lowering their opponents' Defense. Fly is mainly used as because it turns into Max Airstream, allowing Dragapult to hit Urshifu-S and raising itself and its allies speed. Dragon Darts is Dragapult's Dragon-type move of choice that, allies' Speed. Dragon Darts, thanks to its smart targeting mechanic, is able to punish defensive play without requiring any prediction from the player. Max Wyrmwind makes it difficult for the opponent to answer offensively to Dragapult by lowering the Attack of Physical Dragapult offensively by weakening physical attackers such as Calyrex-I, Landorus-T, and Zacian-C. Dragon Dance is an high risk high reward a high-risk, high-reward option that punishes passive play. Lum Berry allows Dragapult to avoid stops Dragapult from getting crippled by Venusaur's Sleep Powder, Grimmsnarl's Thunder Wave, and Mimikyu's Will-O-Wisp, keeping its offensive presence on the field; it is especially valuable combined with Clear Body, that alongside Clear Body, which also prevents stat drops from the likes of Intimidate and Fake Tears. Life Orb boosts Dragapult's already good Attack significantly. Adamant Dragapult, (AC) when Dynamaxed, (AC) is able to pick up a OHKO on AV can pick up an OHKO on Assault Vest Rillaboom, and a 2HKO on Gmax Venusaur and Gmax Charizard Venusaur and Charizard under Gigantamax, with Max Phantasm. When paired alongside with Coalossal, Dragapult runs Surf in the second moveslot to activate its Steam Engine and Weakness Policy.

Dragapult pairs well with Zacian-C, Urshifu-S and Urshifu -R, as it provides great support for them with its Max Moves, allowing them to raise their Speed and lower opponents Defense. Urshifu-S, and Urshifu-R, as its Max Airstream and Max Phantasm provide them great support. Dragapult appreciates Fake Out support from the likes of Incineroar and Follow Me support from Indeedee-F to freely set up with Dragon Dance. Coalossal is also a great partner for Dragapult, (AC) since Surf Dragapult can activate Steam Engine and Weakness Policy for Coalossal thanks to its great Speed.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Pix, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[Giokio, 517038]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Finland, 517429]]
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