Eldegoss (QC 0/2) (GP 0/1)

[ImperialGamer517]

[SET]
name: Utility
move 1: Sleep Powder
move 2: Rapid Spin
move 3: Giga Drain / Leaf Storm
move 4: Pollen Puff / Leech Seed
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Regenerator
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

Eldegoss makes for a great spinner in the tier thanks to its solid special bulk, and an amazing ability in Regenerator. It also has incredible access to utility options in Rapid Spin, Sleep Powder, and Giga Drain. Sleep Powder is an amazing option for Eldegoss to stall foes and force them out. Leaf Storm can be used over Giga Drain for more power. Leech Seed can be used over Pollen Puff so that Eldegoss can wear down foes and force them out. Aromatherapy is another option for Eldegoss so that it can improve its utility options and prevent its teammates from being worn down. Heavy-Duty Boots is the preferred item so that Eldegoss can switch into hazards and remove them with ease. However, when Eldegoss isn’t running recovery options, Leftovers is the recommended item for passive recovery.

Eldegoss’s flexible utility is appreciated by a multitude of teammates. Pokemon that are prone to hazards, such as Abomasnow and Pilowsine, appreciate Eldegoss’s ability to remove hazards. Physical attackers like Toxicroak, Sawk, and Unfezant appreciate Eldegoss’s access to Aromatherapy healing burns, which would otherwise cripple them. Checks to both Rotom-A, Rotom-F, Poison-, Fire-, and Bug-types are appreciated. Sandaconda can handle Poison- and Fire-types like Toxicroak and Silvally-Fire, while Rock-types like Drednaw and Crustle can handle both Rotom formes and Bug-types.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[ImperialGamer517, 506687]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[ImperialGamer517]

This is now QC ready

 

[Rabia]

Apologies for the delay, but I've discussed with the QC team and we think it'd be best to reassign this analysis.

As I attempted to QC check this, I realized I was having to write a comment for quite literally every sentence; this should never happen. The job of QC isn't to ghost write an analysis for you; it's to guide you in the correct direction to get all the necessary content. Were I to QC this, it would basically have been the equivalent of me writing the entire thing for you.

I also believe that the mark was simply missed on much of the information here and that what you had was incredibly surface level/barebones in nature. Eldegoss is not a good spinner because of its good special bulk; that really isn't part of it at all. Aromatherapy isn't an option because "it improves Eldegoss's utility options." There's also no sentence detailing what Pollen Puff does, how Eldegoss matches up well against spinblockers, etc. Even looking at the next paragraph you say that Pokemon like Sawk and Toxicroak appreciate burn removal; when are either of these getting burned? The latter of them is even immune to Scald. These factors combined lead me to believe it'd be best if someone else wrote this analysis.