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[SET]
Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 20 SpD / 4 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to weaken the opposing team over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar and Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky Pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after Terastallization, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas and Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift half of the time.
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. It also allows Lunala to 3HKO Incineroar with Tera Fairy Moonblast.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Lunala has Terastallized, Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, and Snarl from Grimmsnarl and Incineroar.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed and appreciates bulky partners to protect itself, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both Restricted Pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, and Lunala can protect Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and devastate with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up foes that Ursaluna may not be able to take out in one hit. It also appreciates Pokemon that can clean up foes that are chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

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Ready for QC, felt like a lot of text but did not find most of it to be unnecessary/fluff; already cleaned up what did feel like it.
 
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Lunala @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy/Water
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala is a supportive restricted, capable of taking many large attacks while dealing consistent damage while being able to protect its team members from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage or Glacial lance. Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team. It's high Special Attack and high base power moves allows it to spread damage around over the course of a game, Its staying power allows it to spread damage around, allowing its team members to clean up after it. your saying all the right stuff I just think you need to clean up the wording a little bit for this first section, be a little bit more concise.
- Moongeist Beam is a very consistent move that is able to hit most Pokemon in the format for good damage, threatening to 3HKO many bulky Pokemon, as well as 2HKO Calyrex-I and opposing Lunala if they do not terastalise. you dont need to discuss moongeist beam in such detail as its fairly obvious why its there. Moonblast is a great option to hit normal Dark-types, as well as Pokemon that would take Moongeist Beam; most notably both Urshifu formes forms, Miraidon and , Koraidon, and Incineroar.
- Electric Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down trick room, depending on which is needed, or continue dealing damage. I think it's worth talking about electric seed in the context of the team composition here - it allows it to much better take on the likes of Caly-I and Koraidon as these are restricteds that Miraidon can struggle with.
- Lunala's SpA investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss, as well as 3HKO Incineroar with tera fairy Moonblast everything here is not specific to this lunala spread - a lunala spread with 100 special attack hits all these calcs as well. and having a chance to OHKO Miraidon. Its bulk allows it to survive tera fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, which would otherwise OHKO it. more like this
- Tera fairy allows Lunala to resist dark type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar and Dark Pulse from Chi-yu, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and Raging Bolt and taking neutral damage from a lot of other common types, such as Ghost. I would say tera fairy and tera water are less about alot of specific interactions, and more about wanting to tera to a defensively solid tera type. Immune to miraidons draco meteor is perhaps worth keeping tho. Tera water gives it a better matchup into Koraidon, Calyrex-I, and Urshifu-Rapid, but becomes weak to Miraidon, Raging Bolt, and Rillaboom.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to dark- and ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, and Calyrex-S. It is also 2HKO'd by opposing Lunala without a SpA boost from Meteor Beam, which would OHKO it through Shadow Shield. Include this into the abudance of dark and ghost type attacks above As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-Rapid, ignoring the defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit. After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage, Electro Drift, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. It also struggles with passivity when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Miraidon and Urshifu-Rapid.

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Jesuuuus said:
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Lunala @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy/Water
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala is a supportive restricted, capable of taking many large attacks while dealing consistent damage while being able to protect its team members from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage or Glacial lance. Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team. It's high Special Attack and high base power moves allows it to spread damage around over the course of a game, Its staying power allows it to spread damage around, allowing its team members to clean up after it. your saying all the right stuff I just think you need to clean up the wording a little bit for this first section, be a little bit more concise.
- Moongeist Beam is a very consistent move that is able to hit most Pokemon in the format for good damage, threatening to 3HKO many bulky Pokemon, as well as 2HKO Calyrex-I and opposing Lunala if they do not terastalise. you dont need to discuss moongeist beam in such detail as its fairly obvious why its there. Moonblast is a great option to hit normal Dark-types, as well as Pokemon that would take Moongeist Beam; most notably both Urshifu formes forms, Miraidon and , Koraidon, and Incineroar.
- Electric Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down trick room, depending on which is needed, or continue dealing damage. I think it's worth talking about electric seed in the context of the team composition here - it allows it to much better take on the likes of Caly-I and Koraidon as these are restricteds that Miraidon can struggle with.
- Lunala's SpA investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss, as well as 3HKO Incineroar with tera fairy Moonblast everything here is not specific to this lunala spread - a lunala spread with 100 special attack hits all these calcs as well. and having a chance to OHKO Miraidon. Its bulk allows it to survive tera fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, which would otherwise OHKO it. more like this
- Tera fairy allows Lunala to resist dark type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar and Dark Pulse from Chi-yu, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and Raging Bolt and taking neutral damage from a lot of other common types, such as Ghost. I would say tera fairy and tera water are less about alot of specific interactions, and more about wanting to tera to a defensively solid tera type. Immune to miraidons draco meteor is perhaps worth keeping tho. Tera water gives it a better matchup into Koraidon, Calyrex-I, and Urshifu-Rapid, but becomes weak to Miraidon, Raging Bolt, and Rillaboom.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to dark- and ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, and Calyrex-S. It is also 2HKO'd by opposing Lunala without a SpA boost from Meteor Beam, which would OHKO it through Shadow Shield. Include this into the abudance of dark and ghost type attacks above As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-Rapid, ignoring the defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit. After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage, Electro Drift, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. It also struggles with passivity when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Miraidon and Urshifu-Rapid.

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Implemented most of this - will work on the EVs section a bit later.
 
Good work, I would like to have a quick recheck after you implement these changes, remember to have this thread open when writing to ensure your writing meets the grammar standards, you had a few incorrect naming conventions

Electric Seed (Lunala) @ Electric Seed Needs a set name, I went with Electric Seed but you can change it to something like "Bulky Support" if you prefer
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy/Water All of the Day 2 Electric Seed Lunalas at Milwaukee were Tera Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial lance Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and high base power moves Nit-picking here slightly but Moongeist Beam and Moonblast aren't attacks I would consider to be high base power in this metagame, they are strong but 100 and 95 feel average rather than high to me, replace this with something like "strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks" instead allows it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moongeist Beam is a very consistent move, threatening to 3HKO many bulky pokemon. Moongeist Beam doesn't really need to be explained unless you would like to talk about its secondary effect Moonblast is a great option to hit dark Dark-types such as Incineroar, normal Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu forms formes.
- Electric seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down trick room Trick Room, depending on which is needed, This is fluff or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's SpA Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss With?, as well as 3HKO Incineroar with tera fairy Moonblast and having a chance to OHKO Miraidon. Move this to the next bullet point, this point should be calcs solely based on its EV spread Its bulk allows it to survive tera fire Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with the rest of the EVs dumped into SpA This is a weird mention, if Lunala doesn't need the full 180 EVs to achieve the above offensive calcs they should be put into its bulk instead with a few points in both Spe Speed and SpDef Special Defense. You should mention why 12 EVs should be put into both Speed and Special Defense, otherwise why shouldn't they be invested into Defense or Special Attack to let it take other physical attacks better or have a better damage roll
- Tera fairy Fairy allows Lunala to resist dark Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and taking neutral damage from a lot of other common types, such as Ghost It is quite important to mention that Tera Fairy removes Lunala's weakness to Ghost-types rather than saying it lets Lunala take neutral damage from common types. Tera water gives it a better matchup into Koraidon, Calyrex-I, and Urshifu-Rapid, but becomes weak to Miraidon, Raging Bolt, and Rillaboom. Removed from set

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to dark Dark- and ghost Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-Rapid, ignoring the defense Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit. After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage, This shouldn't be mentioned unless you mention that Lunala has terastallized in this sentence Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. It also struggles with passivity This doesn't sound like the correct word choice, just say Lunala is very passive when its Special Attack is reduced by those moves instead when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Miraidon and Already mentioned Urshifu-Rapid.

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RauVGC said:
Good work, I would like to have a quick recheck after you implement these changes, remember to have this thread open when writing to ensure your writing meets the grammar standards, you had a few incorrect naming conventions

Electric Seed (Lunala) @ Electric Seed Needs a set name, I went with Electric Seed but you can change it to something like "Bulky Support" if you prefer
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy/Water All of the Day 2 Electric Seed Lunalas at Milwaukee were Tera Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial lance Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and high base power moves Nit-picking here slightly but Moongeist Beam and Moonblast aren't attacks I would consider to be high base power in this metagame, they are strong but 100 and 95 feel average rather than high to me, replace this with something like "strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks" instead allows it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moongeist Beam is a very consistent move, threatening to 3HKO many bulky pokemon. Moongeist Beam doesn't really need to be explained unless you would like to talk about its secondary effect Moonblast is a great option to hit dark Dark-types such as Incineroar, normal Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu forms formes.
- Electric seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down trick room Trick Room, depending on which is needed, This is fluff or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's SpA Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss With?, as well as 3HKO Incineroar with tera fairy Moonblast and having a chance to OHKO Miraidon. Move this to the next bullet point, this point should be calcs solely based on its EV spread Its bulk allows it to survive tera fire Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with the rest of the EVs dumped into SpA This is a weird mention, if Lunala doesn't need the full 180 EVs to achieve the above offensive calcs they should be put into its bulk instead with a few points in both Spe Speed and SpDef Special Defense. You should mention why 12 EVs should be put into both Speed and Special Defense, otherwise why shouldn't they be invested into Defense or Special Attack to let it take other physical attacks better or have a better damage roll
- Tera fairy Fairy allows Lunala to resist dark Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and taking neutral damage from a lot of other common types, such as Ghost It is quite important to mention that Tera Fairy removes Lunala's weakness to Ghost-types rather than saying it lets Lunala take neutral damage from common types. Tera water gives it a better matchup into Koraidon, Calyrex-I, and Urshifu-Rapid, but becomes weak to Miraidon, Raging Bolt, and Rillaboom. Removed from set

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to dark Dark- and ghost Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-Rapid, ignoring the defense Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit. After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage, This shouldn't be mentioned unless you mention that Lunala has terastallized in this sentence Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. It also struggles with passivity This doesn't sound like the correct word choice, just say Lunala is very passive when its Special Attack is reduced by those moves instead when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Miraidon and Already mentioned Urshifu-Rapid.

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100 base power moves are now average what has the world come to
 
RauVGC said:
Good work, I would like to have a quick recheck after you implement these changes, remember to have this thread open when writing to ensure your writing meets the grammar standards, you had a few incorrect naming conventions

Electric Seed (Lunala) @ Electric Seed Needs a set name, I went with Electric Seed but you can change it to something like "Bulky Support" if you prefer
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy/Water All of the Day 2 Electric Seed Lunalas at Milwaukee were Tera Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial lance Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and high base power moves Nit-picking here slightly but Moongeist Beam and Moonblast aren't attacks I would consider to be high base power in this metagame, they are strong but 100 and 95 feel average rather than high to me, replace this with something like "strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks" instead allows it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moongeist Beam is a very consistent move, threatening to 3HKO many bulky pokemon. Moongeist Beam doesn't really need to be explained unless you would like to talk about its secondary effect Moonblast is a great option to hit dark Dark-types such as Incineroar, normal Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu forms formes.
- Electric seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down trick room Trick Room, depending on which is needed, This is fluff or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's SpA Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss With?, as well as 3HKO Incineroar with tera fairy Moonblast and having a chance to OHKO Miraidon. Move this to the next bullet point, this point should be calcs solely based on its EV spread Its bulk allows it to survive tera fire Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with the rest of the EVs dumped into SpA This is a weird mention, if Lunala doesn't need the full 180 EVs to achieve the above offensive calcs they should be put into its bulk instead with a few points in both Spe Speed and SpDef Special Defense. You should mention why 12 EVs should be put into both Speed and Special Defense, otherwise why shouldn't they be invested into Defense or Special Attack to let it take other physical attacks better or have a better damage roll
- Tera fairy Fairy allows Lunala to resist dark Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and taking neutral damage from a lot of other common types, such as Ghost It is quite important to mention that Tera Fairy removes Lunala's weakness to Ghost-types rather than saying it lets Lunala take neutral damage from common types. Tera water gives it a better matchup into Koraidon, Calyrex-I, and Urshifu-Rapid, but becomes weak to Miraidon, Raging Bolt, and Rillaboom. Removed from set

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to dark Dark- and ghost Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-Rapid, ignoring the defense Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit. After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage, This shouldn't be mentioned unless you mention that Lunala has terastallized in this sentence Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. It also struggles with passivity This doesn't sound like the correct word choice, just say Lunala is very passive when its Special Attack is reduced by those moves instead when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Miraidon and Already mentioned Urshifu-Rapid.

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Ready for recheck!
 
This looks good to me, make these final changes and you may move onto QC 2
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Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam, as well as hit the stat bump Stat bumps shouldn't be mentioned. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with a few points in both Speed, to speed creep other Lunala and Special Defense, to give it a better damage roll against Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift.
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing, Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R. Rereading these bullet points looked quite big so they should be broken down into more bullet points, you can categorise these points differently if you like as long as the originals have been broken up

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RauVGC said:
This looks good to me, make these final changes and you may move onto QC 2
View attachment 740508

Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam, as well as hit the stat bump Stat bumps shouldn't be mentioned. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with a few points in both Speed, to speed creep other Lunala and Special Defense, to give it a better damage roll against Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift.
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing, Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R. Rereading these bullet points looked quite big so they should be broken down into more bullet points, you can categorise these points differently if you like as long as the originals have been broken up

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Ready for QC 2 - i pretty much split the bullet points at the same point as you, as it seemed like a fairly natural way to do it.
 
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Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric seed Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with a few points in both Speed, to speed creep other Lunala and Special Defense, to give it a better damage roll against Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift. (We don't do speed creep in analysis sets, either find something that it outspeeds or move it all into spdef)
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. (mention that it boosts Moonblast)

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing(who is doing the terastalizing here?), Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl. (From who?)
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon Pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

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Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric seed Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with a few points in both Speed, to speed creep other Lunala and Special Defense, to give it a better damage roll against Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift. (We don't do speed creep in analysis sets, either find something that it outspeeds or move it all into spdef)
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. (mention that it boosts Moonblast)

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing(who is doing the terastalizing here?), Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl. (From who?)
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon Pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

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Might take a bit longer to implement, im at utrecht
 
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Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 12 SpD / 12 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support it's its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric seed Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas, with a few points in both Speed, to speed creep other Lunala and Special Defense, to give it a better damage roll against Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift. (We don't do speed creep in analysis sets, either find something that it outspeeds or move it all into spdef)
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. (mention that it boosts Moonblast)

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without terastallizing Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing(who is doing the terastalizing here?), Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or Snarl. (From who?)
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both restricted pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates pokemon Pokemon who can clean up opponents after being chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

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Implemented, it now has a 50% roll against specs timid mirai without shadow shield which i worded as "half of the time".
 
The “spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners“ part should probably be reworded for clarity, probably to something along the lines of “…deal massive chip damage, allowing its partners”
The original isn’t precise as to what you mean, and it could even be mistaken as Lunala having spread moves, which it doesn’t.
 
CodeVG said:
The “spread damage around over the course of a game, allowing its partners“ part should probably be reworded for clarity, probably to something along the lines of “…deal massive chip damage, allowing its partners”
The original isn’t precise as to what you mean, and it could even be mistaken as Lunala having spread moves, which it doesn’t.
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I think its fine as is, the meaning was pretty clear to me
 
Right, but describing it as chip damage aligns more clearly with the partners cleaning up part, and many can probably still understand it as is, but “spread damage” is bad word choice
 
:pmd/lunala:

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[SET]
Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 20 SpD / 4 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around weaken the opposing team over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, (RC) and Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky Pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation Terastallization, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas and survive Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift half of the time.
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, (RC) while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. It also allows Lunala to 3HKO Incineroar with Moonblast boosted by Tera Fairy Moonblast.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing to Fairy Lunala has Terastallized, Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or and Snarl from Grimmsnarl
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, (RC) and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala itself, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both Restricted Pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates Pokemon who that can clean up opponents after being foes that are chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/carrotman.668837/
Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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GP Team done
 
Tbolt said:
:pmd/lunala:

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[SET]
Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 20 SpD / 4 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to spread damage around weaken the opposing team over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar, (RC) and Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky Pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after terastalisation Terastallization, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas and survive Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift half of the time.
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar, (RC) while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. It also allows Lunala to 3HKO Incineroar with Moonblast boosted by Tera Fairy Moonblast.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Terastallizing to Fairy Lunala has Terastallized, Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, or and Snarl from Grimmsnarl
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed, (RC) and appreciates bulky partners to protect Lunala itself, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both Restricted Pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts. It also appreciates Pokemon who that can clean up opponents after being foes that are chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/carrotman.668837/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/jesuuuus.627748/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rauvgc.589964/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ipetbigfoot.645750/
Grammar checked by:
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GP Team done
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Implemented, did you want to do another recheck or shall i mark this as done?
 
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[SET]
Bulky Support (Lunala) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Shadow Shield
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 132 HP / 172 Def / 180 SpA / 20 SpD / 4 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moongeist Beam
- Moonblast
- Trick Room
- Wide Guard

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Lunala leverages its high bulk with Shadow Shield and wide movepool to support its team, mainly protecting it from spread attacks such as Astral Barrage and Glacial Lance with Wide Guard. Its high Special Attack and strong Ghost- and Fairy-type attacks allow it to weaken the opposing team over the course of a game, allowing its partners to clean up after it.
- Moonblast is a great option to hit Dark-types such as Incineroar and Normal-types like Ursaluna, as well as OHKO both Urshifu formes.
- Electric Seed allows Lunala to feel much less threatened by strong physical attacks such as Glacial Lance from Calyrex-I, Flare Blitz from Koraidon, and Headlong Rush from Ursaluna. This lets Lunala both set up and take down Trick Room or continue dealing damage.
- Lunala's Special Attack investment allows it to 3HKO many bulky Pokemon, such as Zamazenta-C, Calyrex-I after Terastallization, and Amoonguss with Moongeist Beam. Its bulk allows it to survive Tera Fire Flare Blitz from Ability Shield Koraidon under Neutralizing Gas and Timid Choice Specs Miraidon Electro Drift half of the time.
- Tera Fairy allows Lunala to resist Dark-type attacks such as Knock Off from Incineroar while being immune to Draco Meteor from Miraidon and removing Lunala's weakness to Ghost. It also allows Lunala to 3HKO Incineroar with Tera Fairy Moonblast.

Teambuilding
=========
- Lunala often struggles to stay safe without Terastallizing, mainly due to Dark- and Ghost-type attacks from Incineroar, Chi-Yu, Lunala, and Calyrex-S. As such, it is not hard to force it to Terastallize. It can also struggle against Urshifu-R, ignoring the Defense boost with Surging Strikes and only being affected by Shadow Shield on the first hit.
- After Shadow Shield is broken, it can be quickly knocked out with strong neutral attacks such as Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S after Lunala has Terastallized, Electro Drift from Miraidon, and Flare Blitz from Koraidon. Lunala can also become very passive when weakened by moves such as Spirit Break, Parting Shot, and Snarl from Grimmsnarl and Incineroar.
- Lunala requires Miraidon as a partner to activate its Electric Seed and appreciates bulky partners to protect itself, such as Incineroar. It works very well with Assault Vest Miraidon, as it allows both Restricted Pokemon on the team to soak up damage and use consistent strong attacks to chunk down foes, while protecting and Lunala can protect Miraidon from Glacial Lance with Wide Guard.
- Ursaluna is also a great partner for it, as it can be very difficult to deny Trick Room from Lunala, allowing Ursaluna to get on the field and sweep devastate with Facade or Headlong Rush, while Lunala cleans up knockouts foes that Ursaluna may not be able to take out in one hit. It also appreciates Pokemon that can clean up foes that are chipped down by Lunala, such as Urshifu-R.

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