First OU Team

[Atomsk777]

This is my first competetive OU team, I made it because until now, I was just slapping together some pokes, and they couldnt really do much in OU...

Jirachi:Timid@Leftovers
Evs: 252 Hp/80 SpA/ 176 Spe
-Substitute
-Calm Mind
-Psychic
-Thunderbolt

Description: Its a standard CM Jirachi, I chose it because I've never run one before, but know firsthand just how devastating they can be.
This is meant to do a hefty amount of sweeping of course, and it can take down just about anything.

Swampert:Relaxed@Leftovers
Evs: 240 Hp/216 Def/ 52 SpA
-Earthquake
-Ice Beam
-Surf
-Stealth Rock
Description:I chose Swampert to help take down Tyrantitar and if I can predict a switch-in I can hit an Grass or Flying type with Ice Beam. I put Stealth Rock on it so that I have some extra help from switch ins, and almost stops flying types completely (except maybe Skarmory who is a BITCH)

Weavile:Jolly@Choice band
Evs: 40 Hp/ 252 Atk/ 216 Spe
-Pursuit
-Ice Shard
-Brick Break
-Night Slash
Description: Standard Weavile, I wanted to be able to stop Celebi, which is the bane of my previous 2 pokemon, so right there I had decided upon Pursuit. I wasn't sure if I should make this guy my lead, because with Ice Shard he almost ALWAYS gets off tthe first Hit, and then I could take him out afer that.... also, I was wondering if I should put in Ice Punch... due to the fact that this is meant to stop Celebi, I put in Night Slash just in case they don't switch, but maybe Ice Punch would be better

Rotom-H:Bold@Leftovers
Evs: 252 Hp/168 Def/88 Spe
-Thunderbolt
-Shadow Ball
-Overheat
-Will-o-Wisp
Description: It is supposed to be used to both be a spin blocker, and help with those stupid steel types. Oh, and Gyarados too. There's not much to say about this.... Will-o-wisp is there to help slow down Tyrantitar, and then get out Thunderbolt is there because I didn't like Dischardge's lower attack.

Hariyama:Impish@Leftovers-Thick Fat
Evs: 80 Hp/172 Atk/252 Def/4 Spe
-Force palm
-Ice Punch
-Whirlwind
-Knock Off
Description: This Hariyama is to help stop Blissey and Snorlax, and to help by Whirlwinding pokemon... I put on Ice Punch so it could take out flying types that I can predict coming in

OR

Heracross:Jolly@Choice Scarf
Evs: 252 Atk/252 Spe/4 Def
-Megahorn
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-Night Slash
Description: This ALSO helps with Blissey and Snorlax, but it has a fear of Flying Types whereas Hariyama can do some damage and possibly even kill them. But Heracross also helps out against Celebi with Megahorn...

The last Pokemon I don't know, and I'm having trouble deciding... I know I want it to be a Special Wall, maybe Cresselia or Defensive CM latias... I need some help with that.... i'm open to any and ALL suggestions, I want you guys to pick Heracross OR hariyama, whichever one you guys think is best. Please, PLEASE help me with the last poke.... oh, and I was wondering if Weavile should be a lead.. or what... that or Jirachi... or maybe you have a better idea? anyway, now i'm ranting... please
RMT

 

[Kachalski]

This took me back a bit. Not to be a mini-mod, but you have posted here over 1,500 times, but you don't know how to post an appropriate RMT? Re-read the rules, as I'm sure Haunter will say, this is breaking a few of them.

 

[haunter]

Exactly rule 2:

2. Do not post incomplete teams. If you are smart enough to pick five Pokemon, you can easily pick another one. If you are smart enough to pick nine, you can easily cut that down to six. Make sure to include natures, EV spreads and items. If you are unsure of your selections, make a note of this or simply add a question mark after them so team raters can help you focus on perceived problems first.

Self-explanatory. Post a team made of 6 Pokemon;

rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to provide more detailed descriptions for your Pokemon;

rule 16:

16. Play with your team before putting it up for rate. We as a community cannot emphasize this enough. No one wants to rate the team that you freshly created while eating breakfast or the gimmick you randomly put together. We as a community want teams that have been battle tested so that the obvious flaws have been hammered out.

We're not supposed to build you a team.