First OU Team

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Ok so I'm not to active here, but I am active at GR forums and I wanted some advice from here. I already posted this there but I'm still looking for other suggestions.

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Celebi @ Leftovers
Timid. 252 Spe/SpAtk, 6 HP
~Earth Power
~Leaf Storm
~Stealth Rock
~U-Turn

Mainly to set up rocks. If there's a Hippowdon/Swampert, I go with Leaf Storm. Infernape can be taken care of with Earth Power. U-Turn to scout the team/switch out.

Electivire @ Expert Belt
Adamant. 252 Atk/Spe, 6 HP
~EQ
~TPunch
~Ice Punch
~Cross Chop

Standard setup, gets STAB on TPunch, and hits most of the types Super Effective, which is why I put on the Expert Belt.

Jolteon @ Focus Sash
Timid. 252 Spe/SpAtk, 6 HP
~HP Ice
~TBolt
~Shadow Ball
~???

Still looking for a 4th move. I currently have TWave, but others said its not needed. Also Sashed because I don't like being locked in with a Scarf/Specs. Any suggestions for and item?

Heracross @ Choice Scarf
Jolly. 252 Spe/Atk, 6 HP
~Megahorn
~Close Combat
~Stone Edge
~Night Slash

Megahorn and CC are both great 120 base STAB. Stone Edge picks on the flyings that do 4x, and Night Slash is for ghosts like Gengar or for the Psychics.

Infernape @ Choice Band
Naive. 252 Spe, rest unknown
~Close Combat
~EQ
~TPunch
~Flare Blitz

I'm pretty sure this is used for a Physically base mixape, but all its moves were physical when I got it. I know its ev'd because its speed is near max, but its attack/SpAtk are mixed. Any suggestions on what to do with this?

Dusknoir @ Leftovers
Impish. 252 HP, 28 Atk, 228 Def
~Will o Wisp
~Pain Split
~EQ
~Ice Punch

I have really no idea how to use Pain Split because I got this in a trade, but I know its used for blissey. I was thinking of trading it for Shadow Sneak (yes or no?). Will o Wisp is to cripple sweepers, EQ and Ice Punch are just for attacking.

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I'm not really that good, so I need help. Please CnC this team and give me suggestions.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see examples of what we're looking for in an RMT!

If you improve your explanations for your Pokémon, please private message me indicating that you've done so by showing me your new descriptions. Once you've done that, I will re-open this thread. Thanks.