First real team, please rate/comment :)

[DTPprog]

The team name is: Slow n' Steady

This team is meant to be very defensive. I don't know the EV's yet but they will be all def/spD/hp I'm thinking. I plan to open with bronzong most of the time for trick room since my team is slow. Here it is:

Bronzong:Trick room/Balanced wall/Some damage
Nature:Sassy(spD+/spe-)
Item:Sitrus Berry
Moves:
Trick Room
Gyro Ball
Hypnosis
Explosion

Spiritomb:Balanced wall/Some damage
Nature:Careful(spD+/spA-)
Item:Lum Berry
Moves:
Sucker Punch
Will-O-Wisp
Pursuit
Pain Split

Weezing:Physical wall/Some damage
Nature:Bold(def+/att-)
Item:Black Sludge
Moves:
Flamethrower
Thunderbolt
Haze
Pain Split

Shuckle:Staller/Annoyer
Nature:Impish(def+/spA-)
Item:Chesto Berry
Moves:
Encore
Rest
Toxic
Stealth Rock

Blissey:Special wall/Status support
Nature:Calm(spD+/att-)
Item:Leftovers
Moves:
Soft-boiled
Aromatherapy
Ice Beam
Toxic

Torkoal:Hazard support
Nature:Relaxed(def+/spe-)
Item:White Herb
Moves:
Rapid Spin
Stealth Rock
Overheat
Explosion

 

[DDRMaster]

You need to figure out the EVs and give your Pokemon descriptions or this thread will be locked; you should try using sprites as well. Your team is very unorthidox, so you should have a good reason to be using these Pokemon over more standard ones.

 

[DTPprog]

These are all standard walls except Torkaol right? I want an all defensive team mostly because I like long battles. Torkoal is there for hazards and he has good defense/low speed to work with trick room.

 

[DDRMaster]

Bronzong and Blissey are OU (aka standard), Spiritomb and Weezing are UU, and Torkoal and Shuckle are NU. There are much better spinners out there for Stall like Forretress and Tentacruel and both of them can set up more entry hazards than SR.

Edit: Also, none of these Pokemon can take on Infernape if Trick Room is down (and it will be) except Torkoal and it has to resort to Exploding. Tentacruel can wall it and still use Rapid Spin.

 

[Jibaku]

Locking thread due to this:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.