ORAS OU First RMT - HELP ME >_<

Kiki~

Kiki~

HI!

I'm Kiki, and this is my first RMT. I love play pokemon, and everything is new to me. Things like EV and IV, Nature... So, my friend talk to me that pokemon have a lot of things to think about before put a team on a battle. I'm still trying to creat a decent stall team. I played with baton pass, but it was nerfed, and now, i don't know how to play anything more, so i was playing since LC to OU, tier by tier till i find a way to understando how a team is build.


Stall is just a way to play confortable, without think aboult what my oponent will do, or anything else. If he put a Jolteon i change to my Blissey and blá blá blá. Because i don't wanna think if this jolteon are predicting my switch to a garchomp, just to use a HP Ice. (OH, sorry, i'm talking a lot, i'll stop now).


Before i continue, i ask all of you to be patient with my ortography error, or confuse words, because i can't speak english well yet. XD


So, lets go.



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First Pokemon i Chose.


OWL CITY (Quagsire) (M) @ Leftovers

Ability: Unaware

Shiny: Yes

EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def

Impish Nature

- Ice Beam

- Earthquake

- Toxic

- Recover


Quasire is a necessery pokemon for all my stall team. Just because i don't have a powerful pokemon to force my oponent to switch. I used a lot of movesets, like Scald, Amnesia, Haze, Infestation. Everything works under UNAWARE. But actualy, when my oponent face my full stall team, they know what i'll do, because they know all aboult what my pokemon can do.

Ice Beam is to Landorus, Gliscor or Serperior (In switch). Earthquake to take Heatran or Bisharp. Toxic is to care Azumaril, Cloyster and a lot of pokemon that switch in Quagsire. Recovery to stay alive.

Quag received this name, because now he is my favorite pokemon, like Owl City, that are my favorite musical band. He can take care aboult Mega Altaria too. OMG, he can beat Dragonite.


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The second pokemon was

BETTER THAN SABLEYE (Venusaur) (F) @ Venusaurite

Ability: Chlorophyll

Shiny: Yes

EVs: 248 HP / 8 Atk / 252 Def

Relaxed Nature

- Synthesis

- Growth

- Sludge Bomb

- Earthquake


I tryed to use M-sableye, because he have sucker punch (gengar, espeon, alakazan, Latios) knock off, wow and recovery. Prankster + MagicBounce. But was very hard to play against a lot of pokemon. M-Venussaur cant take Heatran and Serperior.

It is my only answer to Keldeo in this team. Can take damage of Conkeldur, and poison a lot of Pokémon with sludge bomb.



SHOTINGSTAR (Skarmory) (M) @ Shed Shell

Ability: Sturdy

Shiny: Yes

EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def

Bold Nature

- Defog

- Roost

- Drill Peck

- Spikes


Skarmory is my defoger and Spiker. He can’t die before M-Pinsir, M-Lopuny die, because He is my only counter for they. I have nothing more to say aboult He. But still, shed Shell is to run aboult arena trapers.


DIAMOND ON ME (Hippowdon) (F) @ Leftovers

Ability: Sand Force

Shiny: Yes

EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def

Impish Nature

- Ice Fang

- Earthquake

- Slack Off

- Stealth Rock


One of my top dificults was take care aboult charizard X. I tryed to use slowbro and a lot of another Pokémon, but i have to used Hippowdon. Sand Force is because i don’t wanna use sand stream. My Venussaur need to syntesis all time. Ice Fang can be changed i think. Stealth rock and a Stab earthquake that do a great damage on tyranitar.

Excadrill can be cheked by this Pokémon.


BITCSSEY (Chansey) @ Eviolite

Ability: Natural Cure

Shiny: Yes

EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD

Bold Nature

- Soft-Boiled

- Wish

- Toxic

- Heal Bell


I was used my Blissey a lot of time, but was hard to resist Latios, Alakazan and M-Gardevoir. Now, i can resist Landorus Earthquake and more. Toxic to slowbro, wish to my team on change and heal Bell that i really need to stay alive. I need seismictoss, but i don’t know how to change it. Mega Charizard Y can only be countered by Chansey’s toxic.



To end this

PIEW (Mew) @ Leftovers

Ability: Synchronize

Shiny: Yes

EVs: 252 HP / 252 SpD

Careful Nature

- Taunt

- Sucker Punch

- Gunk Shot

- Will-O-Wisp


Mew ... Sucker Punch is to kill Alakazan, Gengar or another Pokémon. WOW is good to take pokemons with MagicBounce because Mew have Synchronize. Taunt to take Clefables. Gunk Shot to fairy pokemons.






This team is not perfect. I want to do the Best stall team a can do. But for this time, thats all i can do.

My team can’t live against critical hits, Manaphy, Keldeo or another Pokémon that have a huge Power stats. Cradawnt can kill my team.
Team with pokemons with unexpected moveset like Talonflame with Solarbeam, can beat my team. Just one flinch on my quagsire and everything is down.


I loved this team, but i wanna help to do better.

Thanks to read my first RMT, and please, sorry again for my english.

Kiki~
(Someone help me with Image and format D:)
 
Even though I dislike facing stall, I have to say your stall team looks might fine! But there are a few suggestions that may or may not help.

Starting with Mega Venusaur, I'd recommend replacing Growth with Giga Drain. Having Grass STAB is important for Venusaur, as it can hit Pokemon like Keldeo, Crawdaunt, Manaphy, and Rotom-W super effectively. Also I see that you have Earthquake on it too, and I know that it's there to take on Steel types and Fire types, but Earthquake isn't even a guaranteed KO after rocks from Mega Venusaur's Earthquake, which is surprising. You also have a very sturdy Quagsire, so I'd recommend running a move like Hidden Power Fire instead of Earthquake, which also hit's steel types.

On Skarmory, instead of Shell Bell, Leftovers is a better choice. Getting trapped by Magnezone isn't fun, but again, Quagsire walls most Magnezone sets. Also, if you're gonna use Flying STAB, use Brave Bird for higher Base Power.

For Hippowdon, you should probably change it's ability to Sand Stream to add chip damage on opposing Pokemon. Ice Fang is nice to hit the Flying Types, but Stone Edge may be better, as it also hits Talonflame and Charizard Y super effectively.

On Chansey, replacing either Softboiled or Wish with Seismic Toss would be smart. This allows Chansey to still have a last resort move when it gets taunted. I would use Softboiled, but it really depends on if you want it to be a hard wall or a cleric.

Your Mew set is pretty cool, and your Quagsire set is nice too.


By the way, for images of your Pokemon, search the image of the Pokemon you want, click on the photo, right-click, and select "Copy Image URL." Then, go to the top bar of your post, click the icon with the picture on it, and paste the URL.

Good luck on your team!
 
Hi Kiki-

ORAS OU stall/fat balanced teams take advantage from the entry hazards set up, and they weaken the opposing team; but you are completely weak to hazards setters, and you can't have a good stall team in this way, since the hazards will put a lot of pressure against your team; and you can't even run both Defog and Spikes on Skarmory because it's almost detrimental for your team because your only way to remove entry hazards can't include the elimination of your own hazards you have set up so far throughout the game.

Mega Sableye is mandatory for its ability to spinblock and block hazards setting, but if you don't want it, I think you can still improve your team.

When you say you can't deal with Charizard X, you forget about Quagsire being his #1 counter, just stall it out with Toxic, Dragon Claw doesn't 2HKO you, so it's pretty cool, and you don't need a dedicated slot for Hippowdon (which is a worse counter than Quagsire anyways lol), then replace Ice Beam with Scald because Scald hits almost the same targets as Ice Beam, has a cool burn ratio which helps you against Scizor, and you don't need to deal a subpar damage to Serperior lol.
Then, I made a more offensive spread for Venusaur because I feel like you don't need another wall in this team, and it is still enough to get rid of Serperior which is the only reason of Venusaur over Mega Sableye. Hidden Power Fire is much better than Earthquake because you have plenty of Pokemon able to deal with Heatran's variants, so you don't need a lure for it. Anyways I'll leave you two different EVs spreads for Mega Venusaur: you are free to choose your favourite one.
As I said previously, you don't need a slot for Hippowdon, so I replaced it with Reflect Type Starmie, which is a cool way to keep hazards control without Mega Sableye.
Then, as I removed the useless Hippowdon from your team, you need a Stealth Rock setter; so I put Stealth Rock over Wish on Chansey, and Seismic Toss over Heal Bell, because your Chansey cannot be Taunt bait.
Finally I replaced your Mew (without recovery, which is pretty useless in a stall team) with cleric Unaware Clefable, since you lost Heal Bell and Wishpass on Chansey, I thought to add a less-passive way to heal the team; despite of this, I feel that your team has a stacked weakness to Mega Gardevoir, and Stallbreaker Talonflame is annoying as well once Quagsire has gone, so I'll leave you a Special Defensive set for Skarmory, but this makes you weaker to Physical variants of Hoopa-U. Full stall without Mega-Sableye is pretty difficult to use, but I wish you all the best for your team.
Venusaur (F) @ Venusaurite
Ability: Chlorophyll
EVs: 184 HP / 180 SpA / 144 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 30 SpA / 30 Spe
- Synthesis
- Sludge Bomb
- Giga Drain
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Starmie @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 248 HP / 8 Def / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Rapid Spin
- Scald
- Reflect Type
- Recover

Clefable @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 160 Def / 96 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Wish
- Protect
- Moonblast
- Heal Bell

Skarmory @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 240 HP / 252 Def / 16 Spe
Impish Nature
- Spikes
- Roost
- Whirlwind
- Iron Head

Chansey @ Eviolite
Ability: Natural Cure
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD
Bold Nature
- Soft-Boiled
- Seismic Toss
- Toxic
- Stealth Rock

Quagsire (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Scald
- Earthquake
- Toxic
- Recover

Venusaur (F) @ Venusaurite
Ability: Chlorophyll
EVs: 240 HP / 80 SpA / 188 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 30 SpA / 30 Spe
- Synthesis
- Sludge Bomb
- Giga Drain
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Skarmory @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 240 HP / 36 Atk / 216 SpD / 16 Spe
Careful Nature
- Counter
- Roost
- Defog
- Iron Head

Hope I helped!
 
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