First RMT here, have had others

[JMagician1990]

Hey just posting a quick team that I like so far but need others opinions on it because things are different in everyones view.

Early Look

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Azelf @ Focus Sash
Levitate
Naive
6 HP/252 Sp.Atk/252 Speed
-Psychic
-Taunt
-Fire Blast
-Explosion

Pretty basic Azelf lead. Except this one doesnt carry Stealth Rocks as my Swampert does. This ones purpose is to stop other leads from getting there rocks up and to leave a nice dent in teams.

Gyarados @ Leftovers
Adamant
Intimidate
6 HP/252 Atk/252 Speed
-Waterfall
-Dragon Dance
-Ice Fang
-Earthquake

Another really standard pokemon but extremely dangerous. Adamant gyarados has the potential to sweep a lot of teams. Get a DD up and go to work. Purpose of him on here is a nice ground immunity and a solid psyichal sweeper.

Snorlax @ Leftovers
Careful
Immunity (dont have thick fat one)
168 HP/120 Def/220 Sp.Def
-Body Slam
-Curse
-Fire Punch
-Rest

Snorlax is a great pokemon. Can taske special attacks with ease in most cases and can curse up to take physical attacks nicely as well. Fire punch stops all those pesky Steel types from setting up and such.

Heatran @ Choice Scarf
Naive
Flash Fire
6 HP/252 Sp.Atk/252 Speed
-Earth Power
-HP Ice
-Overheat
-Explosion

Yea another Scarf Heatran lol. This one has overheat over fire blast for more damage when it gets in and attacks. Protects my scizor to an extent and kills a lot of pokemon because its scarfed :P

Swampert @ Leftovers
Relaxed
Torrent
240 HP/216 Def/52 Sp.Atk
-Earthquake
-Ice Beam
-Roar
-Stealth Rock

Standard SR swampert. Only real difference is I dropped surf for Roar to stop things from setting up. He fits this role quite nicely as his bulkiness allows him to not get OHKO often.

Scizor @ Choice Band
Adamant
Technician
252 HP/252 Atk/6 Speed
-Bulletpunch
-U-Turn
-Superpower
-Pursuit

Really overused CB Scizor but in all honesty its just to good not to use in my opinion. Great revenge killer and basically you know the rest.​

 

[Caelum]

Please expand upon your descriptions in accordance with rule 3. Why did you pick a certain Pokemon or moveset, how does it fit within your team etc. PM me with improved descriptions and I'll unlock your thread and you can bump it.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.