First team, need help

This is the first time i try to build a team, fell free to comment, i'll need help and advices how to improve it.

Gliscor (Ground/Flying) Jolly; Leftovers
252HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe
-Earthquake -Toxic
-Roost -Stealth Rock


Tyranitar (Rock/Dark) Careful; Leftovers
252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpD
-Curse -Payback
-Rest -Sleep Talk


Umbreon (Dark) Careful; Leftovers
252 HP / 192 SpD / 66 Spe
-Mean Look -Yawn
-Baton Pass -Pursuit


Magnezone (Electric/Steel) Modest; Life Orb
84 HP / 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 168 Spe
-Thunderbolt -Flash Cannon
-Explosion -Magnet Rise


Dragonite (Dragon/Flying) Impish; Leftovers
252 HP / 216 Def / 40 Spe
-Dragon Claw -Dragon Dance
-Roost -Heal Bell


Gengar (Ghost/Poison) Timid; Life Orb
4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
-Shadow Ball -Focus Blast
-Substitute -Pain Split
 
This is a placeholder for future suggestions, but first i have to ask one question. Is this a 4th gen team? Because Stealth Rocks on Gliscor? lol If so, this thread is in the wrong area.(It kind of already is as this is the section for teams not OU)
 
Where should i post 4 gen team?

lol on the Past Gens section of the Rate My Team forums. also a heads up, Curse Ttar and Umbreon are terrible, and you have too many things weak to Fighting, have 3 resist/immunes, doesn't make up for it.
 
I don't wanna sound rude, but this is probably going to get locked by a mod. Umbreon is a terrible Pokemon that was only viable in 4th gen for low tier wish-passing iirc, and you have absolutely NO descriptions under any of your Pokemon.
How are we supposed to rate your team in the first place if we don't know what you're trying to do with any of these Pokemon (although some of the sets are kind of obvious, like the trapper set you have on Umbreon)?
Also, have you play-tested the team on PO?
 
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