first team

[Enber]

ok so im semi-new to compettive battleing ive been using shoddy batte for about a week now and this is the team ive found to be my favorite and i think this would be considered a standard team

Skar-my lead
for obvious reasons
Impish w/ leftovers
Evs
Hp:252
Att:64
Deff:176
Spd:16
Attacks:SR roar roost brave bird
i chose these evs and attacks because i really dont like stalling or walling id rather get in kick some ass and be done but after a few battles with my last team i noticed "wow SR is awsome" so i redid the team and added me a skarmoy​

Mammoth-RS and physical wall/attacker
ehh walls were killing me earlier so i had to have one that could attack and wall so i chose donphan
Adamant w/ leftovers
EVs
Hp:52
Atk:206
Deff:206
Attacks:rapid spin EQ assurance ice shard
An attacking wall just what i like other than special attacks he eats up super effective hits like a champ and hits back...hard donphan was an obvious choice for me
1. because i love me an elephant
2. he fits my attack style and
3. he does the one thing that pissed me off...wall​

Behemoth-sub-salc bellyzard
to me this is pure power after being demolished by one of these monsters i had to have one
Adamant w/ Salac berry
Evs
Attk:252
Spd:252
def:6
Attacks: EQ belly drum sub and fire punch
whats there to say? sub belly drum and sweep. like i said i had to have one after losing to one this monster has helped me out alot and prolly will keep on helping me​

BuzzKill-the Specialist dragon
didnt want to do another mence or chomp and dnite sucks imo so i settled on this dragon :)
Rash w/ Life orb
Evs
Spd:252
Spattk:252
attacks: Draco metor earth power heatwave roost
like i said mence is old to me chomp is uber and dnite suck flygon is just right to me :)i chose a special variant with roost so i wouldnt be all physical and to have a more reliable attacker untill i use DM so far hes my 3rd best attacker​

Nightmare-Fake out counter girl
focus sash counter is hella unpredicted from a weavile so it seems
Jolly w/ Focus sash
Evs
Attk:252
spd:252
attacks: fake out taunt counter ice punch
fake out first turn counter and die ha good for about 1 turn but surly does catch alota ppl off their guard and hasent failed me yet​

Striker-not a mutant turtle
fake out and aqua ring help some but seems to be my weakest link here not really much to say about him
Sassy w/ leftovers
Evs
HP:252
SpDeff:252
Attacks Fake out aqua ring water spout ice beam
like i said seems to be my weakest link i think mostly because i have him set up wrong but he can scare away some would be attackers and the fake out on a switch always help​

so this is my team ive been using it sence like day one after my first team failed and its been ok winning about as much as im losing. my main weekness that i seem to have is water although i only have 2 pokes weak against water
i am open to any team changes really and just some advice and like i said i am new so go easy?​

 

[Bloo]

Please read the RMT rules, especially rule #3.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Try and stay away from 1-2 line descriptions. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how does it contribute to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes and I'll unlock your thread.

Also, please use the proper format when listing your sets.

6. Formatting. Make your post readable. If the format is messy and illegible you will not be likely to receive help and may have your thread locked. Adding pictures to your post can make it more visually appealing too, but pay attention to rule 11. Here is a guideline on how to post each Pokemon.

Pokemon @ Item
Ability:
EVs:
Nature:
- move
- move
- move
- move

*Detailed description of the Pokemon's purpose to the team*

This is not set in stone, but the above example or a slight variation thereof makes for a much "cleaner" post.

By doing so, it will make this thread much easier to read.