(First of all, I'm sorry about any grammar mistakes I make through this RMT, english is not my mother tongue.)
I've played pokemon since I was a kid, beat every game and train some pokemons to the lvl 100, but that was it, never tried to challenge my friends, or any kind of competitive play. That's why I'm creating this RMT thread, I'm new to competitive pokemon, but I already read a lot, and I'm turning into a competitive player (slowly, but I am lol).
EDIT: I've made a few changes in the original team, I think the new one is better, but I'll leave the old one here, that way you can say if I made a good choice.
Well, enough with the talking, let's get to the team:
Galvantula -> Mamoswine
Mamoswine@Focus Sash
Jolly - Oblivious
252 Att - 252 Spe - 4 HP
Earthquake
Icicle Crash
Ice Shard
Stealth Rock
I was using Galvantula as my Sticky Web supporter, and Ferrothorn as my SR setter, but I don't really need my Sticky Web up, since almost all my pokemons will use a priority move, or are just super fast. And while I was using 2 hazard setters pokemons, I'll almost always play with only 4 pokemons, against 6 threats, ready to blow me up. About Mamoswine, he's really, really good. Whenever he's set against another hazard setter, I'll just try to kill the setter first and then set my own hazards. I love to kill Greninjas, Talonflames and other sweepers that try to kill me, with the Focus Sash-Ice Shard combo. He has a good attack/speed, nice defense, and he's doing his job pretty well, don't have nothing really bad to talk about him.
Ferrothorn -> Excadrill
Excadrill@Assault Vest
Adamant - Mold Breaker
252 HP - 252 Att - 4 SpD
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Shadow Claw
Rapid Spin
Since I get rid of my spinner Starmie, and already have a SR setter, Ferrothorn lost him role on this team, and I needed another spinner, that's why Excadrill is here. Excadrill is the best offensive rapid spinner in the game, he always does his job, and with this Assault Vest set, he can even take huge hits from the likes of Talonflame, Greninja, Starmie and other special attackers that swith in to kill him and kill them back. Mold Breaker is an amazing ability to kill Rotom-W that tries to switch in to wall him, to kill Gengars that are trying to spinblock me and anything that think he's safe behind a levitate. Rock slide is purely for coverage, destroying any flying threat, and Shadow Claw is there to kill any Trevenant that thinks it's safe to switch into Excadrill and start to stall. My main problem is with the EV spread, I know a 252HP - 128 Att - 128 SpD would be better, but with 128 Att I can't 2HKO Trevenant with Shadow Claw, because he'll start to harvest that Sitrus Berry, but with this more defensive spread, he'd be able to tank much more hits and kill more threats.
Talonflame @ Sharp Beak
Adamant - Gale Wings
252 Att - 192 HP - 60 Spe - 4 Def
Brave Bird
Flare Blitz
Roost
Swords Dance
Not much to say about Talonflame. He's running the standart build, and I'm using the EVs from the Analyses Thread (I'm open for suggestion). Whenever I predict a Earthquake coming, I switch to him, SD and just start to kill everything. He is really strong, and that priority Roost is a blessing. Too bad he's always taking recoil, that's why I'm thinking about leaving him without items, and use Acrobatics. The only problem is the 4x weakness to SR, that's why Excadrill is there, but even when switching to a SR, he usually take at least one pokemon with him. Was using LO, but it's impossible to play with LO and Brave Bird/Flare Blitz, he just kills himself in 2 turns, that's why i'm using the Sharp Beak. I only use the Flare Blitz on anyone that's weak too, and since Talonflame already has a huge attack, I can focus only on raising the power on the Brave Bird. I'm thinking about switching him for someone else, mainly because almost every team has a Talonflame check, and I already have a lot of physical attackers, and I don't have a single wall on this team.
Garchomp -> Gyarados -> Lucario -> Garchomp
Garchomp @ Garchompite
Jolly - Rough Skin
252 Att - 252 Spe - 4 SpD
Earthquake
Fire Fang
Sword Dances
Dragon Claw
I tried switching to a Mega Gyarados and Mega Lucario instead of Garchomp, but they had a few issues that decide to go back to Chomp. Lucario was really good with his huge attack and priority, but he made half of my team weak to fire, and the Ground/Dark weakness was a pain too. Gyarados was really good, after 1 or 2 DDs he'd just destroy things, but, I don't know why, Garchomp was more a ready to go sweeper. Chomp is just a monster. He was the first pokemon I tried once I started to play competitively, and oh my god, he's good. If I can send him in, mega-evolve and use a SD, he's really hard to stop, and his mega-evolution is even better, since his Def/SpD got a nice increase, that means I might survive some hit that would have killed me otherwise. Earthquake and Dragon Claw are there for pure STAB hits, EQ being the main swepping attack (I've sweeped through whole teams with his +1/+2 EQ), SD for the boost in the attack that makes him a monster, and I'm running Fire Fang over Stone Edge because I only have one fire attack in my whole team, and since Talonflame can't take a hit from anything, Garchomp's Fire Fang is a nice surprise. I might switch back to Stone Edge, but Fire Fang really helps me break some walls that dare to switch into him, and the only real problem I'd face I'd Togekiss, but I have 2/3 other pokemons that can take him easily.
Starmie -> Greninja
Greninja @ Expert Belt
Hasty -Protean
252 SpA - 252 Speed - 4 SpD
Hydro Pump
Ice Beam
Dark Pulse
U-Turn
In my old team, Starmie was my spinner, but she wasn't doing her job well, she's too fragile and anything that has priority will kill her. Because of that, I got another spinner and switched her to Greninja, since he has got a better speed and better SpA. The only think I lost switching to Greninja, is that now my team doesn't have any eletric move, that makes Gyarados a huge threat, even with my Greninja's U-Turn, that's why I'm considering using a Grass Knot or HP Grass, but I don't know how effective it'd be. Greninja's funcion in this team is to go to the field, revenge kill whatever the threat is, and when he's faced with something that can kills him, he just U-Turn out. Hydro Pump is there as my main attack, but I don't like the low PP/the accuraccy, Ice Beam is there for Dragons and Grass types that dare to switch in, Dark Pulse for the nice STAB against Aegislashes/Gengars/Trevenants, and U-Turn to safely get out of any situation. My doubt is if I should continue to use the Expert Belt, or should I go for a Life Orb ? I know it's a 10% power increase, but that's a 10% life loss everytime I hit too.
Noivern -> Hydreigon -> Aegislash
Aegislash @ Air Baloon
Adamant - Stace Change
252 Att - 252 HP - 4 Spe
Shadow Sneak
Sacred Sword
Sword Dance
King's Shield
I was using Noivern before, and then went to Hydreigon, but still, the last spot was a hard choice. I decide to go for a spin blocker, and Aegislash and Gengar are the two main spin blockers. I chose to go with Aegislash because he can kill other Gengars with Shadow Sneak, he has an insane defense and if he sets 2~3 SD, that's it, game over. The set is the most boring Aegislash, but that's because it's work. It's basically a Jo Ken Po game, where the oponent needs to guess when I'm going to use a SD or protect myself to lower his attack. I'm using Air Baloon just to avoid the EQs that are present in almost every team. I might switch his set a little, to a more mixed attacker, but that way I'd loss the SD boost, and since I'm pretending to play with this team on the 3DS, I'll need to breed another Honedge, since the Honedge I already have has low SpA IVs.
I have played some battles with this team in PS (I'm now above the 1700 mark)), and I win 75% of my battles, but 50% the battles I lose, is just because I'm new to competitive battle and make some bad switches, or fall into cheap mind games. Overall this team is really good, but I think there's some room for improvement.
Main concerns:
- Excadrill's EV Spread: 252 HP - 252 Att or 252 HP - 128 Att - 128 SpD ? One would allow me to 2HKO Trevenant even if he keeps harvesting that Sitrus Berry, and the other would allow me to survive much more hits, but would allow Trevenant to eventually wall my team.
- Talonflame: Should I keep Talonflame on this team, or should I go for a another sweeper (maybe a special)/wall ? I was thinking about Goodra or even Rotom-W.
- Garchomp: He's a god, I know, but should I go for another mega pokemon ? I don't think so, but I'm open to suggestion.
- Greninja: Should I keep him, or go for another special sweeper? Should I keep that movepool? And, Life Orb or Expert Belt ?
- Aegislash: Keep the boring old Aegislash set, or try to surprise people using a mixed/something different?
Main threats are:
- Gyarados: Even with my Greninja's U-Turn he can sweep through my entire team after a couple of DDs, and I don't have a single eletric move, which makes him more deadly.
- Kangaskhan: It was easy to take him with Ferrothorn, while it was on my team, but now that he's gone, god, he's a monster. Normally I can tank him with Aegislash, boosting my attack while he tries to Sucker Punch, and then tank the Sucker Punch and kill him with the Sacred Sword, but the last Kangaskhans I faced had Crunch, which totally ruined me.
- Gastrodon/Quagsire/Anything that's weak to grass: I don't have a single Eletric attack, but I can (almost) get over that with other moves, but when I see a grass mon (specially Gastrodon/Quagsire) on the team preview, I know I'm going to rage. They take virtually any hit I can throw and just Recover to its full health, becoming I huge pain in the team. Quagsire I can normally beat while just spamming moves and waiting for his Recovery PP ends, but that's really boring and any surprise will kill me.
Well, that's my first ever competitive team, what do you guys think?
Appreciate any help, thanks !
I've played pokemon since I was a kid, beat every game and train some pokemons to the lvl 100, but that was it, never tried to challenge my friends, or any kind of competitive play. That's why I'm creating this RMT thread, I'm new to competitive pokemon, but I already read a lot, and I'm turning into a competitive player (slowly, but I am lol).
EDIT: I've made a few changes in the original team, I think the new one is better, but I'll leave the old one here, that way you can say if I made a good choice.
Galvantula @ Focus Sash
Timid - Compound Eyes
252 SpA - 252 Spe - 4 HP
Sticky Web
Volt Switch
Thunder
Bug Buzz
Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
Impish - Iron Barbs
252 HP - 252 Def - 4 Att
Leech Seed
Protect
Stealth Rock
Gyro Ball
Talonflame @ Sharp Beak
Adamant - Gale Wings
252 Att - 192 HP - 60 Spe - 4 Def
Brave Bird
Flare Blitz
Roost
Swords Dance
Garchomp @ Garchompite
Jolly - Rough Skin
252 Att - 252 Spe - 4 SpD
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Swords Dance
Dragon Claw
Starmie @ Life Orb
Timid - Natural Cure
252 SpA - 252 Speed - 4 SpD
Scald
Ice Beam
Thunderbolt
Rapid Spin
Aegislash @ Air Baloon
Adamant - Stace Change
252 Att - 252 HP - 4 Spe
Shadow Sneak
Sacred Sword
Sword Dance
King's Shield
Timid - Compound Eyes
252 SpA - 252 Spe - 4 HP
Sticky Web
Volt Switch
Thunder
Bug Buzz
Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
Impish - Iron Barbs
252 HP - 252 Def - 4 Att
Leech Seed
Protect
Stealth Rock
Gyro Ball
Talonflame @ Sharp Beak
Adamant - Gale Wings
252 Att - 192 HP - 60 Spe - 4 Def
Brave Bird
Flare Blitz
Roost
Swords Dance
Garchomp @ Garchompite
Jolly - Rough Skin
252 Att - 252 Spe - 4 SpD
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Swords Dance
Dragon Claw
Starmie @ Life Orb
Timid - Natural Cure
252 SpA - 252 Speed - 4 SpD
Scald
Ice Beam
Thunderbolt
Rapid Spin
Aegislash @ Air Baloon
Adamant - Stace Change
252 Att - 252 HP - 4 Spe
Shadow Sneak
Sacred Sword
Sword Dance
King's Shield
Well, enough with the talking, let's get to the team:
Galvantula -> Mamoswine

Mamoswine@Focus Sash
Jolly - Oblivious
252 Att - 252 Spe - 4 HP
Earthquake
Icicle Crash
Ice Shard
Stealth Rock
I was using Galvantula as my Sticky Web supporter, and Ferrothorn as my SR setter, but I don't really need my Sticky Web up, since almost all my pokemons will use a priority move, or are just super fast. And while I was using 2 hazard setters pokemons, I'll almost always play with only 4 pokemons, against 6 threats, ready to blow me up. About Mamoswine, he's really, really good. Whenever he's set against another hazard setter, I'll just try to kill the setter first and then set my own hazards. I love to kill Greninjas, Talonflames and other sweepers that try to kill me, with the Focus Sash-Ice Shard combo. He has a good attack/speed, nice defense, and he's doing his job pretty well, don't have nothing really bad to talk about him.
Ferrothorn -> Excadrill

Excadrill@Assault Vest
Adamant - Mold Breaker
252 HP - 252 Att - 4 SpD
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Shadow Claw
Rapid Spin
Since I get rid of my spinner Starmie, and already have a SR setter, Ferrothorn lost him role on this team, and I needed another spinner, that's why Excadrill is here. Excadrill is the best offensive rapid spinner in the game, he always does his job, and with this Assault Vest set, he can even take huge hits from the likes of Talonflame, Greninja, Starmie and other special attackers that swith in to kill him and kill them back. Mold Breaker is an amazing ability to kill Rotom-W that tries to switch in to wall him, to kill Gengars that are trying to spinblock me and anything that think he's safe behind a levitate. Rock slide is purely for coverage, destroying any flying threat, and Shadow Claw is there to kill any Trevenant that thinks it's safe to switch into Excadrill and start to stall. My main problem is with the EV spread, I know a 252HP - 128 Att - 128 SpD would be better, but with 128 Att I can't 2HKO Trevenant with Shadow Claw, because he'll start to harvest that Sitrus Berry, but with this more defensive spread, he'd be able to tank much more hits and kill more threats.

Talonflame @ Sharp Beak
Adamant - Gale Wings
252 Att - 192 HP - 60 Spe - 4 Def
Brave Bird
Flare Blitz
Roost
Swords Dance
Not much to say about Talonflame. He's running the standart build, and I'm using the EVs from the Analyses Thread (I'm open for suggestion). Whenever I predict a Earthquake coming, I switch to him, SD and just start to kill everything. He is really strong, and that priority Roost is a blessing. Too bad he's always taking recoil, that's why I'm thinking about leaving him without items, and use Acrobatics. The only problem is the 4x weakness to SR, that's why Excadrill is there, but even when switching to a SR, he usually take at least one pokemon with him. Was using LO, but it's impossible to play with LO and Brave Bird/Flare Blitz, he just kills himself in 2 turns, that's why i'm using the Sharp Beak. I only use the Flare Blitz on anyone that's weak too, and since Talonflame already has a huge attack, I can focus only on raising the power on the Brave Bird. I'm thinking about switching him for someone else, mainly because almost every team has a Talonflame check, and I already have a lot of physical attackers, and I don't have a single wall on this team.
Garchomp -> Gyarados -> Lucario -> Garchomp

Garchomp @ Garchompite
Jolly - Rough Skin
252 Att - 252 Spe - 4 SpD
Earthquake
Fire Fang
Sword Dances
Dragon Claw
I tried switching to a Mega Gyarados and Mega Lucario instead of Garchomp, but they had a few issues that decide to go back to Chomp. Lucario was really good with his huge attack and priority, but he made half of my team weak to fire, and the Ground/Dark weakness was a pain too. Gyarados was really good, after 1 or 2 DDs he'd just destroy things, but, I don't know why, Garchomp was more a ready to go sweeper. Chomp is just a monster. He was the first pokemon I tried once I started to play competitively, and oh my god, he's good. If I can send him in, mega-evolve and use a SD, he's really hard to stop, and his mega-evolution is even better, since his Def/SpD got a nice increase, that means I might survive some hit that would have killed me otherwise. Earthquake and Dragon Claw are there for pure STAB hits, EQ being the main swepping attack (I've sweeped through whole teams with his +1/+2 EQ), SD for the boost in the attack that makes him a monster, and I'm running Fire Fang over Stone Edge because I only have one fire attack in my whole team, and since Talonflame can't take a hit from anything, Garchomp's Fire Fang is a nice surprise. I might switch back to Stone Edge, but Fire Fang really helps me break some walls that dare to switch into him, and the only real problem I'd face I'd Togekiss, but I have 2/3 other pokemons that can take him easily.
Starmie -> Greninja

Greninja @ Expert Belt
Hasty -Protean
252 SpA - 252 Speed - 4 SpD
Hydro Pump
Ice Beam
Dark Pulse
U-Turn
In my old team, Starmie was my spinner, but she wasn't doing her job well, she's too fragile and anything that has priority will kill her. Because of that, I got another spinner and switched her to Greninja, since he has got a better speed and better SpA. The only think I lost switching to Greninja, is that now my team doesn't have any eletric move, that makes Gyarados a huge threat, even with my Greninja's U-Turn, that's why I'm considering using a Grass Knot or HP Grass, but I don't know how effective it'd be. Greninja's funcion in this team is to go to the field, revenge kill whatever the threat is, and when he's faced with something that can kills him, he just U-Turn out. Hydro Pump is there as my main attack, but I don't like the low PP/the accuraccy, Ice Beam is there for Dragons and Grass types that dare to switch in, Dark Pulse for the nice STAB against Aegislashes/Gengars/Trevenants, and U-Turn to safely get out of any situation. My doubt is if I should continue to use the Expert Belt, or should I go for a Life Orb ? I know it's a 10% power increase, but that's a 10% life loss everytime I hit too.
Noivern -> Hydreigon -> Aegislash

Aegislash @ Air Baloon
Adamant - Stace Change
252 Att - 252 HP - 4 Spe
Shadow Sneak
Sacred Sword
Sword Dance
King's Shield
I was using Noivern before, and then went to Hydreigon, but still, the last spot was a hard choice. I decide to go for a spin blocker, and Aegislash and Gengar are the two main spin blockers. I chose to go with Aegislash because he can kill other Gengars with Shadow Sneak, he has an insane defense and if he sets 2~3 SD, that's it, game over. The set is the most boring Aegislash, but that's because it's work. It's basically a Jo Ken Po game, where the oponent needs to guess when I'm going to use a SD or protect myself to lower his attack. I'm using Air Baloon just to avoid the EQs that are present in almost every team. I might switch his set a little, to a more mixed attacker, but that way I'd loss the SD boost, and since I'm pretending to play with this team on the 3DS, I'll need to breed another Honedge, since the Honedge I already have has low SpA IVs.
I have played some battles with this team in PS (I'm now above the 1700 mark)), and I win 75% of my battles, but 50% the battles I lose, is just because I'm new to competitive battle and make some bad switches, or fall into cheap mind games. Overall this team is really good, but I think there's some room for improvement.
Main concerns:
- Excadrill's EV Spread: 252 HP - 252 Att or 252 HP - 128 Att - 128 SpD ? One would allow me to 2HKO Trevenant even if he keeps harvesting that Sitrus Berry, and the other would allow me to survive much more hits, but would allow Trevenant to eventually wall my team.
- Talonflame: Should I keep Talonflame on this team, or should I go for a another sweeper (maybe a special)/wall ? I was thinking about Goodra or even Rotom-W.
- Garchomp: He's a god, I know, but should I go for another mega pokemon ? I don't think so, but I'm open to suggestion.
- Greninja: Should I keep him, or go for another special sweeper? Should I keep that movepool? And, Life Orb or Expert Belt ?
- Aegislash: Keep the boring old Aegislash set, or try to surprise people using a mixed/something different?
Main threats are:
- Gyarados: Even with my Greninja's U-Turn he can sweep through my entire team after a couple of DDs, and I don't have a single eletric move, which makes him more deadly.
- Kangaskhan: It was easy to take him with Ferrothorn, while it was on my team, but now that he's gone, god, he's a monster. Normally I can tank him with Aegislash, boosting my attack while he tries to Sucker Punch, and then tank the Sucker Punch and kill him with the Sacred Sword, but the last Kangaskhans I faced had Crunch, which totally ruined me.
- Gastrodon/Quagsire/Anything that's weak to grass: I don't have a single Eletric attack, but I can (almost) get over that with other moves, but when I see a grass mon (specially Gastrodon/Quagsire) on the team preview, I know I'm going to rage. They take virtually any hit I can throw and just Recover to its full health, becoming I huge pain in the team. Quagsire I can normally beat while just spamming moves and waiting for his Recovery PP ends, but that's really boring and any surprise will kill me.
Well, that's my first ever competitive team, what do you guys think?
Appreciate any help, thanks !
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