First Wartory: "Fail Attack"

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So... my first warstory ^^ I hope everyone can enjoy this battle. The tittle it's a mockery of Quick Attack.

Riverside's team:

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One of my teams. I just had some great battles with this one, all are from the "NU" tier.

Battle begins!

Riverside's moves will look like this.
pI0x's moves will look like this.
other text will look like this.
Leftovers will be removed.
Sandstorm/hail damage will be removed.
Scores will be shown after each KO.
Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause, Soul Dew Clause
Riverside sent out Raticate (lvl 1 Raticate ?).
pI0x sent out RatedXXX (lvl 100 Metagross).

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The idea of using a level 1 Raticate it's to fool the opponent, some people assume that all the full evolved pokemon are lvl 100, it may be a dirty trick, but still can be used in battles.

He sends out a Metagross, I know that things can learn Bullet punch and "screw" (not always) my the "FEAR" but anyway I decided to attack.

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RatedXXX used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Raticate used Endeavor.
RatedXXX lost 97% of its health.
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Massive damage to metagross, but I got a ladder of Stealth Rocks, it other words unless I get rim of them I won't be able to use Raticate anymore.

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RatedXXX used Bullet Punch.
Raticate lost 100% of its health.
Raticate hung on using its Focus Sash!
Raticate used Endeavor.
RatedXXX lost 3% of its health.
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So he had Bullet punch. At this point of the battle I could switch to Flareon and use Quick Attack, however, that means he would take 25% from stealth rock plus the damage from bullet punch (Flareon got a very low physical defense so it would hurt a bit)

I decided to sacrifice Raticate as he did what he was planned to do.
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RatedXXX used Bullet Punch.
Raticate lost 8% of its health.
Riverside's Raticate fainted.
(5-6)
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Riverside switched in Spikes (lvl 100 Sandslash ?).
Pointed stones dug into Spikes.
Spikes lost 6% of its health.
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With Raticate dead now I can get rid of those annoying rocks without getting punched.

Some minutes ago I just get rid of Protect on Sandslash because Sandslash didn't had any attacking move... I wanted to teach him Endeavor but he don't learn it. I guess I should get Protect again, because...
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RatedXXX used Explosion.
Spikes lost 94% of its health.
Riverside's Spikes fainted.
(4-6)
pI0x's RatedXXX fainted.
(4-5)
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Things look bad, now i will always take damage from Stealth rock, it was a great mistake to lose Sandslash that early.
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Riverside switched in Slaking (lvl 100 Slaking ?).
pI0x switched in Zeus (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Slaking.
Slaking lost 12% of its health.
pI0x switched in UrAtksFail (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
UrAtksFail is exerting its pressure!
Slaking used Earthquake.
UrAtksFail lost 59% of its health.
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Not much to say, I predicted a switch so Dusknoir takes a lot of damage, however, Slaking's trait annoy him so I have to switch. I predict a Will-o-Wisp. That's why I send out...
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Riverside switched in Gold (lvl 100 Flareon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Gold.
Gold lost 25% of its health.
UrAtksFail used Will-o-wisp.
Gold's Flash Fire raised its fire power!
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Yay! now my fire attacks will be stronger, time to attack.
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pI0x switched in iLiektrtlz (lvl 100 Kingdra ?).
Gold used Fire Fang.
It's not very effective...
iLiektrtlz lost 15% of its health.
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If it is a special Kingdra it could be walled by Politoed, if not... I may be or not be in problems. I predict a set up (Rain dance or Dragon dance) so I decided to get rid of it.
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iLiektrtlz used Dragon Dance.
iLiektrtlz's attack was raised.
iLiektrtlz's speed was raised.
Gold used Yawn.
iLiektrtlz became drowsy!
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pI0x switched in UrAtksFail (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
UrAtksFail is exerting its pressure!
Gold used Charm.
UrAtksFail's attack was harshly lowered.
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pI0x switched in iLiektrtlz (lvl 100 Kingdra ?).
Gold used Fire Fang.
It's not very effective...
iLiektrtlz lost 15% of its health.
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Damn, things are at the same points they started, I don't think that he will fail again in the same trick and I already know it is a DD Kingdra
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Riverside switched in Politoed (lvl 100 Politoed ?).
Pointed stones dug into Politoed.
Politoed lost 12% of its health.
iLiektrtlz used Waterfall.
Politoed's Water Absorb absorbed damage!
Politoed restored 13% of its health.
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pI0x switched in NotJimmy (lvl 100 Shaymin).
Politoed used Toxic.
NotJimmy was badly poisoned!
NotJimmy is hurt by poison!
NotJimmy lost 6% of its health.
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So things don't look good again. Even if Shaymin is poisoned it has Natural cure so it won't be a problem to him.

Predicting a grass attack (Maybe Seed Flare) I switch to my anti-celebi.
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Riverside switched in Venomoth (lvl 100 Venomoth ?).
Pointed stones dug into Venomoth.
Venomoth lost 25% of its health.
NotJimmy used Leech Seed.
Venomoth was seeded!
NotJimmy is hurt by poison!
NotJimmy lost 12% of its health.
Venomoth's health was sapped by leech seed!
Venomoth lost 12% of its health.
NotJimmy regained health!
NotJimmy restored 10% of its health.
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He's losing health but I am too...
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pI0x switched in IceIceBaby (lvl 100 Regice).
Venomoth used Sludge Bomb.
IceIceBaby lost 21% of its health.
Venomoth lost 10% of its health.
Venomoth's health was sapped by leech seed!
Venomoth lost 12% of its health.
IceIceBaby regained health!
IceIceBaby restored 10% of its health.
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Regice takes the Sludge bomb pretty well. He didn't get poisoned too so I'm in a tought spot again, time to retreat Venomoth.
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Riverside switched in Gold (lvl 100 Flareon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Gold.
Gold lost 25% of its health.
IceIceBaby used Thunder Wave.
Gold is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
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Dang! This wasn't good...
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pI0x switched in UrAtksFail (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
UrAtksFail is exerting its pressure!
Gold used Charm.
UrAtksFail's attack was harshly lowered.
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UrAtksFail used Pain Split.
UrAtksFail restored 17% of its health.
Gold lost 15% of its health.
Gold used Fire Fang.
UrAtksFail lost 29% of its health.
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So yeah, My flareon got Fire Fang and it did decent amount of damage to Dusknoir, he didn't got any remarkable benefit from pain split.
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pI0x switched in iLiektrtlz (lvl 100 Kingdra ?).
Gold used Yawn.
iLiektrtlz became drowsy!
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Yay for predictions!
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pI0x switched in Zeus (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Gold used Fire Fang.
Zeus lost 65% of its health.
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Gold used Quick Attack.
Zeus lost 28% of its health.
Zeus's Petaya Berry raised its special attack!
Zeus used Substitute.
But it failed!
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Great! Flareon's Fire fang did massive damage to Jolteon and quick attack led him almost dead, one more hit and...
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Gold is paralysed! It can't move!
Zeus used Thunderbolt.
Gold lost 51% of its health.
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Ok, it happens and anyway Flareon took that atttack very well (for being STAB'd + Petaya'd) one more Quick Attack and...
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Gold is paralysed! It can't move!
Zeus used Thunderbolt.
Gold lost 51% of its health.
Riverside's Gold fainted.
(3-5)
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pI0x: LOL
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Uh oh...
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Riverside switched in Slaking (lvl 100 Slaking ?).
Pointed stones dug into Slaking.
Slaking lost 12% of its health.
Riverside: gg
Riverside: :/
pI0x: gg;[
pI0x: sry
Zeus used Thunderbolt.
Slaking lost 61% of its health.
Slaking used Pursuit.
A critical hit!
Zeus lost 7% of its health.
pI0x's Zeus fainted.
(3-4)
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Unnecessary critical it's unnecessary. I used pursuit because

1st: I didn't thought Slaking was able to survive, my slaking got high HP but bad, very bad Spc Def.
2nd: Every attack was ok because Jolteon was weak.
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pI0x switched in iLiektrtlz (lvl 100 Kingdra ?).
Riverside switched in Politoed (lvl 100 Politoed ?).
Pointed stones dug into Politoed.
Politoed lost 12% of its health.
iLiektrtlz used Dragon Dance.
iLiektrtlz's attack was raised.
iLiektrtlz's speed was raised.
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iLiektrtlz used Dragon Dance.
iLiektrtlz's attack was raised.
iLiektrtlz's speed was raised.
Politoed used Toxic.
iLiektrtlz was badly poisoned!
iLiektrtlz is hurt by poison!
iLiektrtlz lost 6% of its health.
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Ok, I still have chances to win... maybe... I'm pretty sure my Politoed can take an Outrate from Kingdra and kill that thing with Counter, as he's poisoned he have to attack or lost more health.
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iLiektrtlz used Outrage.
iLiektrtlz went on a rampage!
Politoed lost 100% of its health.
Riverside's Politoed fainted.
(2-4)
iLiektrtlz is hurt by poison!
iLiektrtlz lost 12% of its health.
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W-what?!
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Riverside switched in Venomoth (lvl 100 Venomoth ?).
Pointed stones dug into Venomoth.
Venomoth lost 25% of its health.
iLiektrtlz used Outrage.
Venomoth lost 15% of its health.
Riverside's Venomoth fainted.
(1-4)
iLiektrtlz is hurt by poison!
iLiektrtlz lost 19% of its health.
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Riverside switched in Slaking (lvl 100 Slaking ?).
Pointed stones dug into Slaking.
Slaking lost 12% of its health.
iLiektrtlz used Outrage.
A critical hit!
Slaking lost 2% of its health.
Riverside's Slaking fainted.
(0-4)
pI0x wins!
pI0x: gg
pI0x has left the room.
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pl0x's Pokemon:

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Really lopsided match, you only actually fainted one of his Pokemon. Not an exciting battle at all, just an OU team (or atleast, a mostly OU team) dominating an NU team which is to be expected, the playing was somewhat poor (such as him exploding Metagross instead of just switching in Dusknoir) and the comments weren't much either. Didn't enjoy it even though you're using NU. Nice format, though, atleast you've got that.
 
Pretty much what WJC3688 said...i konw it's with English not being your first language but not the best story to post as your first. it needs to be more epic if you konw what i mean :)
 
This is pretty bad, to be honest.
Not many productive comments, bad predictions, getting sweeped 4-0 and a full NU team does not really add up to a good warstory.
 
That wasn't a war, it was a massacre. Like humans fighting maggots. Or dragons fighting wolves. Or humans riding dragons throwing wolves at maggots.

Anyway, I'm not quite sure what you were trying to accomplish with that NU team against a team of sexy OU beefcakes.
 
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