NFE Fraxure (DONE)

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FRAXURE
name: Choice Band
move 1: Outrage
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: First Impression / Superpower
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure is an incredible wallbreaker in the NFE metagame thanks to its high Attack stat and above average Speed, allowing it to outspeed other wallbreakers like Brionne, Roselia and Lampent. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest STAB attack, allowing it to 2HKO physical walls such as Galarian Corsola and physically defensive Machoke, while Dragon Claw is used to put switch-ins in range of Outrage without getting locked in. Superpower is used to hit Steel-types that resist Fraxure's STAB attacks like Ferroseed and Klang, while Stomping Tantrum is also an option that allows Fraxure to hit Klang and Carkol without lowering its stats. First Impression is Fraxure's only priority move and is used to revenge kill threats, most notably Galarian Linoone, Kadabra, and Choice Scarf Thwackey.

Choice Band Fraxure functions best early- to mid-game by punching holes through the opponent's team. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest attack and usually its go-to move when Fairy-types are removed and Steel-types in are in range; therefore, it is encouraged to pair Fraxure with wallbreakers that can deal with these Pokemon, such as Gastly, Piloswine, and Machoke. Fraxure also benefits from entry hazard setters like Carkol, Roselia, and Ferroseed, as they can put threats in range of being KOed. Fraxure can be revenge killed by Piloswine and faster attackers like Gastly and Seadra, so walls like such as Galarian Corsola and Klang are good partners. Knock Off users like Galarian Linoone, Thwackey, and Vullaby are also good partners, as they can remove Eviolite from threats and put them in range for Fraxure to KO. They can also function as pivots, allowing Fraxure in safely. Pokemon that can heal Fraxure, such as Clefairy and Hattrem, are also good partners, as they can prolong Fraxure's longevity.

[SET]
name: Setup
move 1: Swords Dance / Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Poison Jab / Scale Shot
item: Eviolite
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure can boost itself through Dragon Dance or Swords Dance in order to act as sweeper or wallbreaker. Swords Dance enables Fraxure to break through walls like Galarian Corsola and Tangela, while Dragon Dance allows Fraxure to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Outrage is Fraxure's main attack and strongest STAB move, allowing it to hit a large portion of the metagame, most notably Machoke, Mareanie, and Vullaby. Superpower enables Fraxure to OHKO Steel-types that otherwise easily sponge Outrage, like Ferroseed at +2. Stomping Tantrum can also be an option to hit Steel- and Fire-types like Klang, and Carkol without risking a Defense drop. Poison Jab is Fraxure's most reliable attack against Fairy-types like Clefairy and Togetic, which are immune to Outrage. Scale Shot allows Fraxure to break Focus Sash users like Kadabra while boosting its Speed, allowing it to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame.

This Fraxure set functions best mid- to late-game where it can more easily set up and revenge kill threats that are in range. If Fraxure wants to clean with Dragon Dance, it should avoid spamming Outrage when Fairy- and Steel-types are still active and healthy, as they can easily end its sweep. Pokemon like Roselia and Machoke are great partners, as they can threaten these types respectively. Other wallbreakers such as Raboot and Choice Band Piloswine are also good additions, as they can weaken down the opposing team into Fraxure's range. Entry hazard setter like Galarian Corsola, Ferroseed and Roselia are also good partners as they can help wear down threats with Stealth Rock or Spikes damage for threats to be in range of being KOed. Additionally, using Pokemon that can prevent hazards from being set like Hattrem is also encouraged, as Fraxure needs to be kept healthy to function properly. Hattrem can also heal Fraxure to full with Healing Wish to give it a second chance at sweeping. When running Swords Dance, Fraxure benefits from Sticky Web setters like Charjabug that can help lower the Speed of Choice Scarf users that may threaten Fraxure such as Seadra and Lampent . Dual screens setters such as Morgrem and Alolan Vulpix are also good support, as they can help Fraxure set up more easily.

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[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Outrage
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: First Impression
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure is an incredible wallbreaker in the NFE metagame thanks to its high Attack stat and above average Speed allowing it to outspeed other wallbreakers like Brionne, Roselia and Flame Orb Machoke. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest STAB attack allowing it to 2hko Physical Walls like Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola and Physically Defensive Machoke, while Dragon Claw is used to put threats and switch-ins in range of Outrage without getting locked in. Superpower is used to hit Steel-types who resists Fraxure's stab STAB attacks like Ferroseed and Klang, while Stomping Tantrum is also an option as it allows Fraxure to hit other physical walls like Carkol without risking getting burned Klang and Carkol without lowering its stats (stomping makes contact). First Impression is Fraxure's only priority move and is used to revenge kill threats notably Choice Scarf Thwackey, Pikachu and Linoone-Galar. Galarian Linoone, Pikachu, and Choice Scarf Thwackey. (Helps clarify that only thwackey is scarf here, also goes in order of VR which is good)

Choice Band Fraxure functions best early- to mid-game in order to punch holes through the opponent's team. Fraxure's strongest attack is Outrage and usually Fraxure's go-to move when Fairy- and Steel-types are removed or in range; therefore, it is encouraged to pair Fraxure with wallbreakers that can deal with these Pokemon like Haunter, Piloswine and Machoke. Fraxure also benefits from hazard setters like Carkol, Roselia and Ferroseed as they can put threats in range of KO. Fraxure is easily revenge killed by priority users like Piloswine and Haunter so Physically Defensive tanks walls like Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola and Gloom Klang are good partners (I thought about this point and only Piloswine really threatens Fraxure with priority, so make this point just about revenge killers. Haunter can switch into superpower and first impression and sludgebomb for huge damage or just revenge kill after a KO, so worth mentioning). Knock Off users like Linoone-Galar, Machoke and Pikachu are also good partners as they can remove Eviolites allowing put threats in range. Wish passers like Clefairy and Hattrem are also good partners as they can prolong Fraxure's longevity by helping it regain some health back.

[SET]
name: Set Up
move 1: Dragon Dance / Swords Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Poison Jab / First Impression
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 16 HP / 252 Atk / 240 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Up Fraxure can boost itself through moves like Dragon Dance and Swords Dance in order to act as sweeper and late game cleaner or wallbreaker (you say in the next sentence how SD breaks through walls so its safe to say that would make it a wallbreaker). Dragon Dance allows Fraxure to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame by being faster than Haunter and Linoone-Galar Galarian Linoone while Swords Dance enables Fraxure to pass through walls like Corsola-Galar Galarian Corsola and Togetic. Outrage is Fraxure's main attack, and its only stab allowing it to hit a large portion of the metagame like Machoke, Mareanie and Vullaby. Stomping Tantrum allows Fraxure to hit Steel-types who otherwise can easily sponge Outrage as well as hitting Poison-types super effectively like Haunter without getting locked in. Poison Jab is Fraxure's most reliable attack against Fairy-types who are immuned to Outrage, it also can cause poison allowing threats to be in range of the next attack. First Impression on the other hand is used to revenge kill faster and priority users like Linoone-Galar Galarian Linoone and Pikachu. (mention why this set only has 240 spe; for specs roselia and outspeeding Drakloak at +1?)

This Fraxure set functions best mid- to late-game where it can more easily set up and revenge kill threats who are in range. If it Fraxure wants to clean with Dragon Dance, Fraxure it should avoid spamming Outrage when Fairy- and Steel-types are still alive and healthy as they can easily break its sweep. Pokemons like Haunter and Machoke are great partners as they can threaten these types respectively (I'm not sure if this set wants to be spamming outrage like the previous set as it's more of a wallbreaker + SD can deal with fairy and steels, so i added the sweeping comment). Other wallbreakers like Raboot and Choice Band Piloswine are also good additions as they can weaken down the opposing team to Fraxure's range. Hazard setters like Corsola-Galar, Galarian Corsola, Carkol and Palpitoad are also good partners as they can help wear down threats. When running Swords Dance, Fraxure can benefits from Sticky Web setters like Cutiefly and Charjabug who can help lower the speed of Choice Scarf users who may threaten Fraxure. Screens setters like Morgrem and Alolan-Vulpix are also good support as they can help Fraxure set up more easily. Wish passers and clerics like Clefairy, Hattrem and Togetic are also great partners when wanting to use Fraxure early game as well. (clerics aren't the most relevant for setup sweepers / ones usually on screens)

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[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Outrage
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: First Impression / Superpower
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure is an incredible wallbreaker in the NFE metagame thanks to its high Attack stat and above average Speed allowing it to outspeed other wallbreakers like Brionne, Roselia and Flame Orb Machoke Maybe change this to Lampent since you mention Machoke in a minute anyway. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest STAB attack allowing it to 2hko Physical Walls like Galarian Corsola and Physically Defensive Machoke, while Dragon Claw is used to put threats and switch-ins in range of Outrage without getting locked in. Superpower is used to hit Steel-types who resists Fraxure's STAB attacks like Ferroseed and Klang, while Stomping Tantrum is also an option as it allows Fraxure to hit Klang and Carkol without lowering its stats. First Impression is Fraxure's only priority move and is used to revenge kill threats notably Galarian Linoone, Kadabra, and Choice Scarf Thwackey.

Choice Band Fraxure functions best early- to mid-game in order to punch holes through the opponent's team. Fraxure's strongest attack is Outrage and usually Fraxure's go-to move when Fairy- and Steel-types are removed or in range; therefore, it is encouraged to pair Fraxure with wallbreakers that can deal with these Pokemon like Gastly, Piloswine and Machoke. Fraxure also benefits from hazard setters like Carkol, Roselia and Ferroseed as they can put threats in range of KO. Fraxure is easily *can be; even Choice Band isn't OHKOing most of the time. revenge killed by Piloswine and faster attackers like Gastly and Seadra so walls like Galarian Corsola and Klang are good partners . Knock Off users like Linoone-Galar, Thwackey and Pikachu are also good partners as they can remove Eviolites allowing put threats in range. Wish passers like Clefairy and Hattrem are also good partners as they can prolong Fraxure's longevity by helping it regain some health back. Make a note about how many of the mons mentioned above here are also pivots, which are great for bringing Fraxure in safely. Also, I know you mean Healing Wish, but Hattrem technically speaking isn't a "wish passer". Try and clarify this if you can

[SET]
name: Set Up
move 1: Swords Dance / Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Poison Jab / Scale Shot
item: Eviolite
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Up Fraxure can boost itself through moves like Dragon Dance and Swords Dance in order to act as sweeper or wallbreaker. Swords Dance enables Fraxure to pass through walls like Galarian Corsola and Tangela while Dragon Dance allows Fraxure to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame by being faster than Kadabra, Drakloak and Galarian Linoone. "pass through" is a bit overconfident imo. Just saying you can set-up multiple Swords Dances to break through physdef mons like cors/tang is ok. you also don't need to specifically mention the fastest mons. Cut this to just be "Fraxure can outspeed the entire unboosted metagame" and you'll be fine Outrage is Fraxure's main attack explain why; point out that it's fraxure's strongest STAB option, allowing it to hit a large portion of the metagame like Machoke, Mareanie and Vullaby. Superpower enables Fraxure to OHKO against Steel-types who otherwise easily sponge Outrage like Ferroseed at +2. Stomping Tantrum can also be an option as it hits Steel-types and Fire-types like Klang, Raboot and Torracat. Outrage does more than Stomping Tantrum, instead point out that it covers Klang without dropping your defences (which would make you vulnerable to mons like pilo more and/or prevent you from taking out the likes of choke) Poison Jab is Fraxure's most reliable attack against Fairy-types like Clefairy and Togetic who are immune to Outrage, it also can cause poison allowing threats to be in range of the next attack. true, but not considered a viable strategy. Scale Shot allows Fraxure to break Focus Sash holders like Kadabra while boosting its Speed and allowing it to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame.

This Fraxure set functions best mid- to late-game where it can more easily set up and revenge kill threats who are in range. If Fraxure wants to clean with Dragon Dance, it should avoid spamming Outrage when Fairy- and Steel-types are still alive and healthy as they can easily break its sweep. Pokemons like Gastly Roselia has better synergy here imo and Machoke are great partners as they can threaten these types respectively. Other wallbreakers like Raboot and Choice Band Piloswine are also good additions as they can weaken down the opposing team to Fraxure's range. Hazard setters like Galarian Corsola, Ferroseed and Palpitoad are also good partners as they can help wear down threats. When running Swords Dance, Fraxure benefits from Sticky Web setters like Cutiefly and , notably Charjabug who can help lower the speed of Choice Scarf users who may threaten Fraxure. Screens setters like Morgrem and Alolan-Vulpix remove this if you think it's going to be unranked are also good support as they can help Fraxure set up more easily. Add a nod to Healing Wish from Hattrem & Clefairy; it works better with this set than Band imo and being able to use up your health to wear down Corsola and then still be full health later is pretty incredible.

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[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Outrage
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: First Impression / Superpower
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure is an incredible wallbreaker in the NFE metagame thanks to its high Attack stat and above average Speed, (AC) allowing it to outspeed other wallbreakers like Brionne, Roselia and Lampent. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest STAB attack allowing it to 2HKO (needed capitalized according to spelling and grammar standards) Physical Walls like such as (Try to avoid using like so much; variation to things like "such as" makes the analysis a lot more interesting.) Galarian Corsola and Physically Defensive Machoke, while Dragon Claw is used to put threats and switch-ins in range of Outrage without getting locked in. Superpower is used to hit Steel-types who resists Fraxure's STAB attacks like Ferroseed and Klang, while Stomping Tantrum is also an option as it that allows Fraxure to hit Klang and Carkol without lowering its stats. First Impression is Fraxure's only priority move and is used to revenge kill threats, (AC) notably Galarian Linoone, Kadabra, and Choice Scarf Thwackey.

Choice Band Fraxure functions best early- to mid-game in order to punch holes through the opponent's team. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest attack is Outrage and usually Fraxure's go-to move when Fairy- and Steel-types are removed or in range; therefore, it is encouraged to pair Fraxure with wallbreakers that can deal with these Pokemon like such as Gastly, Piloswine and Machoke. Fraxure also benefits from hazard setters like Carkol, Roselia and Ferroseed, (AC) as they can put threats in range of KO. Fraxure can be revenge killed by Piloswine and faster attackers like Gastly and Seadra, (AC) so walls like such as Galarian Corsola and Klang are good partners. Knock Off users like Galarian Linoone, Thwackey and Vullaby are also good partners, (AC) as they can remove Eviolite (Not quite sure about this one, although Eviolites doesn't seem quite correct considering pokemon aren't going to be holding multiple items.) allowing put threats in range, (RC) . (AP) They can also functions as pivots, (AC) allowing Fraxure in safely. Pokemon that can pass health, (AC) like such as Clefairy and Hattrem, (AC) are also good partners as they can prolong Fraxure's longevity by helping it regain some health back.

[SET]
name: Set Up
move 1: Swords Dance / Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Poison Jab / Scale Shot
item: Eviolite
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure can boost itself through Dragon Dance and or Swords Dance in order to act as sweeper or wallbreaker. Swords Dance enables Fraxure to break through walls like Galarian Corsola and Tangela, (AC) while Dragon Dance allows Fraxure to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Outrage is Fraxure's main attack and its strongest STAB, (AC) allowing it to hit a large portion of the metagame, (AC) notably Machoke, Mareanie and Vullaby. Superpower enables Fraxure to OHKO against Steel-types such as Ferroseed, (AC) who otherwise easily sponge Outrage like Ferroseed at +2. Stomping Tantrum can also be an option as it hits Steel-types and Fire-types like Klang, and Carkol without risking a defense (Smogon uses the American English spelling for words that have different spellings in other regions.) drop. Poison Jab is Fraxure's most reliable attack against Fairy-types like Clefairy and Togetic, (AC) who are immune to Outrage. Scale Shot allows Fraxure to break Focus Sash holders like Kadabra, (AC) while boosting its Speed and allowing it to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame.

This Fraxure set functions best mid- to late-game where it can more easily set up and revenge kill threats who that are in range. If Fraxure wants to clean with Dragon Dance, it should avoid spamming Outrage when Fairy- and Steel-types are still alive and healthy, (AC) as they can easily break end its sweep. Pokemon like Roselia and Machoke are great partners, (AC) as they can threaten these types respectively. Other wallbreakers like such as Raboot and Choice Band Piloswine are also good additions as they can weaken down the opposing team to Fraxure's range into Fraxure's range. Hazard setters like Galarian Corsola, Ferroseed and Palpitoad are also good partners as they can help wear down threats. Additionally, (AC) using hazard preventers pokemon to prevent hazards like Hattrem is also encouraged as Fraxure needs at least one (spelling) turn to set up, (RC) . (AP) Hattrem can also heal back Fraxure with Healing Wish to give it a second chance at sweeping. When running Swords Dance, Fraxure benefits from Sticky Web setters, notably Charjabug, (AC) who can help lower the speed of Choice Scarf users who may threaten Fraxure. Screens setters like such as Morgrem and Alolan-Vulpix are also good support as they can help Fraxure set up more easily.

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[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Outrage
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: First Impression / Superpower
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure is an incredible wallbreaker in the NFE metagame thanks to its high Attack stat and above average Speed, (AC) allowing it to outspeed other wallbreakers like Brionne, Roselia and Lampent. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest STAB attack allowing it to 2HKO (needed capitalized according to spelling and grammar standards) Physical Walls ("Walls" would not be capitalized here, in general titles like "physical walls" and "special attackers" would almost always not be capitalized) like such as (Try to avoid using like so much; variation to things like "such as" makes the analysis a lot more interesting.) Galarian Corsola and Physically Defensive Machoke (same thing for when you're describing a pokemon, stuff like "physically defensive" or "specially defensive" would not be capitalized), while Dragon Claw is used to put threats and (meh i probably would've kept "threats" in, "threats" and "switch-ins' technically can be considered different so again be careful when changing the actual info of the analysis) switch-ins in range of Outrage without getting locked in. Superpower is used to hit Steel-types who (who -> that, pokemon are referred to with genderless pronouns in analyses, this happened a couple of times in this analysis) resists Fraxure's STAB attacks like Ferroseed and Klang, while Stomping Tantrum is also an option as it that allows Fraxure to hit Klang and Carkol without lowering its stats. First Impression is Fraxure's only priority move and is used to revenge kill threats, (AC) notably Galarian Linoone, Kadabra, and Choice Scarf Thwackey.

Choice Band Fraxure functions best early- to mid-game in order to punch holes through the opponent's team. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest attack is Outrage (good change here) and usually Fraxure's go-to move when Fairy- and Steel-types are removed or in range; therefore, it is encouraged to pair Fraxure with wallbreakers that can deal with these Pokemon like such as Gastly, Piloswine and Machoke. Fraxure also benefits from hazard setters like Carkol, Roselia and Ferroseed, (AC) as they can put threats in range of KO (should be something along the lines of "being KOed"). Fraxure can be revenge killed by Piloswine and faster attackers like Gastly and Seadra, (AC) so walls like such as (i'd be a bit careful when making changes like this for variation, you don't wanna overdue it so much) Galarian Corsola and Klang are good partners. Knock Off users like Galarian Linoone, Thwackey and Vullaby are also good partners, (AC) as they can remove Eviolite (Not quite sure about this one, although Eviolites doesn't seem quite correct considering pokemon aren't going to be holding multiple items.) (yeah i don't like using the plural forms of items unless absolutely needed, this is good) allowing put threats in range, (RC) . (AP) (changes like this can be confusing so usually i would just replace the comma with a period outright and note that i changed it as such, something like (comma -> period))They can also functions as pivots, (AC) allowing Fraxure in safely. Pokemon that can pass health, (AC) like such as Clefairy and Hattrem, (AC) are also good partners as they can prolong Fraxure's longevity by helping it regain some health back.

[SET]
name: Set Up (would be "Setup" in this context; "set up" is used as a verb, and "setup" is usually used as an adjective)
move 1: Swords Dance / Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Poison Jab / Scale Shot
item: Eviolite
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure can boost itself through Dragon Dance and or Swords Dance in order to act as sweeper or wallbreaker. Swords Dance enables Fraxure to break through walls like Galarian Corsola and Tangela, (AC) while Dragon Dance allows Fraxure to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Outrage is Fraxure's main attack and its strongest STAB (would be "STAB move," think of STAB as a sort of adjective), (AC) allowing it to hit a large portion of the metagame, (AC) notably Machoke, Mareanie and Vullaby. Superpower enables Fraxure to OHKO against Steel-types such as Ferroseed, (AC) who otherwise easily sponge Outrage like Ferroseed at +2. Stomping Tantrum can also be an option as it hits Steel-types and Fire-types like Klang, and Carkol without risking a defense (Smogon uses the American English spelling for words that have different spellings in other regions.) (you're correct on that part, but "defense" would be capitalized because you're directly referring to the stat itself) drop. Poison Jab is Fraxure's most reliable attack against Fairy-types like Clefairy and Togetic, (AC) who are immune to Outrage. Scale Shot allows Fraxure to break Focus Sash holders like Kadabra, (AC) (no comma in this context, "while" is being used as way to describe how fraxure can break focus sash and boost its speed at the time, it would need a comma if "while" was being used as "whereas") while boosting its Speed and allowing it to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame.

This Fraxure set functions best mid- to late-game where it can more easily set up and revenge kill threats who that are in range. If Fraxure wants to clean with Dragon Dance, it should avoid spamming Outrage when Fairy- and Steel-types are still alive and healthy, (AC) as they can easily break end its sweep. Pokemon like Roselia and Machoke are great partners, (AC) as they can threaten these types respectively. Other wallbreakers like such as Raboot and Choice Band Piloswine are also good additions as they can weaken down the opposing team to Fraxure's range into Fraxure's range. Hazard setters like Galarian Corsola, Ferroseed and Palpitoad are also good partners as they can help wear down threats. Additionally, (AC) using hazard preventers pokemon (make sure to always double check your edits!!!!) to prevent hazards like Hattrem is also encouraged as Fraxure needs at least one (spelling) turn to set up, (RC) . (AP) Hattrem can also heal back Fraxure with Healing Wish to give it a second chance at sweeping. When running Swords Dance, Fraxure benefits from Sticky Web setters, notably Charjabug, (AC) who can help lower the speed of Choice Scarf users who may threaten Fraxure. Screens setters like such as Morgrem and Alolan-Vulpix are also good support as they can help Fraxure set up more easily.

one notable thing that kept coming up in this analysis but you didn't change really was how "as" was being used in a certain context without a comma, since typical a comma would be before "as" if "as" is being used in the context of "because"

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name: Choice Band
move 1: Outrage
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: First Impression / Superpower
item: Choice Band
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure is an incredible wallbreaker in the NFE metagame thanks to its high Attack stat and above average Speed, allowing it to outspeed other wallbreakers like Brionne, Roselia and Lampent. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest STAB attack, (AC) allowing it to 2HKO Physical Walls physical walls such as Galarian Corsola and Physically Defensive physically defensive Machoke, while Dragon Claw is used to put switch-ins in range of Outrage without getting locked in. Superpower is used to hit Steel-types who that resists Fraxure's STAB attacks like Ferroseed and Klang, while Stomping Tantrum is also an option that allows Fraxure to hit Klang and Carkol without lowering its stats. First Impression is Fraxure's only priority move and is used to revenge kill threats, most notably Galarian Linoone, Kadabra, and Choice Scarf Thwackey.

Choice Band Fraxure functions best early- to mid-game in order to punch by punching holes through the opponent's team. Outrage is Fraxure's strongest attack and usually Fraxure's its go-to move when Fairy- and Steel-types are removed or in range (i don't think "in range" is the best way to describe them in the context of outrage since fairy-types are already immune to it); therefore, it is encouraged to pair Fraxure with wallbreakers that can deal with these Pokemon, (AC) such as Gastly, Piloswine, (AC) and Machoke. Fraxure also benefits from entry hazard setters like Carkol, Roselia, (AC) and Ferroseed, as they can put threats in range of being KOed. Fraxure can be revenge killed by Piloswine and faster attackers like Gastly and Seadra, so walls like such as Galarian Corsola and Klang are good partners. Knock Off users like Galarian Linoone, Thwackey, (AC) and Vullaby are also good partners, as they can remove Eviolite allowing put threats from threats and put them in range for Fraxure to KO (asssuming you meant this). They can also function as pivots, allowing Fraxure in safely. Pokemon that can pass health heal Fraxure, such as Clefairy and Hattrem, are also good partners, (AC) as they can prolong Fraxure's longevity by helping it regain some health back (basically just repeating yourself here).

[SET]
name: Set Up Setup
move 1: Swords Dance / Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Superpower / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Poison Jab / Scale Shot
item: Eviolite
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Fraxure can boost itself through Dragon Dance or Swords Dance in order to act as sweeper or wallbreaker. Swords Dance enables Fraxure to break through walls like Galarian Corsola and Tangela, while Dragon Dance allows Fraxure to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Outrage is Fraxure's main attack and its strongest STAB move, allowing it to hit a large portion of the metagame, most notably Machoke, Mareanie, (AC) and Vullaby. Superpower enables Fraxure to OHKO against Steel-types who that otherwise easily sponge Outrage, (AC) like Ferroseed at +2. Stomping Tantrum can also be an option as it hits Steel-types to hit Steel- and Fire-types like Klang, (RC) and Carkol without risking a defense Defense drop. Poison Jab is Fraxure's most reliable attack against Fairy-types like Clefairy and Togetic, who which are immune to Outrage. Scale Shot allows Fraxure to break Focus Sash holders users like Kadabra, (RC) while boosting its Speed and, (AC) allowing it to outspeed the entire unboosted metagame.

This Fraxure set functions best mid- to late-game where it can more easily set up and revenge kill threats that are in range. If Fraxure wants to clean with Dragon Dance, it should avoid spamming Outrage when Fairy- and Steel-types are still alive active and healthy, as they can easily end its sweep. Pokemon like Roselia and Machoke are great partners, as they can threaten these types respectively. Other wallbreakers such as Raboot and Choice Band Piloswine are also good additions, (AC) as they can weaken down the opposing team into Fraxure's range. Hazard Entry hazard setters like Galarian Corsola, Ferroseed, (AC) and Palpitoad are also good partners, (AC) as they can help wear down threats (this is fine but i would recommend changing this to make it sound more like hazards in context, especially considering it already sounds really similar to the ending of the previous sentence, or you can just list of mons fraxure can ko thanks to hazards). Additionally, using to Pokemon that can prevent hazards from being set like Hattrem is also encouraged, (AC) as Fraxure needs at least one turn to set up (i think i get would you mean but i feel like there's a lack of correlation between hazards and needing a turn to set up, so i would suggest rewording this a bit for clarity). Hattrem can also heal back Fraxure to full with Healing Wish to give it a second chance at sweeping. When running Swords Dance, Fraxure benefits from Sticky Web setters, (RC) notably Charjabug, (RC) who like Charjabug that can help lower the speed Speed of Choice Scarf users who that may threaten Fraxure (i would recommend listing some scarf users). Screens Dual screens setters such as Morgrem and Alolan-Vulpix (RH) are also good support, (AC) as they can help Fraxure set up more easily.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Marjane, 355753]]
- Quality checked by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074], [uhuhuhu7, 407249]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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