Fresh out of the factory

[Soufiane]

I need you guys to criticise my team I recently made.



Donphan @ Lum Berry
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 HP / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard
- Rapid Spin
- Stealth Rock

Donphan is my lead, it sets up Stealth rocks and stops other hazards, with rapid spin I can take away hazards, with STAB Earthquake I can hurt opposing pokemons with and lum berry stops status ailments, Ice shard to kill pokemons with sash if they haven't died by the Earthquake.

Latios (M) @ Choice Specs
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Timid Nature
- Draco Meteor
- Surf
- Psyshock
- Thunderbolt

He is my main offense, has great stats and a great movepool to destroy pokemons with STAB Draco Meteor, and psyshock if I read a Blissey so I can hurt it bad on switch.
Great Special Attack stats, Latios is just a power house.

Scizor @ Choice Band
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 144 SDef / 12 Def / 100 HP
Adamant Nature
- U-turn
- Bullet Punch
- Pursuit
- Brick Break

My physical offense, with Brick Break I can beat pokemons like Ferrothorn, Terrakion and other strong pokemons, especially also to break barrier/light screens, Bullet punch is a great revenge move especially with a choice band this hurts them badly.

Gengar @ Life Orb
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Modest Nature
- Substitute
- Trick
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast

Anti Rapid-Spin and Gengar is fast enough to deal damage with his Speed and STAB Shadow Ball, substitute to stop status' or scout for moves.
Trick for stalling pokemons.

Gyarados @ Leftovers
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 212 HP / 200 Def / 46 SDef / 50 Atk
- Waterfall
- Roar
- Earthquake
- Substitute

My physical tank, with Intimidate I can take nearly every move that's physical coupled with my defensive stats and faze setting up pokemons, bulky overall.
Beats Terrakion and other Scizors.

Heatran @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Hasty Nature
- Earth Power
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Explosion

My revenger, STAB Fire blast hurts tons, Earth power for type coverage and opposing Heatrans, Hidden Power Ice for Gliscors and other dragons like Salamence, Explosion if I am low on health and go for big damage.
And with Scarf I can outspeed alot of pokemons.

Thanks for reading, I need some feedback for my team.

 

[Jirachee]

Hi

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

Your thread is breaking that rule. You need at the very least three lines of descriptions for each of your Pokemon. PM me your updated descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.