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[SET]
Quiver Dance (Oricorio-Pom-Pom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dancer
Tera Type: Ground / Steel / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Revelation Dance / Taunt
- Hurricane / Air Slash
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
===
Revelation Dance gives Oricorio-E a powerful Electric-type attack that doubles as a stronger Tera Blast when it Terastallizes. Taunt instead lets it deny status and recovery from passive walls like Hippowdon, Slowbro, and Umbreon, giving Oricorio-E setup opportunities, as well as stuffing Encore attempts from Jirachi. Hurricane gives Oricorio-E a powerful but inaccurate STAB option, crucially landing a 2HKO on Cyclizar, while Air Slash is weaker but more accurate. Roost lets a boosted Oricorio-E heal off chip damage to prolong a sweep attempt. Maximum HP EVs let Oricorio-E make the most of its great defensive typing, while maximum Speed ensures it outruns all unboosted Pokemon after a Quiver Dance. Tera Ground gives Oricorio-E a resistance to Rock, letting it shrug off Rock-type attacks from Terrakion and Kleavor, while letting it hit walls like Hisuian Goodra and Rhyperior. Tera Steel gives it an all-around good defensive typing with a poison immunity, which lets it set up on and beat Fezandipiti. Tera Fairy lets it hit Dragon-types while giving it an immunity to Dragon Tail, turning Cyclizar and Noivern into setup fodder.

Oricorio-E fits best on offensive teams, being a great late-game cleaner with a tremendous defensive typing that punishes common revenge killers like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Galarian Zapdos. Oricorio-E struggles to break through special walls like Hisuian Goodra, Rhyperior, and Fezandipiti without Terastallization; thus, teammates that can take advantage of these walls, like Bisharp, Flygon, and Jirachi can dissuade these foes from freely switching in. While Oricorio-E has a great defensive typing, it only has middling bulk, so defensive teammates like Hippowdon, Registeel, and Chestnaught are helpful for it to fall back on against Lycanroc-D, Hisuian Goodra, and Rhyperior, respectively. The aforementioned teammates can set entry hazards to bolster Oricorio-E's damage, giving it an easier time sweeping. In return, Oricorio-E can use Taunt to deny potential Defog attempts from Galarian Weezing and Talonflame. Oricorio-E tends to struggle against opposing setup sweepers like Calm Mind Fezandipiti and Reuniclus without Terastallization and especially without Taunt, so it appreciates teammates that deal with these Pokemon such as Roar Empoleon and Encore Jirachi. Fellow setup sweepers like Maushold, Gyarados, and Armarouge can work alongside Oricorio-E to overwhelm the opposing team. Pokemon that share checks with Oricorio-E, such as the aforementioned Armarouge and Jirachi, also benefit from Oricorio-E softening up Pokemon like Hisuian Goodra and Umbreon, and vice versa. On bulky offense teams, Oricorio-E excels at using common offensive Pokemon like Slither Wing and Galarian Zapdos as setup fodder, which is helpful for teammates afraid of these Pokemon like Cyclizar and Empoleon. Healing Wish from Gardevoir and Jirachi can give Oricorio-E another chance at sweeping, even if it was at low health.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sinnabyss.626095/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tbolt.555379/
 
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Quiver Dance (Oricorio-Pom-Pom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dancer
Tera Type: Ground / Steel / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Revelation Dance / Taunt
- Hurricane / Air Slash
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
====
The Oricorio formes have established themselves as lower tier menaces, and Oricorio-E is no exception. Quiver Dance lets it outspeed the entire unboosted metagame as well as raise its Special Attack and Special Defense fluff, and also not true because base 100s like Jirachi and 110s like Hisuian Zoroark outpace it after one QD. Revelation Dance gives Oricorio-E a powerful Electric-type attack that doubles as a stronger Tera Blast when it terastilizes Terastallizes. Taunt instead lets it deny status and recovery from walls like Hippowdon, Slowbro and Gligar, giving Oricorio-E setup opportunities. Would mention Taunt being more for Encore Jirachi Hurricane give Oricorio-E a powerful but innacurate STAB option, while Air Slash is weaker but more accurate. Roost lets a boosted Oricorio-E heal off chip damage to prolong a sweep attempt. Tera Ground gives Oricorio-E a resistance to Rock, which is important why?, while letting it hit walls like Hisuian Goodra and Rhyperior super-effectively. Tera Steel gives it an all-around good defensive type with a Toxic immunity, while Tera Fairy lets it hit Dragon-types as well as give it an immunity to Dragon Tail. Would elaborate more on Steel and Fairy; Steel helps use Fezandipiti as setup fodder since you aren't afraid of Toxic Chain and beat it 1v1 in setup wars even without Taunt, and then Fairy lets you setup fodder Cyclizar and Noivern especially.

Oricorio-E fits best on offensive teams, being a great late-game cleaner with a tremendous defensive typing that punishes common revenge killers like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Galarian Zapdos. Oricorio-E struggles to break through special walls like Hisuian Goodra, Rhyperior, and Fezandipiti. without Terastallization; thus, teammates that can take advantage of these walls, like Bisharp, Flygon and Jirachi can dissuade opponents from freely switching these walls in. While Oricorio-E has a great defensive typing, it only has middling bulk, so defensive teammates like Hippowdon, Registeel, and Chestnaught are helpful for it to fall back on. The aforementioned teammates can set hazards to bolster Oricorio-Es damage, giving it an easier time sweeping. In return, Oricorio-E can use Taunt to deny potential Defog attempts from Galarian Weezing and Talonflame. Oricorio-E tends to lose to struggle against opposing setup sweepers like Calm Mind Fezandipiti and Reuniclus without Terastallization, and especially without Taunt, so it appreciates teammates that deal with these Pokemon such as Roar Empoleon and Encore Jirachi. Fellow setup sweepers like Maushold, Gyrados, and Armarouge on Hyper Offense can work together to overwhelm the opposing team. Would talk a bit about Oricorio-E on bulky offense; you allude to it with the defensive teammates lines but don't really talk much about it being a good offensive setup threat on bulkier structures because of its ability to setup against Slither Wing and Galarian Zapdos especially.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sinnabyss.626095/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/

Grammar checked by:

Off to an okay start; please implement and tag me for review before moving to qc2.
 
Quiver Dance (Oricorio-Pom-Pom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dancer
Tera Type: Ground / Steel / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Revelation Dance / Taunt
- Hurricane / Air Slash
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
====

The Oricorio formes have established themselves as lower tier menaces, and Oricorio-E is no exception. write something more specific to RU here, where is Oricorio-E standing in the meta atm? Revelation Dance gives Oricorio-E a powerful Electric-type attack that doubles as a stronger Tera Blast when it Terastallizes. Taunt instead lets it deny status and recovery from passive walls like Hippowdon, Slowbro and Umbreon, giving Oricorio-E setup opportunities, as well as stuffing Encore attempts from Jirachi. Hurricane give Oricorio-E a powerful but innacurate STAB option, while Air Slash is weaker but more accurate. Roost lets a boosted Oricorio-E heal off chip damage to prolong a sweep attempt. write a quick sentence about the EVs spread: why are we investing in bulk? Tera Ground gives Oricorio-E a resistance to Rock, letting it shrug off Rock-type attacks from Terrakion and Kleavor, while letting it hit walls like Hisuian Goodra and Rhyperior super-effectively. Tera Steel gives it an all-around good defensive type with a Toxic immunity, which lets it setup and beat Fezandipiti. Tera Fairy lets it hit Dragon-types as well as give it an immunity to Dragon Tail, turning Cyclizar and Noivern into setup fodder.

Oricorio-E fits best on offensive teams, being a great late-game cleaner with a tremendous defensive typing that punishes common revenge killers like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Galarian Zapdos. Oricorio-E struggles to break through special walls like Hisuian Goodra, Rhyperior, and Fezandipiti without Terastallization; thus, teammates that can take advantage of these walls, like Bisharp, Flygon and Jirachi can dissuade opponents from freely switching in. While Oricorio-E has a great defensive typing, it only has middling bulk, so defensive teammates like Hippowdon, Registeel, and Chestnaught are helpful for it to fall back on explain why these Pokemon in particular, on which threats can they pivot in exactly? (rhyp, hoodra, might also want one for gweezing). The aforementioned teammates can set hazards to bolster Oricorio-Es damage, giving it an easier time sweeping. In return, Oricorio-E can use Taunt to deny potential Defog attempts from Galarian Weezing and Talonflame. Oricorio-E tends to struggle against opposing setup sweepers like Calm Mind Fezandipiti and Reuniclus without Terastallization, and especially without Taunt, so it appreciates teammates that deal with these Pokemon such as Roar Empoleon and Encore Jirachi. Fellow setup sweepers like Maushold, Gyrados, and Armarouge on Hyper Offense can work together alongside Oricorio-E to overwhelm the opposing team. continue with a sentence about offensive partners which specifically weaken their shared checks with Oricorio-E (Hoodra, Armarouge could be mentioned here as well and such) On bulky offense teams, Oricorio-E excels at using common offensive Pokemon like Slither Wing and Galarian Zapdos as setup fodder, which is helpful for teammates afraid of these Pokemon like Cyclizar and Empoleon. Healing Wish from Gardevoir and Jirachi can guve Oricorio-E another chance at sweeping, even if it was at low health.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sinnabyss.626095/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
Grammar checked by:
Good work, just some details to adjust and this will be good to go.

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[SET]
Quiver Dance (Oricorio-Pom-Pom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dancer
Tera Type: Ground / Steel / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Revelation Dance / Taunt
- Hurricane / Air Slash
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
===

Revelation Dance gives Oricorio-E a powerful Electric-type attack that doubles as a stronger Tera Blast when it Terastallizes. Taunt instead lets it deny status and recovery from passive walls like Hippowdon, Slowbro, (AC) and Umbreon, giving Oricorio-E setup opportunities, as well as stuffing Encore attempts from Jirachi. Hurricane give gives Oricorio-E a powerful but innacurate inaccurate STAB option, while Air Slash is weaker but more accurate. (This mostly feels like Dex info; is there any sort of concrete example where Hurricane's power is more beneficial?) Roost lets a boosted Oricorio-E heal off chip damage to prolong a sweep attempt. Maximum HP EVs let Oricorio-E make the most of its great defensive typing, while max maximum Speed ensures it outruns all unboosted Pokemon after a Quiver Dance. (AP) Tera Ground gives Oricorio-E a resistance to Rock, letting it shrug off Rock-type attacks from Terrakion and Kleavor, while letting it hit walls like Hisuian Goodra and Rhyperior super-effectively. Tera Steel gives it an all-around good defensive type with a Toxic immunity, which lets it setup set up on and beat Fezandipiti. Tera Fairy lets it hit Dragon-types as well as give while giving it an immunity to Dragon Tail, turning Cyclizar and Noivern into setup fodder.

Oricorio-E fits best on offensive teams, being a great late-game cleaner with a tremendous defensive typing that punishes common revenge killers like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Galarian Zapdos. Oricorio-E struggles to break through special walls like Hisuian Goodra, Rhyperior, and Fezandipiti without Terastallization; thus, teammates that can take advantage of these walls, like Bisharp, Flygon, (AC) and Jirachi can dissuade opponents from freely switching in. While Oricorio-E has a great defensive typing, it only has middling bulk, so defensive teammates like Hippowdon, Registeel, and Chestnaught are helpful for it to fall back on against Lycanroc-Dusk Lycanroc-D, Hisuian Goodra, and Rhyperior, (AC) respectively. The aforementioned teammates can set entry hazards to bolster Oricorio-Es Oricorio-E's damage, giving it an easier time sweeping. In return, Oricorio-E can use Taunt to deny potential Defog attempts from Galarian Weezing and Talonflame. Oricorio-E tends to struggle against opposing setup sweepers like Calm Mind Fezandipiti and Reuniclus without Terastallization, (RC) and especially without Taunt, so it appreciates teammates that deal with these Pokemon such as Roar Empoleon and Encore Jirachi. Fellow setup sweepers like Maushold, Gyrados Gyarados, and Armarouge can work alongside Oricorio-E to overwhelm the opposing team. Pokemon that share checks with Oricorio-E, such as the afformentioned aforementioned Armarouge and Jirachi, also benefit from Oricorio-E softening up Pokemon like Hisuian Goodra and Umbreon, and vice versa. On bulky offense teams, Oricorio-E excels at using common offensive Pokemon like Slither Wing and Galarian Zapdos as setup fodder, which is helpful for teammates afraid of these Pokemon like Cyclizar and Empoleon. Healing Wish from Gardevoir and Jirachi can guve give Oricorio-E another chance at sweeping, even if it was at low health.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sinnabyss.626095/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tbolt.555379/

Implement this first, and then I will look over it again and give it GP 1/1
 
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[SET]
Quiver Dance (Oricorio-Pom-Pom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dancer
Tera Type: Ground / Steel / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Revelation Dance / Taunt
- Hurricane / Air Slash
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
===

Revelation Dance gives Oricorio-E a powerful Electric-type attack that doubles as a stronger Tera Blast when it Terastallizes. Taunt instead lets it deny status and recovery from passive walls like Hippowdon, Slowbro, (AC) and Umbreon, giving Oricorio-E setup opportunities, as well as stuffing Encore attempts from Jirachi. Hurricane give gives Oricorio-E a powerful but innacurate inaccurate STAB option, while Air Slash is weaker but more accurate. (This mostly feels like Dex info; is there any sort of concrete example where Hurricane's power is more beneficial?) Roost lets a boosted Oricorio-E heal off chip damage to prolong a sweep attempt. Maximum HP EVs let Oricorio-E make the most of its great defensive typing, while max maximum Speed ensures it outruns all unboosted Pokemon after a Quiver Dance. (AP) Tera Ground gives Oricorio-E a resistance to Rock, letting it shrug off Rock-type attacks from Terrakion and Kleavor, while letting it hit walls like Hisuian Goodra and Rhyperior super-effectively. Tera Steel gives it an all-around good defensive type with a Toxic immunity, which lets it setup set up on and beat Fezandipiti. Tera Fairy lets it hit Dragon-types as well as give while giving it an immunity to Dragon Tail, turning Cyclizar and Noivern into setup fodder.

Oricorio-E fits best on offensive teams, being a great late-game cleaner with a tremendous defensive typing that punishes common revenge killers like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Galarian Zapdos. Oricorio-E struggles to break through special walls like Hisuian Goodra, Rhyperior, and Fezandipiti without Terastallization; thus, teammates that can take advantage of these walls, like Bisharp, Flygon, (AC) and Jirachi can dissuade opponents from freely switching in. While Oricorio-E has a great defensive typing, it only has middling bulk, so defensive teammates like Hippowdon, Registeel, and Chestnaught are helpful for it to fall back on against Lycanroc-Dusk Lycanroc-D, Hisuian Goodra, and Rhyperior, (AC) respectively. The aforementioned teammates can set entry hazards to bolster Oricorio-Es Oricorio-E's damage, giving it an easier time sweeping. In return, Oricorio-E can use Taunt to deny potential Defog attempts from Galarian Weezing and Talonflame. Oricorio-E tends to struggle against opposing setup sweepers like Calm Mind Fezandipiti and Reuniclus without Terastallization, (RC) and especially without Taunt, so it appreciates teammates that deal with these Pokemon such as Roar Empoleon and Encore Jirachi. Fellow setup sweepers like Maushold, Gyrados Gyarados, and Armarouge can work alongside Oricorio-E to overwhelm the opposing team. Pokemon that share checks with Oricorio-E, such as the afformentioned aforementioned Armarouge and Jirachi, also benefit from Oricorio-E softening up Pokemon like Hisuian Goodra and Umbreon, and vice versa. On bulky offense teams, Oricorio-E excels at using common offensive Pokemon like Slither Wing and Galarian Zapdos as setup fodder, which is helpful for teammates afraid of these Pokemon like Cyclizar and Empoleon. Healing Wish from Gardevoir and Jirachi can guve give Oricorio-E another chance at sweeping, even if it was at low health.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sinnabyss.626095/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tbolt.555379/

Implement this first, and then I will look over it again and give it GP 1/1
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[SET]
Quiver Dance (Oricorio-Pom-Pom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dancer
Tera Type: Ground / Steel / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Revelation Dance / Taunt
- Hurricane / Air Slash
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
===

Revelation Dance gives Oricorio-E a powerful Electric-type attack that doubles as a stronger Tera Blast when it Terastallizes. Taunt instead lets it deny status and recovery from passive walls like Hippowdon, Slowbro, and Umbreon, giving Oricorio-E setup opportunities, as well as stuffing Encore attempts from Jirachi. Hurricane gives Oricorio-E a powerful but inaccurate STAB option, crucially landing a 2HKO on Cyclizar, while Air Slash is weaker but more accurate. (Add space) Roost lets a boosted Oricorio-E heal off chip damage to prolong a sweep attempt. Maximum HP EVs let Oricorio-E make the most of its great defensive typing, while maximum Speed ensures it outruns all unboosted Pokemon after a Quiver Dance. Tera Ground gives Oricorio-E a resistance to Rock, letting it shrug off Rock-type attacks from Terrakion and Kleavor, while letting it hit walls like Hisuian Goodra and Rhyperior. Tera Steel gives it an all-around good defensive type typing with a Toxic poison immunity, which lets it set up on and beat Fezandipiti. Tera Fairy lets it hit Dragon-types while giving it an immunity to Dragon Tail, turning Cyclizar and Noivern into setup fodder.

Oricorio-E fits best on offensive teams, being a great late-game cleaner with a tremendous defensive typing that punishes common revenge killers like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Galarian Zapdos. Oricorio-E struggles to break through special walls like Hisuian Goodra, Rhyperior, and Fezandipiti without Terastallization; thus, teammates that can take advantage of these walls, like Bisharp, Flygon, and Jirachi can dissuade opponents these foes from freely switching in. While Oricorio-E has a great defensive typing, it only has middling bulk, so defensive teammates like Hippowdon, Registeel, and Chestnaught are helpful for it to fall back on against Lycanroc-D, Hisuian Goodra, and Rhyperior, respectively. The aforementioned teammates can set entry hazards to bolster Oricorio-E's damage, giving it an easier time sweeping. In return, Oricorio-E can use Taunt to deny potential Defog attempts from Galarian Weezing and Talonflame. Oricorio-E tends to struggle against opposing setup sweepers like Calm Mind Fezandipiti and Reuniclus without Terastallization and especially without Taunt, so it appreciates teammates that deal with these Pokemon such as Roar Empoleon and Encore Jirachi. Fellow setup sweepers like Maushold, Gyarados, and Armarouge can work alongside Oricorio-E to overwhelm the opposing team. Pokemon that share checks with Oricorio-E, such as the aforementioned Armarouge and Jirachi, also benefit from Oricorio-E softening up Pokemon like Hisuian Goodra and Umbreon, and vice versa. On bulky offense teams, Oricorio-E excels at using common offensive Pokemon like Slither Wing and Galarian Zapdos as setup fodder, which is helpful for teammates afraid of these Pokemon like Cyclizar and Empoleon. Healing Wish from Gardevoir and Jirachi can give Oricorio-E another chance at sweeping, even if it was at low health.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sinnabyss.626095/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tbolt.555379/

GP Team done
 
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