RU Garbodor [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Defensive Spiker
move 1: Spikes
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Body Press / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Pain Split / Toxic
item: Rocky Helmet / Black Sludge
ability: Aftermath
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Garbodor is a solid defensive Spiker that is able to safely set multiple Spikes against Pokemon it checks such as Passimian, Virizion, and Silvally-Fairy. Gunk Shot threatens common Defoggers such as Silvally-Fairy, Rotom-C, and Charizard. Body Press is used to damage Steel-types such as Duraludon and Copperajah. Most notably, Body Press 2HKOes Silvally-Steel after one layer of Spikes, which would otherwise be able to Defog away Spikes for free. Stomping Tantrum is a weaker option against Steel-types, but it 2HKOes Toxicroak and OHKOes Salazzle. Pain Split is Garbodor's main form of recovery. Toxic can be used to punish Ground-types such as Rhydon and Mudsdale. Garbodor can also set Toxic Spikes, but it's a subpar option due to the prevalence of Poison-types such as Salazzle, Vileplume, and Drapion. Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Passimian. Alternatively, Black Sludge gives Garbodor recovery outside of Pain Split. Aftermath is to further punish physical attackers that use a contact move such as Passimian with Knock Off. If Stomping Tantrum is chosen, then an EV spread of 252 HP / 40 Atk / 216 Def is advised to guarantee the 2HKO on Toxicroak.

Stealth Rock setters such as Duraludon, Rhydon, and Steelix make for excellent partners, as they create a powerful hazard stacking core with Garbodor. Wallbreakers such as Ninetales, Braviary, and Indeedee-M appreciate Spikes making their job easier by whittling down their checks. Braviary, Passimian, and Malamar punish Defoggers removing Spikes by getting a boost to their Attack stat or evasion in Malamar's case. Late-game cleaners such as Indeedee-M, Passimian, and Bravairy also appreciate Spikes support. Garbodor invites Ground-types such as Rhydon, Mudsdale, and Steelix for free, and thus Vaporeon, Virizion, and Rotom-C make for great teammates. Wish support from Pokemon such as Vaporeon is greatly appreciated by Garbodor variants without Pain Split. Vaporeon also appreciates Garbodor checking Toxicroak, which uses Vaporeon as free setup fodder. Steel-types such as Steelix and Copperajah and Dark-types such as Drapion and Malamar are able to handle Psychic-types such as Indeedee-M and Alolan Raichu. In addition, Garbodor is able to take on Fighting- and Fairy-types such as Virizion and Silvally-Fairy for them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GoldCat, 359771]]
- Quality checked by: [[MrAldo, 227521], [Mavis, 469610]]
- Grammar checked by: [[kt3, 228482]]
 
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Perfect.

- Eh, toxic being slashed at the end there is somewhat confusing by looking at the set. It implies you would run toxic and toxic somewhat and it just feels off tbh. I like the first 2 slashes with body press and stomping tantrum, and pain split with toxic. Just removing toxic at the end, it just looks off.

- I feel the last bit where you close the second feels off in the sense that it implies there are a plethora of fairy types in the tier, which is not true since only relevant one right now is silvally fairy. I think an slightly different phrasing could get the message across or something "In addition, Garbodor is able to take on Fighting- and Fairy-types like Virizion and Silvally-Fairy". Something like that would sound better since we do not have an abundance of fairy types rn.

No qualms on the spread, 44 speed can be added to outspeed jolly rhydon but it just does 27% max on max speed rhydon so picking it up sounds like not practical at all.

Pretty good QC 1/2
 
add in a mention about braviary/passi punishing defog users, perhaps after the " Wallbreakers such as Ninetales, Braviary, and Indeedee appreciates Spikes making their job easier by whittling down their checks." sentence

looks great, 2/2 well done
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[SET]
name: Defensive Spiker
move 1: Spikes
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Body Press / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Pain Split / Toxic
item: Rocky Helmet / Black Sludge
ability: Aftermath
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Garbodor is a solid defensive Spikes setter that is able to safely set multiple layers of Spikes against Pokemon it checks such as Passimian, Virizion, and Silvally-Fairy. Gunk Shot threatens common Defoggers such as Silvally-Fairy, Rotom-CMow, and Charizard. Body Press is used to damage Steel-types such as Duraludon and Copperajah. Most notably, Body Press 2HKOes Silvally-Steel after one layer of Spikes, which would otherwise be able to use Defog away Spikes for free (I don't think it's Defogging for free). Stomping Tantrum is weaker against Steel-types (why? not sure if it's just BP, but why is it specifically weaker against Steel-types?) but it 2HKOes Toxicroak and OHKOes Salazzle. Pain Split is Garbodor's main form of recovery. Toxic can be used to punish Ground-types such as Rhydon and Mudsdale. Garbodor can also set Toxic Spikes but it's a subparsub-par option due to the prevalence of Poison-types such as Salazzle, Vileplume, and Drapion. Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Passimian. Black Sludge gives Garbodor recovery outside of Pain Split. Aftermath is to further punish physical attackers who use by dealing 25% when Garbodor is knocked out by a contact moves such as Passimian's Knock Off. If Stomping Tantrum is chosen then an EV spread of 252 HP / 36 Atk / 220 Def is advised to guarantee the 2HKO on Toxicroak.

Stealth Rock setters such as Duraludon, Rhydon, and Steelix make for excellent partners as together with Garbodor they create a powerful hazard stacking core. Wallbreakers such as Ninetales, Braviary, and Indeedee appreciates Spikes making their job easier by whittling down their checks. Braviary, Passimian, and Malamar punish Defoggers removing Spikes by getting a free (it's not free, your payment is losing Spikes)boost to their Attack stat or Evasion in Malamar's case. Late-game cleaners such as Indeedee, Passimian, and Bravairy also appreciate Spikes support. Garbodor invites Ground-types such as Rhydon, Mudsdale, and Steelix to switch in,(AC)for free (again, I don't think it's free as Garbodor could deal damage or set Spikes) and thus Vaporeon, Virizion, and Rotom-CMow make for great teammates. Wish support from Pokemon such as Vaporeon is greatly appreciated by Garbodor variants without Pain Split. Vaporeon also appreciates Garbodor checking Toxicroak, which uses Vaporeon as free setup fodder. Steel-types such as Steelix and Copperajah and Dark-types such as Drapion and Malamar are able to handle Psychic-types such as Indeedee and Alolan Raichu for Garbodor while. In addition, Garbodor is able to take on Fighting- and Fairy-types such as Virizion and Silvally-Fairy for them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GoldCat, 359771]]
- Quality checked by: [[MrAldo, 227521], [Mavis, 469610]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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gp 1/1
once done

[SET]
name: Defensive Spiker
move 1: Spikes
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Body Press / Stomping Tantrum
move 4: Pain Split / Toxic
item: Rocky Helmet / Black Sludge
ability: Aftermath
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Garbodor is a solid defensive Spikes setter Spiker that is able to safely set multiple Spikes against Pokemon it checks such as Passimian, Virizion, and Silvally-Fairy. Gunk Shot threatens common Defoggers such as Silvally-Fairy, Rotom-CMow, and Charizard. Body Press is used to damage Steel-types such as Duraludon and Copperajah. Most notably, Body Press 2HKOes Silvally-Steel after one layer of Spikes, which would otherwise be able to Defog away Spikes for free (I don't think it's Defogging for free imo fine). Stomping Tantrum is a weaker option against Steel-types, (AC) but it 2HKOes Toxicroak and OHKOes Salazzle. Pain Split is Garbodor's main form of recovery. Toxic can be used to punish Ground-types such as Rhydon and Mudsdale. Garbodor can also set Toxic Spikes, (AC) but it's a subparsub-par option due to the prevalence of Poison-types such as Salazzle, Vileplume, and Drapion. Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Passimian. Alternatively, Black Sludge gives Garbodor recovery outside of Pain Split. Aftermath is to further punish physical attackers that use by dealing 25% when Garbodor is knocked out by a contact move ("a contact move" here is fine, fo) such as Passimian's Knock Off with Knock Off. If Stomping Tantrum is chosen, (AC) then an EV spread of 252 HP / 36 Atk / 220 Def is advised to guarantee the 2HKO on Toxicroak.

Stealth Rock setters such as Duraludon, Rhydon, and Steelix make for excellent partners, (AC) as together with Garbodor they create a powerful hazard stacking core with Garbodor. Wallbreakers such as Ninetales, Braviary, and Indeedee-M appreciates Spikes making their job easier by whittling down their checks. Braviary, Passimian, and Malamar punish Defoggers removing Spikes by getting a free (it's not free, your payment is losing Spikes) boost to their Attack stat or Evasion evasion in Malamar's case. Late-game cleaners such as Indeedee-M, Passimian, and Bravairy also appreciate Spikes support. Garbodor invites Ground-types such as Rhydon, Mudsdale, and Steelix for free, (AC) (again, I don't think it's free as Garbodor could deal damage or set Spikes i personally think it's fine) and thus Vaporeon, Virizion, and Rotom-CMow make for great teammates. Wish support from Pokemon such as Vaporeon is greatly appreciated by Garbodor variants without Pain Split. Vaporeon also appreciates Garbodor checking Toxicroak, which uses Vaporeon as free setup fodder. Steel-types such as Steelix and Copperajah and Dark-types such as Drapion and Malamar are able to handle Psychic-types such as Indeedee-M and Alolan Raichu for Garbodor. In addition, Garbodor is able to take on Fighting- and Fairy-types such as Virizion and Silvally-Fairy for them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GoldCat, 359771]]
- Quality checked by: [[MrAldo, 227521], [Mavis, 469610]]
- Grammar checked by: [[kt3, 228482]]
 
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