[GEN 5 OU] Go ahead and destroy !!

sidiu95

I decided to edit this team ...


257_Blaziken.png

Blaziken (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Speed Boost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Protect
- Substitute
- Swords Dance
- Baton Pass
This is the classic baton passer Blaziken.
Without him the team would not hold up, he does protect the first to gain a boost in speed (or do directly sword dance). However, after finishing this, I pass the statistics to scrafty or Salamence
is a great lead, no one expects a life orb as lead mienshao. I leave with hesitation and then fake out, after that I Hi Jump Kick, which is able to destroy anything (2 OKKH hipowdon), Stone Edge for flying and u-turn for Secure Switch


560___shiny_scrafty_v_2_by_merum_sb_blueolimar-d37142h.png

Zuruzukin (Scrafty) (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Moxie
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Crunch
- Ice Punch
- Drain Punch
scrafty here. I have changed its nature from jolly to Adamant, because this takes the speed of Blaziken... the coverage now you know: D. he does not need hi jump kick, he goes so well with drain punch I'm much better, because it can always recover ..


150px-373_Salamence.png

Salamence (M) @ Lum Berry
Trait: Moxie
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Brick Break
- Fire Fang
there is not anything to say about this dragon, the coverage seems quite good, also I gave lum berry to address the problem of status. I also cover moves from the ground (in fact I do baton pass when the earth moves aimed at Blaziken)


150px-609_Chandelure.png

Shandera (Chandelure) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Shadow Tag
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Shadow Ball
- Overheat
- Energy Ball
- Hidden Power [Ice]
This is the same as last time, the main change is in the HP, it is the hidden power of ice


150px-547_Whimsicott.png

Whimsicott (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Prankster
EVs: 252 HP / 244 Def / 4 SDef
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Leech Seed
- Substitute
- Encore
- Toxic
I put toxic instead of taunt



184_Azumarill.png

Azumarill (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Huge Power
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Aqua Jet
- Waterfall
- Return
- Superpower

here, he's back in the team. Hige skills power + choice band is very powerful. does get to 637 about the attack (perhaps more). In addition, he has access to a move of priority: water jet, which makes it a very powerful revenge killer. Superpower hurts a bit at all, waterfall STAB move that may falter.


PS:
have a little more patience. this is a team who completes and I will use until I have time to waste to build another team.
So I want to make it as functional as possible synergistic
 
Hi,

I'm guessing English is a secondary language so I will keep this rate simple. I did find some stuff hard to understand but I'll help in what I did understand.

2 Fighting Pokemon isn't great. Same weaknesses. Try something else, like something for weather. Up to you which to change but I think Scrafty, because I like your lead.

Give Togekiss Body Slam + Cheer Up over Thunder Wave + Nasty Plot.

If you don't like Haxorus run a Bulky Dragon Dance Gyarados.

GL
 
Okay, honestly, you'll need to describe your individual pokemon due to the fact that it will make it easier for people like me to rate teams. However, I'll do my best with what I have here. :O

Minor Issues

Firstly on your Scrafty, I would recommend Shed Skin over Moxie, although Moxie increases your attack every time you take down an opposing poke (which is nice, I know) It doesn't beat taking out status simply by stalling turns. After all, Scrafty is a sweeper, and status's such as burn is an extreme pain. Therefore, I feel that it is necessary to run Shed Skin, however, it is really a "safety" versus a "Ima sweep issue" it's all IMO really.

Replacing Pokes

TBH, I don't see why you have Togekiss. Sure, it worked well in 4th gen. as one of those "hax" pokemon, but I can't see it working in the much more powerful 5th gen. Surely there are things to replace it.

So here's a bit of thought for you, your team has two fighting types, but only one psychic weakness (Scrafty's dark type), however, you still maintain two flying weaknesses, and since you probably feel the need of a flying type to replace Togekiss (synergy purposes) here's what I propose

Thunderus @ Life Orb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Nature: Timid
-Nasty Plot
-Thunderbolt
-Hidden Power Ice
-Focus Blast

This set allows you to have another flying type on the team to replace Togekiss. This Pokemon provides a lot more Special Power and Speed than Togekiss ever dreamed of, and it's nerve wracking STAB Thunderbolt shoots many flying types to hell. Even if the rather rare Landolos manages to show up, your 4x HP Ice will no doubt send it to hell and back. Just a recommendation, but I think it'll work okay!

IMO, Reuniculus doesn't really find a spot on your team, sure it makes a great Special Attacker, but we don't really need that many... (you have 3, I prefer a 4:2 ratio) So I think you should replace it with this Scizor set

Scizor @ Choice Band
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Spe
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Technician
-Bullet Punch
-U-turn
-Superpower
-Pursuit

This guy makes a good Gengar counter that poses a "medium" threat to your team, and allows your team to have pretty solid priority. Superpower allows you to send all Blissey's and Chansey's to hell and back, and Bullet Punch is just great for a low HP sweeper. Just try it, I think it is a good replacement for the late Reuniculus.

Hope I helped, oh, and mods, if I broke any rules, please tell me so, I'm rather inexperienced.
 
Lucky7,
thanks very much for your help, thanks to you I finally completed the team and you are grateful, I will post soon a new team and I would be happy if you help me ^ ^
 
If you describe them properly, then people will rate it. also, Baton Pass Blaziken with Speed Boost is illegal, which makes me wonder whether you've even used this team before. Best try a Ninjask in its place if you want to Baton Pass. Also, a much better recipient for the boosts is Metagross instead of Salamence. It isn't weak to priority, has an excellent movepool and very high attack and defense. Other option for Baton Passing are Smeargle (who can use Spore to cripple, Shell Smash for a mixed attacker, Belly Drum for a physical attacker, and Quiver Dance for a special attacker), Gliscor, who has reliable recovery and bulk, and Scizor for the same reasons as gliscor. I'm not really sure what your team is trying to accomplish though... if you want I can battle you on Pokemon Online to see how you play :/
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top