GEN4 RMT

[trfyrktrv]

Hello everyone, I'm going to present a balanced team. English is not my mother tong, so don't be surprised if my english sometime seams weird.

Vulcain (Heatran) (M) @ Shuca Berry
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 HP/72 Atk/184 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Explosion
- Fire Blast
- Stealth Rock
- Hidden Power [Electric]
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My lead, he puts SS most of time, FB stabed,if opponents switchs to Gyara, it's quite funy: HP electric. if he is not too damage, i switch to another pokemon. And he will Explose against an annoying opponent


Aegishjalmur (Rotom-w) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 Spd/252 SAtk/4 SDef
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Hydro Pump
- Shadow Ball
- Thunderbolt
- Trick
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Classical revenge killer/ tricker, he outspeed most of other pokemon. it also cover Skarm anf Vap of electrick attacks. He is my anti-spin. One of my team's pillar.

Spitfire (Skarmory) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 254 HP/240 Def/16 Spd
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Roost
- Brave Bird
- Spikes
- Whirlwind
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Staller, he covers Breelom wikness to air and psy, Tyra's ground weakness, when i'm against an ennemy who can't harm in skar's weakness, i put spikes, if a SD or DD or Sub ior else comes, i send skar to whirlwind.

Dark Tyranus (Tyranitar) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 Atk/252 Spd/6 SDef
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Crunch
- Stone Edge
- Pursuit
- Earthquake
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He begans the SS, in order to increase residual damages. He revenged killed with Rottom. And counters any trickers. crunch and stone edge are stabbed, pursuit to trap a fugitive. Eartquake to touch the steels.

Davout (Breloom) (M) @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison Heal
EVs: 172 HP/204 Def/132 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Spore
- Focus Punch
- Substitute
- Leech Seed
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The star of my team =D. He lulls annoying ennemy and, Rox, residual damages are increased with the SS and leech seed .

Prinz Eugen (Vaporeon) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 188 HP/252 Def/68 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Surf
- Wish
- Toxic
- Protect
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Staller, he covers Heatran's weakness to water, Skar's fire one. . With SS, hazard entry and toxic, Vapo is a dreadfull pokemon.

Thank you for any critics and advices

 

[Delko]

Hi

This looks like a cool team, but I have a few suggestions.

First of all, you're quite weak to opposing Breloom. It can easily get a Substitute up against various members of your team (Ttar stuck in Crunch, Pursuit or Stone Edge, Rotom-w stuck on Hydro Pump or Thunderbolt, ...) and it can put to sleep your only check, Skarmory with Spore and start spamming Focus Punch to hurt your team. This can be somewhat solved with running a RestTalk Rotom set. This will still be an effective counter to Gyarados, as well as counter various other things such as Breloom or Agility Metagross and it acts as your status absorber.

Without Trick on Rotom-w gone, you are a bit weak to stall teams. Especially the infamous SkarmBliss combination can be a bit though for you to beat. This can be somewhat solved by using Magma Storm on Heatran. Stall teams counter Heatran with either Blissey or Gyarados, and with Magma Storm you can beat both. Just Magma Storm on the switch-in so it's trapped and you can take Blissey out with Explosion and Gyarados with Hidden Power [Electric].
It's a bit redundant to use Shucka Berry on Heatran when you can't do anything in return against the likes of Flygon and opposing Heatran. It's best if you changed it item to Passho Berry (weakens Water-type moves). That way it has a better chance against Gyarados with a Dragon Dance boost.

You could also try to run defensive Starmie instead of Vaporeon. You'll loose your Wish supporter but you'll have a Rapid Spin instead and a secundary status absorber. Starmie also oustpeeds Heatran and Infernape, both could cause you some problems.

Hope these suggestion helped and good luck with the team!

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.