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LC Gimmighoul

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Gimmighoul-Roaming @ Life Orb
Ability: Run Away
Level: 5
Tera Type: Ghost
EVs: 76 Def / 236 SpA / 196 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 9 HP
- Nasty Plot
- Shadow Ball
- Power Gem
- Substitute
Gimmighoul-R reaches the coveted 18 Speed in Little Cup, which makes it faster than commonly used Pokemon like Mienfoo, Vullaby, and Toedscool. Nasty Plot combined with the Life Orb helps turn Gimmighoul-R into a dangerous wallbreaker. Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Flying-types like Vullaby. Substitute gives Gimmighoul-R a free turn on forced switches and helps it with Sucker Punch mind games. Tera Ghost allows it to OHKO Eviolite Tinkatink, Foongus, and physically defensive Mareanie with +2 Shadow Ball. Gimmighoul-R is threatened by Dark-types like Stunky and faster Pokemon like Elekid, but they can be trapped by Trapinch, which is great to pair with Gimmighoul-R. It also appreciates teammates like Mienfoo and Vullaby, which can remove Eviolite and bring it in safely with U-turn. Entry hazard support from Glimmet and Mudbray helps get foes in its damage range late-game.
 
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for future reference just tag any member of the LC QC team to check, it's fine now since i saw this but high chance we just miss it otherwise.

:Gimmighoul-Roaming: Gimmighoul-Roaming @ Life Orb
Ability: Run Away
Level: 5
Tera Type: Ghost
EVs: 76 Def / 236 SpA / 196 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 9 HP
- Nasty Plot
- Shadow Ball
- Power Gem
- Substitute
unsure if we need colors in the set but thats an issue for later. (prolly not though and just write as one paragraph below)

Gimmighoul is a Pokémon with considerable speed for the Little Cup tier. With its speed, it can outspeed Mienfoo, Vullaby, Tinkatink, Glimmet, Toedscool, Alolan Sandshrew, Chinchou, among others, which are very common Pokémon in the tier. (no need to list out the entire list of mons under 18 speed, you can just say gimmi reaches 18 speed which lets it outspeed metagame staples like foo vull toed or smth similar)
Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Vullaby, while Substitute is used to trick a Nymbler with Sucker Punch, for example.(just change substitute to smth like "sub is used to get a free turn on pokemon that switch out fearing the KO and also helps with sucker mindgames" basically nymble does not have enough use to mention it by name) Pokémon like Alolan Sandshrew, Wingull, and Hisui's Growlithe form a great core with Gimmighoul, as both can knock out threats like Elekid, Chespin, and Stunky. (ok so you def have to mention trapinch, it traps the only threats faster than gimmi or a threat to it which are elekid and stunky and you can mention it needs knock so foo and vull help with knock and uturn to get it in safely)
A Gimmighoul, after a Nasty Plot, can knock out Vullaby, Mienfoo, Alolan and Normal Sandshrew, Glimmet, and if it uses Terastal, it can defeat Foongus, Chinchou, Toedscool, Tinkatink, Mareanie, and Shellos. (again, dont list out stuff. basically say that nasty plot helps it reach dangerous levels of special attacks and life orb increases the immediate damage output and combined w tera ghost most mons have a tough time switching in)

extra note: try not to use casual speak, like in my comments i have mentioned it casually since i dont wanna rewrite but when you take these suggestions write like an analysis.

i'm gonna need to have a second look here, there's a lot of changes needed and there's only so much i can suggest without rewriting it. I'll do the flow and other things on the second pass once the basics are sorted.
 
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Gimmighoul-Roaming @ Life Orb
Ability: Run Away
Level: 5
Tera Type: Ghost
EVs: 76 Def / 236 SpA / 196 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 9 HP
- Nasty Plot
- Shadow Ball
- Power Gem
- Substitute removed color on this since it might mess with formatting while posting

Gimmighoul is a Pokémon with considerable speed for the reaches the coveted 18 Speed in Little Cup, (AC) tier.Gimmighoul reaches 18 speed which is faster than commonly used Pokemon like Mienfoo, Vullaby, and Toedscool. Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Vullaby Nasty Plot sharply boosts its Special Attack and,Substitute is a move used to gain "extra turns" with Pokémon that are afraid of being knocked out, and it also helps with Sucker Punch. for example combined with the Life Orb, helps turn Gimmighoul into a dangerous breaker. Shadow Ball is its STAB move of choice, which is boosted by Tera Ghost. added line about shadow ball Pokémon like Alolan Sandshrew, Wingull,Hisui's Growlithe,Trapinch,and the knock off moves of pokémon such as Mienfoo and Vullaby form a great core Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Flying-types like Vullaby. Substitute gives Gimmighoul a free turn on forced switches and helps it with Sucker Punch mindgames. (AP) Gimmighoul (RC) as both can knock out threats is threatened by Dark-types like Stunky and faster Pokemon like Elekid, Chespin which can be trapped by Trapinch, and Stunky. Nasty Plot helps to achieve very high special attack levels, and with the life orb making them great teammates for each other. It also appreciates teammates like Mienfoo and Vullaby, it helps to deal more immediate damage. Combined which can remove Eviolite and bring it in safely with Terastalize (Ghost type), it makes it more difficult for Pokémon to safely switch out U-turn. Hazard support from Glimmet and Mudbray helps get foes in its damage range late-game. moved the section for nasty plot first. always remember that when you write an analysis the description of moves should be in the order they appear in the set. (for eg. nasty plot then shadow ball then power gem and then substitute). i suggest you read more analyses before writing so that you can understand the language needed because most of the changes here were just sentence structure.

also linking this video, for how to implement the check. you can tag "@ gp team" after this is implemented (no space between @ and gp)
please watch video to make sure you implement correctly
 
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Gimmighoul-Roaming @ Life Orb
Ability: Run Away
Level: 5
Tera Type: Ghost
EVs: 76 Def / 236 SpA / 196 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 9 HP
- Nasty Plot
- Shadow Ball
- Power Gem
- Substitute

Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming reaches the coveted 18 Speed in Little Cup, which is makes it faster than commonly used Pokemon like Mienfoo, Vullaby, and Toedscool. Nasty Plot sharply boosts its Special Attack and, combined with the Life Orb, helps turn Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming into a dangerous breaker wallbreaker. Shadow Ball is its STAB move of choice, which is boosted by Tera Ghost. (This is obvious info. I suggest rewriting this to focus on any notable calcs that +2 LO Shadow Ball achieves as well as any calcs with the Tera Ghost boost, so readers would know how powerful it is.) Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Flying-types like Vullaby. Substitute gives Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming a free turn on forced switches and helps it with Sucker Punch mindgames mind games. Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming is threatened by Dark-types like Stunky and faster Pokemon like Elekid, which but they can be trapped by Trapinch, making them which is great teammates for each other to pair with Gimmighoul-Roaming. It also appreciates teammates like Mienfoo and Vullaby, which can remove Eviolite and bring it in safely with U-turn. Hazard Entry hazard support from Glimmet and Mudbray helps get foes in its damage range late-game.

(Character count: 732 → 803) You can probably add in more useful info to the paragraph, since it's well below the suggested 1000-character limit.

Implement the above first, then I'll take another look at it. Additionally, please change the thread title to GP 0/1 because I haven't given approval yet.
 
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Gimmighoul-Roaming @ Life Orb
Ability: Run Away
Level: 5
Tera Type: Ghost
EVs: 76 Def / 236 SpA / 196 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 9 HP
- Nasty Plot
- Shadow Ball
- Power Gem
- Substitute

Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming reaches the coveted 18 Speed in Little Cup, which is makes it faster than commonly used Pokemon like Mienfoo, Vullaby, and Toedscool. Nasty Plot sharply boosts its Special Attack and, combined with the Life Orb, helps turn Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming into a dangerous breaker wallbreaker. Shadow Ball is its STAB move of choice, which is boosted by Tera Ghost. (This is obvious info. I suggest rewriting this to focus on any notable calcs that +2 LO Shadow Ball achieves as well as any calcs with the Tera Ghost boost, so readers would know how powerful it is.) Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Flying-types like Vullaby. Substitute gives Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming a free turn on forced switches and helps it with Sucker Punch mindgames mind games. Gimmighoul Gimmighoul-Roaming is threatened by Dark-types like Stunky and faster Pokemon like Elekid, which but they can be trapped by Trapinch, making them which is great teammates for each other to pair with Gimmighoul-Roaming. It also appreciates teammates like Mienfoo and Vullaby, which can remove Eviolite and bring it in safely with U-turn. Hazard Entry hazard support from Glimmet and Mudbray helps get foes in its damage range late-game.

(Character count: 732 → 803) You can probably add in more useful info to the paragraph, since it's well below the suggested 1000-character limit.

Implement the above first, then I'll take another look at it. Additionally, please change the thread title to GP 0/1 because I haven't given approval yet.
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Gimmighoul-Roaming @ Life Orb
Ability: Run Away
Level: 5
Tera Type: Ghost
EVs: 76 Def / 236 SpA / 196 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 9 HP
- Nasty Plot
- Shadow Ball
- Power Gem
- Substitute

Gimmighoul-Roaming Gimmighoul-R reaches the coveted 18 Speed in Little Cup, which makes it faster than commonly used Pokemon like Mienfoo, Vullaby, and Toedscool. Nasty Plot sharply boosts its Special Attack (dex info) and (RC) combined with the Life Orb (RC) helps turn Gimmighoul-Roaming Gimmighoul-R into a dangerous (remove space) wallbreaker. Some calcs:
+2 236 SpA Life Orb Tera Ghost Gimmighoul-Roaming Shadow Ball vs. 36 HP / 164+ SpD Eviolite Tinkatink: 23-29 (104.5 - 131.8%) -- guaranteed OHKO
+2 236 SpA Life Orb Tera Ghost Gimmighoul-Roaming Shadow Ball vs. 124 HP / 156 SpD Eviolite Foongus: 26-31 (104 - 124%) -- guaranteed OHKO
+2 236 SpA Life Orb Tera Ghost Gimmighoul-Roaming Shadow Ball vs. 116 HP / 180 SpD Eviolite Mareanie: 26-31 (113 - 134.7%) -- guaranteed OHKO
Power Gem is a specialized coverage move for Flying-types like Vullaby. Substitute gives Gimmighoul-Roaming Gimmighoul-R a free turn on forced switches and helps it with Sucker Punch (remove space) mind games. Tera Ghost allows it to OHKO Eviolite Tinkatink, Foongus, and physically defensive Mareanie with +2 Shadow Ball. Gimmighoul-Roaming Gimmighoul-R is threatened by Dark-types like Stunky and faster Pokemon like Elekid, (remove space) but they can be trapped by Trapinch, (remove space) which is great to pair with Gimmighoul-Roaming Gimmighoul-R. It also appreciates teammates like Mienfoo and Vullaby, which can remove Eviolite and bring it in safely with U-turn. (remove space) Entry hazard support from Glimmet and Mudbray helps get foes in its damage range late-game.

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hxmo contrary to what's written on the title, this is not completed yet (changed to reflect this); please implement the gp check above, especially cause it's been 48hours since it's posted
 
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