Goudon Uber Team

[Crasher]

I will be using Groudon instead of Kyogre. I think that it is a very good Pokemon.

Groudon@ Leftovers
252 HP / 216 Atk / 32 Def / 8 Spe
Modest
Earthquake
Overheat
Dragon Claw
Stone Edge
It sets up the weather. After that I can bring in Charizard. It really is a help to my team.

Tentacruel@ Leichi Berry
204 HP / 96 SpA / 172 SpD / 36 Spe
Calm
Surf
Toxic Spikes
Natural Gift

Metagross@ Leftovers
152 HP / 252 Atk / 104 Spe
Adamant
Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Agility
Stealth Rock
Uber Metagross! One of the best non-Ubers in the game!

Deoxys-A@ Life Orb
4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Hasty
Ice Beam
Thunder
Superpower
Shadow Ball
This thing will take down anything, but it can't counter anything, making it risky to use.

Giratina@ Leftovers
252 HP / 244 Def / 12 SpD
Bold
Will-O-Wisp
Rest
Sleep Talk
Dragon Pulse

The wall for my team. I am not using Blissey, so I just will use this, even thogh Blissey is usually better.

Latias@ Soul Dew
112 HP / 204 SpA / 192 Spe
Timid
Calm Mind
Dragon Pulse
Recover
Grass Knot
This is a pretty good Latias. It can take most hits.

This team is for ShoddyBattle.

Changes:
I changed Deoxys-A's Zen Headbutt for Shadow Ball.
I changed Metagross's Agility for Stealth Rock.
I switched out Charizard for Tentacruel.

 

[Age of Kings]

My only question is why is Groudon Modest, when it's basically the same as the overview set?

I'll stick to light changes for now, but the first thing you need to do is get rid of Zen Headbutt on Deoxys and tack on Shadow Ball, because at the moment, there's little you can do to stop Mewtwo and etc from ripping this entire team apart. I would then dump Charizard for perhaps more support, as its set currently provides almost no coverage in ubers. You say it hits Metagross pretty hard, but you already have Groudon that does the job well enough. You have nothing that can particularily status, you have nothing that can lay down something crippling (to my recollection, Rapid Spin is rare in ubers, but then so are SR/TS), but I really have no suggestions as to something specific you can add in....

 

[Taylor]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Please read and follow the rules.