guys, I'm so bad at pokemon...

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Ninetales @ Leftovers
Trait: Drought
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
IVs: 30 Atk / 30 Def
- Fire Blast
- Nasty Plot
- Will-O-Wisp
- Energy Ball

sets up sun, burns physical sweepers, does a decent chunk to politoed after a nasty plot

Venusaur @ Life Orb
Trait: Chlorophyll
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Giga Drain
- Growth
- Sleep Powder
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Destroys everything. sleep then boost.

Landorus-Therian (M) @ Black Belt
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 HP / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Stone Edge
- Earthquake
- U-turn
- Brick Break

used for coverage, works pretty nicely

Jolteon @ Choice Specs
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Timid Nature
- Volt Switch
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Thunderbolt
- Signal Beam

signal beam makes alakazam sad. hidden power ice makes hence and chomp cry. volt switch to scout. thunderbolt for a strong stab

Chandelure @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 Spd / 4 SDef
Modest Nature
- Energy Ball
- Shadow Ball
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power [Fighting]

scarfed. pseudo revenge killer. all coverage moves

Heatran @ Air Balloon
Trait: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SAtk / 4 SDef
Modest Nature
- Dragon Pulse
- Earth Power
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Flamethrower

HP ice for mence and chomp. dragon pulse for other dragons. earth power for other fire types. flamethrower for stab and sun.
 
I think you might need more detailed explanations. Also, have chandy run HP Ground over HP fighting, as HP fighting 3HKs The Offensive Heatrans. Have land-T use an expert belt, so all his moves get boosted by hitting SE against threats. Also run Stealth Rocks over HP ice on Heatran, as Dragon pulse+Flametrower(Relpace with Fire Blast)+ Earth power is all the coverage you need.
 
On venusaur id suggest swapping out growth and giga drain. I fined a mixed set works the best, with Energy Ball/ Solar Beam | Sleep Powder | Earthquake | Hidden Power (ice)
The above moveset doesnt get walled by heatran or dragons as yours does. (Two very common pokes, although in the BW2 meta i guess hp fire > hp ice could be good as genesect is number 1 in usage, but its up to you.
Make descriptions longer too, and put in pictures, youll find you get better rates if you do put the time into making the RMT, people will put time into fixing your time.
Gl anyway
 
Please expand on your Pokemon's roles, simply saying 'standard set duh' doesn't cuts it. RMT Rule #3 states: All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice. This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

To get an in-dept view on this, check out the RMT Archive to see the kind of detail we usually look for. PM me with the recommended changes and this thread will get unlocked.
 
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