Copyediting Hatterene’s Glorious Wife (Indeedee-F) [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

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[SET]
Trick Room Support (Indeedee-F) @ Safety Goggles / Rocky Helmet / Psychic Seed
Ability: Psychic Surge
Level: 50
Tera Type: Water / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold / Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 31 Spe OR 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Psychic / Alluring Voice
- Follow Me
- Helping Hand
- Trick Room

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
- Indeedee-F is a great support option for many teams, utilizing its Nomal-typing to take no damage from Calyrex-S's Astral Barrage and Lunala's Moongeist Beam while also setting Psychic Terrain to not only shut off Miraidon's Electric Terrain, but also to guard its teammates from priority moves such as Fake Out, as well as Sucker Punch and Thunderclap from Chien-Pao and Raging Bolt, respectively.
- Psychic provides Indeedee-F with a way to deal consistent damage, and Alluring Voice can be used to scare off Dark-types like Chien-Pao and Tera Dark Calyrex-S.
- Safety Goggles is useful for Indeedee-F to safely redirect Spore from Amoonguss and Smeargle, while Rocky Helmet can be used to punish certain physical attackers, most notably Urshifu-R. Psychic Seed, although less common, is a good choice to help take on special attackers like the aforementioned Calyrex-S and Raging Bolt.
- If running a Trick Room team, an Relaxed Nature and 0 Speed IVs can be run to override terrain against uninvested Rillaboom if sent on the field at the same time and be as slow as possible for operating under Trick Room.
- Tera Water grants Indeedee-F with a great defensive typing, helping it stomach moves such as Glacial Lance and Surging Strikes from Calyrex-I and Urshifu-R, respectively. Tera Fairy, on the other hand, most notably lets Indeedee-F resist Dark-types like Chi-Yu, Incineroar, and Chien-Pao. Although niche, Tera Fairy also boosts the power of Alluring Voice, letting it almost always OHKO Koraidon and securing the OHKO on Urshifu-S.

Teambuilding
=========
- Indeedee-F is very vulnerable to Taunt from the likes of Incineroar and Flutter Mane, severely hindering Indeedee-F's supportive capabilities, stopping it from redirecting attacks or setting up Trick Room.
- Without Tera available, Dark-type attacks like Wicked Blow from Urshifu and Dark Pulse from Chi-Yu threaten Indeedee-F with a potential OHKO. Chien-Pao in particular is a big threat to Indeedee-F, as it not only threatens Indeedee-F with Crunch, but can also remove Psychic Terrain with Ice Spinner.
- Miraidon and Rillaboom are able to override Indeedee-F's Psychic Terrain with their own respective terrains, forcing Indeedee-F to switch out if it wants to set up Psychic Terrain again.
- Packing multiple Trick Room setters like Calyrex-I and Lunala can make sure that Taunt won't shut down Trick Room altogether. Said Trick Room setters benefit from Indeedee-F's access to Follow Me and Trick Room, potentially setting up Trick Room for the aforementioned Restricted Pokemon and protecting them while they sweep via redirection.
- Partners such as the Urshifu formes and Zamazenta-C are able to threaten Dark-types with a KO with Close Combat and Body Press, respectively. Zamazenta-C is notably able to almost completely wall out Chien-Pao, unless it has Sacred Sword. Running Alluring Voice or using Whimsicott can also help with Dark-types to an extent. Indeedee-F can help more easily achieve these KOes with Helping Hand, or can protect it's allies from faster threats with Follow Me
- Calyrex-I is able to easily take out Miraidon and Rillaboom, which can be achieved even easier thanks to Indeedee-F's access to Trick Room and Helping Hand.
- Calyrex-S and Lunala highly appreciate Indeedee-F's assistance, enabling powerful Expanding Forces with Psychic Terrain whilst helping Calyrex-S set up with Nasty Plot and Lunala set up Trick Room, thanks to Follow Me. Lunala in particular appreciates Indeedee-F's ability to set Trick Room. In return, Calyrex-S and Lunala can KO powerful threats such as Koraidon which can threaten Indeedee-F with an OHKO.

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Good work, ping me for a recheck before marking 1/2
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[SET]
Trick Room Support (Indeedee-F) @ Safety Goggles / Rocky Helmet / Psychic Seed
Ability: Psychic Surge
Level: 50
Tera Type: Water / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold / Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 31 Spe OR 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Psychic / Alluring Voice
- Follow Me
- Helping Hand
- Trick Room

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
- Indeedee-F is a great support option for many teams, utilizing its great Nomal-typing to take on hits no damage from the likes of Calyrex-S's Astral Barrage and Lunala's Moongeist Beam while also setting Psychic Terrain to guard its teammates from priority moves such as Fake Out, as well as Sucker Punch and Thunderclap from Chien-Pao and Raging Bolt, respectively. You should definitely squeeze in something about Indeedee's terrain control being great for Miraidon
- Psychic provides Indeedee-F with a way to deal consistent damage, and Alluring Voice can be run instead if worried about Pokemon such as Nasty Plot Calyrex-S and Swords Dance Zacian-C. Alluring Voice isn't really used because of setup Pokemon; it's moreso used to not be helpless against Dark-types
- Safety Goggles is useful for Indeedee-F to safely redirect Spore from Amoonguss and Smeargle, while Rocky Helmet can be used to annoy punish certain physical attackers, most notably Urshifu-R. Psychic Seed, although less common, is a good choice to help take on special attackers like the aforementioned Calyrex-S and Raging Bolt.
- If running a Trick Room team, an Relaxed Nature and 0 Speed IVs can be run to under speed opposing Indeedee-F. (It doesn't really gain much by this; non-31 IV Indeedee is good for A: Terrain control against uninvested Rillaboom and B: Generally being slower is better for HTR)
- Tera Water grants Indeedee-F with a great defensive typing, helping it take hits from Calyrex-I and Urshifu-R. Tera Fairy, on the other hand, most notably guards Indeedee-F from Dark-types like Chi-Yu, Incineroar, and Urshifu Chien-Pao(much more relevant).

Teambuilding
=========
- Indeedee-F is very vulnerable to Taunt from the likes of Incineroar and Flutter Mane, severely hindering Indeedee-F's supportive capabilities, stopping it from redirecting attacks or setting up Trick Room.
- Without Tera available, Dark-type attacks like Wicked Blow from Urshifu and Dark Pulse from Chi-Yu threaten Indeedee-F with a potential OHKO. Chien-Pao in particular is a big threat to Indeedee-F, as it not only threatens Indeedee-F with Crunch, but can also remove Psychic Terrain with Ice Spinner.
- Miraidon and Rillaboom are able to override Indeedee-F's Psychic Terrain with their own respective terrains, forcing Indeedee-F to switch out if it wants to set up Psychic Terrain again.
- Packing multiple Trick Room setters like Calyrex-I and Lunala can make sure that Taunt won't shut down Trick Room altogether. A additional Follow Me user such as Smeargle can also help get around Taunt. Said Trick Room setters also benefit (yes, self-explanatory, but be specific about Follow Me+Trick Room+protecting them while they sweep) from Indeedee-F's access to Follow Me. Using Taunt to shut down opposing Taunt is also an option, but can be difficult to pull off with Prankster users thanks to Psychic Terrain.
- Partners such as Urshifu and Zamazenta-C are able to threaten Dark-types with a KO with Close Combat and Body Press, respectively. Zamazenta-C is notably able to almost completely wall out Chien-Pao, unless it has Sacred Sword. Running Alluring Voice or using Whimsicott can also help with Dark-types to an extent. Indeedee-F can help more easily achieve these KOes with Helping Hand, or can protect it's allies from faster threats with Follow Me
- Calyrex-I is able to easily take out Miraidon and Rillaboom, which can be achieved even easier thanks to Indeedee-F's Trick Room and Helping Hand. An ally Chien-Pao can also help, but would have to use Icicle Crash to avoid accidentally removing Psychic Terrain.
There should be an acknowledgement of Calyrex-S as well Lunala, which would entail helping Calyrex-S set up, enabling powerful Expanding Forces, and letting Lunala freely set Trick Room/setting Trick Room itself



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Fantastic job, you may mark 1/2 once implemented
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[SET]
Trick Room Support (Indeedee-F) @ Safety Goggles / Rocky Helmet / Psychic Seed
Ability: Psychic Surge
Level: 50
Tera Type: Water / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold / Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 31 Spe OR 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Psychic / Alluring Voice
- Follow Me
- Helping Hand
- Trick Room

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
- Indeedee-F is a great support option for many teams, utilizing its Nomal-typing to take no damage from Calyrex-S's Astral Barrage and Lunala's Moongeist Beam while also setting Psychic Terrain to not only shut off Miraidon's Electric Terrain, but also to guard its teammates from priority moves such as Fake Out, as well as Sucker Punch and Thunderclap from Chien-Pao and Raging Bolt, respectively.
- Psychic provides Indeedee-F with a way to deal consistent damage, and Alluring Voice can be used to scare off Dark-types like Chien-Pao and Tera Dark Calyrex-S.
- Safety Goggles is useful for Indeedee-F to safely redirect Spore from Amoonguss and Smeargle, while Rocky Helmet can be used to punish certain physical attackers, most notably Urshifu-R. Psychic Seed, although less common, is a good choice to help take on special attackers like the aforementioned Calyrex-S and Raging Bolt.
- If running a Trick Room team, an Relaxed Nature and 0 Speed IVs can be run to override even terrain against uninvested Rillaboom if sent on the field at the same time and be as slow as possible for operating under Trick Room.
- Tera Water grants Indeedee-F with a great defensive typing, helping it take hits from Calyrex-I and Urshifu-R. Tera Fairy, on the other hand, most notably guards Indeedee-F from Dark-types like Chi-Yu, Incineroar, and Chien-Pao.

Teambuilding
=========
- Indeedee-F is very vulnerable to Taunt from the likes of Incineroar and Flutter Mane, severely hindering Indeedee-F's supportive capabilities, stopping it from redirecting attacks or setting up Trick Room.
- Without Tera available, Dark-type attacks like Wicked Blow from Urshifu and Dark Pulse from Chi-Yu threaten Indeedee-F with a potential OHKO. Chien-Pao in particular is a big threat to Indeedee-F, as it not only threatens Indeedee-F with Crunch, but can also remove Psychic Terrain with Ice Spinner.
- Miraidon and Rillaboom are able to override Indeedee-F's Psychic Terrain with their own respective terrains, forcing Indeedee-F to switch out if it wants to set up Psychic Terrain again.
- Packing multiple Trick Room setters like Calyrex-I and Lunala can make sure that Taunt won't shut down Trick Room altogether. Said Trick Room setters benefit from Indeedee-F's access to Follow Me and Trick Room, potentially setting up Trick Room for the aforementioned Restricted Pokemon and protecting them while they sweep via redirection.
- Partners such as Urshifu and Zamazenta-C are able to threaten Dark-types with a KO with Close Combat and Body Press, respectively. Zamazenta-C is notably able to almost completely wall out Chien-Pao, unless it has Sacred Sword. Running Alluring Voice or using Whimsicott can also help with Dark-types to an extent. Indeedee-F can help more easily achieve these KOes with Helping Hand, or can protect it's allies from faster threats with Follow Me
- Calyrex-I is able to easily take out Miraidon and Rillaboom, which can be achieved even easier thanks to Indeedee-F's Trick Room and Helping Hand. An ally Chien-Pao can also help, but would have to use Icicle Crash to avoid accidentally removing Psychic Terrain. Funny enough, both of the D2 NAIC Chien-Pao with Indeedee ran Ice Spinner. Anyway, I don't mind if you just leave Chien-Pao off entirely
- Calyrex-S and Lunala highly appreciate Indeedee-F's assistance, enabling powerful Expanding Forces with Psychic Terrain whilst helping them set up (Only Calyrex-S, really) thanks to Follow Me. Lunala in particular appreciates Indeedee-F's ability to set Psychic Terrain (why? Because it more commonly runs Expanding Force, or what?). In return, Calyrex-S and Lunala can KO powerful threats such as Koraidon and Ursaluna (Is there a better example here, if not, keep it), which can threaten Indeedee-F with an OHKO.

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ty code, ready for qc 2 (would like next qcer to weigh in on the last line, there is probs a better example than Ursaluna but I can't really figure out what to put instead)
 
Good job, you may mark as 2/2 after implementing!

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[SET]
Trick Room Support (Indeedee-F) @ Safety Goggles / Rocky Helmet / Psychic Seed
Ability: Psychic Surge
Level: 50
Tera Type: Water / Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold / Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 31 Spe OR 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Psychic / Alluring Voice
- Follow Me
- Helping Hand
- Trick Room

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
- Indeedee-F is a great support option for many teams, utilizing its Nomal-typing to take no damage from Calyrex-S's Astral Barrage and Lunala's Moongeist Beam while also setting Psychic Terrain to not only shut off Miraidon's Electric Terrain, but also to guard its teammates from priority moves such as Fake Out, as well as Sucker Punch and Thunderclap from Chien-Pao and Raging Bolt, respectively.
- Psychic provides Indeedee-F with a way to deal consistent damage, and Alluring Voice can be used to scare off Dark-types like Chien-Pao and Tera Dark Calyrex-S.
- Safety Goggles is useful for Indeedee-F to safely redirect Spore from Amoonguss and Smeargle, while Rocky Helmet can be used to punish certain physical attackers, most notably Urshifu-R. Psychic Seed, although less common, is a good choice to help take on special attackers like the aforementioned Calyrex-S and Raging Bolt.
- If running a Trick Room team, an Relaxed Nature and 0 Speed IVs can be run to override terrain against uninvested Rillaboom if sent on the field at the same time and be as slow as possible for operating under Trick Room.
- Tera Water grants Indeedee-F with a great defensive typing, helping it take hits from Calyrex-I and Urshifu-R. I would prefer you to go into a bit more detail so mention which attacks Tera Fairy, on the other hand, most notably guards This is more of a GP thing but this doesn't feel like a suitable word choice/description Indeedee-F from Dark-types like Chi-Yu, Incineroar, and Chien-Pao. Niche but you could also mention Tera Fairy increasing the damage of Alluring Voice

Teambuilding
=========
- Indeedee-F is very vulnerable to Taunt from the likes of Incineroar and Flutter Mane, severely hindering Indeedee-F's supportive capabilities, stopping it from redirecting attacks or setting up Trick Room.
- Without Tera available, Dark-type attacks like Wicked Blow from Urshifu and Dark Pulse from Chi-Yu threaten Indeedee-F with a potential OHKO. Chien-Pao in particular is a big threat to Indeedee-F, as it not only threatens Indeedee-F with Crunch, but can also remove Psychic Terrain with Ice Spinner.
- Miraidon and Rillaboom are able to override Indeedee-F's Psychic Terrain with their own respective terrains, forcing Indeedee-F to switch out if it wants to set up Psychic Terrain again.
- Packing multiple Trick Room setters like Calyrex-I and Lunala can make sure that Taunt won't shut down Trick Room altogether. Said Trick Room setters benefit from Indeedee-F's access to Follow Me and Trick Room, potentially setting up Trick Room for the aforementioned Restricted Pokemon and protecting them while they sweep via redirection.
- Partners such as Urshifu-S and Zamazenta-C are able to threaten Dark-types with a KO with Close Combat and Body Press, respectively. Zamazenta-C is notably able to almost completely wall out Chien-Pao, unless it has Sacred Sword. Running Alluring Voice or using Whimsicott can also help with Dark-types to an extent. Indeedee-F can help more easily achieve these KOes with Helping Hand, or can protect it's allies from faster threats with Follow Me
- Calyrex-I is able to easily take out Miraidon and Rillaboom, which can be achieved even easier thanks to Indeedee-F's Trick Room and Helping Hand.
- Calyrex-S and Lunala highly appreciate Indeedee-F's assistance, enabling powerful Expanding Forces with Psychic Terrain whilst helping Calyrex-S set up with Nasty Plot and Lunala set up Trick Room, thanks to Follow Me. Lunala in particular appreciates Indeedee-F's ability to set Trick Room. In return, Calyrex-S and Lunala can KO powerful threats such as Koraidon and Ursaluna, Koraidon alone seems like a fine example to me so you can probably drop Ursaluna, the only other example I can think of is Urshifu-R although Calyrex-S and Lunala don't particularly struggle against it which can threaten Indeedee-F with an OHKO.

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