Haven't built a competitive team in a while...

[Jayweezy09]

This team is a combination of my favorite new pokemon and a couple of my old favorites. It serves as an offensive team and any pokemon exchange suggestions are welcome.

Zoroark w/ Life Orb
Timid; 252 S. Atk, 252 Spd, 4 HP

Nasty Plot
Dark Pulse
Flamethrower
Toxic

This guy comes out appearing to be a Ferrothorn, allowing a turn to either set up a Nasty Plot or poison the for. Added speed to improve survival rate.

Archeops w/ Nothing
Adamant; 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 4 HP

Acrobatics
Earthquake
Rock Slide
U-turn

A favorite of mine, Archeops is a hard hitter. U-turn is helpful for predictions.

Haxorus w/ ???
Adamant; 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 4 HP

Dragon Dance
Outrage
Earthquake
???

Haxorus is another favorite of mine. I'm having trouble with a fourth move for this guy.

Scizor w/ ???
Adamant Technician; 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 HP

Swords Dance
Bullet Punch
Superpower
U-turn

Revenge Killer!

Milotic w/ Flame Orb
Mild; 252 HP, 252 S. Def, 4 Spd

Scald
Ice Beam
Dragon Tail
Recover

My favorite pokemon ever--she's a must have on this team. Amazing ability by the way.

Ferrothorn w/ Rocky Helmet
Relaxed; 252 HP, 48 Def, 208 S. Def

Spikes
Stealth Rock
Gyro Ball
Power Whip

I love this defensive pokemon. He's interchangeable as my lead. Spikes and Stealth Rock support ftw!

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I apologize for such short comments as I am on my phone. Any suggestions are welcome :)

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread. Also please, complete your movesets and add the missing hold items. Remember that you're supposed to test your team before posting it here.