Haxorus [QC 0/2]

[SET]
name: Dragon Dance
move 1: Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Iron Tail
move 4: Earthquake
item: Lum Berry
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Spd / 252 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
Haxorus's high power, decent speed, and great coverage allow it serve as a serviceable late game sweeper. Iron Tail is mandatory to break through Fairy-types such as Clefable, Togekiss, and Sylveon. Earthquake is used to break through Aegislash, Toxapex, and Excadrill and to avoid being locked into Outrage against the Rotom appliances. Lum Berry is the preferred item to set up against Pokemon who would otherwise cripple Haxorus via status such as Seismitoad and Rotom-W. A Jolly nature is necessary to outspeed Dragapult, Choice Scarf Darmanitan, and Choice Scarf Rotom-W at +1 Speed. Mold Breaker is the chosen ability as Rivalry is very unreliable and Unnerve is a rather worthless ability in the metagame, while Mold Breaker is quite useful as it allows Haxorus to pierce through Levitate and Unaware users. Haxourus appreciates teammates that can punch holes in the opponents walls to set up a Haxorus sweep; Pokemon such as Rotom-H, Gengar, and Conkeldurr are all great choices. Entry hazard support from the likes of Clefable, Ferrothorn, and and Seismitoad can assist Haxorus's sweep by wearing down the opposing team. A teammate that can take advantage of Corviknight is mandatory. The afromentioned Rotom-H, Aegislash, and Toxtricity are excel at this role. Lastly, Pokemon that can pivot into Choice Scarf users such as Dragapult, Terrakion, and Hydreigon such as Clefable, Toxapex, and Corviknight are highly appreciated to protect Haxorus from a potential revenge kill.

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[SET]
name: Dragon Dance
move 1: Dragon Dance
move 2: Outrage
move 3: Iron Tail
move 4: Earthquake
item: Lum Berry
ability: Mold Breaker
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Spd / 252 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]


Haxorus's high power, decent speed, and great coverage allow it serve as a serviceable late game sweeper. Iron Tail is mandatory to break through Fairy-types such as Clefable, Togekiss, and Sylveon. I don't really think that the Sylveon mention is particularly necessary anymore considering that it's dead so you're pretty much good to remove this. Earthquake is used to break through Aegislash, Toxapex, and Excadrill and to avoid being locked into Outrage against the Rotom appliances. Lum Berry is the preferred item to set up against Pokemon who would otherwise cripple Haxorus via status such as Seismitoad and Rotom-W. replace this with rotom-h; rotom-w isn't anywhere near as common, not to mention that it does get a few more chances to set up safely vs heater than washer considering overheat drops and all that.
A Jolly nature is necessary to outspeed Dragapult, Choice Scarf Darmanitan, and Choice Scarf Rotom-W at +1 Speed Few Things: Mention Zeraora, since that's the big one; scarf rotom mention can be dropped since it's not relevant at all, not to mention that you're also implying that the scarf rotom has somehow gotten a speed boost which is :psyduck: .

Mold Breaker is the chosen ability as Rivalry is very unreliable and Unnerve is a rather worthless ability in the metagame this bit is useless, axe it and specifically use the phrase "Mold Breaker is Haxorus' best ability," ad rephrase the following accordingly, while Mold Breaker is quite useful as it allows Haxorus to pierce through Levitate and Unaware users. Haxourus appreciates teammates that can punch holes in the opponents walls to set up a Haxorus sweep; Pokemon such as Rotom-H, Gengar, and Conkeldurr are all great choices. Give me examples of what they're breaking through becausse this really tells me fuck all.

Entry hazard support from the likes of Clefable, Ferrothorn, and and Seismitoad can assist Haxorus's sweep by wearing down the opposing team. this is redundant, basically everything appreciates hazards so it's considered common sense, which we don't really include here. A teammate that can take advantage of Corviknight is mandatory. The afromentioned Rotom-H, Aegislash, and Toxtricity replace this mention with Zeraora, which is actually relevant. are excel at this role. Lastly, Pokemon that can pivot into Choice Scarf users such as Dragapult, Terrakion, and Hydreigon such as Clefable, Toxapex, and Corviknight are highly appreciated to protect Haxorus from a potential revenge kill.

DO THIS SECTION PLEASE

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Sorry for the wait. Tag me once you've finished implementing all of this.
 
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