PU Heatmor (mini) [QC 2/2] GP[1/1]

[TTK]

uploaded -mz

[OVERVIEW]

Although Heatmor has decent offensive stats and a good STAB move in Fire Lash, it struggles to make good use of them properly because it is too slow to do anything and is outsped by most viable offensive pokemon, such as Stoutland, Kabutops, and Skuntank. Furthermore, thanks to its low defenses, Heatmor is unable to take hits well whatsoever and finds itself facing competition from Combusken, which can utilize Eviolite, has a secondary Fighting typing, and has Speed Boost and Swords Dance, making it a more reliable Fire-type wallbreaker.

[SET]
name: All-out Attacker
move 1: Fire Lash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Knock Off / Giga Drain
move 4: Superpower
item: Life Orb
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Jolly / Naive
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

This set can utilize Heatmor's decent Attack stat and its coverage to try to hit every Pokemon in the tier for at least neutral damage. However, Heatmor is not a good Pokemon to use because it finds itself unable to secure KOs on Pokemon such as Mudsdale with Giga Drain, and due to its poor defenses, Heatmor has poor longevity and is OHKOed by most strong attackers. Its Speed isn't helping it either, as most of these strong attackers like Stoutland are able to outspeed Heatmor and KO it as well. Heatmor is not recommended over Pokemon like Combusken and Simisear because they are more powerful and they can do a better job than Heatmor overall.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Toy Time King, 307004]]
- Quality checked by: [[UberSkitty, 355061], [Megazard, 202117]]
- Grammar checked by: [[A Cake Wearing A Hat, 388157]]

 

[NU Student]

Jolly Max SpA has no sense. Fix this pls

 

[TTK]

Fixed. Didn't see that thanks.

 

[UberSkitty]

[OVERVIEW]
Heatmor is a really bad pokemon in the PU metagame. (thats like every mon getting a pseudo analysis, remove)Despite its decent 97/105 offensive stats and a good signature move in Fire Lash, which drops the defense stat by one each time it hits, (no need to specify what the move's secondary effect is)it cannot utilize them properly because it is too slow to do anything and proceeds to get outsped by most viable offensive pokemon, such as Lycanroc, Kangaskhan and Floatzel. (u should focus on slower mons that outspeed it like stout, since this makes it look like it has actually decent speed)Furthermore, with low defenses, Heatmor is unable to take hits well whatsoever and finds itself facing competition with its fellow fire type Combusken, which uses Eviolite to make it more bulkier(doesnt always hold eviolite), has Fighting STAB, and has Speed Boost to patch up its speed problem.(and SD to help with its offense)

[SET]
name: All-out Attacker
move 1: Fire Lash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Superpower
item: Life Orb
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Jolly(slash with adamant imo)
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
This set can utilize Heatmor's decent Attack stat and its coverage to try to hit every mon in the tier for at least neutral damage. Yet again, Heatmor is not a good pokemon to use because it is just too weak to secure kills on anything that can take its attacks, (thats repetitive, "cant ko mons that can avoid the ko")such as Mudsdale and due to its poor defenses, Heatmor doesn't live for long and strong attackerss (attackers)just OHKO it.(also mention its more speed here too and how the attackers easily outspeed it) Heatmor is not recommended over pokemon like Combusken and Simisear because they are more powerful and they can do a better job than Heatmor overall.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: Toy Time King
- Quality checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

QC 1/2

 

[TTK]

QC check implemented

 

[MZ]

[OVERVIEW]

Heatmor is a pokemon that struggles in the PU metagame. Despite its decent 97/105 offensive stats and a good signature move in Fire Lash, it cannot utilize them properly because it is too slow to do anything and proceeds to get outsped by most viable offensive pokemon, such as Stoutland, Kabutops and Skuntank. Furthermore, with low defenses, Heatmor is unable to take hits well whatsoever and finds itself facing competition with its fellow fire type Combusken, which can utilize Eviolite to make it more bulkier, has Fighting STAB, sports Speed Boost to patch up its speed problem and has access to Swords Dance to help it hit harder. none of this is wrong but if u dont fix how weirdly written it is, GP is gonna have to do that (or more likely it'll just read weirdly when it's uploaded). The first sentence doesn't lead anywhere and the ideas don't really flow together at all

[SET]
name: All-out Attacker
move 1: Fire Lash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Knock Off slash giga drain here
move 4: Superpower
item: Life Orb
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Jolly / Adamant instead I would go jolly/whatever +speed -spdef is
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

This set can utilize Heatmor's decent Attack stat and its coverage to try to hit every mon in the tier for at least neutral damage. Yet again, Heatmor is not a good pokemon to use because it is just too weak to secure kills on anything on pokemon such as Mudsdale change the example because giga drain needs to go on the set, the mon is trash but giga really needs to be mentioned as one of it's most important options and due to its poor defenses, Heatmor doesn't live for long and strong attackers just OHKO it. Its speed isn't helping it either, as most of these strong attackers, like Stoutland, are able to outspeed Heatmor and KO it as well. Heatmor is not recommended over pokemon like Combusken and Simisear because they are more powerful and they can do a better job than Heatmor overall.
also just kinda written weird

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Toy Time King, 307004]]
- Quality checked by: [[UberSkitty, 355061], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

2/2

 

[TTK]

ready for gp

 

[A Cake Wearing A Hat]

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[OVERVIEW]
Despite its Although Heatmor has decent offensive stats and a good Fire-STAB STAB move in Fire Lash, Heatmor it struggles to make good use of them properly because it is too slow to do anything and proceeds to get is outsped by most viable offensive pokemon, such as Stoutland, Kabutops, (AC) and Skuntank. Furthermore, with thanks to its low defenses, Heatmor is unable to take hits well whatsoever and finds itself facing competition with its fellow fire type from Combusken, which can utilize Eviolite, has Fighting STAB a secondary Fighting typing, and possesses has Speed Boost as an ability alongside and Swords Dance, making it a more reliable Fire-type breaker wallbreaker.

[SET]
name: All-out Attacker
move 1: Fire Lash
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Knock Off / Giga Drain
move 4: Superpower
item: Life Orb
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Jolly / Naive
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
This set can utilize Heatmor's decent Attack stat and its coverage to try to hit every mon Pokemon in the tier for at least neutral damage. However, Heatmor is not a good pokemon Pokemon to use because it finds itself unable to secure kills on anything on pokemon secure KOs on Pokemon such as Mudsdale when using with Giga Drain, (AC) and due to its poor defenses, Heatmor doesn't live for long and strong attackers just OHKO it has poor longevity and is OHKOed by most strong attackers. Its speed Speed isn't helping it either, as most of these strong attackers, (RC) like Stoutland, (RC) are able to outspeed Heatmor and KO it as well. (remove doublespace)Heatmor is not recommended over pokemon Pokemon like Combusken and Simisear because they are more powerful and they can do a better job than Heatmor overall.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Toy Time King, 307004]]
- Quality checked by: [[UberSkitty, 355061], [Megazard, 202117]]
- Grammar checked by: [[A Cake Wearing A Hat, 388157]]

GP 1/1

 

[TTK]

finished.