SS OU Hello, it's my first time making a team, could anyone please rate it? I'll accept critism and help me to build team

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Hello everyone, Its my first time making a team, but i dont know if its good or what, i do get a win with it but ofc also lose, like 40/60 haha, So i hope you can help me
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Here are the moves and others
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Shuckle @ Leftovers
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 128 Def / 128 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sticky Web
- Toxic
- Stealth Rock
- Infestation

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Zeraora @ Life Orb
Ability: Volt Absorb
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Plasma Fists
- Knock Off
- Volt Switch
- Close Combat

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Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Sand Stream
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Aqua Tail
- Earthquake

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Centiskorch @ Assault Vest
Ability: White Smoke
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Crunch
- Leech Life
- Power Whip
- Flare Blitz

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Tapu Fini @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Misty Surge
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 128 Def / 128 SpD
Bold Nature
- Scald
- Moonblast
- Ice Beam
- Defog

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Crobat @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Shadow Ball
- Heat Wave
- Giga Drain

And there they are, Since its my first time, i kinda dont know if i lack something or not, but i probably have lots, i manage to stay atleast 1360 SS OU as my highest, and never manage to get into 1400, i hope someone help me to climb the ladder, I'll accept criticism too!

P.S: sorry for some of my bad english and bad forum creation
 
Hi KyonKyon29, welcome to Smogon! I am locking your RMT for the time being as the forum rules require that you provide at least three lines of descriptions for each Pokemon to explain their roles. Please read the rules carefully and look at Team Showcase to see the detail we require. PM me with updated descriptions, and I will be happy to unlock this. Also, feel free to PM me if you need help or have any question. Have a nice day!

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Why did you choose this Pokemon?
What do the EV spreads do and why do you have it?
What are all 4 moves for?
 
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