Help my pakistani team

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Hi.

This is my first team. It may look like a few random OU's thrown together, but I think I have the biggest threats in check. I'm undefeated so far but I've only done 3 matches >:0.

Here is my team:

Bronzong @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/86 Atk/80 Def/92 SDef
Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)
- Gyro Ball
- Stealth Rock
- Hypnosis
- Explosion

This is my lead. His name is Bronzong. He actually does not have a gender so it beats me how he reproduces. I think he is a good lead. He is built to subdue one dude with Hypnosis, set up rocks and go out with a bang. He also keeps Mamoswine in check. He is very nice once you get to know him. I usually do not use him very much because what he achieves past the opening stages of the game is a little pooey.

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Scizor (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Technician
EVs: 32 HP/252 Atk/224 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- Swords Dance
- Superpower
- X-Scissor

This is one of my sweepers. He is a woman. He says that his technician/stab bullet punch with Swords Dance is very powerful. I agree. Superpower is used instead of Cross Chop because of the one hit on Heatran. Heatran is a large threat to my team says this man. This man often takes out at least one dude before going out due to his general bulkiness. X-Scissor is of power to hit Metagross and others who are nuetral to the moves.

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Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 60 HP/252 Def/56 SAtk/140 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect
- Thunder Wave
- Seismic Toss

Tis my father who can come in and wall most special threats and it not a free switch in for physical attackers due to the prenense of thunder wave who can stall stuff with wish and protect (Toxic instead of thunder wave maybe? I need an opinion with evidence. So far I prefer TW due to the ability to cripple almost any dude) Also provides much need wish support, mainly for Bronzong, Scizor and Heatran. Falalalallalalalala.
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Rotom-w @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/216 Spd/40 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
- Hydro Pump
- Trick

Tis my revenge killers and can take care of anything my team has trouble with with trick. (Unless other Scarf users but taheha) I used this variant to revenge kill Infernape with Hydro Pump. It can not take down Salamence too well though. (ANGER) Outspeeds Gyarados after a DD's and OHKO's. People will be reluctant to switch after getting those boosts you know. :naughty: He is by far my favorite team dude!!

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Heatran (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 248 HP/204 Spd/56 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Lava Plume
- Sleep Talk
- Rest
- Earth Power

Oh my god. This gender is about as definable as this dude right here :cloud:. On my MSN I have him set to my whoa emote. Tahahaha. Anywho, this is my switcher in for a number of special threats and a couple physical ones too. Nobody likes the burn from Lava Plum, especially physical attackers who get their attack halved. You've all seen this indian before anyway.

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Infernape (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 24 Atk/232 Spd/252 SAtk
Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
- Close Combat
- Flamethrower
- Grass Knot
- Hidden Power [Ice]

Finally this is my mixed sweeper for the team. You'd be suprised how many teams are not prepared for this, even though it has been a prominant threat for ages and ages and civilizations and even long lifespans. Helps break walls for Scizor mainly.

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So that is all. Please help me make a more synergenic team!!!
 
It does kinda seems a Subsitute-Heatran will pose problems. With a Sub up, he can OHKO every one of your Pokés except Rotom, who is 2HKOd by a Timid 0 Spatt EVd Heatrans Flamethrower. Now, to countering Heatran, you have a lot of options.
You could go witha Bulky Water. Vaporeon is a great choice, and Heatran can't do squad to it, just beware of Toxic. It also sports Wish-healing. Milotic is in the same boat, but without Wish. It has Recover tho, and with Marvel Scale, any burn is actually appreciated, and while it doesn't like Toxic, it still boosts Milotics Defense.
Porygon2 is also a decent choice. With Trace, you are immune to Heatrans Fire-moves, and it has Recover, meaning Heatran won't be killing it soon. Just know that that fact goes the other way as well; with HP-investment, Porygon2 requires two Thunderbolts to break Heatrans sub.
And finally, we have Blissey. It doesn't mind status because of Natural Cure, it has recovery in Softboiled or Wish, and Heatran doesn't do anything with its Special-moves.

For this team, I think Blissey is the best, actually. It supports the team way better than the bulky Waters, and since you really don't have anything that can take powerful Electric-attacks, Blissey becomes a somewhat better choice.
If you go with
@leftovers
[Calm]
252 Def, 56 SpAtt, 60 HP, 140 SpDef
- Wish
- Protect
- Toxic / Thunder Wave
- Ice Beam / Flamethrower / Seismic Toss
then you are able to support your team nicely, with Wish and Status.
Since Shaymin is going Uber, you might just as well put Blissey in the vacant slot right there.

Apart from that, the rest of the team is fairly decent, and fairly standard! :)
 
Rotom-w only outrun Gyarados with 223 Speed or less after two DDs, and they're very, very rare nowdays. It shouldn't really be a problem though, as you'll outrun Gyarados after one DD.
I can see your worries though. Everything on your team is either countered by Gyarados or weak to Water, meaning you'll have to switch in Rotom-w everytime Gyarados comes in. May I suggest a slight EV-change? 252 HP/216 Spe/40 SpA allow you to still outrun any version of Gyarados, and will never get 2HKOd by a LO Waterfall from Gyarados.

I'm also gonna support Orions idea with Blissey for your team. Wish and Thunder Wave would be two extremely valuable assets for your team, effectively crippling most of Scizors threats, while as well supporting the rest of your team with Wish (especially Bronzong and Rotom, two important defensive assets!).
 
If you're going to go with a Bronzong lead, you really don't want to deal with hypnosis's shaky accuracy. Since you say he looses his importance late game, you could create a more wall-ish Bronzong to aid your team:
Bronzong@Light Clay
Levitate
Impish
252 Hp/ 128 Atk/ 128 Def
Stealth rock
Light screen
Reflect
Explosion

This move set adds bulk to some of your guys that could really need it. Paired with the EV spread that Rag suggested, Rotom-W will be able to switch in and out more on Gyarados and the like. The walls also help out Infernape's piss poor defenses.

Granted, you're still hurting if Gyara takes out Rotom-W, but this EV spread can OHKO a Gyarados with some SR damage. Hope this helps.
x!a
 
Much as I would like to say I am Pakistani, I'm not I'm half caste but it's nice to see a little culture around these parts, so let's have a look at the team shall we ;)

Bronzong is good, a staple lead, but have you tried lead Trick Zong? With Hypnosis accuracy drop I personally wanted to find another way for Bronzong to annoy other leads, and I found that Trick Band worked wonders, It makes for a Strong Explosion late game if you keep the band, also powers up Gyro Ball, you can trick it straight of if your opponant is using a lead that won't like it. Try it out, see if you find it more useful pre-plat than hypnosis. I just found it personally more usable =D

Many Bliss tend not to be using Thunder Wave toos these days, now that doesn't mean that its not effective seeing as you then get greater coverage against stuff that might try to switch in (ape is a possible example) the only problem is you are perpetually walled by things like Zapdos who can simply roost stall you out of PP. Try out the Standard Blissey from the analysis, see which one you like better its just a matter of testing, Zapdos does do a number on your team, so do bulky waters such as Milotic, Vaporeon etc, so getting a Toxic on them with Wish / Protect Stalling will be very useful.

Moving on to the whole of the rest of the team, I assume the idea is to clear the way for infernape / Scizor to sweep so lets see how well we are doing that. Like I said about Bulky waters you have problems. If you want to keep Blissey the way that it is then change Heatran to Substitute / Toxic / Flamethrower / Earth Power. First off you get extra prediction power with the sub which can be crucial, secondly you draw out bulky waters and Toxic them as they come in, helping clear them out of the way for Scizor and Infernape to sweep more effectivly. If you are going Toxic with Blissey then Heatran isn't really doing much for you and could be replaced, something that can deal with gyaraods, that works as a counter rather than revenge killing would be nice. Celebi comes to mind it can still be bulky and act as a status absorber, if you want a special tank you could run CM Celebi or you can choose to stall out Bulky waters better with Leech Seed after Blissey has Toxiced them. That should work quite nicely, so there are a couple of options to take, test them see how they work etc...

Well, i think thats about it =D Good luck testing this and dont forget to come back if you are having more problems :P
 
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