Help rate this team please!

Hi guys, recently i decided i wanted to make a team with zoroark in it. However i've been having troubles with it and i was hoping you guys could help me to improve it.

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Landorus-Therian @ Leftovers
Intimidate
Evs: 200 Hp / 64 Att / 244 Def
Adamant
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- U-turn
- Stealth Rock

Landorus is my physical wall, acting as a defensive pivot. The evs were ripped off from somewhere. I use landorus to tank non SE moves, as well as to dodge earthquake as he is the only one with consistent ground immunity. U-turn is for gaining momentum, stealth rock can be easily used as he causes switches frequently. Edgequake for coverage as he still hits hard even without max investment due to his monstrous attack.

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Keldeo @ Choice Scarf
Justified
Evs: 252 Spa / 252 Spd / 4 Spd
Timid
- Surf
- Secret Sword
- Hydro Pump
- Hp Ice

Keldeo is my water resist, as well as one of the revenge killers on my team. Before this i had Haxorus on this slot with sub, dd and lum berry but it never seemed like i could find a chance to switch in with him, due to his pathetic defenses. Not to mention i had trouble with fire pokemon due to a lack of water moves. So i changed him to this guy. Surf is for when i cant afford to miss, secret sword is for the fighting stab as well as for pokemon like chansey, hydro pump for more power when required and hp ice for revenging dragons.

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Espeon @ Light Clay
Magic Bounce
Evs: 252 Hp / 252 Spd / 4 Spa
Timid
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Psychic
- Baton Pass

At first, this slot was filled by starmie as a rapid spinner to keep rocks off the field. However, i found that starmie rarely got a chance to rapid spin, and even if it did it would lose me momentum. As such i considering going to magic bounce users such as Xatu and Espeon. After some consideration, i decided to use espeon as i didn't really need an ice and electric weakness on the team. I didn't want to use the calm mind set as i found i had too many set up sweepers already, so i decided to make it the dual screens set as my 2 sweepers are extremely fragile. 252 hp evs is to make it be able to take hits better, while 252 speed and timid speed is to ensure it can get screens up as fast as possible, especially when you're setting it up in front of a physical attacker as espeon has crappy def. Dual screens is standard, psychic is for stab as well as for fighting pokemon as i do not have any other psychic moves for them. Baton pass here is to retain momentum, being sort of a replacement for u-turn, as well as to be able to escape pursuit users.

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Zoroark @ Life Orb
Illusion
Evs: 40 Att/ 216 Spa / 252 Spd
Timid
- Nasty Plot
- Sucker Punch
- Focus Blast
- Dark Pulse

Zoroark is one of my sweepers, focusing on the special side of the spectrum.Evs were ripped off from somewhere, 40 att is to ensure the ko on gengar and latios and the like. Nasty plot is for the insane increase in damage, after one boost zoroark can take out many pokemon with one dark pulse. Sucker Punch is stab priority, and priority is always good. Focus Blast is for coverage and Dark Pulse is for main stab attack. Normally i have this guy masquerading as Infernape, as they both take the same amount of damage from hazards and weather. Infernape can also go nasty plot, so the opponent will not suspect anything.

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Heatran @ Air Balloon/ Leftovers
Flash Fire
Evs: 252 Spa / 252 Spd / 4 Hp
Timid
- Fire Blast
- Earth Power
- Solar Beam
- Sunny Day

Heatran is here to absorb fire attacks, as well as to help control the weather. Fire blast is for stab, which hits like a truck in sun. Earth power is for opposing heatran and acts as another ground move because i only have one ground move from Landorus-T. Solar Beam is to cause trouble to opposing weather starters after using sunny day. I'm still debating between leftovers and air balloon. Air balloon gives another much needed ground immunity, albeit for a while. However leftovers gives useful recovery, especially when walling sun teams. Not to mention, when i use heatran to control the weather, there are times when he just gets his balloon popped to change to weather, which got me thinking if it wasn't suited for his role. Other items im considering would be Shuca Berry for the earth power from opposing heatran.

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Infernape @ Life Orb
Iron Fist
Evs: 252 Att / 252 Spd / 4 Hp
Jolly
- Mach Punch
- Flare Blitz
- Close Combat
- Swords Dance

Infernape is my physical sweeper. Usually if i send out infernape first and manage to pull off a swords dance, the enemy will be surprised later on in the game when i use dark pulse as zoroark. Jolly Nature for maximum speed, Mach punch for priority such as terrakion. Flare Blitz is for stab attack, which hurts a lot in sun. However, i was thinking whether to change it to fire punch. Although the decrease in power is noticeable, it can still get an increase in power from iron fist, and it improves his lifespan as he is already insanely fragile. Coupled with life orb and recoil from flareblitz, he can be revenged easily. Close combat is for standard coverage and fighting stab, while swords dance is for boosting.

I would really appreciate any advice on my team!
 
Hi! I'm not what you'd call a "pro" rater, as I'm signing up for B101 soon, but I do know some, so don't worry. The first thing that stands out to me are the lack of physical attackers. The only physical moves you have are EdgeQuake on a defensive Pokemon that's mainly meant to tank, and Sucker Punch on a Pokemon that you made use special moves, and Infernape. So I'd suggest putting at least a Terrakion< Keldeo. It has similar stats, almost the same I think, but in Attack here. Terrakion is the physical, more effective version of Keldeo. Try this set:

Terrakion @ Life Orb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Close Combat
Stone Edge
X-Scissor
Sacred Sword

This should help you with the lack of physical stuff. The thing is, you're extremely weak to water. This is why I'd suggest Jellicent< Something. This is completely your choice, as if you pick Landorus-T your Ground immunity goes out the door, but I'd personally suggest Espeon. Well that's all I have for today. Good luck!
 
hey skarmory7, thanks for the rate! Yeah i realised my team has a lack of physical attackers. But the thing is terrakion adds another water and fighting weakness which i just can't afford. About the jellicent, i'll think about it because right now the dual screens really help zoroark and infernape survive.
 
Hi!

I really like the use of zoroark on this team, but while this team may be built to support him, it's so much weaker for that. What I'm saying is, you you have a team built around supporting a sweeper that isn't even as good as other OU pokemon, and that still leaves your team weak to a plethora of attacks. If you are really interested in a hyper-offensive team, replace espeon with Deoxys-d. Another problem is that your sweepers only compound your weaknesses and they are outclassed by many other sweepers. The unique fire coverage that infernape adds to his ability to sweep is even used by the same heatran that's on this team! There's more unnecessary coverage. Also, espeon is frail and almost never sets up both screens. If it does, it's probably dead and you have to accomplish a sweep in 8-10 turns. This means your sweepers and espeon must go. Now, let's assume you have three open spots, two for your sweepers, one for your DS supporter. For the physical sweeper, I would recommend using Swords Dance scizor. Heatran can absorb all of the fire attacks thrown at scizor. Scizor also brings some of the most powerful priority in OU to your team's table. Scizor + keldeo makes a great revenge killing duo as well, as scizor can slaughter most everything that outspeeds keldeo with bullet punch. For your special sweeper, I would suggest using life orb latios. Life Orb latios has amazing coverage, and he can destroy what is left of most teams. He also has perfect defensive synergy with heatran, so he gets many opportunities to switch in. Now, for the DS supporter. In this place, I would suggest using deoxys-d or cresselia. Each of them has unique traits that help with supporting your team as well as dual screens. Here are all your sets.

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Scizor @Life Orb / Leftovers
EVs: 248 HP, 252 Atk, 8 Speed | Adamant | Technician
~Bug Bite
~Bullet Punch
~Quick Attack / Pursuit / Superpower / U-Turn / Night Slash / Roost
~Swords Dance


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Latios @Life Orb
EVs: 252 Sp. Atk, 252 Speed, 4 HP | Timid | Levitate
~Draco Meteor / Dragon Pulse
~Thunderbolt
~Hidden Power Fire / Ice Beam / Psychic
~Surf / Grass Knot / Psychic


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Deoxys-D @Light Clay
EVs: 252 HP, 252 Speed | Timid | Pressure
~Reflect
~Light Screen
~Thunder Wave
~Recover


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Cresselia @Light Clay
EVs: 252 HP, 252 Def | Bold | Levitate
~Psychic / Psyshock
~Reflect
~Light Screen
~Thunder Wave / Lunar Dance

Hope this helps, and good luck with the team!
 
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