here! i changed it even more! The NEW Breed!

UltraDestruction13

Empoleon @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 236 HP / 136 SDef / 132 SAtk / 4 Spd
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Grass Knot
- Yawn

Lucario @ Leftovers
Trait: Humble Heart
EVs: 252 SAtk, 252 Speed, 6 HP
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Pulse Bomb
- Shadow Ball
- Calm Mind
- Psychic

Rhyperior @ Choice Band
Trait: Solid Rock
EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Defense, 6 HP
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Avalanche
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Rock Cart / Megahorn

Electivire @ Life Orb
Trait: Motor Drive
Lonely Nature
EVs: Not Sure
- Thunderbolt
- Earthquake
- Ice Punch
- Cross Chop

Garchomp @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Speed, 6 HP
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Dragon Claw
- Fire Fang
- Crunch/Rock Slide/Swords Dance

Blissey @ Leftovers
Bold Nature
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 212HP, 252Def, 44SpAtk
- Softboiled
- Thunder Wave
- Seismic Toss
- Ice Beam

PLEASE! BE CRITICAL!!! AND POINTERS 2!
 
In before lock.

Seriously, though, there's no threat list, and with the exception of Empoleon, it looks like you simply ripped your team off the threats list.
 
You finally did it properly! But you need a threat list.

With Garchomp, i'd go with Choice Scarf instead of Lefties. idk
 
Judging by how obviously better your movesets are from your previous threads, you've clearly just lifted them from other RMTs. Empoleon, for example is directly copy and pasted from my current RMT thread.

Once again, it's just six Pokemon slapped together without any real thought.
 
If you really LIKE offense, try to have at least 2 Tanks, Walls, Annoyers, etc. etc.

Try Manaphy with Electivire, they have great synergy.
 
To be fair, Rhyperior might have had a shot if he got more evs in HP, especially with Solid Rock and SE Stone Edge.

Who made that special Lucario set? Search doesn't work in Firefox:(
 
You are obviously trying very hard and listening to us moderators (and haven't sent me the usual angry PM I get when I lock people's initial RMTs), so I'm not even going to think of locking this one too. However, I do want you to copy and paste my "Threat Checklist" and post it here, replacing my brief writeups on the specific pokemon, with how your team in particular deals with them. We can then go from there.
 
I'd like to say that I do not like requiring a threat list - I never read them and they clog up the topic. On the flip side, it is still a useful guide and should be paid attention to. As mentioned, you have no Gyarados counter, and your only response to an opposing Garchomp is your own - the problem stemming from having 4 Pokemon weak to ground (even if Rhyperior's weakness is not exactly crippling).
 
I think threat lists should not be essential if the person has based their team around a good strategy and explaniation behind it and furthermore thought about how they are going to execute this strategy.

I say this because say some person has a team based around baton passing or a crap UU pokemon that they want to use. Posting a threat list will no doubt show a huge amount of weakness and people will just be looking at that as opposed to how well the person has executed the strategy they set out to.

At the end of the day the person has actually tried to be original and gone against the idea of putting any old 6 standards on a team; which i believe is what the threat lists and surgo's thread were trying to accomplish from the outset.

At times the threat lists are just encouraging people to make the standard 'your team is weak to this replace this pokemon with 'best counter in game'' replies then the guy changes and the team is further resembling the same old 6 pokemon thrown together that surgo's thread has been trying to stop.
 
I just go through the list in my head or in Notepad and post any possible problems. That makes it easier for people replying to suggest solutions and also avoids "you have a Pokemon weak" posts.
 
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