here's a trick room team I made off the top of my head

[finallegacy]

Well it took me about 10 minutes to make this team, what do you guys think of it? It's actually taking more time to type this out than it did to come up with the team :?

Cresselia@Leftovers
Relaxed(+def -speed)
252 HP, 252 Def, 4 Sp. Def
- Trick Room
- Charge Beam
- Ice Beam
- Light Screen

usually starts out with trick room. Charge beam and ice beam for coverage. I guess I have light screen cause my team is a little lacking in sp. def. However, I rather not use legendaries cause you can't breed them, anyone have an idea to replace this pokemon?

Marowak@Thick Club
Brave(+attack -speed)
252 Attack, 252 HP, 4 Def
- Boomerang
- Rock Slide
- Fire Punch
- Double Edge

Yeah i think he's pretty strong. Boomerange so I can take out substitutes and also get a hit on the person at the same time. Rest simply for type coverage except for double edge, that's just a filler.

Bronzong@Leftovers
Sassy(+ sp.Def -speed)
252 HP, 152 Attack, 104 Sp.def
- Trick Room
- Gyroball
- Hypnosis
- Stealth Rock

Another Trick roomer. Don't know if I should have stealth rock there or not. But pretty gyroball and hypnosis, the works.

Umbreon@Leftovers
Sassy(+sp.def - speed)
252 HP, 252 Sp. Def, 4 def
- Wish
- baton pass
- curse
- toxic

a supporter. he heals my team, he curses, baton passes, and poisons people.

Relicanth@Choice Band
Brave(+attack -speed)
252 Attack, 252 HP, 4 Def
- Head Smash
- Waterfall
- Double-edge
- Earthquake

A hard hitter. Rock head ability makes it so it takes no recoil damage. Earthquake just there for type coverage.

Slowbro@leftovers
Ability: Own tempo (prevents confusion)
Relaxed(+def -speed)
252 HP, 252 Def, 4 Sp. Def
- Trick Room
- Slack Off
- Surf
- Ice Beam

Another trick roomer, slack off for healing, surf and ice beam for some type coverage.

So there we go. Don't tell me what you think about the team, tell me what you would change around and why?

 

[Frozen_Spirit]

you have no sleep absrobers.

i got a cressy of the gts but its sassy and has bad spatk and def but with decent speed and hp and spdef. we can trade for it but i cant until about 2 weeks so if your in a hurry it doesnt matter.

but here are the ivs

Cresselia - #488 (Sassy)
HP: 31
Att: 10
Def: 17
SpA: 5
SpD: 27
Speed: 6

 

[finallegacy]

you have no sleep absrobers.

i got a cressy of the gts but its sassy and has bad spatk and def but with decent speed and hp and spdef. we can trade for it but i cant until about 2 weeks so if your in a hurry it doesnt matter.

but here are the ivs

Cresselia - #488 (Sassy)
HP: 31
Att: 10
Def: 17
SpA: 5
SpD: 27
Speed: 6

this isn't a trading thread

 

[Kindred]

You're too reliant on Trick Room to actually set up. It's 4 (5?) turns you have, if TR fails once, you have nothing speedy to back your team up. A ScarfGar with Hypnosis would do well (plus would give your Bronzong another moveslot for...calm mind perhaps?).
Furthermore, a CBCross would do major damage to your team, especially if there's no Trick Room in effect.

 

[pajama]

I think that Umbreon can work as a wish passer but that's just about it. As Trick room has only 4 turns (assuming you're switching from the user to one of your pokémon) I don't think you'll have much time left to sweep after you curse up and pass =/

Wouldn't know what to replace it with from the top of my head though but I'll come back on that.

 

[RedSP]

All trickroom teams need a weavile counter since most users of trickroom (not bronzong or Jirachi) are weak to one of its attacks. Actually, most of your team is raped by it.

You should also be ready for when trickroom wears off.